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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3011857/17/

To everyone who feared that ben's death heralded the near completion of the story . . .

. . . you couldn't be more wrong . . .

Wow, I have to say that is the most unique and impressive response I've ever recieved. Thank you so much!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3011857/16/

I apologize for taking so long, but here's Chapter 16. And just in case you're wondering, no, it isn't over. Not by a long shot.

The term Silicon is used mainly as a reference to old Science Fiction. In this old movie where they build an AI, thrughout the movie he defies their expectations and becomes very human-like, experienc ...

I'm glad to see your format works so well. The story is sound, I look forward to your second episode.

Okay, so I read the first chapter...

First off, the writing is very good and the two characters you've established (one possibly being dead, or maybe a zombie) are really interesting so far, even i ...

and, because I'm such a tool
here's the unsecure version of the links to chapters 13 and 14

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3011857/13/
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3011857/14/

Well crap, I suppose it would help if you used this link instead

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3011857/15/

Apparently, I wore my baka-hat today

As for the names, I realize that I use the japan ...

Finally,after spending most of the week trying to find a song, I'm finished with this chapter. It's the halfway point for the story, and marks a huge shift in the structure of the story's attitude.
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Gha! This build up is taking longer than I thought

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=3011857&chapter=14/

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=3011857&chapter=13/

It's shorter than I usually write them, and I hate doing that, but I'm building to something, and if this wasn't st ...

Very good
I'm a fan of the .hack games, watched a few of the old anime (before the chibi replacements) and I have to say that using Kite rather than the other "hero" was a nice touch

I hope you co ...

After that damned exposition chapter, it's finally nice to be able to get back to the real story.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3011857/12/

Finally finished with the accursed thing. I HATE exposition chapters, it's so friggin hard to maintain the past tense / present tense balance.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3011857/11/

Very well written! Definitely one of the best fics I've read, hands down. I wish I could give you some kind of advice on how to improve the style, but I honestly cannot pin point any weaknesses in you ...

Excellent! Probably the best proposal/marriage story I've read in a long time. That was a truly exceptional story, I really got into it (reminded me of my own proposal to the wife). Excellent, excelle ...

Finally, after having to start over *TWICE* I finally got it posted.

Encourage others to read and review! In the next few chapters I really start shaking up the universe. I even kill one of my favorite navis.

Who will it be? Tune in to find out!

*maniacal laughte ...

Chapter 9 has just been posted, FYI to all my readers.

I don't think DS Forte would be honorable enough to allow Boushi to live, just the fear of being cracked again. In fact, DS Forte is a whole lot more honorable than I'd think he'd be.

I'm not too ...