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I'm sorry to say I will not be finishing the fic.

I think that Protoman's noes looks a little biggish and I agree with Vanilla_Go_Rilla It does look older and cutman's hair looks strange. I didn't know that he had hair Confused

WOW, that is soooo cute but why does it say "MAMPF"???

I like that it's cool how it looks like an offical sprite from Capcom! I can't find anything wrong with it ^_^

On the big one with the gosple I think it's Duo you need to put it more on the head and with the Starman met you heve to much helmet showing and I think it may be copy'n'paste.(No offence)

On the left arm I think it is a little bulky and the first one I think is a little better than the second one.

LOL those are funny but on the dico met I see some afro in the poor met's eye T_T

I like how you made it look like it was on a video camera that makes it look neat!!! I also like the back ground did you also draw that or was it pre-made?

Cahpter 5
â€œTime for you to die!!!â€ Quickman said with determination

â€œHeh, Iâ€™ve been trainingâ€¦a lot!â€ replied Wingman

â€œWingman, jack in!" yelled Fluken.

â€œQuickman, jack in! ...

O.o that's very ummm interesting cause I thought Sheik was a guy also??
And I thing that the skin is a tad to dark.

I like that but there are a few stray lnes that you may want to clean up other that that it is so cute :D

CHAPTER 4
The day started as any other when Wingman was sleeping in Flukenâ€™s computer. All of a sudden Fluken started violently shaking the monitor and yelling, â€œGET UP GET UP GET UP!!!â€

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Well, I have never heard of it does it come on T.V any more? It sounds pretty cool.

I like Atarie and SNES and NES

Yeah that is the one I have and it is really good! Or you can go to target and get the pad and game for 65.94 that is for, PS2

I think you need to darken the lines cause it looks oO cause the lines look dotty

That's good but his face is a little Neutral

if you know what I mean his smile is a little creepy also but I guess other than those two things it's REALLY good.

I couldn't read what they were asying it was wayyyyyyyy to small for me to understand I could read a tidbit of it but not all of it x.x

I didn't know that PETs were heavy enough to stub you toe on?
And I didn't know that Maylu cussed?

Here is chapter 3 of my fic.
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Chapter 3
As they entered the shop a man welcomed them and asked if he could help ...