My take on possible Zoans: UPDATED Gateman uncaged!

Falcovsleon20 · Last edited by Falcovsleon20 on Mon Jan 09, 2006 4:03 pm; edited 1 time in total

Feel free to notify me if I'm breaking any rules but I don't think I am. (I just read through them) Anyway, I traced over Nappie in Photoshop and took that outline back and forth between Photoshop and Illustrator to create THIS:

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y12/Falcovsleon20/Artwork/zoannapalmman.jpg

Yes, I'm aware he lacks color but I want some critism on his design before I make the final touches to him. Basically, this is my take on what Zoan Napalmman's Beast Out might look like. I actually like how it turned out. It wasn't two bad for a first try. I put a lot of effort into this (about a 5 days at the least.) so any opinions are welcome.

CrossFusionStarman · Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 7:26 pm Post subject:

I can see that you weren't lying when you said you put a lot of effort into this. It looks great! And very scary, too. My one complaint is that he should have pupils, IMO. For some reason, he just doesn't look...Napalmmanish without them. Other than that, very good job.
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Darth Osiris · Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 7:37 pm Post subject:

Too true.

Also, where the hell is the emblem?! Is he Greiga? Is he Falzer? ID, man!

Still, a good pic except for that.
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Unknown Neo · Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 8:22 pm Post subject:

He's greiga, it fits. And add some claws to the feet and we may have a zoan.

Falcovsleon20 · Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 8:10 am Post subject:

Darth Osiris: Emblem? ::checks pic:: D'oh! I can't believe I forgot that silly thing. That'll be the first thing I go back and slap on him.

Unknown Neo: Yeah, I'm having a tough time getting the claws drawn on his feet the way I want them but I'm definately giving some.

CrossFusionStarman: Well I WAS trying to go for a "I WILL EAT YOUR SOUL" possessed type of look hence the lack of pupils. Nappie actually looks much better than my take on Zoan Laserman. I'm not even done tracing the outline for him and he still has areas around his fingers that look disproportioned. (And I'm not gonna even MENTION the work I put into Beastman.)

Darth Osiris · Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 8:23 am Post subject:

You know what he needs? A tail. Just about all Greigas have tails.
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Unknown Neo · Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 5:33 pm Post subject:

Oh yeah, your right. You did forget the tail FVL20.

Falcovsleon20 · Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2005 1:49 pm Post subject:

Sorry this hasn't been updated lately. As for the tails comment:

I only seem to recall Guts, Quick, and Stone as the only tailed Griegas. Plus a tail didn't too fashionable on Nappie. I do plan on giving my take on Zoan Gateman if I do him some tail feathers though.

Elementalman.EXE · Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2005 2:15 pm Post subject:

I like it. But is the addition of Color in the near future?
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Falcovsleon20 · Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 2:12 pm Post subject:

Well Dark Liger asked me if he wanted to do the color for Nappie so I let him go ahead and do it for the time being. Personally, I'd rather just leave them uncolored for now since if I DO any coloring, I end up taking the risk of ruining a part of them.

Oh and despite having finals pound my back in all this week, I DID manage to get my take on Zoan Gateman's "unseen" Beast Out done so hopefully, I'll paste him up later this week. (Depends if and when I get MMX: Collection and how much of my time it drains away.)

Vanilla_Go_Rilla · Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 2:19 am Post subject:

Even without wings and a tail to make which BO transformation he is, I still think he bears more resemblance to a Griega than a Falzer, what with the various horns and spikes. Although a tail would do great to clarify it even better. Overall, it's a pretty cool design, and nice clean lineart. ^_^
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Ed · Net Agent Joined: 12 Nov 2005 Posts: 219

wow zoan napalman looks awsome make more!!

Falcovsleon20 · Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 4:09 pm Post subject:

Okay let's get this guy quickly. I've got the next 4 hours of work to do. Since Faltzer Rock killed him prematurely before we got to see it, here's my take on Zoan Gateman's Beast Out.

Okay, I know I said I'd give him tail feathers and well, that was easier said than done. Blame that large hood covering his head, although I did ruffle it up a bit. Since he's Faltzer and thus expected to turn into a bird, I thought an owl would fit the shape of his head better. My favorite part about him: the talons/claws. And yes he is missing his emblem, I know. But we don't get to see it in plain view like the others as far as his official artwork goes. (Although I do plan on trying to draw him from scratch after I get enough practice.)

Unknown Neo · Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 5:18 pm Post subject:

Ha Ha Ha. I like the beak. So the wings are folded in huh? Nice job.

Falcovsleon20 · Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 7:42 pm Post subject:

Yeah they're folded into the hood since I every time I tried drawing them exposed, they turned out very shoddy looking.

Unknown Neo · Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 7:56 pm Post subject:

Ok I thought so. And just in case, I think kendoman would be falzer too.