Zatch Bell.EXE! Chapter 29: Jorney To The Jawaii Islands!!^^

GospelDS · Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2005 7:47 am Post subject:

Every hero's worst enemy ... rabid fangirls !
Well written chappies . I am sorry I haven't reviewed in a while . I had a family Christmas , so I was not allowed to go on Razz

. Anyway , I am kind of confused wth the Cave of Unision . You said it was between the bond of humans and mamodos . It looks more like to mamodos or partners with the runrs . I mean , if it was between two , I would know what it means .
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SereneEXE · Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2005 3:07 pm Post subject:

Wow! I really really liked the last chapters you put in! (I promised I wouldn't say suspense, so just exciting, mmkay?) Also, the recent chapter was hilarious, I was laughing so hard! I'll PM you more info about my Mamado later, okay! Keep up the good work! This is mugoi(cool)!

(update: What are the fangirls DOING to my poor sweet Enzan? Come back Enzan, Come back!!!!)

DjangoSP · Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 4:46 pm Post subject:

Serene-chan, relax. Enzan is okay. And to Chibi: yes you were, they were using you to beat down the door!! Laughing

I'm just kidding. Sorry the update took so long, but here is:

Chapter 26: Return!! Orochi Has Returned!!!

Django

For those of you just coming in, we had just entered the Cave of Unison, a place that tests the bonds of two human and Mamodo through a series of grueling challenges. The reason we’re starting on mine is for two reasons: 1)It’s hilarious. 2)I just wanna get it over with.

I looked at the sign placed next to the door we entered.

“For those who enter, I say unto thee,
To venture on you must find the key.
It is hidden in this room, right under your noses,
But to find it, you need the power of roses.
Sunlight as well, do not forget that
But if you fail, I guarantee you’ll surely go splat”

Kiyasume looked at me quizzically. “What does that mean? Djangie, do you know what that means?” I groaned silently. I hate when she calls me that. I sighed. “I think it means our Mamodo’s powers, like Taiyou controls sun, and Flora controls plants.”

Kiyasume looked around. “But there’s no soil here. Flora can’t make plant without soil.” I thought for a minute. “Let me see that poem again. I looked back at it, and read it several times. “I got it!!” I yelled, startling Taiyou. “If it’s ‘right under our noses’, then it should be nearby! Everyone, start looking around for anything unusual!!”

We all looked around for almost 13 minutes, but nothing. Taiyou threw his hands up in defeat. “Well, I give up. There’s nothing! I mean, you heard the narrator! We searched for almost 13 minutes! …Django, are you listening?”

I really wasn’t. I was examining a spot of the chamber floor directly under a skylight. “Hmm…Taiyou, come over here.” He shrugged, then walked over to where I was kneeling down. I pointed at the floor underneath the skylight. “Shine some sun here.” He nodded, and held out his hand as a ball of sunlight formed in it. The ball of sunlight revealed a plot of dirt under the skylight.

“Whoa…” Flora exclaimed. “I didn’t think of that!! Nice job, Taiyou.” He smiled, then blushed. “Thanks.” “Flora, I need you to grow a plant here in this soil.” She nodded, then held her hands out. They glowed green, and a plant slowly grew from the soil. I nodded, and then shined a blast of sunlight on the plant. The plant began to grow, and grow, till it was almost as tall as Taiyou. Suddenly, a small key fell out of the flower and landed right in front of us.

Kiyasume widened her eyes. “So the key was buried under the soil, which could only be revealed by sunlight…Whoever designed this place sure knew what they were doing!” She reached down and picked up the key, and placed it in the door’s lock. With an eerie creeeeeeaaaaak, the door opened. Taiyou gulped. “Well,” he said nervously. “Let’s go.”

~~Meanwhile, in Netto’s chamber…~~

Netto

I groaned. “This sucks. Why am I the only one who has to go through this thing alone?” Rockman sighed from his PET. “I defy you to name one Navi that is completely identical to me. You read the sign!! Is says to test the bond with people who have identical power. Remember Saito.BAT from our first game? The Style Changes from our second? The NaviCust in the third? Soul Unison in our fourth? And I know you won’t forget Chaos Unison in our fifth. No one other than us has that kind of power.”

I growled. “Thanks for the timeline of our career, Rockman. Still, I hate being alone.” I stopped suddenly. We were in the first room. All it had was a rope bridge leading to the other side. “Rockman, doesn’t this seem…a little…too easy?” “Don’t push it, Netto. Let’s just finish this thing. This cave’s really starting to creep me out.” I laughed. “Aw, Rockman, show like you got a pair!!” He glared up at me from his PET, but said nothing.

I slowly walked along the bridge. I was halfway across when I noticed something. “Rockman, do you hear that?” He looked up at me quizzically. “Hear what? All I hear is you whining about this cave.” I rolled my eyes. “Ha, ha, very funny. No, I’m talking about that strange whirring noise. It sounds like…” Suddenly, the pegs holding up the bridge flashed with a blue and white light, taking the form of—” “Dimensional Area Generators!!” I gasped. The dome appeared around the bridge, and several Zomon (1, 2, and 3) viruses appeared, their katanas drawn. “Oh, crap.” Rockman and I yelled in unison.

A Zomon3 zoomed forward and whacked me with the back of its sword, sending me skidding across the bridge. “Damn, these things are strong!!!” I pulled out my SynchroChip. “SynchroChip In!! Dow—” Before I slotted it in, a Zomon1 threw a shuriken at my hand, and knocked it out, sending it to the other side. “@#$!!” I yelled. “Now, what?!” A Zomon1, Zomon2, and Zomon3 had their katanas facing downward, ready to plunge them into my stomach.

“Behaga, hjälp mig, Gud.” I gaped at Rockman. “I didn’t know you were Swedish!” He nodded nervously. “Neither did I.” Suddenly, I heard a large whoooooshing sound, and a blade connecting. I looked up at the Zomon viruses, and every single one had been deleted. A large figure loomed before us, sheathing back his sword into the strap on his back.

He had a large, black vest, and big black boots. He also had spiky black hair, and gold, shining eyes. There were two purplish-blackish spikes coming out on each end of his soldier. He also had a large, purple cape. He stood up, and brushed himself off. “You’re still a handful, Netto Hikari.” I gasped. “Who are you!? And how do you know my name!?” He grinned. “Who am I? I’m someone you thought dead.” He then glowed with a white light, then when it ended, in the mysterious person’s place was…Orochi!!!

I gasped. “I-I-It’s…n-n-not possible!! You can’t be alive!! Taigen killed you!! We all saw it!!” He laughed. “Still as naïve as ever. Right before my death, I said a spell that united 1% of Dusk’s soul with mine. I was born as a completely new being. The other me you saw was Kokoro, a fusion of Dusk’s essence and mine.” I just stared at him, mouth agape. He laughed again. “C’mon. Let’s get out of this cave, and I’ll explain it all.” He walked toward the end of the cave, and I trailed right after him.

~~With Enzan and Laika…~~

Enzan

“In the future, we need to get some Fangirl Repellent.” Laika nodded. “And how.”
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CrossFusionStarman · Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 4:57 pm Post subject:

AWESOME. You made his reentrance perfectly! Thanks, Django! And by the way, great chapter. Enzan and Laika's section was funny :3
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Synchro-Kun · Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 4:58 pm Post subject:

...Django, I curse you for making me walk inside the forum of Fan Fiction, a place that I thought I would never go into. XP XD.

Anyhow, I like the story, despite that I have never read the past 27 or so chapters. I wasn't really getting the Django part, but the Netto and Rockman part cracks me up quite well. There was no grammatical mistakes, making it a pretty good Fan Fiction.

Keep it up.
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DjangoSP · Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 5:03 pm Post subject:

Thanks, Synchro. But the link to your site isn't working!! Whenever I try going to it, it just says a few weird symbols. Is something wrong?

On a side note: are the girls in your avatar/sig from an anime/manga? If so, tell me where!! ^_^ (It reminds me of bishujou... :eyes:
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Synchro-Kun · Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 5:17 pm Post subject:

It should work now. You probably visited it while I was uploading it via FTP.

Yeah, Google Da Capo. Bishoujo romance comedy anime, good for your health. *shot*
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DjangoSP · Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 5:55 pm Post subject:

Nope, no luck, Synch. (ï¿½ï¿½<) These are the characters that appear whenever I try to get on it.
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SereneEXE · Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 6:09 pm Post subject:

Yay! Enzan and Laika are saved! *glomps Enzan* This fic really is getting better and better. But... how did Laika end up with Enzan?

(P.S: Um, Django, I drank lots of tea instead of coffee. Same thing happens. Urk.)

DjangoSP · Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 6:14 pm Post subject:

In chapter 25, I said that there was a symbol of a sniper rifle and a sword. 3 guesses who it represents. :eyes: Laughing

Thanks for the compliments, Serene!! :D
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kram_elbog · Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 2:42 pm Post subject:

awsome chapter like usual i cant wait for the next.
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Mugen.exe · Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 9:55 pm Post subject:

Nor can I. I'm so glad Enzan and Laika escaped the mob of fangirls. I agree, they should definately get some fangirl repellent (I hear Higure uses it, and it works every time!)
*Higure: ".... Uh, I don't think its the repellent keeping the fangirls away.
Me: "Oh, um... Well anyways *Changes the subject*,"
You handled the reentrance of Orochi perfectly (Was that also CFS's idea? Was it a two-fold plan?), and the bit about the 1%? I don't quite get it yet, but I'm sure it will become clearer later on. This chapter you cooked up was tasty. My compliments to the chef!
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DjangoSP · Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 8:38 pm Post subject:

Whew...this one took me a while. It may seem a little rushed, but that's up to you!! ^__^

Chapter 27: A Mysterious Stone… Journey To Jawaii Islands!!

Kisoka

I crossed my arms angrily. “It’s not fair. Why did I have to get stuck with Kei and Saru instead of Django? Who knows what he’s doing with that green-haired slut in the other part of the cave?” Kaze looked up at me, a smile slowly forming on her face. “If I didn’t know any better, Kisoka, I’d say you were jealous.” I glared down at her angrily. “Don’t be ridiculous. Me and Django have been friends ever since we joined the Guardians. I just hope that he doesn’t lose sight of the mission while he’s having fun with that plant-controlling brat.”

Kaze nodded. “Riiiiiiiiiight… You know I can see right through you, Kisoka. Plus, you’re a bad liar.” I responded by delivering a swift punch on her head. “Just forget about it. Besides, I happened to know you have a thing for Taiyou!” She narrowed her eyes up at me, blushing furiously. “SHUT UP!! I don’t have a thing for Taiyou!!” I laughed. “Then why were you crying on his shoulder when we all thought Cyclone died?” “I was crying in sympathy!!”

“Hey,” Kei said. “If you two are done playing ‘Elimidate’, we’re nearing the end of the tunnel.” He pointed his flashlight forward, and there was a bright light shining at the end of the tunnel.

We ran towards the end on the tunnel as fast as we could, leaving Kei and Saru in the dust.

Enzan

“So I think it all started when I was 9. First it was one. Then 3…Then 19…and it just grew…and grew…and grew…until I started having nightmares. The cloud of fangirls grew like a weed.” Laika nodded. “Yes…go on…” I nodded. “Then…it happened. They found my house…Iron bars couldn’t keep them out…red-hot lasers couldn’t take them out…spiked ceilings couldn’t keep them out…a moat couldn’t keep them out!!! WHY WOULDN’T THEY STAY AWAY!?!?!?!?!?”

Laika slapped me across the face. “Pull yourself together, man!! This is just what they want you to do!! Make you crazy!! I have something that will keep them away for a loooooong time…” I looked up at him eagerly. “What?” he reached into his pocket, and pulled out a square piece of paper. I read it, then smiled. “Oh, that is foolproof!!!” I said, giving Laika a high-five.

Taiyou

“Okay, one…two…three…PULL!” We all pulled as hard as we could on the rope in front of us connecting to the door. We pulled harder, and harder, and harder…until we gave up. Flora fell to her knees, panting. “Oh…how are we gonna get past this one!?”

Django kicked the door in frustration. “Dammit!! If I have to spend another minute in this cave, I’ll go crazy!!!! Taiyou, face the rope!!” I nodded, knowing what was coming. I pointed my hands at the rope, charging sunlight in them. Django nodded, then yelled out the spell. “Hizashi!!!” The rays of sunlight hit the rope, lighting it with fire. The flame reached the end of the door, blowing it open with a loud BOOOOOOOM!!!!

I blinked. “Wow. I didn’t think that would actually work!” Kiyasume nodded. “Well, we opened the door, so let’s get out of here!!!” We nodded, and ran to the exit of the cave.

Netto

“I still don’t understand. How in heaven’s name can you be alive after that death move!?” Orochi laughed again. “I already explained, Netto. I united one portion of my soul with the remaining portion of Dusk’s. That allowed me to be reincarnated back as my other form, Kokoro.”

I nodded, not completely sure of what was happening. Then I noticed the exit of the cave. “Hey, Orochi!! I see the light!!” We ran as fast as we could out of the cave, and jumped outside. Several of our friends were outside, including Shio, who was busy forming ice crystals in her hand. She didn’t notice Orochi at first, however.

Then she looked up, and a look of utter disbelief appeared on her face. She just up, and ran over to Orochi, and glomped him, squealing happily. “OROCHIKIRI!!! But, it’s not possible!!! You can’t be alive!!” Orochi grimaced. “That’s the same thing Netto said. Just get off me and I’ll tell you what happened.” Shio blushed and hurriedly got up.

~~5 minutes later…~~

Shio nodded, clearly amazed. “I can’t believe it. You reincarnated yourself. That’s…amazing! But the whole time, something in the back of my head kept telling me you were still alive.” I rolled my eyes. “Sure…that’s why you were sobbing uncontrollably when you saw him fade away.” She responded by giving me a kick in the shin.

RRRRMMMMMBBBBBBLLLLLEEEEE…

I whirled around, still clutching my aching shin. “Hey, what is that?” Shio looked up into one of the entrance/exits of the cave. “It sounded like a boulder.” Suddenly, Kisoka, Kei, Kaze, and Saru came running out of the cave, a giant boulder rolling after them. Kaze shot a glare over at us. “Well don’t just stand there! HELP US OUT!!!” Shio sighed, then shot a large ice beam at the rock, freezing it instantly.

Kei blinked. “Amazing… The only thing that could’ve stopped that boulder was—” “Zero-degree temperature.” Shio finished for him. “Never underestimate the power of water!!”

Then, a loud squeaking noise was heard. Django, Taiyou, Kiyasume, and Flora came running out of their cave, being chased by abnormally large bats. “Get these things off!!!” Flora cried. “Zaker!!!” A large bolt of lightning blasted the bats, charring them black. Zatch lowered his hands, which were smoking from the attack he just delivered.

“Thanks,” Flora said. “You’re not as lame in a fic as you are in the anime.” “HEY!!” Zatch yelled.

“Guys!! Forgetting that we have something to do?” A voice said. We all looked around. “Who said that!?” cried Dekao, somewhat nervously. “Over here!!” We all looked to our right, and saw a clearly cardboard cutout tree. A cutout bush stood next to it. “It’s us!! Laika and Enzan!”

Laika stepped out from behind the tree, and Enzan from behind the bush. Orochi raised an eyebrow. “Why were you two hiding behind those things? Wait, let me guess…fangirls?” But Enzan and Laika just stared at Orochi, eyes as wide as dinner plates. Enzan pointed a shaky finger at Orochi. “B-b-b-b-but…y-y-you’re…DEAD!!!” Orochi groaned. “I’m getting tired of telling this story.”

Suddenly, a silver portal appeared in the middle of the clearing. “Enter…” said a mysterious voice. Blaze shook his head. “Why should we—” A giant axe flew out of nowhere, and landed inches from his foot. “Enter the damn portal already, or I swear I’ll cut you!!!”

So, petrified at the voice, we all jumped into the portal.

~~In a parallel alternate reality for away from Butai Oukoku…~~

Zatch

When we touched down, we were in a manmade room. It looked like it was crafted out of some kind of smooth stone. In the center of the room was a large, impressive glass case, with a ruby-colored stone in the shape of a skull on a small velvet pillow. Then the voice spoke again. “Take the stone…take the Skull of Genta…” “Why should we?” I piped up. “Would you like to be staring down the business end of an Uzi?” I started sweating nervously.

I reached forward and took the stone. On the back of it, the words “Bring to Jawaii” were inscribed on the back. I raised an eyebrow. “‘Jawaii’? Where’s Jawaii?”

Hotaru will tell you… said the voice. I sighed. “Looks like we’re gonna head back to Hanagata…”

~~In the author’s room…~~

CFS

I set down my newspaper. “For the last time, LegacyDX, I am not funding your crazed reality TV show ideas!!”

He tried pleading with me again. “Aw, come on!!! You have to admit the take on DBZ/Days of Our Lives was good!!” I raised an eyebrow quizzically. “You mean ‘Dragons of Our Lives?’ Right, and I’ll fund your idea of making a Cardcaptor/Tenchi Muyo crossover.”

“Think about it, CFS!! Harem comedy crossed with fantasy!!” I crossed my arms. “No. Freaking. Way.” LDX sulked in defeat, and left. I returned to reading my newspaper. “As if his idea to crossover Pokemon and Yu-Gi-Oh! wasn’t bad enough…”

“I heard that!!” yelled LDX from the other room.
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Synchro-Kun · Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 10:25 pm Post subject:

I was nearly ROFL when I see the mention of CFS and Lgacy. XD.

Mind adding me in, too? Make it so I am a Shuffle addict. Making me a Gash addict in a Gash FF is a bit unfitting.

Btw, Django: Here you go~.
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SereneEXE · Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 11:47 pm Post subject:

Enzan seems a little OOC, but oh...*glomps Enzan again*. Enzan and Laika's part was HILARIOUS, they should be the Comedy Pair of your fic! And yes, the chapter did seemed a bit rushed, but funny at the same time. But aren't I supposed to be in the Enzan fangirl group?

Mugen.exe · Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 10:24 am Post subject:

Great chapter once again. Loved the Enzan and Laika comedy relief (genius!), and the end of the chapter was very... er, unique. Funny, but slightly confusing, like an episode of Bobobo Bo Bo Bo Bo (Bo7 for short). Keep up the good work!
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CrossFusionStarman · Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 5:33 pm Post subject:

Wow, that turned out better than I thought it would! I loved Orochi's reaction to having to tell the story of his rebirth to everyone XD. And Laika and Enzan should, as everyone else says, be the comedy duo of your fic. And that was funny, with the portal XD. "Enter the damn portal already or I swear, I'll cut you!!!'' And that part with me and LDX was good, too. Great job, Django.
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kram_elbog · Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 4:10 pm Post subject:

I just realized the last part with the large smooth stone room, with the skull in the center reminded me of a book I read. The only exception is the skull wasn't ruby but obsidion in the book. But some books are the perfect things to pull elements from as long as the entire plot isn't taken from them. Keep up the great work.
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DjangoSP · Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2006 6:28 pm Post subject:

Chapter 28: Hanagata’s Hotsprings! A Steamy, Sticky, and Scary Situation!!!

~~Back at Hanagata…~~

Kaze

“Hmm”…Hotaru said. “‘Bring to Jawaii’…” I think it refers to the Jawaii Islands of the coast of Mizu Shufu. But I’ll need to check. It’s going to take a while to figure out this information. In the meantime, why don’t you guys take a break? You must be aching for some relaxation after all of this fighting.”

I nodded. “You have no idea.”

Hotaru smiled. “There’s a hotsprings near the middle of the city. You could rest there.”

Kisoka’s eyes lit up. “Hotsprings? Oh, what I’d give for something like that!!”

Suddenly, Taiyou’s nose starting bleeding. “Taiyou!!” Django screamed. “What’s going on!!?” He looked up at Django with a scared look. “I have no idea!!!”

~~After Taiyou got his nose fixed, the troop went to the hotsprings for some well deserved R&R…~~

Netto

“Ahh…” Enzan said, sinking into the pool of boiling water. “Hotaru was right, this is great!!” He looked at Orochi. “Aren’t you coming in?”

Orochi shook his head fearfully. “No. Strange thing: when I fused with Dusk, I inherited his fear of water.”

Suddenly, a large block of ice flew over the bamboo wall dividing the girls and boys section, and whacked Taiyou on the head. “OW!!!” he screamed. “What was that?!!”

“Sorry!!” came Shio’s apologetic cry. “That was my mistake!!”

Orochi sighed. “Well, I’m getting outta here. Later, guys.” Orochi disappeared in a flash of purple light.

Taiyou slumped, rubbing the spot where the ice cube hit him. “I wish we could see what’s going on in the girl’s side…”

Django chuckled ominously. “I’ve got a way to fix that…” He pulled out several small, blue-colored mushrooms, with white dots dotting the top of them.

“These are Blueshrooms. One bite, and you’ll be invisible for exactly 30 seconds, but nothing more, and nothing less. So be careful.”

Taiyou, Django, and I each took a Blueshroom. “Hey,” I asked Enzan and Dekao. “Aren’t you gonna do this?”

They shook their heads. “No way.” said Enzan. “I know better than to violate a woman’s privacy. Besides, I already saw Anetta naked before.” >:3

I shrugged, and took a bite of the Blueshroom. It tasted bitter and sour, but it was for a good cause. In my view, anyway. Heh, heh, heh…

“Whoa!!” I said, looking at my hand. “This stuff really works!!” My hand was completely unseeable. Laughing to ourselves, we stepped out of the rock basin, and snuck over to the girl’s side.

**WARNING. THE NEXT SEVERAL PARTS WILL CONTAIN NUDITY. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Even though Taiyou was invisible, I could tell his mouth was agape. Mine sure was!! The girls were completely uncovered. They were laughing and splashing in the hot water, like something out of a Baywatch movie. “Whoa…” I heard Django say. “I didn’t know Kiyasume was so stacked!! And she’s so small!!” “OMFG.” Taiyou said. “Kaze is hooooot!!!”

I was staring at Meiru. Hers were the size of real melons!! I have been missing out when we became friends in childhood. I know I shouldn’t be doing stuff like this, but c’mon!! Suddenly, the girls stopped playing around, and looked directly in our direction.

I started sweating nervously. “Um…Django? How long did you say these Blueshrooms work??” The reason I was asking this…I could see myself.

The girls’ eyes widened, and Kaze pointed directly at Taiyou, who I could also see. “It’s only been ten seconds!!” Django said. “Oh…” Taiyou said. “There was a smudge on the label. It lasts for ten seconds, not 30.” We looked at the label, then at the girls, then at the label, then back at the girls again.

“OH, CRAP.” Django, Taiyou, and I all said in unison.

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” the girls all shrieked.

“RUN!!!” I screamed. We jumped out of the basin, but Taiyou slipped and fell. I was about to run back to him, when he held his hand up. “Run away!!” he said as Kaze jumped on him. “Save yourself!!”

We leaped into the main hallway and ran towards the front door. Suddenly, and ice wall appeared in front of us, blocking our path. We turned around, and saw Shio lower her hands from the ice magic. The girls were all there except for 1 difference: they were all wrapped (damn!) in towels.

“Django,” I whispered. “How are we gonna get out of this mess?!”

“You are in SOOOOOO much trouble!!! Have you no conscience?!!” Kiyasume yelled.

“I’ve got a plan.” Django whispered back to me. “Follow my lead.” He stepped forward. “Girls, I know that you think that we’ve violated your privacy, and that the images will stay in our heads till our dying day—”

“Damn straight!!” Taiyou cried. Kaze whacked him in the head with a rock from the basin. “SHUT UP, PERV!!!”

“Please!!” Django continued. “Before you mercilessly pummel our bodies into a state where we won’t even be able to remember our names…I want you to know…THIS WAS ALL NETTO’S IDEA!!!!”

“WHAT!?” the girls said. “WHAT?!” I said. “THAT’S YOUR PLAN!?!” Django said nothing more. He ran up the nearby stairs as the girls closed in on me. “Soooo…” Meiru said. “This was your entire plan. GET ‘IM GIRLS!!!!”

“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!” I yelled.

I decided to stray from the story a bit for some comedy. I promise that we'll get back to the main story next chapter. What do you think, guys? Laughing

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GospelDS · Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2006 7:01 pm Post subject:

Good chappie ! Well , it was funny .
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