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I only did the Script when they were in Battles, but right, I'll keep it all Narrative then.
And secondly, in case you didn't notice the way Dark Rockman was using the Battle Chip Gate was he locked onto the PETs of others and when they used a Chip, it hijacked the data. With Jealousy it stole the data, then used Jealousy on Enzan, who had Jealousy slotted in which broke Jealousy, since it was the only chip he had slotted in. But, since it broke itself it caused a feedback error in the Battle Chip Gate. Yes, I know it's bending things a little but EXE doesn't have an interrupt chip as such, so I improvised. _________________
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Yes! I have ressurected this from the dead!
Chapter 4: Of Beasts and Villians
Netto walked slowly through the rain. It felt good to be out of that suffocating room, to be out of so many suffocating memories.
He wandered for a while without paying much attention to where he was going. A few weeks of not taking proper care of himself had left him looking a different person. Had anyone seen him, unless they looked closely, they would not have recognized him for the happy, cheerful and energetic child he had once been. The rain trickled down his face, almost like the silent tears he himself could no longer shed. He didn’t feel sad, he didn’t even feel angry. All Netto felt was empty, a dull ache that he couldn’t understand except for someone missing.
Rockman…
He thought about their last moments. They had been so confident, convinced that they could win against…against…but the memory refused to surface. Whether it was because it was too painful, or whether he no longer had it, he couldn’t tell.
“Netto? Netto-kun?”
A voice called out to him from somewhere behind.
He stopped and turned, to look at who had called out to him. He saw a figure, a lady running up to him calling his name.
Do I know her?...she look…familiar. Not threatening, but familiar. Netto contemplated the figure as he she ran up to him. Finally she reached him, panting and slightly rosy cheeked. She held her umbrella up to cover them both, although the rain coat still dripped onto Netto’s shirt.
“Netto, what are you doing out in this rain?” The lady asked slightly concerned. An onlooker would have wondered how she knew such an unkempt person. An acquaintance would have been stunned she’d recognized him.
“Ms…Mariko?” Netto asked hesitantly as the name came uncertainly. The lady paused for a moment, with a far off expression on her face.
“Yes! It’s me Netto! Quick, come indoors before you catch a cold!” She said, directing him to a tea shop close by. Ms Mariko ran, leading Netto into the cozy shop dripping on the floor as they entered.
“Coats on the rack please.” A fierce looking man said at the counter. Ms Mariko put up her coat on the rack, her umbrella in a basket and took Netto further into the shop, close to the fire.
Enzan and Meiru sat in one of the many conference rooms that Sci-Lab had to offer. It was a spacious room, with ample space to hold many visitors, have a presentation and provide catering. This one, however was a special room that only selected visitors were allowed to enter and was therefore used for highly confidential subjects.
“As you are aware, Hikari Netto along with Dark Rockan and several other Darkloids have been attacking various warehouses, government facilities and other such locales. We have now, judged on the data that was stolen from Sci-Lab, as well as from the patterns of the attacks worked out what the aims of the group are.” Said Chief Kifune, crisply and in a matter of fact tone, but only to hide his concern about the matter. Age was not treating the portly man either as he’d lost even more of his hair and had begun to develop a frown.
“Dr. Hikari, could you please take over?” He added and sat down as Yuuichiro rose to begin his presentation.
“As you know, several years ago Wily and his Net Mafia released Proto back into Cyber Network. This could have been contained, however costly, had Proto not also infected many Dimensional Converters with it’s Proto Bugs.” Yuuichiro turned to the screen behind him and signaled to Meijin to bring up the information he needed.
“For some reason we could not understand, Proto was able to materialize itself and begin to consume Real World matter as well. After consuming much of Densan, Akihara and other areas where we had Dimensional Converters stored, it materialized it’s Core and began to increase the rate of the Data Consumption on the Real World.” Yuuichiro continued his display and brought up some footage of suburban areas being consumed by a red, amoeba-like mass.
“In the end, it was only through the valiant efforts of the Net Saviors, as well as other heroic citizens that prevailed over Proto. They destroyed it’s Core and gave us the time, so that we were able to construct a form of Anti-body to destroy it. However…in it’s final throes it…attempted to absorb Rockman and…Hikari Netto while they were in Cross Fusion. We deactivated the Dimensional Converter as soon as we could…but there was still damage…” Yuuichiro trailed off, unable to talk without choking on his words.
“Thankyou Dr. Hikari. We appreciate this is very difficult for you.” Kifune said, allowing Yuuichiro to sit down, and to weep for his son.
“Many of you already know this, and some of you were there in the battle” Kifune started, glancing at Enzan and Meiru. “But, without proper intelligence we cannot move forward. The fact of the matter is that, for some reason Hikari Netto and Dark Rockman appear to be trying to rebuild Proto. Due to the original attempt to seal it, there are some areas of Proto surrounding Tadashi Hikari’s “Guardian Program” which cannot be modified. The previous generation of Sci-Lab were far less equipped to deal with Proto. Fortunately it was not able to access any critical systems due to the infancy of Network Technology at the time.”
“These areas are connected directly to the Guardian Program and facilitate it’s interaction with Proto. They are however, inert and merely data storage of some kind for it; like a memory center as a human equivalent. It is possible that the data that Proto consumed from Rockman is stored there…if so, it is also possible that it could be retrieved; if the Guardian Program was removed.” Kifune stated, then gestured towards Meijin to begin the next phase of the presentation.
“So, Netto-kun, tell me what you’ve been doing since you left my Class.” Ms. Mariko asked innocently. Netto was wrapped up in his thoughts, but was lucid enough to reply without much thought.
“I’ve been…at College studying…studying…programming!” He said, looking up at the end, remembering something important. How could he have forgotten?
“So, you want to follow your father into programming do you?” She asked, sipping on her tea slowly. It was relaxing to sip the warm beverage and hear the rain on the roof.
“Maybe…I’m not sure of…anything at the moment really.” Netto said, thinking back on what he’d done recently.
“Am I doing the right thing?” He thought to himself, questioning his motives and reasons. “Ms. Mariko makes me think of a time when I was happy and carefree…a time when I had friends...friends like Rockman.”
“Well, I don’t think I’ll be working in…Sci-Lab at any rate” He added before sipping his tea. He was slowly warming up and drying out. The Tea Shop was cozy and their corner was reasonably private.
“How are the others? I don’t see Meiru, Dekao, Tohru or Chisao anymore. I think about you often you know, you were special students.” Mariko said, with a slightly odd look in her eyes. Netto was oblivious however, having become caught up in the maelstrom of thoughts and memories in his head.
“Um…well…Dekao is a famous Chef now, Tohru went to study abroad, Chisao is in Senior High and…Meiru…Meiru became a Net Savior” Netto almost choked on the final part.
“They discarded me once I was useless to them…no-one tried to help me, they all said that Rockman…had…sacrificed himself for me…no one cared about Rockman, no one but me.”
At that moment however, Mariko’s PET rang.
“Yuriko, you have an incoming call.” Said Needleman.
“NEEDLEMAN!” Yuriko cried out, exasperated with her Navi. Netto paused, then snapped his head up to look at Ms. Mariko. Yes, it was Yuriko, but just disguised as Mariko. He should have know that the Net Police would try to spy on him, Rockman was right, he couldn’t go out in public.
“So…the Net Police want to Spy on me do they?” asked a furious Netto. He clenched his hands in rage, thinking for a moment of hitting Yuriko.
“No, this was purely my own initiative after you mistook me for my sister.” She said calmly. If Netto had decided to hit her, she was easily capable of defending herself. “You can hardly blame me for your mistake, I didn’t disguise myself as my sister.”
Netto was puzzled…she was dressed the way he remembered Mariko…he was sure of it!
“Well, I’m sorry I tricked you, but let’s just say that not everyone is out to get you. Miyabi and I like to do our own…intelligence gathering once in a while. But, I must go now, I’ve told the owner that you’re allowed to have more Tea if you like. He’ll charge it to my account; so farewell Netto-kun.” And with that parting note she left the store, going to whatever meeting she needed to attend.
Netto-kun put down the Tea, and left the shop as well. He walked a different direction to Yuriko though, walking off into the rain.
“The thing that confused us, was that Wily was able to activate Proto with the Guardian Program enabled.” Meijin continued, getting into the stride of the presentation and focusing on the data. “Proto was able to activate with the Guardian Program in operation, so that the Core area was protected. Proto was however able to move about freely and usurp other systems.”
“The real shocking thing however, is that Proto was still able to convert data while it was being attacked by the Anti-body.” Yuuichiro said, glancing up having composed himself.
"We couldn't have known how the Data Drain from Proto would affect a person while in Cross Fusion" Meijin said, summoning various graphs and diagrams on a display. One showed a diagram of the Cross Fusion process, detailing the interaction of the realised data and the human host.
"So, Proto didn't just drain Rockman's Data then?" Enzan said shocked.
"No, Netto must have been affected by it too..." Yuuichiro said, his eyes full of grief over his son's misfortune.
“Then, this would go a great deal as to explaining the reports of Netto’s odd behaviour and supposed memory loss.” Kifune added, thinking hard about the information they’d just heard. “But, it’s difficult to say how Dark Rockman and the other Darkloids fit into this as well.”
“Dark Rockman was originally defeated by Slur, the extra-terrestrial Navi affiliated with Duo” Enzan mused. “But, I can’t say what happened to the data left over from that time. It is possible that it could have resonated with Rockman’s other junk data in a similar fashion to the Pharoahman occurrence.”
Netto had dried off by the time he wandered to the river. He’d intended to return to the Hideout, but had been unable to get his bearings enough to return. He sat under a shady tree and watched a far off Fireworks display. It brought back incomplete memories that refused to settle and with little other options, Netto drifted off into a troubled sleep.
Forte stirred.
He hadn’t sensed a power similar to this in many years.
“It couldn’t be you, I saw you sacrifice yourself for that pathetic human. How could you, the only one who was possibly ever my equal and my other half, possibly sacrifice yourself for such a weak and powerless creature?” He wondered. The Ura Net had been turbulent lately, rumors about a revival of the Darkloids were rampant but he had dismissed them out of hand.
A power like Rockman’s…but different, almost tainted, but not with darkness. No, this was a different taint…one that was also very familiar.
“If it is him, I cannot afford to lose his Ultimate Program again! I am stronger now, I will control it utterly…there shall be no room for him to use my power to protect his worthless Humans.”
Forte walked off, today was going to be more interesting than he had expected.
Preview for Chapter 5:
"You...I remember you!" the Rockman cried, distortion creating odd echoes and inflections in his words.
"I had expected you to be...more complete" Forte said with disgust. "You shall hardly be a challenge to me in your current state!"
DARKNESS OVERLOADER! He cried out, but halted gathering energy for his killing blow.
"Impossible! You cannot have this much power!" Forte cried, with actual fear in his eyes. Rockman began to more, slowly and shakily at first as if a marionette in the hands of a toddler. But, as he approaced Forte, a power began to expand out of him...
Only I have a Get-Ability program...the legacy of my life as Pharoahman...so how did he absorb Proto?!?
"Take me...to Netto-kun!" Rockman cried.
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:30 am Post subject: |
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YAY! About time you updated it. I thought you discontinued it or something. -_-; Anyways, please continue.
Yuriko let Netto go? She owns a Tea Store? What the heck? o.O _________________
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:48 am Post subject: |
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No, no! She just *found* it. And she told the owner to charge to her Bank Account if Netto got more Tea.
As for motives, well all I can say is most of that scene was what it seemed. But you can never tell just quite what Yuriko is thinking. _________________
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Whoops, my bad then... XD _________________
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Using my PDA, this page glitched. Ignore this post.
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Hmm.
I'm quite intrigued with the direction that this fic is going. There are certainly quite bold ideas being put forth here, which I really would like to see delved into more. However...I found this to be somewhat incomplete, to tell you the truth. Although the syntax used is good, I don't think you explain some of the ideas that you present rather clearly, and I was left somewhat confused at the end. It's still a fine job, though. _________________ Today, these three players are after Big Bucks! But they'll have to avoid the Whammy, as they play the most exciting game of their lives! From Television City in Hollywood! It's time to 'Press Your Luck!'--Rod Roddy
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I went for a Cliff Hanger, do you think it works in fiction? If not I'll avoid it again. I just found finishing every chapter with a fight scene, like an Anime will often do a little tiring. _________________
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Chapter 6: Get Ability vs. Get Ability, Round 1!
Netto turned in his sleep, as incomplete memories and thoughts that were not entirely his own played out in his subconscious. He dreamed; and saw deep into a familiar darkness to where an epic struggle was about to play out.
Forte sped forward towards the place he felt Rockman. It was odd that Rockman should choose the place where he had found Nebula Grey and had Forte been one of those ridiculous Human Navis it might have been sentimental. Forte had no time for such infantile concerns such as emotions. Strength had served him well so far and would continue to do so.
Rockman felt Forte’s approach as well, but it was hard to say what he thought except that he knew, or rather felt that this would bring him closer to Netto-kun.
“ROCKMAN!” Forte called out into the inky blackness of the Ura Net.
"You...I remember you!" the Rockman cried, distortion creating odd echoes and inflections in his words.
Forte fired a blast into the darkness, which exploded and illuminated the area slightly. Rockman floated a small distance beyond the radius of the explosion, contorted into an odd position. His data structure seemed to be fluid, with parts of the Navi behaving more like a slow moving liquid, than actual data.
"I had expected you to be...more complete" Forte said with disgust. "You shall hardly be a challenge to me in your current state!"
DARKNESS OVERLOADER! He cried out, but halted gathering energy for his killing blow; he’d finish off the pathetic Navi with one attack.
Suddenly, Forte halted and recoiled as he felt something…foreign and yet familiar.
"Impossible! You cannot have this much power!" Forte cried, with actual fear in his eyes. Rockman began to more, slowly and shakily at first as if a marionette in the hands of a toddler. But, as he approaced Forte, a power began to expand out of him...
"Only I have a Get-Ability program...the legacy of my life as Pharoahman...so how did he absorb Proto?!?" Forte thought incredulously.
"Take me...to Netto-kun!" Rockman cried and plunged forward, quick as lightning. Forte released the checks on his power and summoned his Darkness Aura to protect himself from a now berserk Rockman.
Dark Rockman suddenly recoiled, the Darkness in him resonating with that of Forte.
“It’s too soon! I must stop them…but without Netto’s power I may not be able to survive an encounter with him.” However Dark Rockman dived into the net, smashing through the layers of Data that made up Internet in his urgency.
“I must stop them even if I die…everything will go wrong if Forte absorbs Proto!” He though with bitter disgust. He then felt a tracer following his path and other sensors surveying the damage. “Damn, the Net Police will be able to track me for sure, but I can’t delay for even a second!”
Sirens, alarms, warnings and any other kind of alert that existed in Sci-Lab went off, all in a painful and unrelenting unity.
“What’s going on!?!” Cried out one scientist in confusion.
“A force is literally ripping through the Internet with alarming speed!” Another scientist cried out.
“Data is being fragmented or destroyed on a specific trajectory sir!” An attentive young scientist said to Dr. Hikari. “Calcutlating trajectory and resultant destination…sir! It’s heading straight for an unchartered area of the Ura Net!”
“Begin damage control, seal off the sectors affected and get me the Net Police on any line that’s not damaged!” Dr. Hikari said to his assistant.
“Visual confirmation on the object in motion…it’s Dark Rockman!” Cried out the first scientist.
“What do you think could cause Dark Rockman to be so careless Yuuichiro?” Meijin asked, contemplating what emergency would spur the Darkloid to this kind of recklessness.
“I can’t say for certain, but it could be related to Forte I think.” Replied a worn and tired looking Yuuichiro. “Is Kifune on the emergency line yet?” Yuu yelled out into the chaos.
“Yes, I’m here Dr. Hikari. Now explain what the hell is happening!” Manabe demanded, his face filling up a large monitor in the centre of the display.
“Dark Rockman is heading towards the Ura Net at an exteme velocity, this is causing the Data he comes in contact with to be destroyed or damaged.” Yuu said, then continued. “We’re uncertain as to his objectives but it could possibly relate to Forte.”
“What makes you say that?” Kifune asked, not expecting the response he had just heard.
“It’s difficult to say for sure, but both of them have a unique connection to Rockman.”
“HELLS ROLING!” Forte cried out, sending Dark Wheels to hunt down Rock, who dodged them in an incredible feat of agility. Rockman then turned around as all the Dark Wheels circled around and homed back onto him. Rockman jumped up with incredible speed and then one of his arms expanded like a kind of gel, forming into a Giant Rocket which blasted down into the Wheels. The force of the explosion sent Forte flying back, but did not penetrate his Dark Aura.
“Curses, Proto Arm Omega.” Forte thought grimly, then charged back into the fray.
“SHOOTING BUSTER!!!” He cried out savagely, attacking the ever increasingly powerful Rockman with all he had.
“Are you sure it’s okay to send Navis through such Network degradation?” Enzan asked mildly, his current position was such that he could not openly challenge Kifune without risk of arrest. The Chief was not taking his recent, vigilante-esque actions with a good heart.
“Dr. Hikari has assured me that Network is only essential for low level programs; this is why Navis are free to travel throughout the Network without being restricted to a single area like Mr. Progs are.” Kifune said, too preoccupied to notice the hidden challenge in Enzan’s words. “I’m sending Blues, Roll and Searchman in to investigate. As our strongest Net-Navis we’re counting on you to stop whatever malevolent ambitions Dark Rockman may have.”
“Can you give us any intelligence before they head in?” Laika asked as coolly as ever; while he did not have to worry about the same issues as Enzan and Meiru, it was in his best interests to maintain an amicable relationship with the Japanese Net Police.
“Only that Dark Rockman is so desperate that he is throwing any caution to the wind and plowing through the Network in an effort to reach his destination.” Kifune said squarely to the Sharo soldier.
“Although neither have had a direct connection before, it is possible that through Rockman and also their encounters with Slur, that Dark Rockman and Forte can detect each other’s Dark Auras.” Meiru suggested to Kifune and although she was not normally confident about making such assertions, she knew Rockman and Netto better than anyone save themselves and Dr.Hikari.
“Dr.Hikari also thought this could be a possibility. At any rate, the calculated trajectory leads to the area of the Ura Net where Nebula Grey used to lie. It’s hard to say what exactly this entails, but be careful. We can’t afford to lose your Navis.” Kifune finished.
“Enzan-sama, we’ve now reached the area of degradation caused by Dark Rockman, shall we enter?” Blues asked his Operator.
“Yes, but be careful in there, I’m sending some Battlechip Data to you now.” Enzan replied, while slotting in a “Condor” and “Dream Aura” Battlechips. The trio of Navis hoped onto the Condor Virus that Enzan had sent and activated the Dream Aura in case they needed the protection. The Condor Virus then activated, speeding down the trail of destruction that Dark Rockman had left.
“What ARE you!?!” Forte cried out in frustration as Rockman either parried, or evaded his attacks. He’d tried almost every attack he’d made, seen or copied with his “Get-Ability” program to no avail. While Forte still had plenty of energy to burn, if he couldn’t successfully attack Rockman, he would wear down eventually and lose. The thought angered him deeply, he’d always been stronger than Rockman and now suddenly, he was completely out matched by this…pathetic and corrupt amalgam of Rockman and Proto.
“I shall NOT lose to the likes of you!” Forte cried out, and brought all of his strength to bear for one final, massive strike. His arms bulged and morphed into different shapes as he combined all his attacks into one, destructive blast. Finally his arms settled on the form of Gospel’s head, the irony lost on the enraged Navi.
“STOP RIGHT THERE FORTE!!!” An impudent voice cried out from behind, causing Forte to turn and see another Rockman.
“How amusing…that you of all people should posses a Dark Soul!” Forte cried out, laughing maniacally. Dark Rockman moved back a little from the unhinged Forte, who was still charging energy in the Gospel Head that was attached to his arm.
“You…are…not…Netto!” Rockman said, his voice more clearer yet hesitant when he spoke the words. “I shall destroy…anyone who…stops me from reaching…Netto-kun!” Rockman cried out again, before looking upwards.
“And the lackeys of the Humans arrive, how pathetic.” Forte growled as the Condor Viruses carrying Blues, Roll and Searchman arrived at the conflict. “Watch as I destroy your pathetic Rockman and claim his Ultimate Program…once and for all!”
“Laika, this is bad!” Searchman said contacting his operator.
“An attack of this magnitude will filter back into the top level Networks!” Roll gasped, her face turning white at the enormity of the power that Forte wielded.
Rockman seemed to struggle internally, not sure whether to attack his greatest threat, Forte. Or whether to assimilate the data of Blues, Roll, Searchman and Dark Rockman; all of whom would lead him to Netto-kun.
Dark Rockman charged at Forte’s unguarded back, Dark Sword in hand. He lunged, only to be repelled by the power of Forte’s Dark Aura that shieled him.
“You would seek to attack me with the Power of Darkness?” Forte cried out, turning to face Dark Rockman. “Then face terrible oblivion!” he yelled sadistically, firing the amassed energy at Dark Rockman.
Time seemed to stand still for a moment. Rockman’s sudden comprehension of what Dark Rockman’s death would mean, the other Navi’s disbelief that Forte would turn so quickly on Dark Rockman and Forte’s maniacal laughter.
Time moved again and everyone waited for the Data Debris caused by the attack to part. But, Dark Rockman was somehow still alive; protected by an incredible Aura of some kind. The Net Saviour Navis looked shocked and also slightly anxious, their Dream Aura had been blown away by the mere force of the attack.
“I know this scent, but I killed you!” Forte screamed in frustration, swinging around to look for some unknown power.
“His part is not yet finished.” A voice came from the darkness, both masculine and feminine while being neither at the same time. “You must mean my sister, Slur.” A small, fragile looking Navi said coming into view.
“I’ll kill you just as easily as I killed her.” Forte said smugly, suddenly oblivious to everyone save the newcomer.
A haunting melody filled the air, it was a quiet tune that hinted of a familiar refrain. Forte attacked, his Shooting Buster attack streamed towards the seemingly defenceless Navi.
Suddenly, in a quick flash Forte’s attack rebounded around the raiments on the Navi’s back, and crashed back into him sending him hurtling from the impact. Suddenly Rockman took the opportunity to lunge at the now defenceless Forte, arms outstretched as his flew towards Forte.
“I cannot allow Forte to posses the Data Distribution ability of Proto.” The Navi said simply, and raised it’s hand. Everyone in the area was engulfed in a Barrier of seemingly pure light. It illuminated the Darkness that stretched on, seemingly forever. Despite struggling against the shield, it would not be broken. “This conflict cannot happen at this time.” The Navi said and lowered it’s hand.
Dark Rockman went flying one direction into the Ura Net, with Forte and Rockman flying in other directions. Blues, Roll and Searchman were sent back up the hole from which they had descended.
The Navi folded it’s arms and said to the Darkness, “The irony of the world, it’s touching and yet saddening to know that those who would guide Destiny the most, are the ones who are the most bound to it.” The Navi turned and seemed to vanish, leaving only the haunting Serenade in it’s wake.
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No preview for Chapter 6 folks, I'm going to leave you in suspense. _________________
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Triple post? o_o
Anyway...this is certainly getting interesting. I have to admit, though, that it is also getting confusing. Sometimes, your writing becomes a bit garbled, and it's hard to determine what you are trying to convey to the reader. Nevertheless, this fic is still quite engaging to read and is definitely something that an astute reader should keep an eye on.
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A *very* embarrasing accident. I'd delete them if I could, but can only edit them and wait for an admin to decide whether to delete them or not.
This chapter, I aimed for a sense of urgency although I can see how it might seemed garbled. I'm trying to paint some of the picture, but not all of it. Once it finishes you'll be able to look back and understand why some things happened and it'll make more sense.
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I didn't really get any pictures painted in my mind.
No preview!!! :grr: :grr: :grr:
Well, at least they know Rockman's back. Hehe... _________________
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