Kingdom Hearts Poems. *slight spoilers*

YaminoMiko · Last edited by YaminoMiko on Sun Jan 29, 2006 7:18 pm; edited 2 times in total

I Am

I am a fragment.
A piece of a whole,
A part of which you were

I am a shadow.
An outline of which you are.
A being that is you and yet,
Not you at the same time.

I am a shell.
Something that shouldn’t exist.
Something that shouldn’t be in this world.
Something that you’re not.

I am…Roxas

ooOOoo

Ummm, how do you guys like it? Feel free to flame.
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megarush · Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 3:25 pm Post subject:

i like it! I really felt emotion while reading it
it was as if everything was empty around me
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YaminoMiko · Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 5:09 pm Post subject:

Oh wow thanks Megarush.
I didn't know it was that emotional. ^^;
I should write more poems more oftem.
.....What the heck.

I Am From....

I am from a town,
Where the golden buildings stood up high to the sky
And the famous bell ring loudly in the afternoons

I am from where the sun never stes.
Where there is no morning or night,
Where the sky is orange and red,
Where the moon never rises

I am from the twilight,
A place where the light or dark doesn't understand,
A place where the shadows could exist,
A place where the nobodies like me could live in peace.

ooOOoo

So, uh....how was it?
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megarush · Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 3:01 pm Post subject:

well maybe it happen when i'm in a bad situation or it may be because i love kingdom hearts. i see things different and i have so many question that are impossible to answer.
i did like this one also,you really make it so that the reader can imagine with the few phases(if that's the word) you say.this one is also about roxas ...am i right?
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YaminoMiko · Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 3:41 pm Post subject:

Yup. Roxas' POV of Twilight Town.

I'm also a big fan of Kingdom Hearts.
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megarush · Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 2:56 pm Post subject:

i can see that clearly with your awsome avatar and signature.
we both got one thing in common.
hey can i ask you something?
your poems do they come to you or do you think about it before comming up with one?
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YaminoMiko · Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 7:18 pm Post subject:

Sometimes they come to me. Other times I would think about it.

Weird thing is, they would come to me when I'm bored or after I finish a test. -.-
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megarush · Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 3:16 pm Post subject:

it ain't that weird, i'm sure crazy thing comes to our mind when we're bored or when we're stuck in a test sitting doing nothing.

one of my ways when something clicks in my mind ,is when i do a few things at the same time(on internet)
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