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PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 8:48 pm    Post subject: On The other side Reply with quote

Hi there! It's my first Rockman fic. So please go easy on me and it my first time use Japanese names of any anime. Any suggestion for making my fic. better is grateful appreciated!

Rated: PG (to be safe)

Genre: Hu, Su, R

I don't own Rockman or any one only for some OC.

Key:

Attacks form the Net Navis

"Thioughts"

"Talk"

Song

/Two people talking through there minds/

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"NETTO WAKE UP!!!!!" yelled Rockman.

Netto made little of movement and said his usual reply "5 more minutes."

"How can you sleep so much Netto-kun? You sleep like your a old man." Rockman mumble under his breath.

Suddenly Rockman PET started to beep. Netto just rolled over.

"Please be what I think it is..." Rockman prayed while opening the email. A huge smile grew on Rockman face.

"NETTO VIRUS ATTACK!" Rockman yelled. While earning a groan from Netto.

Then two minutes later Netto got dress and skated away to the place where attack was.

~~~

A black-white net navi races across the Internet while looking sharply at all the passing by net navis.

"Where could that idiot be?!" thought the navi while stopping from hearing a explosion.

"I'm going to kill HIM!" thought the navi while hurrying to get to place where the explosion was...

~~~

"I SKIPPED MY SLEEP FOR THIS!" yelled Netto.

It was a false attack and no other NetSavior bother to come.

"Sorry Bro. well seen your up you can do your H.W." said Rockman giving an acquitted smile.

"You so mean! Man when you be come human I going to wake you up all the time! Then tell you to do you H.W...." said Netto going on and on about how he was going to get his revenge on Rockman if he turn 'human' all of the sudden.

Unknown to Netto his word touched a weak spot in Rockman and he already went to Internet.

~~~

Rockman walked around looking for something to do.

"Netto didn't mean to say those thing. It just feel like he wants me to be more than I can be." thought Rockman.

Then he heard a explosion and then suddenly a wave of virus came out no where.

"Should I call Netto? Nah I could take care of it." said Rockman to himself. "Rock Buster!"

~~

"It's like trying talk to your shadow! Man, stop it already!" yelled the black and white navi.

He was attacking the other side where Rockman was fighting. Now if first took a glimpse at the navi that was fighting right now you think that you we looking at a twin of Forte. However, he was a little different form Forte. Yes, he did have a cape that covered his whole body but it was half black and the other side was white. If you took the cape off you could see that it was same like the cape half black and the other side was white now in the middle was his symbol which had to little wings (black-white like everything he had) in side a circle. Also he had no helmet however he did have hair that was black. Half was covering his left eye and the eye that was covering if you cut the hair of you could see it was complete white. On the other hand, his other eye was black with changed to red every time he angry. Oh was he angry now not only was he wasting time but he was getting sick of trying to catch up the navi who was cause all this trouble.

"When I get my..." said the black and white navi but got cut of by see a shadow flying over him. "Finally I found you my brother."

With that the black and white navi followed the other navi.

~~~

"Man I beat! If I fight anymore I'll end up deleting myself." thought Rockman now retreating form the attack.

However, the virus keep coming and they didn't give Rockman time to defense himself. So while Rockman was getting hit by viruses he fail to see attack coming towards the virus. Also, failing to dodging it so as the viruses were delete Rockman was badly beat up.

"Man, look what you did bro.!! I hurt a navi I don't even know if he one of "boss" follwers! If I get into trouble your going down with me!" yelled the navi who attacked the virus.

Rockman looked up and gasped...

"FORTE?!!!!!" yelled Rockman trying to get up to defense himself if Forte care to take the time to attack him.

"Forte? Sorry I think you got the wrong navi." said the navi suddenly he disappeared to reappear behind Rockman.

"Huh?" said Rockman while turning around to gasp again...

The navi which he thought was Forte was fighting a navi with looked kind of like...him. However, he was bloodily red and had black hair which cover his right eye. His left eye was white while if you cut off the hair you could see it was complete black. Also his symbol was to little guns the went into each other one red the other purple. In other words, a twin of the black-white navi which is fight him right now.

"You such a troublesome BRO!" yelled the black-white navi.

"Sorry IF I not so perfect like YOU but I have to do something here." said the bloodily red navi.

"You know I didn't mean it that way..." said black-white navi with had a hurt tone now.

"Are you going to cry now? You such a crybaby." said bloody red navi now holding his hand up.

"DON'T DO THAT ATTACK YOU BAKA!" yelled the black-white now just remember Rockman. "Shot"

Rockman looked dumbfound of the whole scene. The bloodily red navi hand glowed all the color of the rainbow it would have been beautiful. However, everything around them was getting suck into it.

"Darn it I got to do something! Now I wish I called Netto. How do I..." thought Rockman but he got cut off when the black-white stood in front of him.

"Close your eyes and thing something you love and hate." said black-white navi.

Rockman didn't do anything but then suddenly gave in closing his eye. He thought of Roll for love and blushed in the process. Then he thought of Netto dieing in front of him...he want to kill to himself for even thinking of it. While he was think this if his eyes were open then he would seen himself turning white and black. Then the two colors went into black-white navi hand with was lifted and now was glowing the two color too.

"I hate to do this to a sibling however you have learn one way or the other." said the black-white navi. "Thank you navi I owe you...DARKHOLE!"

Black-white navi hit his hand on the ground while the floor opened up pulling the other navi in. If the other navi didn't take that time to hit his attack. Then it wouldn't be the other way around.

"BROTHER STOP THIS STUPIDLY AND PULL US OUT!" yelled a very irritated black-white navi.

He looked at Rockman who was trying to swim out. He laughed at this and it remind him of his NetOp...if only he was alive. Sigh. The world can be your friend one day then you foe the next.

"At least he has to get out of this mess." thought the black-white navi.

Now his eye which you could see turned red then the hole with was tugging them in turn upside down. Pulling the bloodily red navi inside. Suddenly with a jolt everything turned normal.

"Man, now I know how Netto feels when he on a roller coaster." said Rockman to himself flopping on the ground.

Next to him the black-white navi sat down taking deep breaths. That was the most tiresome time he very tried to get his brother back to lab.

"I should get a battle chip every time he tries to do that. Man, why does my brother have to be so troublesome. So opposite of his NetOp...." thought the black-white navi then he got cut off when someone touched his shoulder.

He jump up and got ready to attack when he saw it just the navi that was with him.

"*Sigh* Don't do that man you scared me." said the black-white navi.

"Sorry, by the way thanks for helping back there." said the navi which was Rockman.

"No thank you without you...well I would have been a die navi." said the black-white navi.

"Aw. Well thanks anyways and by the way names Rockman." said Rockman holding his hand out.

"Nice to meet you! My name is Darkside." said Darkside shaking Rockman hand.

"Well Darkside if your..." said Rockman but got cut off when Darkside hold his hand up.

"Sorry but I got to go. Nice meeting you Rockman. I know we well see each other in the future." said Darkside disappearing.

"OK that was kind of weird. Well I better get back to Netto before he start to worry." thought Rockman then logging out.

~~

Speaking of Netto was asleep on top of his H.W. which he only finish one sentence. Well, whatever he was dreaming I think he well choose H.W. then the dream that was more like a nightmare.

Nightmare~~

Netto was watching Rockman/Satio being deleted in front of his eyes.

"ROCKMAN! BROTHER DON'T GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" yelled Netto.

Suddenly two navi came in front of Netto. One was taking Rockman data while the other was trying to stop him.

"Atoman you could be wrong. How can he be your NetOp? I saw him die! He can't be Rockman!" yelled the navi trying to stop him who was called Atoman.

"You don't know anything brother! He is my NetOp....he is Satio!!!" yelled the last part Atoman while logging out.

Netto just stood there stupidly at the spot where the navi was and Rockman.

"How did he know about....Rockman being....Saito." thought Netto.

"You should know those navis. They use to be your brother and your navis." said a voice.

"That can't be Rockman was..." said Netto turning around to gasp. "DR...."


Netto woke up gasping for air. He looked at his PET and sighed. Rockman was there looking through so files.

"It was just a dream." thought Netto sighing in relief.

"Netto are you OK?" asked Rockman who stopped looking at the file. Now looking at his twin brother full of concerns.

"Yup, nothing to worry about!" said Netto in a cheer tone.

"OK..." said Rockman going back to what he was doing.

Netto made a small smile then turning back to his H.W.

"That dream would never come true....seen I never had a navi that looked like them. Also he can't be back....right?" thought Netto.

~~
To be continued...
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 9:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

There were a few grammar/spelling errors here and there, but I managed to figure out what it meant. The plot is interesting, though. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! :]
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 11:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The plot is nice, yet somewhat confusing and a tad too fast paced. There are some fragments here and there too.
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