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PhantomReaver Kyuuketsuki
Joined: 02 Apr 2005 Posts: 209 Location: Black Maverick Earth in Poland
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 1:43 pm Post subject: Phantom Reaver sprites! |
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Sprite of my Fan Navi Seraph.exe.
I'll post full Sprite Sheet of him soon. _________________
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cruddpuppet [reo sux] Guest
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 2:07 pm Post subject: |
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looks nice, but i think you should edit the sword because it looks like it is bent down, or was that intentional? Other than that, it looks nice. |
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Unknown Neo Cross Fusion!
Age: 40 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 2933 Location: Unknown
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 4:01 pm Post subject: |
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It isn't that bad. The gif is pretty good. |
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Sai-kun Official Forum TF2 Addict
Age: 33 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 987 Location: neoGAF
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 5:55 pm Post subject: |
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Recolor'D?
Looks pretty good. But I smell Quickman all over this thing.. _________________ all i ever wanted was the world |
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Core Folf Samurai
Age: 42 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 700 Location: Frederick, Maryland
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 6:06 pm Post subject: |
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It is a heavily edited and re-colored sprite, the editing does make it skirt under the no re-colors rule, but I would like to see some more done to it. I also think you need to work a bit on the shading of the sprite, since it looks a bit flat to me. Mainly looks like you used basic colors from the color range on the bottom of the MS Paint window. _________________
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cruddpuppet [reo sux] Guest
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 9:17 pm Post subject: |
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I also think it should have something that doesnt identify it as just a recolor. maybe like him using a custom weapon? |
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PhantomReaver Kyuuketsuki
Joined: 02 Apr 2005 Posts: 209 Location: Black Maverick Earth in Poland
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 8:20 am Post subject: |
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So, I had little training and I made some new sprites ^^
First is my new navi - Deltar.exe (N2-0 Night's Blues Shadow was a base)
Here we have Deltar Cross Rockman:
And this one...He isn't done yet but I post him here.
Faltzer Beast Deltar Cross Rockman (Long name eh?)
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Morph man
Joined: 09 Dec 2005 Posts: 15 Location: on the dance floor dance'n to clasical music at 78 RPMs
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2006 8:07 pm Post subject: |
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Nice! that is realy good. I working on my junk. _________________ HATTAH! |
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PhantomReaver Kyuuketsuki
Joined: 02 Apr 2005 Posts: 209 Location: Black Maverick Earth in Poland
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Posted: Thu Mar 02, 2006 11:36 am Post subject: |
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Well... Next Sprites!
This one is something like...I don't know I saw Silver FCR and I made this sprite. It's a Silver Forte ^^
And Next:
This is a Sprite of My friend's fan navi Konoko.exe. I made it long time ago, so it isn't...hmm...great. But I like it ^^ _________________
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Ageman20XX Net Savior
Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 104 Location: Niagara Falls, Ontario, Canada
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Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 1:08 am Post subject: Re: Phantom Reaver sprites! |
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*edit, qoute and image removed by moderator*
While everyone has already said things abotu your spriting abilities, I think I should comment on your naming abilities. You may have thought the word "seraph" was cool but you failed to check what it meant before you named your navi that. You're navi obviously has no relation to what a Seraph is or means. Check it:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seraph
A seraph(im) has six wings and human form. Basically, a 6-winged angel. Youre guy has no resemblence to the sybolism the name holds...but meh.
Just a thought.
-Age _________________
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PhantomReaver Kyuuketsuki
Joined: 02 Apr 2005 Posts: 209 Location: Black Maverick Earth in Poland
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Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 4:20 am Post subject: |
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Well, it's OLD sprite (Very, Very Old) So I'm not going to change anything in him.
EDIT: New Sprite! Chaos Deltar:
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N2-0 Night Gnihtemos od thgim I...
Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 992
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Posted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 3:07 am Post subject: |
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These are good sprite works. I especially like how you made your Silver Forte's aura (or whatever you call it).
Oh, and Deltar.EXE is very good. At first, I didn't think my Blues Shadow sprite was not good as a base for any other sprites :] . _________________ My deviantART... |
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PhantomReaver Kyuuketsuki
Joined: 02 Apr 2005 Posts: 209 Location: Black Maverick Earth in Poland
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Posted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 3:53 am Post subject: |
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Thanks for comments ^^
Well, if FCR has two forms, then why not made two forms of my DCR?
Here we have Chaos/Silver Deltar Cross Rockman:
Today I'll start working on new navis - Zeffaru and Karasuman/Malphas _________________
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Core Folf Samurai
Age: 42 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 700 Location: Frederick, Maryland
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Posted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 6:33 pm Post subject: |
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Ageman, you have been here long enough to know how things work, so I will say this only once. You are not to qoute images, it is a basic common sense rule that has been around for a long time.
Secondly, about the naming issue that you seem to want to make a point of. If we follow what you are talking about, then Capcom would have to re-name a large number of their characters, and so would people with their children. Case in point, my given name translates out to Ravine, but I don't look like a great hole or depression in the earth now do I? I can even point at your name and say how it doesn't match with what you are. So what was the point of making that statement to PhantomReaver, who cares what he names his navi. He can name him Jimmy-Crack-Corn and I wouldn't care in the slightest.
If you are going to make a review or a critque on something, least make it about the work and not something pointless as a name. _________________
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xfyrethespooky Nebula
Age: 33 Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 615 Location: Check under the bed
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Posted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 8:03 pm Post subject: |
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Core wrote: | He can name him Jimmy-Crack-Corn and I wouldn't care in the slightest. |
:] that was a great sentence, man.
back on topic: the sprites are pretty good. the only thing is that they're flat-looking. the shading could use a little work.
i do have a question, though. why are the weapons for your Deltar sprites always different? like in the first few, they were just straight-edged swords, then you started to change the weapons. why? _________________ just call me xfyre. not xfyrethespooky. |
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feepitsrule Darkloid
Joined: 05 Aug 2005 Posts: 544 Location: Everywhere You Want To Be
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Posted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 8:25 pm Post subject: |
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Core wrote: | He can name him Jimmy-Crack-Corn and I wouldn't care in the slightest. |
Wow, xyfyre's right. That's a great sentence.
On to the spriteage. Deltar.EXE looks waay to much like Deltar Cross Rockman. You should add more differences between the two. _________________
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Avatar Made By XHunter17, Sig by Synchro-Kun. |
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Jedi Disciple
Joined: 21 Dec 2005 Posts: 46 Location: On my Magic Carpet
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Posted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 8:36 pm Post subject: |
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I like all of your sprites. Deltar is a cool navi, but Deltar cross rockman looks like Deltar in a different stance. You should make Rockman pop out more.
Beyond that, you are good to go. _________________ Thanks for everything Jet related Synchro Kun!!! |
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Ageman20XX Net Savior
Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 104 Location: Niagara Falls, Ontario, Canada
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Posted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 8:39 pm Post subject: |
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Core wrote: | Ageman, you have been here long enough to know how things work, so I will say this only once. You are not to qoute images, it is a basic common sense rule that has been around for a long time.
Secondly, about the naming issue that you seem to want to make a point of. If we follow what you are talking about, then Capcom would have to re-name a large number of their characters, and so would people with their children. Case in point, my given name translates out to Ravine, but I don't look like a great hole or depression in the earth now do I? I can even point at your name and say how it doesn't match with what you are. So what was the point of making that statement to PhantomReaver, who cares what he names his navi. He can name him Jimmy-Crack-Corn and I wouldn't care in the slightest. |
Sorry about the GIF Quote, that was a mistake and it's not like I do it all the time.
As for the rest of your post, I gave crit on the name he chose for the character...and you're penalizing me about it? I didn't comment on the lack-of-shading, copy/pasting, or any of the other things wrong with the sprite because, as I said, everyone has already blammed him to death about it. I just thought giving some extra critique would be nice, I didn't think Core would take the chance to PM me abotu it like I'd flammed him or something. And sure, your name may translate to something you're not, but really, when you're talking about Navis, regardless of what you may say, the name does matter. Calling something a Seraph that doesn't have any wings is like calling a Shark-navi WoodMan - and yes, it is the same thing.
Oh, and I posted that days ago, wasn't rude, and didn't follow up on it - what's the deal with PMing me about it now? Is it ruining the forum?
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If you are going to make a review or a critque on something, least make it about the work and not something pointless as a name. |
First off, a name, pointless? Yeah, right, sure. Next time Capcom makes an animal navi, like say, something like SnakeMan, we'll name him SheepMan...mmkay? Oh, and let's make the critque about the work? Wow, were have I been all these years, here I am thinking the NAME was part of his creation too! Damn I'm retarded.
-Age _________________
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Plantman It's only Forever... Not long at all!
Age: 44 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 1819 Location: Mexico
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Posted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 9:09 pm Post subject: |
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I do think you were rude, even if you did not mean to be. Ultimately, there's no rule anywhere in the forum or the internet about naming characters. And no, I don't think you could say it matters, because in the end we've seen characters in the game and anime that don't always reflect their names in their appearance.
I don't know if you've come across with this, but one word can have many different meanings depending of slang.
For example there was a character called Seraphim in a TV series in my country, the character was meant to be a guardian angel of sorts, a little child with black hair and just one pair of tiny wings.
However, seraphim it's understood among the slang of my location as a 'child angel'. Which is very unrelated to the full meaning of the word.
You've only seen an average sprite, and don't know anything about the character other than its looks. Perhaps there is a reason why he has the name it has, and the appearance it has that you don't know about. So I don't think it's fair from you to critique a name when you don't know anything else about the character.
Not only that, but I quote you:
Quote: | Youre guy has no resemblence to the sybolism the name holds...and you should probably rename him. |
I don't think anyone likes a complete stranger to tell them they should change the name of their characters without knowing the full background of said character.
Again, I can understand you did not mean to be rude, but in the end that's exactly how you came. People are free to name their characters whatever way they like, and let me tell you... MSP has a character that reflects this perfectly. I am sure nobody thinks Metal Shark Player would be the name of a female navi that is completely humanoid. But it's part of what makes her unique in a way.
Please, in the future, try to focus your critiques in the spriting itself, and wait till you have all elements to make a full fledged critique about other elements such as 'names'. Thank you. _________________ Hecha en MÉXICO - Avatar by Me.
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N2-0 Night Gnihtemos od thgim I...
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Posted: Mon Mar 06, 2006 12:51 am Post subject: |
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I can see the difference between the Silver Deltar and the Silver DCR. A little unnoticable at first, but it's there. Plus, I like the DCR weapon (sword-saw hybrid :D )! _________________ My deviantART... |
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