Forte’s Revenge: Netto’s Secret Reveled *EXE 6 spoliers*

[Bassman4566]

I decided to make sequel of The Trouble with Clowns. Warning EXE 6 spoilers and to people who are afraid of Clowns I suggest not to read this fic.


Forte’s Revenge: Netto’s Secret Reveled

(Real bad at naming things)




It had been two weeks since the clown incident and Enzan and Laika made sure never to bring Netto to a circus ever again. Netto made Enzan and Laika never to tell his secret as well the same with Rockman, Blues, and Searchman. Unknown to Netto someone else was on his secret. Forte went to find his old friend Clownman.exe. Enzan and Netto were spending the day together since no Net Savor mission had come up in four days already.

“Enzan?” asked Netto in a scared nervous tone.

“Hm?” Enzan looked to see his friend looking at a clown.

Enzan got up and said “Let’s go Netto we can go to my house and do something there”.

Netto was about to answer when he heard “HEY NETTO”. He looked to see Meiru, Yai, Dekao, and Tohru.

“Hey guys” he said. Netto really wished they hadn’t come right then

“Hey we got six tickets to the circus let’s go” Meiru said

“Uh guys I can’t go” Netto said. Thinking of a way to get out of his situation.

“Why not Netto?” asked a very confused Dekao.

“Because uh…” he said still thinking of away. Enzan decided to help him out.

“Because I’m tutoring him in Math” Enzan quickly blurted out.

“Oh okay” Meiru said “Too Bad well see ya later”. She and the others left very quickly.

“Thank you Enzan! I don’t think I could take anymore of this” Netto said.

“No problem now! Let’s go before something else happens” Enzan replied.
With just their luck their PET’s rang.

“Sorry to disturb you two but there’s a crisis at stack” Meijin said

“What’s the crisis this time Meijin-san?” Netto groaned.

“San wa iranai there is a virus attack at the circus go now” he said. Netto’s face turned white.

“Netto you don’t have to go” Enzan suggested

“No I’ll go even if means losing my reputation” he replied

“Okay then let’s go.

Enzan and Netto ran into the circus to find the area where the viruses were attacking. Soon they found where it was in The House of Clowns. They entered to see the clowns attacking Meiru and the others who were screaming for help. Netto and Enzan quickly plugged in there Net Navi’s in the control system. Once Rockman and Blues were in the system they fought many viruses that looked like clowns.


Once they were all defeated the doors to The House of Clowns locked closed. Netto and Enzan saw that the others were unconscious so Netto wanted to cry but he wanted to go somewhere else. So he and Enzan went to a dark area for him to cry. Netto cried till he fell asleep Enzan felt really sorry since he couldn’t help his friend as much as he wanted to. Enzan ruffled his hair and wiped his tears as he went to find a way out of here.
After thirty minutes had passed he went to get Netto to tell him he found a way out. Netto was still asleep when Enzan arrived also his friends were awake when he found him.

“Chaud there you are help us wake up Netto” Meiru said. Chaud knew Netto wanted to sleep since they were in The House of Clowns. Enzan picked up Netto and put him on his back.

“Let him sleep” Enzan said “Let’s go”.

When they finally reached the exit a dimensional area appeared. This same time Netto woke up. Then our friend Forte appeared.

“FORTE!” everyone said in unison. Forte smirked as they said his name he got close and picked up Netto off of Enzan’s back. Then Forte put him down as he slapped him hard. Enzan got ready to crossfuse but Forte’s friend held him back. Then Netto looked at Forte’s friend.

“A…a…a clown?” Netto asked slowly. Forte smirked

“Not just a clown Clownman.exe” Forte replied. Forte then grabbed Netto and pushed him towards Clownman.exe as Netto became very scared. Clownman.exe and Forte switched humans Forte held back Enzan while Netto looked at Clownman.exe with a scared look in his eyes while shaking uncontrollably. Dekao, Yai, Meiru, and Tohru said that no clown would scare him unfortunately they were wrong. Netto then gave in and cried he was too scared to do anything. Forte laughed, Meiru and the others were shocked, Enzan was very angry.

Then he broke free of Forte’s grasp and crossfused quickly and attacked Clownman.exe and deleted him as Forte left. Enzan grabbed Netto and left as the dimensional area disappeared. Enzan brought Netto to his house where he let him cry for hours till he wanted him to stop and eat dinner. Netto looked like he had better days. He took off his bandana before because he used it as a tissue by accident. Enzan decided to keep Netto at his house. Netto wanted to face his friends again, but he knew them to well. Meiru wouldn’t speak to him till he told her what happened, Yai and Dekao would tell everyone, and Tohru would write it on the internet and the school newspaper.

“Enzan?” asked Netto.

“Yes Netto” Enzan replied.

“Do you think I’m weak just because I’m afraid of clowns” Netto asked.

“No Netto and I’ll tell you why. Everyone has something that makes them different from other people. From fears to the color of people skin people are different. Netto-kun if your friends can accept you just because you’re afraid of clowns are they really good friends?” Enzan asked.

“No” Netto replied.

“That right because they can’t accept you for who you are” Enzan said.

“Enzan?” Netto asked.

“Yes Netto?” Enzan asked.

“Thanks for helping friend” Netto replied.

“You’re welcome Netto-kun” Enzan said.

Netto and Enzan hugged and Netto fell asleep. Enzan carried him up to his room and they slept through the night. Netto knew that he would have to face his friends again, but Enzan would help him do that tomorrow.

This story was okay. Clown smiles creep me out(No one should smile like that) and Mimes too!(Don't ask) review please 1/10 or whatever
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Rukario
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"That's all she wrote" Syrus Trusdale

[Haly K]

Well, it was kinda good, but the battle was too short. Plus I noticed a couple of grammar errors here and there. And Lan's friends wouldn't be THAT cruel to him. ( Would they? :O ) My score: 2/10. No offence. -_-;
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[Midnight]

Don't worry, Haly, that was actually a fair review of the fic. In fact, it covers a lot of the points I am about to make.

I wasn't very pleased with this fic. It's almost festooned with grammar and spelling errors, and the fact that they are quite prevalent in this fic make the fic that much more difficult to read through and understand. Furthermore, you really rush through almost everything here. From the combats to the dialogue, much of it seemed rushed and somewhat shallow. You throw characters in on a whim and don't develop them well.

I usually don't give numerical ratings, so focus on what I said up there. Those definitely need improving first before anything else.
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[Viewtiful Starman]

Well, I've gotta sort of agree with the other two reviewers here... But I didn't quite find this horrible.
I thought it got better near the end, as things slowed down and I found the idea solid, only really held back by writing problems.
If you were to look back at this and try to apply the criticism to it and practise writing a bit, I think you could get something pretty good.

[Bassman4566]

Thanks for the reviews I'm still new at this. Haly K the only reasons I made Netto's friends like that is because well.... I did this yesterday and now I can't remember (Maybe I should stop listening to begin the try so much) Anyway Netto needs to spend time with Enzan and Laika in my point of view (and thanks to Fanfiction Child with his fic Lan's Dark Secret and other fics some by him others not). Anyway soon I'm going to start My fic which is posted here already A Whole New Life over again with two versions, A fanfiction.net version and a version for here. The fanfiction.net version will have all the stuff I don't want here since there are younger members(Don't ask). It's also a multi-crossover fic since there many shows I like (Naruto, Yu-Gi-Oh, Yu-Gi-Oh GX,etc) and some original ideas of my own(Like Netto/Lan liking Alexis/Asuka) This story is just a sidestory. (Any mod like Plantman please lock A Whole New Life)
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Rukario
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"That's all she wrote" Syrus Trusdale

[YaminoMiko]

Don't worry, if you're bad at naming things, translate them to Japanese! XD

That way people won't know what it means!!! XD

Poor Netto-kun, he's going to have a heart attack later on. Clowns smiling scares me the most(besides spiders). >.>
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[Bassman4566]

Yay! I'm not alone in this crazied up stupid world. Anyway I'm still new with japanese so I really have no idea what to say*Hit with tons of bricks*
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Rukario
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"That's all she wrote" Syrus Trusdale

[Haly K]

Aw, but I like clowns! Especially the ones in video games, like WackoMan and CircusMan! :] That reminds me, the fact that CircusMan didn't even get any dialouge in this fic is also another bad point. -_-;
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MegaMan Kilobit
My Own City

[Kitty-Chan]

I'm sorry, but I have to agree with Midnight; there were a lot of problems with this one. Maybe you should try rewriting it...
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Thanks for the avatar, Mandi!
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