A Whole New Life T,AA,D, OOC Chp 5

[Bassman4566]

Okay this my first fic all read posted on fanfiction but I decided to post it here to I've all ready done three chapters so heres all three.

It was a quiet afternoon at DenTech City. It was also an afternoon Lan Hikari would never forget. It was the start of the summer vacation and Lan & friends were happier than ever. “Finally it’s summer” Lan shouted. “Yup it’s nice to know there’s no tests over vacation” Dex said “It’s too bad me, Yai, Dex, and Tory are going on vacation in Jawaii” Maylu said. This made Lan frown and fill up with sadness. “WHAT!” Lan screamed “You guys never said anything about this” “Sorry Lan we thought you wouldn’t mind” Maylu replied. “Well I do… but I guess I can’t stop you now can I?” Lan asked. “ Sorry but it’s only for two weeks” Maylu said quickly so she wouldn’t upset him, but unworthily it did. “WHAT” Lan screamed “ Lan I…” but she never finished “That it’s see you guys in two months” Lan sobbed and ran all the way home. “Lan….”

When Lan got home he stop crying and calmed down but then he got more bad news. “ What do you mean your going on a second honeymoon?” Lan asked. “ Well your father and I feel so emotionally lately and we…” but then she was cut off by a kiss by Lan’s dad. Yuck so gross Lan thought. “So where the heck am I going to stay?” he asked. The kissing stopped “ Well you have two choices either Chaud or.…” “WHAT CHAUD NO WAY” Lan interrupted. “ Like I said Chaud or Mrs. Thitters” Lan’s dad finished. “ You mean the lady who just got out of the cuckoo hut no damn way” Lan said “Well I guess Chaud it is then I will go call him then.

About 20 minutes later Lan’s family left and Lan was at Chaud’s “Come on I’ll show you your room” he said. He started to walk up stairs but stopped when he saw Lan looking down. “Don’t worry they’ll be back before you know it”. Sadly Chaud was wrong. After getting settled in Mr. Famous called them. “Agent Lan, Agent Chaud there’s a crisis at steak. “What is it this time?” Chaud asked dryly. “A plane has been high jacked before it left the plane … with your parents Lan” he said “WHAT” Lan screamed for about the hundredth time today. “Don’t worry their..” but Lan rushed outside heading towards the airport. “Lan wait up” Chaud screamed as he tried to catch up with Lan

Chp 2 The tragedy
Lan was running as fast as he could to get to the airport then he realized he left Chaud behind. Chaud came up to him in his car and said “Leave something holding his P.E.T. “Megaman!” he screamed “Lan you need to watch out for what you take and what you leave behind” Megaman said dryly. “hehe sorry” Lan replied. “Get in Hikari we got to go” Chaud said while rolling his eyes. Then they drove to the airport and almost past the speed limit. When they arrived Lan and Chaud ran inside. Only Lan was running faster than him. When they made it into the plane they jacked in their navi’s to check the net.

When they found the highjacker they found him with a gun with Lan’s parents. “Mom Dad you leave them alone right now” Lan demanded “HaHa so these are your parents why don’t I just kill them now” he grinned. Lan looked at him with a shocked face while the highjacker loaded his gun. Mean while in the cyber world. Megaman and Protoman were having so trouble his net navi “Look out Megaman” Protoman said. Then he jumped up and pulled out his default sword and sliced his attack in half. “Your going down you two slice and dice” he screamed “Look out” both Megaman and Protoman screamed.

Mean while Lan and Chaud were trying to stop our friend the highjacker who was named Chris. Chaud got a hold of his gun and held it up to him. “Don’t move or you will get it” Chaud demanded. Then Chris took a risk and kicked Chaud in the nuts forcing him to let go of the gun and then he fired it at Lan’s mom and it hit her she fell to the ground and then he shot his dad. Lan only looked in horror as he said “MOM DAD NOOOOOOOOOOO!” Then he cried not caring that Chaud and Chris were looking at him. Net Police came in and arrested Chris “Mr. Famous came over and said “I’m sorry Lan there gone… forever” then all of a sudden hepassed outright into Chaud’s arms.


Chp 3 Secrets, New Hopes, and Surprises

Lan awoke in Chaud’s mansion but he knew why he was here but why did he felt so dizzy of course he just had to get sick but what he had he didn’t know. Then Chaud came in with a wet rag and ice and both Lan’s and his P.E.T. Chaud said nothing knowing anything he would want to tell him would hurt him. Then Lan spoke up “Ch.. Chaud please tell me it was all a dream please tell me my parents aren’t dead” Then Chaud decided that its best if he knew because he would find out again anyway “I…I’m sorry Lan it’s no dream it did happen. Lan was in shock “ Th…then how did I get sick?”. Chaud sighed then took a deep breath and said “when you passed out I put you down on the wall to talk to Mr. Famous when I came back you were in a freezer that was in the plane and that’s pretty much it” (Okay before everyone flames me this is my world and in my world there is a huge freezer in a plane okay). Lan just looked at him with nothing in his eyes and then he just put his head in Chaud’s chest and cried he didn’t know what to do he just felt so small like there was no hope. Chaud rubbed Lan’s back he knew that he wasn’t going to take the bad news as good as any better as he expected. Then Chaud asked “Lan would you like to live with me?” Lan looked up at him and replied “Yes I would Chaud” Then fell a sleep on Chaud ‘s chest and Lan found some new hope.

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Back in cyber world Megaman had problems of his own “Should I tell him or shouldn’t I”. All of a sudden Protoman just walked in and said “say what?” he asked Megaman quickly said “ohhh nothing”. Then there was an awkward silence for sometime then finally Megaman asked “Want to go net city?” Protoman shockingly said “Sure why not” and then they transmitted to net city.

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For the next two weeks things went pretty fast. Lan’s stuff was moved in, Chaud got him some new clothes for meetings and for next year at school Chaud was going to attend in his class after some begging from his I mean there father (my world remember). On the day his friends were coming home Chaud and Lan were talking “So Lan what are you going to say to your friends?” “I don’t know I just don’t what to say I mean they left before my parents were killed so they don’t know” Lan replied “It’s hard to tell your friends your parents died today three days before your birthday” “Saturday is your birthday?” Chaud yelled that scared Lan. Chaud saw Lan shivering and apologized “Sorry” “It’s okay I mean at least My dad won’t miss my birthd...ohh Chaud” then Lan cried in Chaud’s arms. “shhhh it’s okay… it’s okay.

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So here it is R&R Chapter 4 might be up Later

[Neko]

Okay a few things, one and most telling... shorten your "X" rows, I don't like scrolling sideways to read a fic.

I can't say this enough: Two people can not talk in the same paragraph. If a new person speaks then start a new paragraph.

your shapters are short and undederdeveloped however there are some interesting concepts behind them. Flush those out and elaborate. Detail is a good thing and it brings depth to a story.
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[Bassman4566]

Thanks for the tips Neko I think Chapter 4 will be really long because of this hugh thing. Chp 3 It ends with Lan & Chaud talking about our hurt Character b day and his friends coming home so you get the pic

[Bassman4566]

Chp 4 Angst Chp

It was 20 minutes after Lan cried and Chaud and him just made it to the terminal to see Lan’s friends who just got home
“Lannnnnnnnn!” Maylu yelled and went over to hug him
“Ahhh Maylu” Lan screamed happily.
“Hey don’t forget about us” three familiar voices said
“Dex, Tory, Yai hi” Lan said cheerfully
“Hey what’s he doing here” Yai said unhappy
“Yeah Lan you now I don’t like that guy” Dex growled
“Uhh…” said thinking of an excuse “umm.. I invited him.. Yeah I invited him” Lan said laughing nervously
‘hmmm something is wrong with Lan’ Maylu thought.
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Inside the net the navis were talking too.
“Mega oh its so good to see you” Roll said while hugging Megaman
“You to Roll” Megaman said while blushing
Protoman was snickering while Iceman finally said “ Hey! whys Protoman here?!?”
“Yeah whys he here Guts” Gutsman said while blowing off like the monkey he is.
“I invited him” Megaman said rather quickly
‘hmmm something is wrong with Mega’ Roll thought.
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After everyone told what happened with in the two weeks except Lan and Chaud of course they ate at a Yumland restaurant. It was very quiet until Maylu said
“So Lan how are your parents?”. This made Lan stop eating and drop his spoon his eyes widened in shock. “Lan are you ok?” “Ohhhh I hate you Chris” Lan yelled with tears from his eyes “La…CHAUD what are you doing” Yai yelled seeing that Chaud brought Lan into his arms. “Taking care my brother so shut up Yai!!” said in angry voice
“Brother…Lan’s not your brother Chaud he is Lan Hikari” said Maylu.
All of a sudden everyone in the restaurant gasped. Then people were whispering things like
“She doesn’t know” “I know its shocking” “She didn’t see the news?” “Where was she?”
Maylu, Yai, Dex ,and Tory all felt like idiots because not one of them knew about what was going on because while in Jawaii the power was out because two idiots (And in idiots I mean Dex and Gutsman) decided to net battle there with no permission so them got him to do community work for the two weeks.
“Lan…wha…what happened to your parents?” Maylu finally asked
There was a long silence before Lan spoke up
“M…my parents were shot and died so I moved in with Chaud and now I’m… a Blaze
“ WHAT!!!” All of his friends shouted. This scared Lan and made him shiver.
“HOW COULD YOU DO SUCH A THING I BET CHAUD KILLED THEM AND FORCED THEM AM I RIGHT” Yai shouted so loud everyone the restaurant hid under neat their tables.
“YAI WOULD YOU SHUT UP ABOUT MY BROTHER YOU LITTLE RUNT” Lan screamed. Yai just looked at him like if he was about to hurt her.
“HOW DARE YOU SPEAK TO YAI LIKE THAT” Dex shouted. Then Dex just started to beat up Lan without a fight. Chaud got Lan out of there fast and then they went home were in Chaud’s arms cried himself to sleep.
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So sad but I’m the writer this is the angst Chp and this is how Dex will be for the rest of the fic

[Bassman4566]

New Chapter! Sorry for not updating for so long but School gets in the way (Note to self destroy school) Anyway Beware Lan‘s Friends (or so called friends) Will hurt him in this chapter you have been Warned Ohh and everyone at Lan‘s School Excluding the teachers hates Lan so he will lose all hope of things returning to normal and a special surprise guest after Lan runs… I have said to much enjoy (Insert evil manic laugh in here) .

Chapter 5: Friends or Enemies???

It has been two weeks since Lan had the meeting with his friends.
Chaud cheered up Lan by taking him on vacation in Florida, USA for his birthday. After that they went back home to start school. Unfortunately While they were away Maylu, Tory ,Yai ,and Dex told everyone in their school that Lan went to the dark side. Maylu, Yai , Tory and Dex had planned a way to get Chaud away from Lan so they could hurt him badly. The next day school had finally started so their plan had also started.

When Lan had arrived at school every immediately gave him a glare so bad that he shivered and got closer to Chaud. Chaud on they other gave them a cold glare back.
When they got into their classroom Like before it was cold glares all around. Lan sat next to Maylu and said “Hi M…May...lu” But she didn’t respond she just growled at him and gave him a stare like she didn’t care but accurse she didn’t. Lan for the first time in his life listened to what Ms. Mari said. At Lunch no one but Chaud sat with Lan. “Chaud do they really hate me?” He asked.

Chaud respond “No Lan their just having a hard time to adjust to me being your brother”. Lan thought about (surprising isn’t it?) then he agreed. During recess a girl named Mary asked Chaud if he could come inside and help here with her math. Then The gang started there plan. First they confronted Lan and then it happened Lan was punched, kicked, and scratched all over then Dex did something Lan would never forget. He got out a pocket knife and gave Lan A huge scar of an X on his left cheek.

Three days later Lan returned back to school with the scar and everyone was shocked excepted well you know who they are. Chaud was very angry because not only was Lan hurt but he wouldn't speak to him. So he went up to our friends and said “You think you are cool that you hurt my brother because if you do then you have another thing coming you not only hurt Lan but you made stop talking TO ME and this is not what I like!”. They didn’t respond they just glared at him. “So the cold shoulder this is how you treat a friend who’s parents died because of manic who had a gun think about what has done for and this is how you repay him then your not good friends are you?” he asked.
“ARE YOU???” he yelled.

Maylu, Yai, and Tory looked down Dex was still glaring at him. Chaud walked away and Lan came by and spoke very sadly “You know I thought that you guys really were my friends but apparently I was wrong” Lan turned the other way and ran away from them and Chaud. “Lan wait” Chaud said but Lan was to far away. “You guys I swear I will kill you made a innocent boy run away why? Because he had friends that treated him like nothing” Chaud said very frustrated. Lan was half way through the city when he bumped into someone in front of him.

“Ouch… watch were you are going idiot” said a voice that was from a familiar ninja show on Cartoon Network. Lan looked up and replied “Sorry uhhh…”. “Sasuke…Sasuke Uchiha and you are???” Sasuke asked. “Lan… Lan Blaze” Lan responded. “Well Lan be careful where you run next time and you look hurt is something wrong???” Sasuke asked. About 20 minutes later after Lan explained everything to Sasuke and why he was running. “I see…Lan this problem isn’t something to run away from but to confront” Sasuke responded. “I can’t everyone in my school hate me no one talks to me anymore” Lan said with his eyes full of tears.

“Shhhh its okay you need someone there with you so why don’t I come with you and help you out?” Lan looked up and smiled for the first time that had been for days and Sasuke smiled back. It was recess at school and everyone was glaring at Chaud. Maylu, Tory , Yai, and Dex were laughing while think about Chaud said and yet they paid no attention when Lan and Sasuke came in . Sasuke hit Dex with a rock that he found on the ground and got their attention and everyone else’s as well. “Who are you?” asked Dex. “My name doesn’t concern you but its Sasuke Uchiha” Sasuke replied. “Ohh I herd of you before you come to hurt Lan too???” he asked. “No I come to help Lan you idiot” He replied. “You what???” He asked in confusion. “You herd me” he shouted back.

Then Dex did the stupidest thing ever he went to punch Sasuke but ended up punching a cinderblock that broke his hand. Dex screamed in pain and went to hurt him with his other hand but Sasuke transformed into a bear and Dex stopped and screamed like the sissy boy he is. Every laughed at this and Dex cried all the way home. Maylu, Yai, and Tory went up to and said “Lan were sorry we hurt you, and hated you for a stupid reason so we still friends???” they asked. “The best” he replied. They did a group hug and Lan asked Sasuke “Will I ever see you again???”.

“You will because I’m coming to this school and moving here with my friends and sensei but it be along time before that happens” he said. Lan looked down with sadness. Sasuke sighed and took off his headband and took off Lan’s “Here take this to remember me by Lan” He said while putting on the headband and giving him a hug (An un Sasuke thing to do and I know even after watching only 4 US episodes) “Bye Lan” he said. “Bye Sasuke see you in Three months” Lan shouted. He when to catch up with his friends with the headband Sasuke gave him with his normal one in his backpack heading to class.

I should told you that this a multi-crossover fic but I didn’t think of it at the time I started this fic. Sasuke and Gang will show up next fic and others characters from other shows will show up sometime later in this fic but then I don’t know when.
Anyway here are questions I did this in my other chapters on fanfiction.net but forgot in my last Chapter anyway
How will Sasuke’s friends treat Lan and his friends ?
Why is Chaud suddenly acting goofy around Sakura?
Why is Naruto acting very Lan like around Maylu?
Why is Yai jealous?
What happened to Dex?
Why is Kakashi hitting on Ms.Mari??
Find out next time on A Whole New Life

[Bassman4566]

Sorry for double posting but R&R

[Bassman4566]

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