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Dark Liger Net Official
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Posted: Wed Apr 05, 2006 4:20 pm Post subject: |
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Great chapters, kram; and sorry I didn't post my reviews for a while, but I like where this is going. I hope this story ends as great as it started, like Power Rangers DUO did. |
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kram_elbog Cross Fusion!
Joined: 08 Jul 2005 Posts: 1043 Location: Somewhere
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Posted: Wed Apr 05, 2006 4:35 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah, and I was going to do a non anime sentai but Mugen.exe took that over because I was having a sentai overload since that is what my past two rockman fics have been. But I should have ch 25 up by friday April 7th _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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kram_elbog Cross Fusion!
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Posted: Thu Apr 06, 2006 9:24 pm Post subject: |
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CH FINAL, The final Fight!
"Kain give up!" Netto shouted when they all stood on the ground around the old man.
"Why would I do that?" Kain said as he smirked, to balls of light had now started to float near him, one green, one red.
"What is he doing?" Meiru asked.
"Say good bye! BEAST FUSION!" Kain shouted as the two spheres suddenly shot into him and he started to change shape. He grew large red wings, a green mane, gold talon's for feet, his hands became claws, and he grew atail. His chest took the basic form of Greiga while he had the facial structure of Faltzer plus Greiga's mane.
"What the hell just happened?" Laika said in extreme shock.
"They combined!" Enzan said as he took a step back and summoned his Phoenix Saber.
"Then lets stop him!" Netto said as he summoned the Wolf Blades, and the others summoned their weapons. Netto foolishly rushed forward only to be sent flying backwards by a slap from the combined beast's front paw.
"Burning cats!" The beast shouted as it launched dozens of little fiery cats at the group, similar to Faltzer's fire sparrows. Enzan used his sword to block the cats that were heading towards him, and Laika used his spear to take out the ones that were attacking him, Meiru, Iris, and Netto took the attack full on though.
"Tornado Arm!" R Gyro shouted as he attacked the odd beast from behind, only for it to swing it's tail and fire several fur spikes at him. R Gyro got hit directly in the chest causing him to seperate. R Magnet, and R Medi also attempted to help against the beast but fell victim to the same fate.
"Tiger Terra Wave!"
"Iris Staff Extend!"
Meiru and Iris launched their attacks at the enemy. When Kain atempted to dodge Meiru's attack Iris' staff hit him in the jugular, when it caught him off gaurd. However when he regained his ground he fired his tornado attack at Iris, knocking her to the ground.
"Netto we need some way to immobilize him." Enzan said as he tried to figure out how to take Kain down.
"Beast Cannon?" Netto asked.
"Good idea, but I don't think it will work but we should indeed give it a try." Laika said as they all gathered near Netto and formed their combined weapon. They instantly fired it but all it did was hit one of Kain's talons and didn't harm him.
"We'll help!" Pakuchi shouted as she held out her Beast Link Gate. Dark Kirisaki, Dotarou, Mr. Press, Shuuko, Fuuten Roushi, Kurogane, and Elec Fujin followed her lead as they aimed their Beast Link Gates at the Beast Cannon.
Netto glanced at the lights and let go of the cannon, he had a feeling that he knew just what they were doing, they were sending power to help. When Netto touched the lights that had formed into a single sphere it changed shape.
The main part of the weapon was a long shaft that rested on Netto's shoulder, it consisted of an aqua hose attached to a dust hopper that was attatched to a smoke stack for a barrel. A drill rested ontop of the smoke stack, also attached to the dust hopper, and made the weapon resemble a bird when factoring the scythe beak below the stack, and the tengu blades that acted as partical chargers, attached to the sides of the shaft. On top of the shaft were two electric generator tops, like those on the back of Elecman, and on the bottom rested kunais that appeared to be only for handles.
Meiru kneeled in front of Netto and gripped the weapon as Laika and Enzan took aim for a second attack.
"Gozokusei Blast!"
"Cross Bomber, Cross Storm!" Netto and Meiru shouted as they called out the name of the weapon, followed by the attack. The Cross Bomber started to charge its power, the drill fired a large beam, along with the scythe, while the smoke stack fired several cannon ball like bombs from it. When the two attacks collided infront of Kain the explosion sent him flying backwards, however he quickyl retaliated with a lighning mane, tornado beak, feather shot, and tail shot attack all at once. This made the rangers have little choice other than forming their Guardian Kaiser. As they did this R Shadow summoned shadow copies and grabbed the weapons, and landed on the shoulder of the Guardian Kaiser.
"Guardian Kaiser, formation complete!" the beast rangers shouted as they struck a pose.
"Weapons locked!" R Shadow said as the three of him took aim at Kain with the weapons. Kain lept up to attack only for the Guardian Kaiser to summon the Guardian Blade, and strike with it. When this happened R Shadow instantly fired the two weapons, blowing Kain's head off with ease. The combined creature collapsed and exploded, leaving no sign of Kain's human body.
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"Thanks for saving our world." Pakuchi said when everyone had powered down and rested for a while.
"No, thank you. The eight of you are the ones that gave us what we needed to defeat both Falzter, and Greiga. Not to mention that you were the ones who sent your navi's energy to us to form the Cross Bomber." Enzan and Laika said as they sat down and stretched.
"Enzan, I have to stay here." Iris said as she handed over her beast chip.
"Why?"
"Because I am from here, this is where I belong, if I go back to your world then I might not ever beable to return, plus Beyondard is now safe thanks to us." Iris said with a smile.
"Ok, guys we just established a link with Yuuichirou, he is opening a gate so we need to go now!" Charlie said as the four beast rangers who were heading to earth, along with him, Tesla, Dark Miyabi, and Jasmine climbed into the four Guardian machines, two per machine. Charlie rode with Enzan, Tesla with Laika, Dark Miyabi rode in the tiger with Meiru, and Jasmine joined Netto in the dragon. They all took off as the portal opened, and went straight through.
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"Here they come!" Meijin and Joker said as they awaited the five machines inside the Sci Lab hangar. When the four Guardian Machines came through they were surprised, they weren't exactly what they expected.
"Joker!" Laika shouted to the Sharo net official, as he climbed out of the Guardian Turtle.
"Netto where did these machines come from, and where are your's?" Meijin asked in a puzzled tone.
"These are our machines, they are the combinations of the Beast Machines and some other vehicles, some people in Beyondard helped to create them." Netto said as he sat on the head of the Guardian Dragon, "This is my Guardian Dragon. It is the combined form of the Beast Wolf, Queen Butterfly, and a semi truck." Netto said as him and his friends were greeted by other friends and family. _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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Dark Liger Net Official
Joined: 02 Aug 2005 Posts: 343 Location: Neo Arcadia
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Posted: Thu Apr 06, 2006 10:26 pm Post subject: |
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Great chapter, Kram. It did seem a tiny bit rushed but it was still really good. I hope you do well in all of your stories. |
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kram_elbog Cross Fusion!
Joined: 08 Jul 2005 Posts: 1043 Location: Somewhere
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Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 12:31 am Post subject: |
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thanks, it was slightly rushed but that was due to the fact that I was running out of ideas for this particular fic for one, hence the reason I decided not to go past the legnth of Beast. Plus I was running out of stuff for this chapter particularly. however I should be posting my next fic soon. _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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Hatsuya Kanzaki Net Savior
Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 129 Location: Cybertopia (Philippines)
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Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 9:04 am Post subject: |
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I'm waiting for it and you may borrow my Apocalypse! _________________ Rockman.EXE Level-Up! coming soon! Work in progress to be exact! |
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Unknown Neo Cross Fusion!
Age: 40 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 2933 Location: Unknown
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Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 2:45 pm Post subject: |
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I don't think he'll have any chance of using that Kanzaki. Maybe he can find an idea later. And it did seem a little rushed but you kind of ran out of ideas so it's understandable. Are you going to do a wrap-up chapter? |
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Mugen.exe The Original Amish Technogeek!
Joined: 31 Jul 2005 Posts: 911 Location: Behind you, readying a Poison Jab.
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Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 6:14 pm Post subject: |
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Nope, I think that's it. While it did seem rushed the attacks and fighting were all on-spot. [spoil:756f9ef96f]Kain[/spoil:756f9ef96f] using both beasts was pretty awesome, and everyone helping out made it really cool. Though I wish the battle had used more attack exchanges, it was good nonetheless. I applaud your work, and look forward to the next fic! _________________
False Swipe is a great finishing move!
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kram_elbog Cross Fusion!
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Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 7:23 pm Post subject: |
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the end of this chapter had them returning to their world with the Guardian Machines, they defeated the beasts so I don't see the imediate need of a wrap up chapter though later on I might, MIGHT use Unknown's idea of a cross time cross over team up between Ryuusei Sentai Duoranger, and Cyber Sentai Beast ranger though I would need a good exe boss for a villian first, and as of now, besides having Gospel, or the Dream Virus showing up in the future or something I couldn't really come up with a decent idea. _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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Unknown Neo Cross Fusion!
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Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 2:46 pm Post subject: |
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I bet you could figure out something good to use. I think you may have to have them fight first before teaming up.
How bout a copybot kind of thing for that. |
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kram_elbog Cross Fusion!
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Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 3:45 pm Post subject: |
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that works but like I said it will be a little while before I work on those chapters. _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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