OT- SHOGO: The GunBlade Warrior

SaitoRockman · Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 9:39 am Post subject: OT- SHOGO: The GunBlade Warrior

This is an old series I've brought back after recent popularity in my school. So I was thinking maybe you guys and girls should read it.

I know the first Chapter is removed, but it's pretty easy to go on without it. It just tells you how Saito got his weapons and other stuff.

Here is the link to the whole Official Site:

www.freewebs.com/keitaro-shoryuken

I will be making a full site, but later on when I get a job or something of that sort of thing.

EDIT: Reason there's now a second thread of this, is because my last SHOGO thread was flamed the hell out of existance last time.

SaitoRockman · Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 4:37 pm Post subject:

Sorry I'm double posting, but just pointing out that a MAJOR update has been added. (many chapters added now) and I deleted Chapter 1 to save space to allow Chapter 8 to be posted. Freewebs only allows 7 at a time, so I have to remove the oldest to add the newest one. So it would mean you HAVE to keep checking to make sure you don't miss the chapters.

**Mari** · Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 5:52 pm Post subject:

Why don't you post them on the forums? I know, it's not meant to be an archive of sorts, but it'll be easier for the readers to keep track of your fic. :o
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SaitoRockman · Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 7:40 pm Post subject:

Alright. Will do.

EDIT: I'll post Chapter II after I get some comments on #1, just to make sure everyone has read the first parts.

Here it is Chapter 1 of SHOGO: The GunBlade Warrior!

SHOGO: The GunBlade Warrior
Writtin by: Amir Mousaly
Grade: 9

Chapter I: The Beginning, Synchro Watch discovered!!

(C) 1998 Copyright of Amir Mousaly, creator of SHOGO

SHOGO: The GunBlade Warrior

Written by: Amir "Keitaro" Mousaly

EPISODE I: The Beginning, Synchro Watch discovered!!

In the year 21XX, a war has broken out. It was a battle between man and machine. Everywhere you would look, the same things would be seen. Homes being destroyed, blood being split from others, the cries of children.... It is almost as if the apocolypse is coming....

Inside a far-away home, is the home of the greatest scientist alive, Soma Kojima. He is the first one to create the mechanical arm and heart. He's created many things that have helped man-kind. Only 18 years ago, he found love for his child-hood friend, Hitomi Konada. They got married and had two children, one was named Sasuke. The other was named, Saito. Sasuke, who is 17, recently left their home to search for work and other things to do, Saito chose to stay home. Saito is 14, and going through the usual things a 14-year-old boy goes through. But enough of about that.

Soma and Saito are the only ones who remained in the home. Hitomi was killed by one of the machines not too long ago, it broke all their hearts to see such sadness. "Saito-kun! I need you to go down into the basement and get out of here from the back door!! If you find any weapons, use them to your advantage!" Soma ordered as Saito rushed into the basement to keep himself alive. "I will father, I won't let you down!" Saito replied, but right when he turned around to wave, Soma Kojima's entire upper body was imploded.... "FATHER!!!!"

The machines ignored Saito's cries and left the house, Saito ran into the basement to look for weapons for his revenge. While looking, he found a secret passage-way that led to a laboratory. "What? What is this? Now I am understanding why I was never allowed down here...." he thought to himself, while looking around, he found a small table with two strange looking wristband watches. "Hey, just what I needed. I was wondering what time it was, and I'll give this extra one to Ryokou." Saito pocketed the one that had an X on it's front, and he equipped the one with V on it's front. Right when he put it on, it started to glow, and the V on his watch popped open and two needles went into his veins, "Argh! What the hell is this? Some kind of security device..?" while the needles were inside of him, he felt like there was tremendous energy building inside of him. It felt like he was also being set on fire. "What's going on with me?! Something inside of me is forcing itself out!!" he felt a huge shock and fell unconscious.

After a few minutes, he awoke and found himself being much heavier. After checking himself, he noticed he had some strange fighting armor on. "Whoa.... I look like some kind of super fighting robot!" he clenched his left hand and lunged it forward, accidently launching a fireball out of his hand. "Woops, I forgot I could still use that move... Hadouken." he said to himself, "Well, this is better than some stupid Plasma Buster, so I'll be out of here. I gotta get to Messetsu City and find Ryokou Hikari, and my love Kiari Takanoshin, my best friends since I was 6...." he ran and blasted out of the back door, when he was far from the house he shouted, "Look out world!!! SAITO KOJIMA IS BACK!!"

feepitsrule · Posted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 2:09 pm Post subject:

You might wanna change

(c) Copyright of Amir Mousaly, the creator of this site

to

(c) Copyright of Amir Mousaly.

I know it was originally made for your website, but you don't own REO, the last I checked. Razz

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SaitoRockman · Posted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 8:05 am Post subject:

Eh, I forgot about that... Since all I did was copy and paste it from my logs that were originally from my site. I thought for sure I got every little mistake out.

SaitoRockman · Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 5:52 pm Post subject:

Here it is, Chapter two. I know, barely any of you cared to read Chapter One, but oh well...

Chapter II - Reunion!! Lovers unite!

(C) Copyright of Amir Mousaly

SHOGO: The GunBlade Warrior

Written by: Amir "Keitaro" Mousaly

Chapter II - Reunion!! Lovers unite!

Saito Kojima, a young 14-year-old with the will to fight, has left his cherished and broken home. Now, he leaves from there in search of his friends. Ryokou Hikari, the joker-type of the group, he has a bit darker skin than everyone else who he's been friends with, blonde spiky hair to go with that. And Saito's love, Kiari Takanoshin, the one he's loved since before he even liked girls. She has long, dirty-blonde hair, blue eyes that sparkle like diamonds, a smile that makes Saito die from happiness. They are both perfect for each other, and from permission given by their parents, are engaged. Some call it arranged marriage. But, they must wait a few years to be legally married.

Our young lover-boy needs to find his friends, for they are the only ones who he knows, has shelter to keep him alive. They would be insulted if they didn't let him stay. He kept running and running for almost 2 hours. Far in his view he saw a small cottage-like house, he found Ryokou's shelter home. Since all of their parents are dead, Ryokou is allowing them to stay. But, right when Saito found the house, he was ambushed by a ReavorBot!

The ReavorBot had a strange look to it, like a traffic cone, only fatter and had a red eye on it's top. It was colored blue, so it's one of the lower ranking robots. "You have been found as an enemy to our race, Mr. Saito Kojima. Killer of the Exceeder Squad 2 years ago. Prepare to be ripped apart! Booombaraaallalaang!!" the ReavorBot beeped these words, but Saito didn't really care. He still was using his new armor, he put his hands in a cup formation, charged his ki for a bit, and launched a large ball of ki from his hands, shouting, "Hadouken!!" when this burst of energy had impact with the ReavorBot, it was sent flying and exploded while in the air! Metal gears, bolts, and scrap parts fell to the ground, some in which were melted from it's explosion. "Don't underestimate a Kojima...." he muttered, and left the pile of junk to go to his new "home."

When he arrived, Kiari was already sitting outside, and could not believe it was really him. Until he removed his helmet, that is. "Oh Saito-san!! It's been so long since we last seen each other!" she said surprised, "YOU DIDN'T EVEN WRITE!!!" and she bashed him on the head! Saito has always gotten beatings from Kiari in the past, they were just fun things so he never really got hurt much. "Kiari-chan... I do know what you mean, but it doesn't really matter. I'm here now, forever... We'll always be together.... I love you so much, that only God knows how much I do." they hugged each other tightly, and were about to kiss, until Ryokou came from inside. "Ah, it seems the happy couple is trying to procreate before their legal day? Heh heh heh heh~~ OW!!" Kiari bashed Ryokou with a frying pan in mid sentence, "WE ARE NOT DOING ANYTHING LIKE THAT YOU PERVERT!!" she continued to shout like this for half an hour, but Saito didn't really pay attention. He is just glad to be with his best friends, after so long...

SaitoRockman · Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 6:27 pm Post subject:

Well, I know that none of you read Chapter two or anything else, but I'm posting Chapter three here.

Chapter III - For one for all, I am Shogo!

(C) Copyright of Amir Mousaly

Chapter III - For one for all, I am Shogo!

Saito Kojima, a thirteen year old boy, orphaned and living with his closest friends. Has finally been reunited with his long cherished friends, Ryokou Hikari and Kiari Takanoshin. They all live in the now almost destroyed, Messetsu City. Since they are trying to avoid confrontation with the machines, they have fled to a run-down shelter they built themselves. Saito was the last to arrive, Kiari was upset of his long-term absence.

But, that is the small past, and not many care of it. Saito has also found a strange watch-like wristband from his dad's secret lab. This accessory bestows him with great power. Which can be used for the good of man-kind, of the destruction of the entire planet... He found two of them, and has given one of them to Ryokou, since he knows how to control his energy already. "Saito-kun, how come that you didn't give one to your fiancee?" Ryokou nudged him, Saito repeated the reasons. It was because there were only two there, and he's afraid that Kiari may abuse it's power. She wasn't pleased to hear this, and socked him on the head. "I can handle holding a friggin' wristband!!" she shouted at him.

Kiari has always been the one who liked to beat people up. Usually, she'd kick the guys in the place and the girls would get slapped a lot. Violent? Not at all, in my opinion that is. It is kinda strange that Saito and Kiari are engaged, since she does kick the crap out of him all the time. But, it's late, and time for our young fighters to get to bed....

That is, if the world would allow them to! While in their sleep, a group of ReavorBots appeared and ambushed the group at night. In which, it woke them up quickly, and they rushed outside to defend the area. Saito activated his "V-Watch" and transformed. When Kiari saw this, she was struck in awe from seeing her "knight in shining armor" in actual armor. "Everyone, defend the area! Battle routine set...." Saito commanded, and everyone shouted, "ENGAGE!!" and charged at the trespassers. Saito used his fire-type techniques to burn most of the closer Bots, while Ryokou set up an aura around them for protection. Kiari just took out a large plasma gatling gun and blasted anything that wasn't human! While Kiari kept the enemies at bay, Saito went around them and got his hands in form for the Hadouken. But instead, he used a different attack, he jumped to the air and blasted all the ReavorBots shouting, "Tenma Gou-Zankuu!!!" causing all of the ReavorBots to explode. All but one, that was behind him the entire time, and grabbed him behind and called out, "Shungokusatsu..." and self-destructed itself. The explosion almost killed Saito, and sent him flying! His armor deactivated, and he passed out.

In the blaze of the fire, where Saito's body was inside. A figure of some kind of ninja appeared and carried him out of the fire, when it was seen, Kiari shouted in amazement, "Sasuke Kojima-sempai!!!" the young ninja looked at them and dropped Saito's body next to Kiari. She blinked at him and asked, "Why are you hear, and what took you so long?" he chuckled and replied, "So you and everyone else won't screw up and kill yourselves."

TO BE CONTINUED

SaitoRockman · Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 3:54 am Post subject:

Is it just me, or is this topic basically dead?

Should we just lock this up since nobody cares about it at all?

**Mari** · Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 8:20 am Post subject:

Okay, locking due to request.

You do need larger chapters IMO. The story seems too rushed, it's like reading a summary.
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