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Powerstonemaster
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Dougurasu
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Ooooooh, very gooooood :p I don't agree with your artist comments on your dA pictures tho, your inking doesn't suck at all  I'm a little mystified at what's going on though... On page 1 I don't really get... where that guy is. Page 2 speaks for itself obviously (I like that guy's grin). The third page is understandable, but where did his hand come from all of a sudden? Did that other guy throw it in front of him? I didn't really get that.
But setting that aside, it's a very cool drawing style that really fits the comic. Oh yeah, one more thing... you should read it the comic way right? not the manga way? |
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Powerstonemaster
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| thanks and well yeah, your supposed to be confused on whats going on and yeah, it was the shadowy figure that threw him is arm. Oh, and you are supposed to reading it like a comic. Oh, i almost forgot, the main character is rockman, but i tried to use the manga style and change it alittle. Thanks for the comment! |
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FabiChan
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Nice start for a comic! I enjoyed the cover you did with the crosshatching effect but it might need some work with the proportions besides of that keep the good work!
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Mega Pikachu
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| Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 4:57 pm Post subject: |
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| nice comic!! keep up the good work!! |
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Plantman
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| Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 7:09 pm Post subject: |
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Powerstone, I'd like to remind you of the following rule:
| Quote: | | +Non-REO hosted manga or comics are only allowed one topic. You are not to post an update everytime your comic updates. Please just link to an external source. The board is not your news page for your comic. |
I have noticed that you added recently 2 more pages to your original post, this is against the rules. You can provide a link to your DA gallery to promote your comic only once. Please, observe this rule in the future. Thanks.
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Powerstonemaster
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| Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 5:03 pm Post subject: |
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| Sorry, i thought i meant not to start a new post saying i updated, so i thought just editiing the original post with the new pages was okay. Sorry |
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