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Hatsuya Kanzaki Net Savior
Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 129 Location: Cybertopia (Philippines)
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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 9:56 pm Post subject: Rockman EXE Overdrive! Digital Revolution (Chapter 004)[SP] |
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Rockman EXE OVERDRIVE!
Digital Revolution
By Hatsuya Kanzaki
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SOME NOTES:
Right now, I can't fill this fan fiction series (FFS) thread right now because I have to prepare myself for the final test in our school and I haven't finished the first three chapters...Please bear with me...Maybe by March 22, 2006 Philippine date & time, I'll bring it out.
I wholeheartedly dedicate this FFS to my parents, to my siblings, to my friends and cousins and to everyone...especially to those who survived the Hurricane Rita, Hurricane Katrina in United States, to those survivors and victims of the ULTRA Tragedy/Wowowee Tragedy and in Southern Leyte landslide in Philippines...
This fan fiction series contains PG-13 violence, some disturbing scenes and drama.
===REO:DR===
(This will be filled up by March 22, 2006 Philippine date)
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This is just a one-shot opener for the real "Rockman EXE Overdrive!" series. This should somehow tell about the program that will be tackled when the real fan fiction series was released after this one-shot fan fic. This can be a possible spoiler for the "Rockman EXE Overdrive! : Digital Revolution" fan fiction series that will be released sometime at March 22, 2006 (Philippine date & time).
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000: Awakening of Apocalypse
Year 19XX, after the development of the Cyber Society, there was a multi-trillionaire corporation who wished to help the scientists who were behind the Cyber Society. This company is…the Ayanami Corporation.
Ryukaname Ayanami is one of the benefactors of the project…Ryukaname has long silver hair, she often wears her purple labcoat and silver short skirt and blue stockings.
Inside the room where the project was placed, Ryukaname came in and she saw Dr. Regal and Dr. Tadashi Hikari designing the framework of the Net. She asked Dr. Regal,
"Doctor, I would like to contribute something for this promising work…may I contribute something?"
"Hmm…then what is it then, Mrs. Ayanami?" Dr. Regal answered.
"It’s actually a Cyber-Guardian program. Our company called it Vesuvius Zentria. It is a living anti-viral program designed to eliminate viruses and hackers. Our clan designed it though." Ryukaname replied.
"So, an anti-virus eh. We won't be needing that thing right now." Dr. Regal answered again.
"Why?"
"Look Ryukaname, this thing shall be done by the next generation of the crew and they'll do their brand of improvements! As for you, if you want to help, maybe you should just pay 3,000,000,000 zennies as a part of the enhancement." Dr. Regal answered.
Ryukaname walked out from the room and then she began to talk to herself,
"Why...why they can't appreciate my help! Why does it have to be like this!"
She stomped her left hand to the glass window and left the facility...
Outside the facility, she saw a blue and silver-colored helicopter landing on the facility's helipad and then it was an old man dressed in silver labcoat and he had a long beard. Six heavily armed guards that are dressed in silver kevlar jacket and blue full-body overalls and armed with MP5-Navy submachine guns accompanied him. The old man called Ryukaname and then she kissed the old man's ring and the old man talked to her,
"Ryukaname...please be patient. Some of those people weren't ready to accept new ideas, let them go for a while."
"Shinwa-san! Are you crazy! One of our living ancestors have told all of us about the upcoming events that would happen sometime! I'm just concerned! This is for the future of the Net Society! Now, what's your purpose on coming here anyway, Gramps!" Ryukaname shouted at him.
"Calm down...princess...I'm here to talk with the Hikaris and your siblings were waiting for you to come back and finish Vestige and Thunderbird, so that Vesuvius Zentria will be protected. Just go home for now, princess and good luck." Grandfather Shinwa Ayanami answered.
Ryukaname went inside the helicopter and left the facility (SciLab). Inside the helicopter, she stared at her disk and then she began to imagine such images...
She suddenly saw the LifeVirus, the massive destruction of all cities and the evolution of the viruses and the "death of the Internet Era".
She woke up and she found herself in her room. She moved out from the bed and then she checked her computer and then she inserted the disk and then she attempted to hack the computer where the Net will be established...
She was able to access the SciLab's network via a special program can go to any network even without the Net.
Then this screen appeared:
Code: | SCILAB ELECTOPIA BRANCH
Please enter your username, usercode and password to access the SciLab network...
USERNAME:
USERCODE:
PASSWORD:
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She typed the required fields and it came out like this,
Code: | SCILAB ELECTOPIA BRANCH
Please enter your username, usercode and password to access the SciLab network...
USERNAME: Casshern
USERCODE: RA909-B11BA-CHRNR-35OO6
PASSWORD: **********
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Then she was successful in accessing the network. Now, she found some recent data about the Net Society project...
Code: | SCILAB ELECTOPIA BRANCH
TOP SECRET INFORMATION
NETWORK SOCIETY PROJECT
CURRENT STATUS: 97% Complete
STAFF ASSIGNED:
Dr. Tadashi Hikari
Dr. Regal
Dr. Shinwa Ayanami
Dr. Antonio Makabayan
Dr. Ryukaname Ayanami
DETAILED STATUS:
The basic network framework was finished.
Undernet area finished
(Japan) Electopia Net area finished
(USA) Netopia Net area finished
(Africa) Netfrica Net area finished
(Philippines) Cybertopia Net area finished
(United Korea) Funtopia Net area finished
(England) Kingland Net area finished
(Southeast Asia) Yumland Net area finished
(Europe) Creamland Net area finished
(Oceania) Oceopia Net area finished
(China) Choina Net area finished
(Russia) Sharo Net area finished
(Canada) Canasia Net area finished
Nation Z Net area finished
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Now, she began to plant the Cyber-Guardian programs to the project and now, the results came out.
Code: | SCILAB ELECTOPIA BRANCH
TOP SECRET INFORMATION
NETWORK SOCIETY PROJECT
CURRENT STATUS: 110% Complete
STAFF ASSIGNED:
Dr. Tadashi Hikari
Dr. Regal
Dr. Shinwa Ayanami
Dr. Antonio Makabayan
Dr. Ryukaname Ayanami
DETAILED STATUS:
The basic network framework was finished.
Undernet area finished
(Japan) Electopia Net area finished
(USA) Netopia Net area finished
(Africa) Netfrica Net area finished
(Philippines) Cybertopia Net area finished
(United Korea) Funtopia Net area finished
(England) Kingland Net area finished
(Southeast Asia) Yumland Net area finished
(Europe) Creamland Net area finished
(Oceania) Oceopia Net area finished
(China) Choina Net area finished
(Russia) Sharo Net area finished
(Canada) Canasia Net area finished
Nation Z Net area finished
Cyber-Guardian Vesuvius Zentrias special program has been installed
Cyber-Guardian Thunderbird special program has been installed
Cyber-Guardian Vestige special program has been installed
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Year 20XX...Ryukaname Ayanami was nowhere to be found and the remaining siblings of the Ayanami clan were Kazuya, Yamitake, Shara, Chikako and Ryusseichi Ayanami. Dr. Hikari and other scientists has just finished the Improved Net Society.
The Net Society was finally finished and it developed much better, thanks to the special programs planted by Ryukaname.
These three programs were hidden beyond the UnderNet and Alpha. Vesuvius Zentrias began to have a cyber-body. He began to have blue and silver spiked armor, silver spiked boots and blue big hands equipped with Vulcans. Thunderbird became like a Faltzer-clone while Vestige became like a Greiga-clone Program.
These three programs worked accordingly until the Net Mafia Gospel rose and then caused them to become corrupted when Kotobuki was altered. Vestige and Thunderbird were merged with Vesuvius Zentrias and it became Vesuvius himself! Vesuvius looked like Rockman and Forte combined with matching angel and devil wings and they hold two weapons, the Thunderbird Elemental Blade and Vestige Hi-Velocity Cannon arm. This program became self-aware on its surroundings. Still, this one was remained a secret.
Five days after Wily's plans were foiled, Vesuvius began to consume WWW Net Area and it became a part of him. He began to evolve and he suddenly became an impenetrable orb that looked like planet Earth with one hundred little orbs circling all over him.
Vesuvius began to talk to himself just like his creator,
"Humans...you are all a bunch of malfunctioned machines! You are poisoning each other...I can't imagine how would a Net society in the real world run like that. Pornography, racism, sexism...apartheid...what a joke...of all God's creations, humans! These things are meant to be controlled by me! I Apocalypse shall be awakened sometime!!!"
After the attack of Nebula and the Cyber Beasts along with the Zoanoroids, Apocalypse was secretly resurrected and now, he deleted Forte, Slur, Serenade and Dark Rockman and then used their souls for an improvement...
This ends here. This is where Overdrive shall commence. THIS MEANS, IT STOPS RIGHT HERE. _________________ Rockman.EXE Level-Up! coming soon! Work in progress to be exact!
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Mewpink
Joined: 27 Feb 2006 Posts: 38 Location: Sunagakure
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Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 2:53 pm Post subject: |
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You know, I'm starting to get interested in this fic...so keep on writing!!
Only thing I don't like...Forte deleted?
Not a chance...Forte always returns!!! *laughs histerically* _________________
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Hatsuya Kanzaki Net Savior
Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 129 Location: Cybertopia (Philippines)
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 7:17 am Post subject: |
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About the pilot episode (000), it somehow retold what happened on previous EXE games while Apocalypse was being developed…
~ANOTHER WARNING!~
“Rockman EXE Overdrive! Digital Revolution” is a multi-lingual massive crossover fan fiction series. I am proud to be a Filipino and as a tribute for my country, I’ll put some Filipino fan characters and some Filipino words but provided that I’d place its translations right after it.
~BEFORE THE REAL PRIMER!~
Forte EXE: Apocalypse surely gave me a big hit!
Apocalypse EXE: I should inform the author first before we hit each other again…
Forte EXE: W-why?
Apocalypse EXE: Many would sue him because he referred everybody from different universes!
~LEGALITIES~
Rockman / Megaman and other Capcom characters featured in this fiction are not mine but copyright of Capcom.
Majika, Encantadia & Etheria characters featured in this fiction are not mine either but copyright of GMA Network Philippines.
Krystala, Panday, Kampanerang Kuba and Super Inggo characters featured in this fiction are not mine either but copyright of ABS-CBN Broadcasting Corporation Philippines.
Brigandine, Riviera the Promised Land, Evolution: Far-Off Promise and DemiKids characters featured in this fiction are not mine either but copyright of ATLUS & STING.
Groove Adventure Rave, Super Doll Licca, Tokyo Mew Mew, Fire Emblem Sacred Stones, Fire Emblem Sealed Sword, Xenogears, Xenosaga, X-Men, TxtMen, Mystic Machine Maharlika, Ragnarok Online, Lineage II, MU Online, Priston Tale, Flyff, Warcraft III Frozen Throne, Neon Genesis Evangelion, Forbidden Love (Korean), Lovers In Paris, Green Rose, Casshern, Front Mission III, Final Fantasy 7-8, Tactics & Advent Children, FightBox, RF Online, Digimon Adventure 01 & 02, Digimon Tamers & Digimon Frontier, ROSE Online, Boktai, Castlevania, Threads of Fate, Tales of Destiny, Pretear, Pangya, Wowowee, Eat Bulaga, Samurai Spirits, Virtual On, Kiddy Grade, Fairyland, Prince of Tennis, Soul Calibur, Shaman King, Gunbird, Cardcaptor Sakura, Naruto, Magic Knight Rayearth, Tsubasa Chronicles, Tokyo Mew Mew, Maple Story, Phantom Brave, Ajang dot Com (Korean Anime), RESTOL (Korean Anime), Legend of Blue and Tengai characters and other characters and articles featured in this fiction are not mine either but copyright of respective companies worldwide.
There are some original characters those are mine and other members characters from here on REO. Events take place after EXE 6 and the author wanted the EXE series last long with him. Ideas, concepts, and facts come from the MMBN games and some various other animes. Plus there are some also made up facts as well.
~BACK TO THE PRE-PRIMER!~
Apocalypse EXE: See those! They’re too many of them! Now I’m gonna squish Porings before I slaughter other fools!
Forte EXE: Eh! What the hell!? (sweatdrops!)
*Here comes Tristan of Panday and ten “bayongs” from Wowowee game show*
Tristan EXE: Hi! Narito na kami! (Here we are!)
Forte EXE: Fi-fi-fi-filipinos!
Tristan EXE: Money or bag?
Forte EXE: APOCALYPSE!!! HELP!!! THERE’S A FREAK GIVING ME SUCH BAGS!!!
~ENOUGH OF THAT!~ _________________ Rockman.EXE Level-Up! coming soon! Work in progress to be exact!
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Hatsuya Kanzaki Net Savior
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 7:19 am Post subject: |
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001: Overdrive
"Fools rush in where angels fear to tread..."
-Alexander Pope
"Welcome, my son, welcome, to the machine. What did you dream, it's all right, we told you what to dream."
-Pink Floyd, "Welcome to the Machine"
In a messy UnderNet area, there are three soldier Navis patrolling around the orb. The soldier Navis were equipped with beam axes and they are wearing green padded armor with green bulky backpacks on their backs.
After a short while, a female carabao-mounted cavalier Net Navi walked towards the orb. She has a silver plate armor with small silver back pack on her back, blue silk clothing under her plate armor, she has long purple hair and she's riding on a silver-plated carabao.
Now, one of the soldier Net Navis approached the cavalier Navi and he asked her,
"Who are you?"
"I am Cleria EXE, the carabao knight!" the cavalier Navi answered.
"Then what is your business here?" the soldier Navi asked her again.
"I am here to check this cyber-orb" Cleria answered him.
Still, the soldier Navi has another question to ask and Cleria looked at him madly because she's irritated on answering their questions. Now, he asked Cleria for the third time,
"Who's your operator, Cleria?"
"Great. Just great. Of all questions, why do you have to ask that one!" Cleria yelled at the soldier Navi.
"Um...this is for the safety of the cyber-orb. We don't know if that orb has a connection with the installation of a certain program with files called Thunderbird, Vestige and Vesuvius Zentrias or something. Now, who's your operator?" the curious soldier Navi replied.
Her carabao Navi wagged its tail and it’s staring on the other two Navis suspiciously. Then Cleria answered his final question,
"I am...Ryukaname's Navi. Any questions?"
The soldier Navis armed themselves with Beam axes and they began to "buff" themselves with Speed Up, Attack Up, Defense Up and Max HP Navi programs and one of them shouted,
"Hey! A hacker owned this Navi! Let's get her!"
Ryukaname inserted a gold chip with a picture of a "PristonTale Tower Shield" and then she inserted another gold chip with a picture of a long, green beam blade with tiny green cubes circling around the blade and it was the "Alter Blade".
"Let's bring these newbies to hell, are you ready, Cleria?" Ryukaname asked.
"Yes, I am pleased to see pixels flying everywhere!" Cleria answered and she chuckled.
Cleria gained a dark blue tower shield and the Alter Blade. About the Alter Blade, it allows the operator and the Navi to gain control of other Navis stabbed in battle or it allows them to drain their data and make use of it.
The first soldier Navi attempted to impale Cleria but she jumped off and her carabao Navi got hurt because the soldier's axe hit the neck of the carabao and it shed red pixels. Then Cleria goes right behind the first soldier and stabbed him with her Alter Blade and drained its data and sent it to the wounded carabao Navi.
Her carabao moaned loud and its wounds were cured and it became much stronger. It began to ram other soldier Navi while Cleria choked the other Navi and she tossed him out to the orb and he ended up being deleted inside it.
The soldier Net Navis were eliminated and Cleria approached the orb closer and she touched its surface and it gave her an electric shock. Now, she heard a young, god-like computerized voice from the orb,
"Very good, I've been waiting for this moment! Now that you are here right in front of me, I have some things to say..."
"What is it, Vesuvius Zentria?" Ryukaname asked him.
The voice from the orb didn't replied but instead, its appearance began to change into a spiked energy orb and then Ryukaname talked to him,
"Why didn't you work like how I programmed you years ago!"
Still, the orb didn't respond and then its color turned into bloody red color. Still, Ryukaname asked him again,
"Hey! Why are you ignoring me! I am your creator!"
Ryukaname asked Cleria,
"Cleria, are you ready to delete my own masterpiece?"
Cleria looked at her and she frowned and she dropped her tower shield and her Alter Blade and she knelt, facing her operator from Ryukaname's PET monitor. She asked Cleria again,
"Cleria, why are you acting like that? You're my Navi and you're going to turn back against my orders!"
Cleria stood up and then she replied to her and she's crying,
"Ryukaname-san...he's your product. (Sniff) You made him... (Sniff) Why are asking me to delete him? I can't believe you! You are neglecting him! Abandoning him like a broken toy! (Sniff) That's what I don't like in you! You are nothing but a careless being!"
Ryukaname was struck on her words and then she gave her side and she's also crying like her Navi,
"I...(sniff)...I created him...(sniff)...I created him to protect the entire Cyberworld! But...(sniff)...h-he...violated my algorithms! He didn't follow my commands! (sniff) He's a mindless jerk!"
Cleria picked up her equipment and her carabao dissolved itself into pixels and it amplified her...Cleria and Ryukaname stopped crying and then she commanded Cleria,
"I know you have a point there but he's not doing what I am expecting on him! Now, we have to finish him off before he destroys the Cyberworld! Let's finish this! Cleria! Battle routine, set! All systems go!"
The orb changed its color to black then it glowed and it shattered like a glass being smashed by a hard object. Now, there's the brand new Vesuvius Zentria...
He has long silver hair, silver trench coat, silver chest plate and silver angel and devil wings placed on his back. His right hand holds a bloody red wide sword and on his left arm he has a large silver cannon. He flew out from his shattered orb and he talked to Cleria,
"Cleria...Ryukaname...I must confess..."
"What is it?" Cleria asked him.
"I killed your grandfather last night...also, I killed Shinwa..."
"WHAT!" Ryukaname shouted.
Vesuvius Zentria grinned at Cleria and he said,
"Your grandfathers are a bunch of fools...I killed them...for your freedom...to make me...your grandfathers were actually one of the early designers of this Cyberworld...then the Hikaris continued the experiment and now, this is finished...I am...I am...a god...I've been waiting for this...I want to change the world...not only this world but also, the human world as well!!!"
Then he laughed like a devil then Cleria tried to attack him but his force field knocked her down back to the floor and then his eyes turned red and he shouted,
"I am APOCALYPSE!!! I shall wreck havoc to the Net Society and teach every puny human being on how to live right without corruption, crime, hatred, discrimination...By this way, I'll rule the world and everyone should call me the New Father Almighty!!!"
He laughed again and now, Cleria mumbled,
"Hmph! This guy's a perfectionist! He wanted a perfect peaceful world by force! He must be insane!"
Cleria rushed on him again and he pushed her back to the ground and suddenly, there are five standard Navis falling down from above and Apocalypse threw five Soul Datas on them and he gave life on them...
The first standard Navi turned into a Dark Rockman with devil wings, then the second Navi turned into Serenade with gold wings and she's holding two spears. The third Navi became Forte but this time, he has black cape then he's fully-armored and he has two swords on his back. The fourth Navi became Slur, she now has a long, bluish hair and she's dressed like a Ragnarok Online female alchemist. Then finally, the fifth Navi became a human-like Navi. He has bald hair and he had a red gem on his forehead and he's Sigma. He has purple large armor, with a black cape and he has a purple, large beam scythe.
Apocalypse commanded Sigma to delete Cleria and he followed his orders.
Sigma attempts to mow his scythe on Cleria but she evaded it quickly then she countered it by turning her shield into a boomerang. It knocked Sigma to the floor but he recovered quickly, he goes right beside Cleria and knocked her off hard with his elbow. Cleria rolled away from him and she does her shield boomerang attack on him again but her shield was catched by Sigma and he broke it like breaking a biscuit into two and threw it right on her face and she was badly knocked off to the floor.
Cleria tried to stand up but she was secretly trapped by Serenade's invisible entangling trap. Sigma's scythe became an Evangelion Longinus Spear and he flew right above her and he threw it on Cleria's breast and before she got deleted, she mentioned her last words to Ryukaname,
"Ryukaname...I'm sorry...I failed you...Someday...someone...shall...finish...him...goodbye...Ryukaname...I love you..."
Cleria was erased and then Apocalypse clapped his hands and he announced,
"This is the time where I shall commence the Overdrive!!!"
The Undernet cyber-square was enveloped by a red force field and it emitted a purple beam from its center and it triggered the first wave of the Overdrive. All over cyber-squares began to fire up energy beams and covered by red barriers.
Now, the second wave has started. The dark hole from the Undernet unleashed fifty billion giant space vessels. These vessels hold several copies of different online entities from other worlds. These vessels exploded and it scattered a barrage of beams everywhere.
Then the third wave has started. The Cyberworld began to have several connections to the other worlds and turning them as new parts and extensions to the Cyberworld.
Now, the final wave has commenced! Dark orbs enveloped the entire Cyberworld and it became history...
After a short while, the Cyberworld was quickly restored and everything changed...
But Apocalypse and his men were not found after the Overdrive. The entire Cyberworld became much like the real world...
Back to the real world, inside the Science Centrum Complex in Cyber Town...Inside her room, Ryukaname was crying for what Apocalypse did. Now she began to say things,
"Vesuvius Zentria...you have changed the Cyberworld much...I thank you for that but...why did you turn yourself as a bad Net Navi! Why! Answer me why!"
However, there are five men dressed in black SWAT costumes barged in and they threw nerve gas grenades all over the complex and thy got Ryukaname and then they took her out from the facility.
Somewhere in Akitamane, there was a large cathedral on the mountains and there's a young girl running because she was being chased by the angry mob. She was one of the alleged members of a secret group. However, a dimension barrier trapped them and they were eaten by the barrier and spit them back as black soldier Navis. The girl was very scared and she continued running away from them until she reached the cathedral called "Our Lady of the Digital Century".
Inside the cathedral, there are ninety-eight long pews made of silver, there are black & green marble tiles on the floor, the roof has the image of the Armageddon, and there's a baptismal font placed in the middle of the cathedral's nave.
Then the girl entered inside and she saw a long-haired boy kneeling in front of the Blessed Virgin's statue. She asked the boy,
"What are you doing here?"
"I'm praying for my aunt...I hope that she's safe..." The boy answered.
The boy has long blue hair, black long sleeve shirt, black pants and blue sneakers. While they are talking, the statue began to shed blood from its eyes and the baptismal font suddenly gushing out holy water.
Is this the sign where the world is in chaos due to the Overdrive! Can Netto and others stop the new threat? Find out on the next chapter: "002: Overdrive After!" _________________ Rockman.EXE Level-Up! coming soon! Work in progress to be exact! |
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kram_elbog Cross Fusion!
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Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 7:51 pm Post subject: |
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Very good story so far however in the first chapter, well the prologue I got slightly confused about the fact that the all three Cyber Guardians semmed like they were created at the same time but then you said that one was created later as a result of two of them merging.
Quote: | Cyber-Guardian Vesuvius Zentrias special program has been installed
Cyber-Guardian Thunderbird special program has been installed
Cyber-Guardian Vestige special program has been installed | [/quote] _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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Hatsuya Kanzaki Net Savior
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Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 10:19 pm Post subject: |
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Ryukaname actually snagged Vestige and Thunderbird secretly even though they're almost complete but it is not directly stated on the prologue. And another thing, Vesuvius was first to be created and after a few minutes, she uploaded Vestige & Thunderbird immediately.
Vestige & Thunderbird were suddenly merged with Vesuvius during the time of Battle Network 2.
Some other info: Vestige & Thunderbird were actually songs sung by a Japanese group called T.M. Revolution. And these were used in Gundam Seed Destiny. _________________ Rockman.EXE Level-Up! coming soon! Work in progress to be exact! |
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kram_elbog Cross Fusion!
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Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 11:34 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah I knew about those songs, I am a big fan of Takanori Nishikawa, I named my animal crossing character Takanori, and my town is Defrock, with the town flag being the kanji for nishikawa. I was just pointing out that the explanation of them merging made it seem to me like they were merging to form the third one, even though the third one already existed. Basically it was slightly confusing. _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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Hatsuya Kanzaki Net Savior
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Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 1:37 am Post subject: |
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Soon, more about the controversial fusion of Thunderbird & Vestige will be covered in next seven episodes after "002: Overdrive After". _________________ Rockman.EXE Level-Up! coming soon! Work in progress to be exact! |
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Mugen.exe The Original Amish Technogeek!
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I too was slightly confused by the fic. Tenses (past and present) seemed to blend together. I also noticed an obscene amount of cross-over characters... quite possibly more than in Tsubasa Chronicles! Aside from the tenses being... er, tense, the fic was interesting, and decent, to say the least.
Good work... keep it up, I guess! _________________
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Hatsuya Kanzaki Net Savior
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Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 6:13 am Post subject: |
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The following episodes will be posted by Friday (03/31/2006):
002: Overdrive After!
003: New Comrades
004: First Pawn, GeminiMan.EXE
005: Three Mages
006: Accretoids
007: Net Navi Royal Rumble On Grade Seven _________________ Rockman.EXE Level-Up! coming soon! Work in progress to be exact! |
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Hatsuya Kanzaki Net Savior
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Posted: Tue Mar 28, 2006 8:05 am Post subject: |
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There are promises that are meant to be broken here...
Tomorrow morning, I might post the second chapter of the Rockman EXE Overdrive fan fic series! _________________ Rockman.EXE Level-Up! coming soon! Work in progress to be exact! |
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Hatsuya Kanzaki Net Savior
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Posted: Tue Mar 28, 2006 8:59 pm Post subject: Rockman EXE Overdrive! Digital Revolution (Chapter 002) |
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WARNING:
I don't own Darna but it is actually owned by Mars Ravelo!
Not all Net Navis mentioned in the class list may appear or they made their appearance but they were not particularly portrayed.
One of the new characters to be introduced here is my user name; I'm not the hero here all right? I'm just bearing his name!
This is also an Alternate Universe, since the family names of other young characters in EXE weren’t given; I decided to give them various family names until I found their real family names...
You might be questioning on some descriptions...actually I'm also describing some character's hairstyle and clothing based on Gaia Online.
002: Overdrive After
Awit na nananawagan
Baka sakaling napakikinggan
-Excerpts from a Filipino alternative rock song "Narda" sung by a Filipino band, Kamikazee
“A song of beckoning
It might be heard.”
-My English translation of "Narda".
In the house of the Hikaris in Cyber Town/Central Town, Netto was so excited to be in the Junior High so he found new clothing kept in a blue gift box.
There's his bandanna but he doesn't have to tie on his head, a blue & yellow-striped vest, a blue long-sleeved shirt and he has a dark blue & yellow striped shorts and it's a little bit longer than what he wears during his elementary years and there's a pair of shoes too! It is colored blue and yet yellow-striped and it has its own roller skates attached and it can be used with a push of a button!
He removed his old bandanna and took off his old shirt and he wore his blue long sleeved shirt first then he wore his vest and strapped his new bandanna on his forehead but still, its bearing his same old icon. Then he changed his pants with his new one and he also wore his new shoes and then he asked Rockman,
"How do I look?"
"Cool! Hurry! You wouldn't want to be late again, so let's go!" said by Rockman EXE cheerfully.
He placed his PET on his PET holster and then he goes out from his room then he saw his mother cooking their breakfast while his father was reading a news article.
Their breakfast was finished and then Netto ate breakfast and then he kissed his mom and then said goodbye to them and he went outside...
He saw Meiru, Dekao, Yaito, Shun, Tohru and Shuuko together and they're all wearing new clothes and then they started to walk their way to their new school that is "Central Academy". While they are walking and talking, there's a white-haired boy wearing blue, long-sleeve jacket, blue pants, blue phat shoes and he has eyeglasses. He has fair complexion, white eyes and he has a small hump on his left shoulder and his hairstyle almost looked like Ryou Bakura of Yu-Gi-Oh. The boy ran quickly as if he’s about to hit Meiru & Netto while he’s running.
Meiru felt something different about him and she talked to Netto,
"Netto, that white-haired boy...he's somewhat weird...I don't know if that's just my feeling or something else..."
"He looks mysterious to me..." Netto replied.
"H-he almost dragged me!" Yaito was annoyed.
Shun tapped Netto's shoulder and he said,
"Netto...that boy...I felt something inside him..."
"What do you feel about him?" Netto asked Shun.
"I've been seeing that boy for months in my dream after you've finished Greiga & Faltzer...He kept appearing on my dreams...I don't know why...actually, I saw him again last night staring on his family picture...I'm having an odd feeling about him..." Shun answered.
After all that chit-chat, they're now in the academy's grounds and they began to check out the bulletin boards for their respective classrooms and they looked for Year 7 or First Year (in our country)...
Here are the listings:
Code: |
CLASS: 7-S
TEACHER: Mr. Edgardo de Jesus (Zeus.EXE)
NOTE: Last name, First name format
NOTE 2: They're not yet currently arranged.
NOTE 3: (navi name) : Student's Net Navi
BOYS:
001. Kurogane, Koshiro (Artur.EXE)
002. Galang, Rayver (Macabayan.EXE)
003. Ashtonford, Rick (Arc.EXE)
004. Charleswood, Xavier (Alphus.EXE)
005. Haliwell, Erick (Deltus.EXE)
006. Wang, Chao Yu (Wu-Shi.EXE)
007. Park, Jedrick (Hwang.EXE)
008. Gottwick, Wilhelm (Sigmus.EXE)
009. Barillar, Benito (Ifrit.EXE)
010. Mercado, Joselito (Diveman.EXE)
011. Encarnacion, Agustino (Astroman.EXE)
012. Yeong Jae-han (Ii Gum.EXE)
013. Iseul Kim-goh (Hyun-Shik.EXE)
014. Tsai, Jerry (Maxi.EXE)
015. Zhou, Charles (Kilik.EXE)
GIRLS:
001. Ayanokouchi, Yaito (Glyde.EXE)
002. Rizal, Luisa (Lynette.EXE)
003. Kurogane, Ichigo (Lute.EXE)
004. Iseul Kim-tae (Uhm Ji.EXE)
005. Hau Hye-Koh (Talim.EXE)
006. Zi, Zhen Juan (Xianghua.EXE)
007. Inafune, Ayane (Siren.EXE)
008. Hakodate, Rina (Oboro.EXE)
009. Tamaki, Misako (Tsubame.EXE)
010. Anderson, Holly (Omegus.EXE)
011. Johnson, Amy (Noa.EXE)
012. Konoe, Chidori (Okuni.EXE)
013. Satsuma, Kurenai (Ageha.EXE)
014. Midou, Hana (Yaone.EXE)
015. Okinouchi, Miyuki (Alicia.EXE)
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Yaito was amazed when she saw her name placed in 7-S section. She said to Meiru,
"Finally! I’m on the cream section!"
"Good luck there! Still, we’re friends though."
Code: |
CLASS: 7-A
TEACHER: Kim Chin-Mae (Athena.EXE)
NOTE: Last name, First name format
NOTE 2: They're not yet currently arranged.
NOTE 3: (navi name) : Student's Net Navi
BOYS:
001. Huang Si-Di (Si-Hui.EXE)
002. Hikari, Netto (Rockman.EXE)
003. Oyama, Dekao (Gutsman.EXE)
004. Zhou Tian-cai (Tian-Zai.EXE)
005. Kanzaki, Hatsuya (Haru.EXE)
006. Kanzaki, Heiji (Musica.EXE)
007. Munakata, Hatoru (Sieghart.EXE)
008. Takano, Yuiichi (Jegan.EXE)
009. Hikawa, Tohru (Iceman.EXE)
010. Obihiro, Shun (C-Forte.EXE)
011. Ayanami, Hayato (Vaynard.EXE)
012. Ayanami, Atsugi (Zemeckis.EXE)
013. Ayanami, Makoto (Cai.EXE)
014. Hoshima, Kyuuta (LeagueMan.EXE)
015. Ijuin, Enzan (Blues.EXE)
GIRLS:
001. Ayanami, Chiaki (Brangien.EXE)
002. Ayanami, Seiyaa (Esmeree.EXE)
003. Kanzaki, Hitomi (Elie.EXE)
004. Sakurai, Meiru (Roll.EXE)
005. Haneda, Megumi (Lyndis.EXE)
006. Yamamoto, Kumi (Lina.EXE)
007. Yamamoto, Kuni (Fia.EXE)
008. Minamoto, Yuka (Tana.EXE)
009. Minamoto, Kairi (Neimi.EXE)
010. Gaspar, Narda (Darna.EXE)
011. Luwalhati, Tala (Krystala.EXE)
012. Oregon, Jennifer Lhyanne (Sophitia.EXE)
013. Sevilla, Lala (Femme.EXE)
014. Arashii, Yuni (Yuffie.EXE)
015. Yamada, Izumi (Tifa.EXE)
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Netto was surprised when he saw that almost all of them still stay on an A-Section but Shun has seen something odd on the list, Shun said,
"Look everyone, almost everyone have same family names...especially the Ayanamis...and the Kanzakis too..."
"Whatever they are, let's just join them if we can't beat them." Meiru said.
But they were surprised that Enzan and Kyuuta are staying with them in 7-A!
Then Mamoru came inside the school and Netto's gang saw him very well because he no longer stays in his wheelchair and he's in perfect health. Now, Mamoru looked up his name on the master list and he belongs to Section 7-C with Shuuko and others!
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CLASS: 7-C
TEACHER: Miss Ayashi Nomura (Aphrodite.EXE)
NOTE: Last name, First name format
NOTE 2: They're not yet currently arranged.
NOTE 3: (navi name) : Student's Net Navi
BOYS:
001. Kirayama, Aragoma (KingMan.EXE)
002. Shigatsumaru, Mamoru (BowlMan.EXE)
003. Ebi, Kousuke (MistMan.EXE)
004. Isamu, Mameo (BreakMan.EXE)
005. Ashrun, Dingo (TomahawkMan.EXE)
006. Matsumune, Kaiji (Squall.EXE)
007. Shiroi, Takumi (Yazzo.EXE)
008. Hojo, Ryuu (Loz.EXE)
009. Hojo, Ryou (Kadaj.EXE)
010. Meiguchi, Kazato (Ein.EXE)
011. Achibane, Gamu (Moneyman.EXE)
012. Morgan, Ed (Iruga.EXE)
013. Morgan, Jared Cedrick (Roan.EXE)
014. Lorenzo, Armando (Ramza.EXE)
015. Sato, Raidon (Keouge.EXE)
GIRLS:
001. Kido, Shuuko (AquaMan.EXE)
002. Mizutani, Aya (Ceres.EXE)
003. Hanazawa, Nami (Rinoa.EXE)
004. Shimase, Yuki (Yukino.EXE)
005. Hanazawa, Maiyu (Selphie.EXE)
006. Eun Jang Geum (Siena.EXE)
007. Shimakura, Yuri (Cierra.EXE)
008. Shimakura, Yumi (Serene.EXE)
009. Hayamoto, Karin (Iria.EXE)
010. Kimura, Sara (Judia.EXE)
011. Oimikaido, Narumi (Taki.EXE)
012. Cross, Angela Raine (Angelan.EXE)
013. Shou, Stephanie (Fei-yen.EXE)
014. Ashton, Felicia (Leviathan.EXE)
015. Griffith, Pauline (Harpuia.EXE)
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Everyone went to his or her respective classrooms...Netto and others went to their classrooms on Room 7-A and they saw unfamiliar faces...Then a blue frumpy-haired boy approached to Netto.
He has blue-framed eyeglasses, blue vest with a sword-like keychain clinging on the vest's front zipper, sky-blue long-sleeved shirt, blue long pants and he's wearing a blue shoes with built-in roller-skates in it. The boy asked Netto,
"You must be the new Net Ambassador, Netto Hikari...am I right?"
"Yeah...who are you?" Netto answered.
"Me? I'm Hatsuya. Hatsuya Kanzaki." The boy replied.
After the informal introduction, Netto went out and he saw the white-haired boy looking on the glass window but a fat boy came and then he suddenly called up his sibling and they sung "My Humps" because of his hump on his shoulder. The white-haired boy was really offended and the fat boy pulled another joke at him but he choked the fat boy and punched him badly and his sibling pulled him off and then the fat boy got angry and punched the boy three times and stomped on his hump and they ran away...
The boy suffered a beat-up and he had some bruises on his body and his skin was sweaty...Netto, Hatsuya and Shun saw him...Netto held him up and then Hatsuya wiped his dirt and sweat while Shun asked him,
"Are you okay? It seems that you were beaten up by those two..."
The boy was speechless and he's still weak so they brought him back to their classroom and then Netto asked him,
"What's your name?"
"Yuiichi...Yuiichi Takano." the white-haired boy answered.
"Are you the one running beside us a while ago?" Netto asked Yuiichi.
"Yeah..." Yuiichi answered.
While they are talking to each other, Yuiichi's hump irritated him and he's somewhat wailing in pain.
"Yuiichi! What's wrong!" Hatsuya was worried.
"My...left shoulder's aching! Can't take it anymore! Angh!" Yuiichi answered while in distress.
Yuiichi was holding his left shoulder and he cried for help but only Hatsuya, Shun and Netto were able to assist him. They brought him down to clinic and have him being checked up...
The class started without Yuiichi and they met their adviser that is actually a Funtopian. She has red hair, red long-sleeve polo shirt with six yellow buttons, red long skirt and she wears red high heels. Now she introduced herself,
"I am Kim Chin-Mae and I will be your adviser and teacher in Integrated Science and Virus Busting 7."
The teacher's table showed a screen on its tabletop and it shows the seat plan. There are thirty chairs and it can see student's name on the chair and his/her picture too. This allows the teacher to check whether her students are seating on their proper seats or not and by this way, she knows all of her students now! That means, no need for introduction!
While they are having their class orientation, an alarm went off and the e-board began to display a warning text and a clip about the current incident: It shows:
Code: | VIRUS ATTACK DETECTED TO THE CORE SERVER OF THE SCHOOL! PLEASE ALLOW ALL OF YOUR STUDENTS TO PLUG-IN AND TAKE ACTION TO THE ATTACK!
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The e-board displayed a clip, which shows the attack. There are Mettaurs riding on robots with Cannons equipped on its arms and they have no feet! They are deleting every defense program and there are Sparkys hitting six Guardian crystals that emit black homing rays that delete viruses but these Sparkys weren't hit by the defenses. These crystals protect the Core Data of the school that actually powers the school and it holds every database available in school.
Everyone all over the school plugged-in their PETs and sent their Navis to the school's network.
Inside the core server area, thousands of Net Navis appeared in the area and they began to nail down viruses but they're not actually dealing with a typical virus because these viruses were created right after the Overdrive and they are much stronger than the old ones!
Mettaurs riding in cannon-mounted robots immediately deleted many of the standard Navis from first grade to fourth grade!
On Room 7-S, a gray frumpy-haired boy wearing a cotton jacket with a golden cross on the back of his jacket commanded his Navi,
"Artur! For the sake of the school, I give you the power to eliminate all forms of evil entities! "Lightning", "Shine", Divine, "Purge", "Excalibur" and "Infinite Blessing" light tome magic chips, slot-in!"
The gray frumpy-haired boy inserted the five Light Tome chips and his Navi gained five magic attacks and he can use it anytime he wanted and it's unlimited.
Back to the network, a maroon-haired Navi dressed in white monk robe appeared and he gained a golden tome and he voiced out the holy tongues and a gold pulse enveloped him along with the New Wave viruses and these viruses were deleted in an instant but that's not all!
The Sparkys began to have robot-like bodies and they become Sparklings! These Sparklings have turtle-like steel head, big bulky spherical body with a Sparky mounted on their chest and their arms are all like lightning rods that emit purple lightning bolts and they have four legs!
These Sparklings diverted their attacks to all of the defenders including Rockman and others. They fired the monk Navi with their purple lightning attack and it got hit and thrown the monk Navi far away from the core server.
"Artur! Are you okay!" the grey frumpy-haired boy shouted.
"Koshiro! They're stronger than I thought! Where's Lute!" Artur.EXE answered.
Then a grey silk-haired fat girl approached Koshiro and actually it was his sister! The girl picked several chips and then she gave a "Recovery +1000" chip to Koshiro and she talked to Koshiro,
"Brother! Use that and heal Artur while my Lute fend off those monsters!"
"Thanks Ichigo! Artur.EXE! In the name of the school! Be replenished by this chip! Recovery +1000! Slot-in!" Koshiro said.
Koshiro inserted the chip and it healed Artur immediately to full health. Then a female purple-haired Navi wearing Feriotic robe and Feriotic skirt & stocking began to cast "Bolting" attack to 1,000 Sparklings at once but it didn't work but still Rockman.EXE & Copy-Forte.EXE appeared to assist her and they were able to weaken the Sparklings.
Then a Navi wearing a straw hat and red armor with a cape designed with flag of the Philippines came in and he gained two bolos and he stabbed two Sparklings and then his operator shouted,
"Macabayan! Show the Cybertopian pride!"
"Yes Rayver! Activate Final Event! March of the Carabaos!" Macabayan.EXE shouted.
Before the "March of the Carabaos" was initiated, Iceman.EXE and a Navi wearing white kimono with a snowflake logo on her back assisted them by freezing the Sparklings and the ice girl Navi shouted to Macabayan.EXE,
"Good luck to you and to your carabaos!"
"Yukino & Yuki! I thank you for that! Sugod na, mga kalabaw ko! (Attack now, my carabaos!)" Rayver & Macabayan.EXE shouted.
Millions of carabaos appeared behind Macabayan.EXE and the carabao stampede attack has commenced!
"March of the Carabaos" or "Carabao Stampede" allows Macabayan.EXE's cyber-carabaos run to anything, viruses or any other Navi including allies will be hit by his carabaos, so all allies are advised to fly so that they won't get hit by the carabaos.
A large green mist and being taken to other part of the area were sweeping Rockman.EXE and other Navis.
"Thank Hatoru & Sieghart for that! All of you! Ride on Macabayan's carabaos and enjoy deleting those viruses!" Kim Chin-mae said to them.
Rockman.EXE and others were taken back to the scene but they're all riding on Macabayan.EXE's carabaos and they're all equipped with Bamboo blades and they began to slash every frozen Sparkling with their bamboo blades.
However the attack doesn't stop right there because three armadas of “New Wave” viruses were detected but they are all much like Net Navis in viral form.
They are made up of 7,000 Viral-Rockman.EXEs, 14,000 Viral-Gutsman.EXEs and 21,000 Viral-Shadowman.EXEs.
The Viral-Rockman.EXEs have inverted body colors, they have red eyes and their emblems were the broken version of their original counterpart and they don’t fire RockBusters but instead, they fire Vira-Shotguns. Vira-Shotguns can cause reduction of defense and speed when this kind of attack hit a Navi.
The Viral-Gutsman.EXEs also have inverted body colors but their head became a monster’s head, their mouths were replaced with bear traps, giving them creepy look and their oxygen tank-like backpacks were replaced with Vira-Magnum turrets and their hands have rusted spikes all over them. These Vira-Magnums have viral explosion programmed on Magnum shots. It doesn’t only crack areas but it also cause Navi poisoning and attribute reduction.
Then the Viral-ShadowMan.EXEs on the other hand also have inverted body colors and they have Vira-Muramasas and rusted shurikens. These Vira-Muramasas can cause a Navi some physical deformities when being stabbed or being slashed by this viral weapon. Their rusted shurikens have viral explosion programmed in them and if a Navi was directly hit, he can be deleted immediately or experience attribute reduction.
The Viral-Shadowman.EXEs surrounded the Core Server and they began to destroy every Guardian crystal surrounded on the Core Data while the Viral-Rockman.EXEs & Viral-Gutsmans eliminate every defending Navis on the area.
There is a Navi dressed in green tuxedo carrying a large suitcase and then he opened it and he generated a large rocket launcher and he loaded the launcher with paper money on it! Then the Navi asked his operator,
"Gamu! Prepare two "Mammonite" chips and a "Zenny Storm" chip and load it so that I can nail down those ninjas down!"
Then a green frumpy-haired boy prepared "Mammonite" and "Zenny Storm" chips and inserted it on his green PET.
"Moneyman! Initiate Ultra Zenny Bomb advance!" Gamu shouted.
"Yes sir!" Moneyman.EXE shouted.
Moneyman.EXE pointed his rocket launcher to the sky and he fired the Zenny Bomb and it rained thousands of Zenny Bolts hitting all of the Viral-Shadowman.EXEs!
Then the Viral-Gutsman.EXEs were punching every Navi present. Even Rockman.EXE was also being attacked by Viral-Gutsman.EXEs but then two Navis helped him. One of them has a large sword while the other has a silver spear on his hand.
The Navi with a large sword has white Haru Glory-ish hair; he's wearing black jacket with a blue backpack, and blue & white suit with a symbol of a gray cross on its chest and blue boots.
Then the other with a silver spear has a black Musica-ish hair, he wears a brown jacket with a silver backpack, white suit with a symbol of a silver musical note and he has silver gauntlets and boots.
"Hatsuya! Is that your Navi?" Netto asked Hatsuya.
"The one with the sword or with the spear?" Hatsuya asked him too.
"The one with a sword and he got a funny white hair!" Netto answered.
"I operate him. He's Haru.EXE as in Haru Glory.EXE. The guy with a spear, that's my brother Heiji's Navi, Musica.EXE." Hatsuya answered.
"Hatsuya! Netto! This is Heiji Kanzaki! We'll be forced to use Wide chip attacks on these brutes!" Hatsuya's brother with blue-wind hair said.
Heiji Kanzaki was dressed in blue jacket with a javelin key-chain attached on the jacket's zipper and he also wears eyeglasses and blue pants like his younger brother.
Haru.EXE transformed his large sword into an anchor-shaped two-handed sword then Rockman.EXE turned his sword into a Life-Sword and Musica.EXE's silver spear transformed into a long-bladed cleaver sword
Haru.EXE gashed five Viral-Gutsman.EXEs with his blue anchor sword then Musica.EXE swiped them with his cleaver sword and they got erased then finally Rockman.EXE cut nine Viral-Gutsman.EXEs into halves with his Life-Sword.
There are still more enemies to delete and the defending army of Navis were all exhausted but Roll and others have just arrived. Roll unleashed a barrage of hearts to all Net Navis around her, giving them life, recovering their damages & restoring their statuses and they're all ready to battle once again.
Now, a Net Navi wearing green Chinese clothing appeared and he summoned a giant ba-gua and then he painted the ba-gua with brown & red paint and he let a Viral-Rockman.EXE hit the ba-gua and the army of Viral-Rockman.EXEs ended up to be shaken and being dropped to the hole of nothingness and the only remaining are the army of Viral-Gutsman.EXEs!
"There's no end of defeating these clones!" Dekao complained.
"Don't lose heart!" Shun shouted to Dekao.
Then a blue river-haired girl came inside & plugged in her Navi into the network. She also has eyeglasses and she wears blue long-sleeved jersey shirt, blue cotton knee-length skirt and blue mink shoes. Her Navi looked like a ROSE Online dealer character.
"Don't worry! Fia, Lina, Ein, Elie and all of us will support you! As our siblings say, 'the more, the merrier'! So let's finish this show!"
Back to the network, three female Navis appeared.
One of them has a long green hair, she wears white, long-sleeve uniform with green, long checkered skirt and she holds a green-bladed beam rapier.
The other one has orange hair, she wears yellow sleeveless top, yellow skirt and her legs were covered with black stockings and she has a beam crossbow.
Then the third one has a short red hair and she's wearing a Dealer character costume from ROSE Online.
"Elie! Good luck! Fia & Lina will cover you!" the blue-haired girl said.
That was Hitomi Kanzaki, the only girl in the Kanzaki siblings. Hitomi picked up five chips and these are: "Gloria Gun", "Chronium Bullets", "Gloria Rifle Data", "Gloria Silencio" and "Laser Sight". These chips enhances Elie's default weapon that is actually a handgun. She inserted these chips and Elie.EXE's weapon suddenly transformed into a long, blue rifle!
Lina.EXE fired her crossbow to the first line of Viral-Gutsman.EXEs and she actually used her pierce shot to the first line.
"Nice job, Lina!" Kumi said.
Fia on the other line of the army, she executed three moves at once!
"Fia! Risoluto, Brilliante & Cadenza! May your holy blade cleave these viral abominations!" Kuni shouted.
Fia.EXE stabbed the second line of Viral-Gutsman.EXEs and she finally slashed and divided them into halves and they were deleted.
Then two female super-hero Navis attacked the last line of the army and they were able to delete them with their ultimate moves.
Nothing's left and the data is still intact.
After the New Wave attack...
Everyone all over the school rejoiced for their victory over the New Wave. Koshiro & Ichigo went to Room 7-A and they congratulate Netto & Rockman.EXE, along with his gang's assistance.
Kim Chin-mae was glad to see their assistance and the battle ended here...
Meanwhile, in the school's clinic...
Yuiichi was lying on the infirmary's bed and he looked blankly on the roof and he mumbled,
"Shun...Hatsuya...Netto...Thanks to your kindness..."
Suddenly, his lump on his left shoulder irritated him again, screaming in pain and he suddenly got a "glimpse of tomorrow"...
Seven flags...Seven large contingents...marching towards the city...they have seven behemoths behind them...
Who or what are these seven contingents? Are they the new batch of adversaries to face? Now Netto's gang and his new classmates were able to defend the core data, does this mean that they'll gain new comrades to face the adversaries? Find out about those new comrades on the third episode of Rockman EXE Overdrive! Digital Revolution, 003: New Comrades!
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Rockman.EXE: "Finally! I'm not alone in facing our adversaries!"
Haru.EXE: "Yeah! I'm on your side, Rockman!"
Rockman.EXE: "Haru! From now on, we'll finish them off together!"
*Musica, Elie and hundreds of Net Navis came*
All: "United we stand, divided we fall! Remember we'll finish this together!"
Elie.EXE: "Play our new ending song!"
*Plays "Higher & Higher" theme from Groove Adventure Rave*
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Apocalypse.EXE: "Enjoy while you can! 'Cuz Sigma will wipe you out from our table!"
Sigma.EXE: "Do we have our theme song too?"
*Serenade.EXE slaps Sigma.EXE*
Serenade.EXE: "We don't need any fancy theme songs! We're evil!"
Sigma.EXE: "B-but I want to have one!"
Apocalypse.EXE: "All right! Take this one!"
*Throws a disc of "Pinoy Ako" Volume Two to Sigma.EXE*
Sigma.EXE: "Pinoy Ako?" (I'm A Filipino?)
*Sigma.EXE cries*
Sigma.EXE: *Sob* "I'm not a Filipino to have this one! Besides Pinoy Big Brother might slap my hiney!"
~ CUT IT OUT, ALL RIGHT! I'M CLOSING THE SHOW! :grr: ~ _________________ Rockman.EXE Level-Up! coming soon! Work in progress to be exact! |
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kram_elbog Cross Fusion!
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Interesting chatper though I noticed one misspelling of a character's last name and one wrong last name. Aragoma, his last name is Torakichi. And you mispelled Yaito's last name it is Ayanokouji, not Ayanokouchi. But other than that this was an excellent chapter. _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
Kamen Rider Rockman(AU, Ryuusei Spoilers)
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Mugen.exe The Original Amish Technogeek!
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Cool chapter. I liked the names you gave to navis in the list of students navis... I saw some FF 7 and Rave Master character-names alongside the Rockman... also some from Saiyuki and Samurai Deeper Kyo? Wow, a lot of different animes... Ein too? The dog from Cowboy Bebop? Thought that was a bit odd, but funny.
Edit- Ah, I see. Ein from Riviera. Makes a heck of a lot more sense than that other Ein, lol! _________________
False Swipe is a great finishing move!
Witty robots, spunky orphans, and invincible pilots, this link's for you! A Gundam RP
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Hatsuya Kanzaki Net Savior
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this is Ein that I'm talking about. _________________ Rockman.EXE Level-Up! coming soon! Work in progress to be exact! |
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SPECIAL ANNOUNCEMENT:
Next week, I might put a one-week stop for this fan fiction series just to give way to some of my Holy Week Special fictions... (PROMISE BROKEN!)
SOME JIB-JABS:
There are also game characters as well, from "Fire Emblem" to "Riviera the Promised Land".
003: New Comrades
Last time on Rockman EXE Overdrive, Netto and his gang has just met several new comrades and a mysterious boy named Yuiichi Takano. Then they all fought against the New Wave viruses and then they encountered new kind of enemies...and now, time to meet the new comrades...
Second day of classes and they're not going to experience an ordinary class...
Netto and others were now on their respective classrooms and suddenly, a song was played and it was entitled, "We are the Stars". Netto asked Hatsuya about it,
"Hatsuya, do you have any idea about that music?"
"I don't have one but someone wants us." Hatsuya replied.
Suddenly, Yuiichi appeared right in front of them and he spoke to them,
"Netto...Hatsuya...that's actually a signal...a signal for all of us..."
"Yuiichi? Where did you get that idea?" Netto asked.
"From my head of course." Yuiichi replied.
"W-what! Are you some kinda psychic!" Netto was surprised.
"Nope. How come you're so clairvoyant, Yuiichi?" Hatsuya asked.
"It's just a gift." Yuiichi answered.
Suddenly, a teacher announced something via speakers everywhere,
"Attention all Grade Seven students, please proceed to the tennis court at once."
Everyone in the Seventh Grade came out like there's a movie star to see outside, then Netto joined them.
What they saw in the tennis court, they found a white haired girl wearing white office uniform and she has a wireless microphone and she announced,
"Grade seven student-NetBattlers, I am Dahlia Marquez, your academy principal. I am here to announce that all of the NetBattlers who defended the academy's network will have a very special class starting today and now, it starts today!"
Everyone were mumbling about the announcement and then the entire tennis court became a large lift that will act as an entrance to a secret base. The tennis court started to move downward and then the students were wandering where they'll go.
Meiru asked Hitomi about what's going on in this school,
"Hitomi, what's with this school anyway?"
"Meiru-chan, this academy was actually a school with a large base beneath this academy. It is actually a Netbattling headquarters and this is made not only for Electopian NetBattlers like you but also to anyone all around the world. The base was designed by our family, the Ayanami family, the Kuroganes and Netto's dad, Dr. Hikari." Hitomi replied.
Hitomi's PET vibrated and it was Elie.EXE calling her attention and she talked to Hitomi,
"Hitomi! Great! Now Meiru & Roll-chan know more about our school! Great job, Hitomi...As a consequence, I might lock-up your chip slots and I'll be forced to wear a PristonTale Archer costume with matching -50% HP, +99.9% speed only. Do you want that to happen to you and to me?" Elie.EXE scolded Hitomi.
"Elie-chan! Don't do that or Musica and I will..." Haru.EXE threatened Elie.EXE
"Or what!" Elie.EXE interrupted.
"We'll beat you up with GumBlades!" Haru.EXE & Musica.EXE answered.
"Eh!? GumBlades? Is that blade from Adventure Quest? Where did you get those AQ chips?" Hitomi asked.
"Hatoru downloaded those datas for us!" Heiji answered.
"Ha-ha-hatoru!? That green-haired geeky athlete! I'm requestin' an Einherjar, a Lorelei and a Skadi!" Hitomi replied madly to them.
The principal catched their attention and she shouted,
"Silencio! Silence all of you and we're almost close to the sanctuary!!!"
Everyone silenced themselves and they found themselves inside a large complex...
"Amazing...who made this large base?" Netto, Dekao and Shun asked each other.
"This is our base, the United Nations Net Defense Association Mother Base! This base was constructed by the Kurogane Construction Company then the Kanzakis were the ones behind the network infrastructure and then the Ayanamis were the brains for the computers placed and the programming and the rest were answered by Mr. Yuiichiro Hikari, Armand Carter and Rod Aaronson."
Yuiichi began to have headaches again and this time he began to see a lot of images...
A large satellite with five long barreled cannons, twenty five TV stations being hit by a large beam blast, several countries burning and a large man wearing silver armor with a pair of angel and devil wings then he saw a blond haired man wearing a black tuxedo.
"Rod Aaronson...that blond-haired man! He can't be! He's the one who designed a weapon in space!" Yuiichi mumbled.
Hatsuya heard him and then he asked Yuiichi about what he mumbled,
"Yuiichi, what are you saying?"
"Nothing...just some familiarity...I've been watching sci-fi movies and actually..." Yuiichi replied.
Everyone walked until they were now on a large conference room and then there are five people standing in front of them, there's Dr. Hikari, General Kanzaki, Commander Ayanami, Dr. Kurogane and Dahlia.
General Kanzaki wears a blue army general uniform; he has blue hair, silver-framed eyeglasses. Commander Ayanami wears a silver army commander uniform, he has silver frumpy hair and he wears a gold-framed eyeglasses. Dr. Kurogane wears a green labcoat and he has long beard and then he has a silver walking stick held by his left hand.
"Welcome to the UNNDA Mother Base! I am Doctor Yuiichiro Hikari. I am here to announce that you were able to prove yourselves as heroes and heroines of the Net Society! This is the time to know each other! Everyone, seat down!" Dr. Hikari gladly announced.
"Now, as I call your name, please stand up and introduce yourself to everyone!"
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001. Kurogane, Koshiro (Artur.EXE)
002. Galang, Rayver (Macabayan.EXE)
003. Ashtonford, Rick (Arc.EXE)
004. Charleswood, Xavier (Alphus.EXE)
005. Haliwell, Erick (Deltus.EXE)
006. Wang, Chao Yu (Wu-Shi.EXE)
007. Park, Jedrick (Hwang.EXE)
008. Gottwick, Wilhelm (Sigmus.EXE)
009. Barillar, Benito (Ifrit.EXE)
010. Mercado, Joselito (Diveman.EXE)
011. Encarnacion, Agustino (Astroman.EXE)
012. Yeong Jae-han (Ii Gum.EXE)
013. Iseul Kim-goh (Hyun-Shik.EXE)
014. Tsai, Jerry (Maxi.EXE)
015. Zhou, Charles (Kilik.EXE)
016. Ayanokouji, Yaito (Glyde.EXE)
017. Rizal, Luisa (Lynette.EXE)
018. Kurogane, Ichigo (Lute.EXE)
019. Iseul Kim-tae (Uhm Ji.EXE)
020. Hau Hye-Koh (Talim.EXE)
021. Zi, Zhen Juan (Xianghua.EXE)
022. Inafune, Ayane (Siren.EXE)
023. Hakodate, Rina (Oboro.EXE)
024. Tamaki, Misako (Tsubame.EXE)
025. Anderson, Holly (Omegus.EXE)
026. Johnson, Amy (Noa.EXE)
027. Konoe, Chidori (Okuni.EXE)
028. Satsuma, Kurenai (Ageha.EXE)
029. Midou, Hana (Yaone.EXE)
030. Okinouchi, Miyuki (Alicia.EXE)
031. Huang Si-Di (Si-Hui.EXE)
032. Hikari, Netto (Rockman.EXE)
033. Oyama, Dekao (Gutsman.EXE)
034. Zhou Tian-cai (Tian-Zai.EXE)
035. Kanzaki, Hatsuya (Haru.EXE)
036. Kanzaki, Heiji (Musica.EXE)
037. Munakata, Hatoru (Sieghart.EXE)
038. Takano, Yuiichi (Jegan.EXE)
039. Hikawa, Tohru (Iceman.EXE)
040. Obihiro, Shun (C-Forte.EXE)
041. Ayanami, Hayato (Vaynard.EXE)
042. Ayanami, Atsugi (Zemeckis.EXE)
043. Ayanami, Makoto (Cai.EXE)
044. Hoshima, Kyuuta (LeagueMan.EXE)
045. Ijuin, Enzan (Blues.EXE)
046. Ayanami, Chiaki (Brangien.EXE)
047. Ayanami, Seiyaa (Esmeree.EXE)
048. Kanzaki, Hitomi (Elie.EXE)
049. Sakurai, Meiru (Roll.EXE)
050. Haneda, Megumi (Lyndis.EXE)
051. Yamamoto, Kumi (Lina.EXE)
052. Yamamoto, Kuni (Fia.EXE)
053. Minamoto, Yuka (Tana.EXE)
054. Minamoto, Kairi (Neimi.EXE)
055. Gaspar, Narda (Darna.EXE)
056. Luwalhati, Tala (Krystala.EXE)
057. Oregon, Jennifer Lhyanne (Sophitia.EXE)
058. Sevilla, Lala (Femme.EXE)
059. Arashii, Yuni (Yuffie.EXE)
060. Yamada, Izumi (Tifa.EXE)
061. Torakichi, Aragoma (KingMan.EXE)
062. Shigatsumaru, Mamoru (BowlMan.EXE)
063. Ebi, Kousuke (MistMan.EXE)
064. Isamu, Mameo (BreakMan.EXE)
065. Ashrun, Dingo (TomahawkMan.EXE)
066. Matsumune, Kaiji (Squall.EXE)
067. Shiroi, Takumi (Yazzo.EXE)
068. Hojo, Ryuu (Loz.EXE)
069. Hojo, Ryou (Kadaj.EXE)
070. Meiguchi, Kazato (Ein.EXE)
071. Achibane, Gamu (Moneyman.EXE)
072. Morgan, Ed (Iruga.EXE)
073. Morgan, Jared Cedrick (Roan.EXE)
074. Lorenzo, Armando (Ramza.EXE)
075. Sato, Raidon (Keouge.EXE)
076. Kido, Shuuko (AquaMan.EXE)
077. Mizutani, Aya (Ceres.EXE)
078. Hanazawa, Nami (Rinoa.EXE)
079. Shimase, Yuki (Yukino.EXE)
080. Hanazawa, Maiyu (Selphie.EXE)
081. Eun Jang Geum (Siena.EXE)
082. Shimakura, Yuri (Cierra.EXE)
083. Shimakura, Yumi (Serene.EXE)
084. Hayamoto, Karin (Iria.EXE)
085. Kimura, Sara (Judia.EXE)
086. Oimikaido, Narumi (Taki.EXE)
087. Cross, Angela Raine (Angelan.EXE)
088. Shou, Stephanie (Fei-yen.EXE)
089. Ashton, Felicia (Leviathan.EXE)
090. Griffith, Pauline (Harpuia.EXE)
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Character introductions!: (This might be a little like Alice Academy!)
The Monk: Koshiro Kurogane and Artur.EXE
Koshiro Kurogane, a 14-year old student of Class 7-S. He one of the top 50 of the diligent students in this batch. He knows how to speak Latin, Filipino, and a few Spanish. He's also the president of Interact Club. His parents were Kunihiko and Maria. Koshiro has actually a Cybertopian blood. He was actually born in North Calltown, Cybertopia One and he was raised in Akitamane, Electopia. His dad, Kunihiko is an architect of Kurogane Construction Company. He (Kunihiko) actually designed this headquarters. His mother is a talk show host of EBC (Electopian Broadcasting Corporation). Her show is "Thursdays with Maria" and you can watch it every Thursday 7:30pm on EBC.
More about Koshiro, his hair is gray frumpy hair, he often wears a cotton jacket with a golden cross on the back of his jacket and brown long jeans.
Artur.EXE is Koshiro Kurogane's Net Navi. His design was based from a character named Artur of Fire Emblem Sacred Stones. Artur.EXE can be oftenly seen by the following: maroon-haired, dressed in white monk robe and you can spot him often in Cyber-Churches in Electopia. He uses holy magic attacks and he can support his comrades.
The Katipunero: Rayver Galang and Macabayan.EXE
Rayver Galang is a 13-year old Cybertopian student in Class 7-S. He's also one of the top 50 diligent students in this school in this batch. He won recently in Electopia Quiz Bee last year and he excels in athletics. His parents were Erlinda and Edgardo Galang. Erlinda Galang is a novelist and she wrote several novels and she was the "Tom Clancy of Cybertopia". Edgardo Galang is a movie star, mostly seen in Cybertopian action films and he's the "Jackie Chan of Cybertopia". Rayver was actually born in Southern Leyte, Cybertopia One.
His physical appearance, he has brown short hair, his skin was somewhat tanned and he often wears green cotton shirt, blue vest and brown long pants.
Macabayan.EXE is Rayver's Net Navi. He has a straw hat and red armor with a cape designed with flag of the Philippines. About this Net Navi, he was actually designed by Rayver himself, showing his loyalty to his own country. His attacks are bolo rush, bolo poke and he has signature attacks, Carabao Stampede, National Slash and Carabao Rocket.
A Fencer: Rick Ashtonford and Arc.EXE
Rick Ashtonford is a 14-year old student and he's a proud Creamlander. He's a bit mysterious like Yuiichi and he's a bit an online game otaku. He also designs RPG games and he excels in drawing. By the way, Rick had a dark past, his parents were brutally killed by a group of thieves who robbed their bank...Now, he lives with his uncle and each time he finishes his home-made RPG, his uncle's company answers his reproduction cost. He has blond, frumpy hair, he wears eyeglasses and he looks like a young nobleman.
Arc.EXE is a good fencer like Fia (from Riviera). However, Arc has some kind of unpleasing personality...He looks like Cervantes of Soul Calibur but he looks more human and younger than Cervantes.
[[others will be introduced in this post if I have time, I need to post the fourth chapter before I go play Maple Story!]] _________________ Rockman.EXE Level-Up! coming soon! Work in progress to be exact! |
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Hatsuya Kanzaki Net Savior
Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 129 Location: Cybertopia (Philippines)
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Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 7:36 pm Post subject: |
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If this fan fiction shall have its anime debut, I wish KINYA should sing the opening theme for this fic series while Sam Milby & Say Alonzo (from Philippines) sing the closing theme.
This episode shall replace the former episode “Accretoids”. I’ve ran off several ideas for that episode, and I haven’t finished the third episode of Rockman EXE Overdrive! Digital Revolution (003: New Comrades) due to several reasons, I’m playing Flyff actually and one more thing, I’m on my cousin’s house and my PC’s dead!
The grand generals were Dark Rockman.EXE, Serenade.EXE, Sigma.EXE, Slur.EXE and Forte.EXE...
There are characters in this fan fiction series that cannot be described in this story like Babel because I have no idea on how can I describe him in this fan fiction. There are characters that you should search it on Google Images.
004: Show Off Your Feats!
Previously on Rockman EXE Overdrive: Digital Revolution, Netto and the original gang met new friends and comrades…each one of them excels in various fields! While all of them are introducing themselves in front of their comrades, some of them were shocked, some were happy, and the rest have blended feelings…
During the introduction of the new NetBattlers, their enemies were also recruiting comrades…
Somewhere in Flyff Network-Saint Morning Domain, Apocalypse.EXE and Sigma.EXE were able to round up seven lesser generals…Now, the first lesser general stepped in front of the grand generals,
"I am Babel.EXE of Priston Tale Network; I am one of the greatest enemies that they’ll face!"
Babel.EXE belongs to Priston Tale and he’s one of the bosses of that game, he’s much like a steel monster with wings.
Then a monster lesser general carrying a scythe stepped in front of them also and he introduced himself,
"I am Baphomet.EXE of Ragnarok Network; If Babel can lead machine cyber-entities, I shall lead cyber-monsters instead!"
Baphomet.EXE belongs to Ragnarok Online, the final boss of the game, he’s half-goat, having hooves and brown fur and he has long horns.
Now, the third general walked in front of them and he introduced himself,
"I am Zasalamel.EXE and I belong to Soul Calibur Network! I’m more powerful than these monsters around here! By my Soul Edge-embedded scythe, I shall delete Rockman EXE and others at all cost by this blade!"
Zasalamel.EXE belongs to Soul Calibur, he wears black monk hood, black monk robe and black monk shoes and he carries a scythe with flesh all over it but its blade is plasma-based.
Now, a female Navi stepped in front of the grand generals and she introduced herself to the grand generals,
"I am Eve.EXE...I came from Parasite Eve Network...Let us bring havoc to both worlds..."
Eve belongs to Parasite EVE made by Squaresoft. She has long hair, reddish flesh, she's somewhat entangled by plants and she has long hands and she floats! (This is better if you'll go googling this character)
Now, a horned robot Navi stepped in front of them and now he introduced himself,
"I am Cador of Brigandine Network. I can support all of our allies with dark power..."
Cador belongs to Brigandine. He's the dark knight that wields halberds and scythes!
Now, a human Navi came in,
"I am Bakura...I'm from Yu-Gi-Oh Network. May the monsters haunt both worlds!"
Bakura is from Yu-Gi-Oh Duel Monsters. His looks are now in his Egyptian form instead.
Then the final lesser general came out,
"I am Lightning Revenant of the Warcraft Network! Let's enjoy bringing terror to both worlds!"
Lightning Revenant is one of the Scourge heroes from Defense of the Ancients (DotA) in Warcraft III Frozen Throne.
After the introduction of the lesser generals, Apocalypse.EXE commanded the Lightning Revenant to plan his attacks to the entire world...
"Lightning Revenant, Razor...I command you to refer every hero from your network and bring terror to this world...but first, I'll give out some recommendations...Look at the screen and see them..."
===BEGIN SCREEN===
Lightning Revenant, Razor: Drain every power plant's energy reserves to power Dark Gaia Cannon.
Twin Head Dragon, Jakiro: Bring extreme heat to the world by hacking all environment systems.
Dragon Knight, Davion: Full frontal assault against all parties connected to Rockman.EXE
Avatar of Vengeance, Mercurial: "Hack all minds and thoughts of all leaders all over the world and some time, we'll manipulate them, then the world. ~Said by Sigma.EXE
Bane Elemental, Atropos: Strike eternal fear to all elite NetBattlers!
===END SCREEN===
"Pah! What the hell is that Dark Gaia Cannon thingy!?" Razor.EXE asked.
"Dark Gaia Cannon is our ultimate weapon against the human race! It can fire seventy enormous beam shots at once and it follows its target, like a guided missile! Splendid eh!" Apocalypse.EXE answered.
Meanwhile...in Cyber Town Academy, Room 7-A...[another part will be posted today!]
(To be editted later, but it would impossible, by the 24th day of April 2006, I cannot post EXE Overdrive fics for months!) _________________ Rockman.EXE Level-Up! coming soon! Work in progress to be exact! |
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Hatsuya Kanzaki Net Savior
Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 129 Location: Cybertopia (Philippines)
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Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2006 10:07 pm Post subject: |
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Another part of "Show Off Your Feats"...
Hatsuya and others were comparing their chip libraries while Yuiichi writes stories on his large notebook, then the Chinese students were talking to each other, others were chatting to other students with different nationalities...just like the old classroom days...
Hatoru approached Hatsuya while he and his gang were talking about their chips.
"Hatsuya! I challenge you to a NetBattle!" Hatoru challenged Hatsuya.
"For real...well, let's see what's under your sleeves today!" Hatsuya gladly replied.
Hitomi picked up here NetArena Orb machine and then she allowed them to plug-in there and they started their battle...
Sieghart.EXE summons his Cron Staff and he casted five earth balls and he was able to hit Haru.EXE with it.
"You're getting good, Hatoru!" Hatsuya said.
"Hmph! That was nothing!" Hatoru replied.
However, Haru has some of his tricks on its own...Haru turned his Zweihander Ten Commandments into two pistol swords and he gunned down Sieghart and does Cervantes' Killer X move on him...
"Hehehe! I got ya!" Hatsuya happily said. _________________ Rockman.EXE Level-Up! coming soon! Work in progress to be exact!
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Sol Fanfic Guru
Age: 37 Joined: 02 Aug 2005 Posts: 685 Location: Where all the badfics roam
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First off, I must ask if your latest update is part of one chapter. If it is, I must ask why you didn't edit that last piece you posted into your last post. While it is acceptable to double post for updates, I see no reason in doing it if your latest piece is short enough to fit into the last part reasonably, especially if you said you were going to edit it later. It's asked to keep one chapter in one post, rather than splinter it. It gets real messy and confusing.
As for your fiction, only three pieces of advice. One, don't include long lists. They slow the pace horrendously and just look ugly. Another is don't tell people to go google for character descriptions. It is not only lazy of the author themselves, but it's rather vexing to the reader. The final piece is to stick to one tense. Constant present and past tense mix up is confusing as all hell.
Finally, I don't know how I missed this before, but DON'T double post if you don't have any updates. You have been warned. _________________
<3 Planty~
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Hatsuya Kanzaki Net Savior
Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 129 Location: Cybertopia (Philippines)
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Posted: Mon May 08, 2006 4:10 am Post subject: |
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[[sorry! another splintered portion of the 4th episode]]
OFF-FIC: Is Hatsuya really good in NetBattling? This is maybe superfluous to ask...Sorry for hanging the series! :chat:
Another EXE-Speech:
"Let us all make a petition of continuation of the EXE series! This bothers us all! Let us wish that we'll still see him in his Junior High days or even in his College Years!"
EXE series should not end at all costs! Would Capcom show Netto's Junior High (or Middle School or 1st-4th Years or High School Days!?) or even his College Years?
Let's make a petition in making EXE grow...
::RESUME BROADCAST!::
Back to the NetBattling Part, Hatoru's shedding sweat because of their abilities and suddenly, the NetBattling part ended up by a special teacher coming in their class room...
It was a fair-skinned Cybertopian teacher and he appears that he's actually a scientist in disguise...
"Hi! I am Enrico Encila of North Calltown. I will be your new science teacher for this year. Just call me Rico. All right then, let's begin our class by telling you the following requirements..."
While Rico was writing down the requirements on the board, Dekao and Netto were passing notes to each other...
[[To tell the truth, I have no time in continuing Overdrive series and one more thing, I can only do this almost continiously if I have my PC fixed...I can't do this on Net Cafes or any PC centers or in other's PC...forgive me, Overdrive Readers...]] _________________ Rockman.EXE Level-Up! coming soon! Work in progress to be exact! |
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