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PostPosted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 1:47 am    Post subject: RockMan color Reply with quote



took the drawing I did, and tried my hand at coloring. I'd say it was better than the Roll Color.

thanks for looking. :]
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 9:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This looks pretty good! Although, I think it should be in the Fanart Section.
I like how buff he looks, it gives him a sense of heroism. One bit of advice though, though this may be your style, the ear piece looks quite big.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 12:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, very nice! I like the lighting and how shiny it looks. One thing that somewhat sticks out in the picture is his chin-- it looks like it's sort of... jutting out a bit. Also, as Jenova mentioned, his earpiece is a little big. Other than that, I think it's awesome. Keep up the great work! ^^
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 5:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That is nice pic, but...something about his chin and his overall figure makes him look like a different person instead of Rockman...=| And as Jenova already mentioned...The earpiece seems to be a bit big, but maybe that's just me.


And I may be out on a limb here, but aren't you supposed to keep all of your fanart in one thread? =|
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 11:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

for some reason, my fan art threads are locked. Sad

Don't know why.

Yeah that blasted chin! Laughing
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 11:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think the reason the chin looks odd is because the mouth is too small and placed to high on his face.

It looks awesome though. The shining effect you did looks great. You need to work on making your pencil/pen lines a bit darker and not leaving them so grey.
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 2:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote



How about this one? :]

I drew this one, and everthing else also today.

thanks for looking. Laughing
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 2:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You need to balance your tones, the lighter colours are far to bright in comparison to the jumpsuit. Your basic lineart isn't bad though, proportions are generally okay although some of it is a little too straight. You need to practice drawing curves and bending lines. One last point, the strip down the side of the jumpsuit isn't reflective that I'm aware of, just be careful with that in future.

I know I just took apart your work, but don't worry it's a good thing not a bad thing. There's a lot of good work in it, so I feel more confident about giving a proper critique.
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 10:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

very valid points.

That stripe down the side, the reflective part I got the idea from the picture I was using for reference of his design.

BUt yeah, I'll mess with the colors like you suggest.

Always been one open for critques.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 12:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote



just the uncolored version.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 10:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is very nice! You did a pretty good job with the lineart, and the colored version isn't bad.
I really love how you do the reflective bits, it adds a nice sense of style.
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