OF: Fragment [Sp (fantasy), AA, PG]

Iceman.EXE

Yes, it's true. Iceman writes. o_o And since it's summer, I'm writing some original fiction, just to sort of expand my writing capabilities. It's not something I do often. XD

Prologue:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/34286433/
Chapter One:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/34287197/

Please comment either here or on DeviantART. ^^; It helps me improve my writing, especially if it's critique.
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Neko · Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 9:14 pm Post subject:

Well, I beta'ed this, but still I think it's a wonderful story.

Keep it up, I'm sure it'll be one of those 'watch the writer get better as it goes on' stories.
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Iceman.EXE · Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 6:09 pm Post subject:

Chapter Two's up.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/34981966/

Sorry about the delays, I had to go out of town. The majority of this was written in...half an hour, I think? I got inspired. Anyways, enjoy, and please comment and critique.
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Iceman.EXE · Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 12:52 pm Post subject:

Chapter Three is up now.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/36406663/
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