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Featherdust
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Well, I already commented in your journal, but I figured I'd make a longer one here since you asked for suggestions/critique/stuff like that. x3
For one thing, it's hilarious-- you definitely were successful in the humor factor, that's for sure. *snrk* I just can't stop laughing over the scene where the little guy (I keep forgetting his name) is pounding on Shademan's legs and yelling at him. I love it. n.n In the first few pages of the comic, the lineart was a bit sketchy, but it improved later on, so it doesn't serve much of a problem. I really don't have any major nitpicks. You're doing an awesome job with it so far. ^^
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Malik
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| Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 9:19 pm Post subject: |
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Er, no, you've got to get it under 75 KB D:
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Elizabeth
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| Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 9:39 pm Post subject: |
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IceMan.EXE: Thank you!
Featherdust: Thanks! I like that scene too. The little boy's name is Maxie, by the way. I haven't had as many chances to slip his name into the dialogue, what with Minie being paralyzed with fear and all.
Malik: I know, that's why I replaced the image in my sig with the optimized version when you pointed out my mistake. It should be about 64 KB now. |
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Malik
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| Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 11:59 pm Post subject: |
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Ah, for a while it still said it was over. It's fine now :3
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Elizabeth
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| Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 6:04 pm Post subject: |
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| I'm glad it's okay! I'm rather fond of that little website button. |
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Elizabeth
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 1:18 am Post subject: |
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[deviantArt] [Sheezy Art] Poor lonely Forte ... don't worry, I'll keep you company! *snuggles*
I drew this a long time ago on the REO Oekaki board. I had to use PrtScn to copy it and save it on my computer because PaintBBS messed up and wouldn't let me submit. Then I just forgot about it until iI looked through my harddrive and found it an hour or two ago.
PS: If anyone bookmarked my webcomic back when I announced it in July, the address has changed. I edited the post announcing it to use the new address. |
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