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Powerstonemaster Net Battler
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Powerstonemaster Net Battler
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Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 9:38 am Post subject: |
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sorry for the double post but this should make it easier to see
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ShawEXE
Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 44 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 10:40 am Post subject: |
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The drawings themselves are really good.
However, I think the animation jumps around too much...^^'
Not that I can do any better, but besides that, it´s real good stuff! ; P
That face and hand is awesome ^^' _________________ I´m a layer abuser XD
Formely known as ShawuEXE
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anime21 Net Official
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 351 Location: somewhere out there.
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Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 2:04 pm Post subject: |
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I like how everything moves smoothly, they thing is that the picture is ... not in the same spot each time. That is the hard part of animation, keeping it in the same spot. I suggest having a light box to help you draw of the window or some source of light to help you see the previous picture so that you can have him in the same area. It is a great start though ^-^ _________________
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Powerstonemaster Net Battler
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anime21 Net Official
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Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 2:47 pm Post subject: |
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nice progress. I like it. One thing though, the drawings are a bit light and the image sizes are different for all of them. Because of the different image sizes, people will be drawn to the missing spots in your animation rather then the animation itself. Good luck with trying to fix it. It is turning out really well. _________________
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Powerstonemaster Net Battler
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 12:56 pm Post subject: |
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yeah, i hope to ink it later and give it a splash of color, thanx |
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Nazne Shukei - Hakuteiken
Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Posts: 1133
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 8:58 pm Post subject: |
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The artwork itself is seriously cool. O.o Although you may want to do a bit of tracing in areas to make sure it doesn't jump around, like anime said. And maybe a few more drawings inbetween some of those, so it doesn't appear as choppy.
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Powerstonemaster Net Battler
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Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2005 2:31 pm Post subject: |
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hmm, yeah i see your point and i hope to do that when i get more time
http://xs.to/xs.php?h=xs22&d=05135&f=wizardcast.gif
heres what i've got so far, i tried adding in some more inbetween scenes and such...
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shadien Net Agent
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 218 Location: Sudbury, Ontario
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Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2005 3:23 pm Post subject: |
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I think It is ... Great. I know how difficult it is to make amimation but there is one thing you can fix. I think that his hand closes to slow. |
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Powerstonemaster Net Battler
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Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2005 7:35 pm Post subject: |
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really? i thought it looked cool with a slow close... |
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