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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 8:48 pm    Post subject: OT: Pokemon: Legend Among Legends Reply with quote

I've got 21 chapters of this fic done and I'll post a new one each time I get a review, except right now when I'll post two. And before you flame, I've already agreed these two are horrible. I made them a year ago when I had no idea what I was doing. P.S. I have a list of characters, but I will not be adding it until all 21 chapters have been posted:

Chapter 1: Enter Tyson: The Bumbling Idiot Reincarnate!

It was a bright and sunny day in Pallet Town, but it wasn’t just any day. Today was the day the newest Pokemon Trainers would get their very first Pokemon and begin their journeys. But unfortunately, the day wouldn’t begin very easily for some of them. We arrive at a very familiar house to find one of Pallet’s newest trainers behaving just like his father did, and sleeping in on the most important day of his life.

“TYSON KETCHUM! GET DOWN HERE THIS INSTANT!” An obviously irritated female voice came from downstairs, causing the boy to to fall out of bed and onto the floor head first.

“Ow” Tyson groaned as he rubbed his head. “I’m coming mom! Just give me a minute!”

As Tyson frantically scrambled around his room for his clothes and backpack, a Pikachu walked into the room and started helping him

“What would I do without you Pikachu?” Tyson said to the electric rat

“Pikachu Pi ka” (Probably go mad) The Pikachu said in its own language.

The young man pulled a pair of blue jeans and a black shirt, and pulled a red sport jacket over his shirt. He ran a comb through his black hair, before putting his signature red hat on.

When Tyson got downstairs, he ran past the table, which was decorated with several items. A gold trophy from the Orange Islands, a Set of Battle Frontier symbols, and four different badge cases, each containing eight badges. The Pikachu then leapt from Tyson’s side to rest on the shoulder of a man sitting on the couch, wearing a hat similar to Tysons.

“Well, don’t we look important today. Have you decided which Pokemon you’re going to choose?” The man pestered Tyson for an answer

“Leave Tyson alone Ash. He doesn’t need to tell us which Pokemon he’ll choose” The woman from before said while exiting the kitchen.

“I already know which one I’ll pick. But what about sis? Where is she?” Tyson asked and looked around the house.

“I’m afraid she’s sick Tyson. I already told Professor Oak about It, but I’m afraid you’ll have to go alone for now”

“Oh, ok. Then I guess I should get going” He said, and walked out of the house.

“That boy really is your son Ash” The woman said, sighing

“Well if he’s as much your son as I think he is, we both know what he’s going to pick. No one but him could love Water Pokemon more than you Misty”

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Chapter 2: The Beginning of a Legend

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Too excited to stop, Jake tripped and went sliding into Professor Oak’s laboratory.

“You are way too much like your father” Professor Gary Oak said as Tyson slid across the floor

“And I take that as a compliment sir.” Tyson said as he stood up and dusted himself off

“Well come on. Have you decided which Pokemon you’re going to choose?” Gary asked as he pulled out several trays of Pokeballs.

“Yes sir” Tyson said, picking up a Pokeball with a water drop sticker on it. “I choose you! Squirtle!” He shouted as he released the Turtle Pokemon.

“I should have known you would go for Squirtle. Considering your mom is surrounded by Water Pokemon every day” he said, looking at the lake outside filled with Misty’s Water Pokemon.

“I guess I better get going” Tyson said, heading for the door

“Hold on a second. You forgot your Pokedex and Pokeballs”

“Oops. I guess I did”

“I also have a favor to ask of you” Gary said as he pulled out several Pokeballs and a Pokedex from a box

“What kind of favor?” Tyson asked

“My daughter just started her journey as well. I’d like you to accompany her through the region.”

“You mean Ariel? Sure thing” Tyson said, excited he would have a friend with him.

“Great. She’s in Viridian City right now”

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Tyson was walking along the path to Viridian City, Squirtle walking right next to him.

“Maybe we should get some training in before we go to Viridian. What do you say buddy?” Tyson asked his Squirtle

“Squirtle Squirt!” The turtle Pokemon replied, ready for a battle

Not long after, the two came across a Wild Pichu

“Perfect! Use Bubble Squirtle!” Tyson shouted

Squirtle shot stream of bubbles at the electric rat, and scored a critical hit. The Pichu responded with a Thundershock, severely damaging Squirtle.

“Hang in there buddy! Try a Water Gun!”

Squirtle scored another critical hit on the Pichu, making it very weak

“Pokeball Go!”
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 9:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Omni-san's fanfictions = UBER AWESOME!

Good job, and hopefully this will be as popular if not more than it is on EXEHQ.
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