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Malik Local Prinny Deity
Age: 34 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 1179
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Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 12:09 am Post subject: RnR: We come in Peace |
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Since I did that post, I suddenly remembered I did this thing.
Synopsis copy pasta'd from FF.Net: Fugitives from the FM Planet escape their prisons and terrorize the Earth to destroy the alliance Cepheus and Subaru made. So it's only natural that Cepheus sends his soldiers to assist Rockman and Harp Note, no matter how eccentric they may be.
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Note to critics: I pulled these chapters out of my ass because I didn't care at the time. When ripping it to shreds, please leave tips concerning style behind. Thank you (: _________________
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DarkNexusAngel
Joined: 23 Aug 2007 Posts: 6 Location: United States
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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 2:00 pm Post subject: |
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I really like Aquarius and her host Shouyou, their Denpa Henkan was funny. XD
I also liked that you didn't show her in a "crazy" moment, because it would've made her look whiny like a Mary Sue (not that she isn't, she's great).
And the FM Seijin going back to their original hosts was clever. I still feel bad for Kizamaro for not having a partner... D= Let's hope Ryuusei 3 fixes that! *cheers* |
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