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Saito-kun
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If you want to participate Dark Roll, you'll need to use complete English sentences and not hurry everything up so fast! The sentences you posted were messes and you didn't construct any scenes I could picture in my head before I ran into the end of the section. Pace yourself! 
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Dark Roll
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| Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:56 pm Post subject: |
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Well...i never said my writing is good. Infact, i myself think that i am a terrible writer...unless i am multitasking. then and only then is what i have writen decent enough. At leas someone aknoleges it for the gabage it is.
(i do not mean this sarcasticly.)
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