Monkeyman.exe (NEW! {Incomplete} Sheet)

X-M · Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2005 3:13 pm Post subject:

Shotman looks great! I like how the needle on his arm turned out.
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Unknown Neo · Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2005 6:48 pm Post subject:

Shotman looks cool and that offbeat soul is funny.

N2-0 Night · Gnihtemos od thgim I... Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 992

Shotman is pretty good. Not the way I imagined it will come out, but still good.

The Offbeat Blues is just weirdly funny :] .
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Valiant · Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 37

Ok, thanks for the comments. Again, open for suggestions, but I also have something else in mind that I'll be starting soon. Bye now.
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Valiant · Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 37

It's Rockman Volnutt! My favorite Rockman out of them all! He's made from my Raid sprite, and I think I converted it pretty darn well. I know the head isn't beautiful, but I think it's alright. Custom head+hair. I think I'd call him Legends.exe if he was a navi.

Comments and crits=<3
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Pitchums · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 1:03 am Post subject:

His hair looks bigger than his chest and stomach... And I think Trigger's hair is brown, too.

Other than that it looks alright though.. He seems kinda evil-lookin though. and maybe some of the shading could be a little better
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Valtz · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 2:08 am Post subject:

Yeah the hair is too bug. But the armour looks really good. Kinda like it's been upgraded.

DJ ZipZap (Dyne) · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 9:23 am Post subject:

Pitchums · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 9:40 am Post subject:

Screen shot'd

Courtesy of MMLS. Looks brown to me. I guess ya could see it either way....
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Valiant · Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 37

Thanks for the comments, everybody.

As for the hair ordeal, I did use official art for color reference, so I did take the hair colors directly from it. And I guess I took too dark of colors. I don't know, I guess if you look hard at my sprite, it is brown. Anyway, I know the hair is huge. I plan on making a different version of him soon, as if he was navi. So the hair, or most of it, will be gone.

EDIT: I just looked at the sprite up close and just realized why the shading is odd looking. My supposed Easy Image Converter made it form BMP to GIF, yes, but it took away a bunch of the colors, which has never happened before when I've used the program. Oh well. Maybe I can fix it.
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Valiant · Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 37

There, hopefully this version is better. I know the color I added is a bit too light, but it't the best I could find. :/
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Roy Tanaka · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 5:52 pm Post subject:

The Trigger sprite looks pretty good, but, as previously mentioned, his hair is too big. Good Job though.

Unknown Neo · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 11:32 pm Post subject:

That is pretty good but the hair is big.

Valiant · Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 37

Thanks for all the comments people. I've put aside making an exe-version of him, so I can take suggestions again!

Suggest a theme, and perhaps I'll do it! >_<
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Valiant · Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 37

Been a while since I update. Anyway, here's something new! A new navi creation!

And his Icon:

(Base=Raijin's Footman Icon; I'm submitting this icon to his gallery also, I lloves it.)

It's Monkeyman! LOLOLOLL OMG BBQZORZ.one

No, but seriously, this guy has been in my head for weeks now, finally got around to spriting him. The first sprite of him is normal stance, the second he is holding his Banana Sword/Shooter. (It works like a sword, but is also his primary ranged weapon; it shoot bananas. XD)

Tell me what you think! Smile

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Blaze · Net Savior Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 139

nooooo
the banana will kill me XD
a very good sprite, but the icon isn't that good.
the teeth are plain white and black. try do shade tham a little.
and the eyes too.
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Seren · Net Official Age: 37 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 349

Monkeyman looks pretty cool, the Huge banana is kind of odd though.XD

The Icon is kind of weird. I don't really like that you used one of Raijin's Icons as a base for it, because it looks like it has 2 two different styles to it, maybe you could try making one all on your own.
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Metal Shark Player · Nebula Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 550

The head still looks a bit Toad Man eseque. I think you need to move the ears more to the side.

I like the banana at least.

Jenova Spawn · Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 3:31 pm Post subject:

Weelll...I HATE monkeys, but I won't let that get in the way of my judgement....Good job!
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X-M · Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 3:51 pm Post subject:

He looks very good overall, the pose and all. Though the bananas kinda much, maybe he should just throw them?
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