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Reina
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 Posted: Sun May 01, 2005 9:16 pm Post subject: OT - Kairi and Meiru and Netto Cosplay |
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http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/17857728/
This is a Kairi picture I did today. My comment is in that link up there! :]
Any constructive criticism besides the fact that the outfit does not match the official art? :V
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Sigma.exe
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| Posted: Sun May 01, 2005 9:38 pm Post subject: |
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Very cute and...well...flowery. Personally, I've never played Kingdom Hearts, so I'm not too familiar with this character. But what I like about this drawing is the light use of shading that accentuates her calm aura you convey in this picture. That, and she has a nice outfit. :]
Keep up the good work, Reina!
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Reina
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| Posted: Fri May 06, 2005 11:14 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you Sigma.exe for the nice review! :]
Here's a new art:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18039978/
| Quote: | | This is a drawing I did a while ago when I was really bored and wanted to draw something. ^^; Strange, huh? I tried a new style of coloring the picture. Does it look okay? Any constructive criticism? |
Now that I think of it, I took over 10 hours on this picture! O.o
So, once again, any constructive criticism? I think I'll go and link the art I have in other threads tomorrow.
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| Posted: Fri May 06, 2005 11:45 pm Post subject: |
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Well now. I see you've remained consistent with Kairi's overall "flowery" look! I like the way you drew Netto as well. Pretty much the only thing I DON'T like about this picture is that Netto in Sora's outfit looks like the bonehead mechanic who ripped off my dad during an oil change on our family Honda. (Granted, that's MY problem.)
Speaking of cars (and their paint), I notice a strong use of shading/lighting/accenting that makes their clothes and hair look like shiny metallic paint jobs. This effect works very well for the hair, and also for the jacket, which looks more like it's made of leather than the cloth it would have looked like had you chosen a flatter, more blurred finish.
A very well-done pic, Reina. Your FMA work's quite impressive too. Keep it up!
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| Posted: Sat May 07, 2005 7:57 am Post subject: |
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Very nice pictures! I especially liked the second one ^^ The only thing I can really find to say is that Meiru's general lower half looks a little flat, like one drew the flat surface first and then started too low when drawing her in. But everything else looks great! ^_^ I especially love the coloring, it's so lovely.
And on an unrelated note, Vanilla is that Adver Man I see in your sig?
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| Posted: Sat May 07, 2005 10:52 am Post subject: |
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| Vanilla_Go_Rilla wrote: | Well now. I see you've remained consistent with Kairi's overall "flowery" look! I like the way you drew Netto as well. Pretty much the only thing I DON'T like about this picture is that Netto in Sora's outfit looks like the bonehead mechanic who ripped off my dad during an oil change on our family Honda. (Granted, that's MY problem.)
Speaking of cars (and their paint), I notice a strong use of shading/lighting/accenting that makes their clothes and hair look like shiny metallic paint jobs. This effect works very well for the hair, and also for the jacket, which looks more like it's made of leather than the cloth it would have looked like had you chosen a flatter, more blurred finish.
A very well-done pic, Reina. Your FMA work's quite impressive too. Keep it up!
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Thanks for the comment! Err...I guess I should stick to soft shading then, huh? Except I might still color the same way I colored the hair in the second picture, except I would blur it a bit so it's consistent with the rest of the drawing.
I need to practice cellshading though. :puku: I'll try it again with a more appropriate picture next time.
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Very nice pictures! I especially liked the second one ^^ The only thing I can really find to say is that Meiru's general lower half looks a little flat, like one drew the flat surface first and then started too low when drawing her in. But everything else looks great! Happies I especially love the coloring, it's so lovely. |
Thanks for leaving a comment! But, can you please elaborate on what's wrong with Meiru's lower half? I don't really understand what you mean.
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| Posted: Sat May 07, 2005 6:41 pm Post subject: |
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I really like the cosplay one. I'm guessing Enzan would cosplay as Riku, then?
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| Posted: Sat May 07, 2005 6:47 pm Post subject: |
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| Hey nice cosplay lan and maylu the clothes seem to fit well with them. |
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| Anime Master ZERO wrote: | | I really like the cosplay one. I'm guessing Enzan would cosplay as Riku, then? |
Now that I think of it, I tried to draw Enzan as Riku in the picture, but I kept laughing too hard thinking about it to even start drawing it. -_-; Probably because of Riku's design. He's wearing puffy pants for crying out loud! I can't draw Enzan like that without laughing! 
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| Posted: Sat May 07, 2005 9:39 pm Post subject: |
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Well, what about Enzan as the blond-haired kid?
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Wow I love your art! It has some sort of feeling that the world of rockman was stuck into fantasy world
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Looks good, though I haven't seen much of Kingdom Hearts (yet).
Anyway, I see what Roll Soul is pointing out. I believe you are trying to make her look like she is sitting down. The problem is that the knees are drawn as if it was a few inches under her belt, so it appears that her legs are disfigured (in my opinion).
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| Posted: Sun May 08, 2005 11:43 am Post subject: |
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Thats really good cept you need to darken the right eye line.
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| Posted: Sun May 08, 2005 11:57 am Post subject: |
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| N2-0 Night wrote: | Looks good, though I haven't seen much of Kingdom Hearts (yet).
Anyway, I see what Roll Soul is pointing out. I believe you are trying to make her look like she is sitting down. The problem is that the knees are drawn as if it was a few inches under her belt, so it appears that her legs are disfigured (in my opinion). |
Oh, I get it now! I'll remember that when I draw someone sitting again. Thanks for the help! :]
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I love it! Your drawing is very pretty! :D
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