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Core Folf Samurai
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Posted: Wed May 04, 2005 11:21 pm Post subject: Rockman EXE: Transference 3 : Chapter 2: Coffee Date |
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I thought I would do a rewrite of what I started with Transference 3 before the board got wiped out. Here is the new version, and all will be come clear in the next chapter about some things.
Disclaimer: This story takes places out side of the normal universe for the Rockman.EXE series. While some characters are the same as their cannon counterparts, others are fictional and their stories do not have bearing on the official story put out by Capcom.
Chapter One: A New Dimension
“Saito-kun, wait up!” A blond haired girl yells as she runs down a hallway towards a brown haired boy with an open orange vest.
“Roll, I though you were staying after school to work on a project.” The boy says as he stops and looks at her curiously.
“No time to talk.” Roll snaps as she takes hold of his arm and starts hauling him back towards the school, “I need your help with something.”
The boy is half dragged back into the school towards the schools performing arts studio, where a group of others were already gathered. The assorted students along with one teacher look up from their different tasks amid stage props and papers to look at the two.
“Ms. Seto I think I have a replacement for the part!” Roll chimes as she pulls Saito along, the boy blushing as he is presented to the tall blond in charge of the group of students.
“Hmm, are you sure that you can play the role?” The teacher asks as she looks at Seto.
“Well I…” The boy starts, getting a quick elbow from Roll in the ribs. “Yeow! I mean… Yes, yes I’m sure.”
The teacher’s eyes light up as she smiles, “That is excellent! Now we can proceed with the production since we have our new male lead.”
“Roll, what did you just get me into?” Saito asks as the girl quietly when the teacher leaves, the other blond smiling and blushing a little.
“Well, we needed a replacement for the lead role and the options weren’t looking that good so I said that I knew someone that wanted the part and got you.” Roll smiles as she pulls a lock of long blond hair back behind her left ear. “You’ll have fun, you get to play a pirate.”
Saito blinks a bit as he looks at her and then smiles, “Well a pirate sounds fun. So what role do you have?”
Roll blushes as she looks at her feet, “Princess Buttercup.”
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“I can’t believe I got pulled into that.” Saito says as he sits down on his bed, setting his PET down on the nightstand on its small charger station. “Now I have to perform ‘The Princess Bride’ in front of the whole school.”
“Not just the whole school, but also the college students and those parents that are going to attend, as well as those watching the production at home on their monitors.” Rockman pipes in from the small blue PET. “But you should have seen it coming since Roll did take the lead role in that production.”
The green-eyed boy sighs as he lays down on the bed and stares at the ceiling, folding his arms under his pillow. “Yeah, I guess you are right Rockman. But it still has me a bit in shock, not as much as when we were transferred into each others bodies, but still.”
Rockman nods as he remembers when he and Saito were in switched positions along with Roll and Meiru, but now they existed in different plains. “If that memory block didn’t crash we would have lived out our lives not knowing we had switched places. Saito, do you miss being a navi?”
The boy blinks and rolls over on his side to look at his twin, “Sometimes. How about you, do you miss being human?”
The small blue navi nods once, “At times, but this world is very neat and I’ve gotten use to it. Same with you I imagine.”
“Yup, so how are things with you and Meiru?” Saito asks quickly changing the subject.
Rockman blushes a bit, “I’m supposed to go over to Roll’s computer later tonight and then take her to the amusement park. OH! That reminds me, Roll wants you to meet her at the dinner at eight.”
“WHAT!” Saito snaps as he sits up quickly and looks at the time on the PET, “Its 7:58 now! Why didn’t you tell me earlier?” The boy says as he rushes out of the bed and picks up the PET.
“Sorry Saito-kun, I forgot.” Rockman replies sheepishly, “After all this time as a navi I still make mistakes.”
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“He has to be around here somewhere.” Enzan states as he looks around the warehouse, dressed in a pair of urban camouflage pants that were torn at the thighs and a black shirt and vest that bore his navi icon. “Blues, are you tapped into the old security grid for this place?”
“Not yet Enzan-sama.” The navi replies as he navigates the ancient network, “The control pathways for the network have fallen with age. It is making it… difficult to get to the control panel.”
“Well keep working on it, I’ll get a bead on this guy if I can.” The skunk haired boy says as he looks around the maze of old wooden crates.
“With all due respect Enzan-sama, I think the person we are looking for is a girl not a guy.” Blues states as he reaches the final network pathway and starts to gain control of the security systems. “She is located behind the second crate to your right, and she is armed with what looks like a dagger.”
Enzan nods as he continues in the direction he is heading, reaching into his pant pocket to pull out a thin object. A green haired woman dashes quickly out from behind the wooden crate and takes a slash at the boy only to find her target gone.
“Where did he go?” She asks quietly as her eyes look around her.
A click causes her eyes to widen and body to freeze, “You are a quick one Enzan.”
“So are you Dyna. Nice to meet you again.” The boy says as he levels a small folding handgun on the woman from behind, looking her over quickly. “Drop the dagger and turn around slowly.”
Dyna does as she is told, her black outfit clinging to her curves and bulging at the pockets on the front from information disks and other things she has hidden.
“My government won’t stand for this you know.” The woman states as she folds her arms over her chest, “Arresting a diplomat in such a way without cause.”
“I say tampering with and extorting information from private funds is cause enough.” Enzan replies as he keeps the gun trained on her, “Now hand over the information and maybe I can make this disappear.”
The green haired woman smiles as she walks slowly up to him, pulling several chips from the inside of her jacket. “We really have to stop playing these games. Why not just tell me what you want and I’ll get it for you, there is no need for all this hunting.”
Enzan takes the chips slowly from her hand, keeping the gun trained on her. “I think there is, how else are we suppose to keep our skills up, and I have to say that you are getting sloppy Dyna.”
The girl sticks out her tongue as she winks, “Well I have to make sure that you see my trail or I might just slip away. Now can you stop aiming that thing at me?”
He keeps the gun trained on her for a moment then lowers it slowly to his side, “What are you doing here this time Dyna, stealing more money to fund that project of your sisters?”
She shakes her head as she walks over to a crate and hops up on it for a seat, “We monitored some disturbances from a virus holding center and I was sent to check it out to see if it had any relation to some tremors we have been getting from the Ura Net of our country.”
“What did you find out?” Enzan asks curiously, “Something important if you left a trail for me to follow here.”
Dyna nods as she pulls out a small disk from her cleavage, making the boy blush. “It seems at a force is gathering once more using remnant data from the Darkloid and Asteroid factions.”
“This is the first I’ve heard of it and Blues does frequent checks of that area.” The boy says as she tosses him the disk.
“Its mainly in the deeper levels, places where access is very limited. But don’t worry, I’m sure that you two will be able to gain access soon.” She teases as she hops off of the crate, “Now if you excuse me I have to leave before the rest of your group gets here, they are already a block away.”
“She is right Enzan-sama.” Blues states as he appears on the PET, “They will be here in about five minutes.”
“Later kid, have fun with the information.” Dyna’s voice calls from the shadows, having vanished in the few seconds that Enzan had taken his eyes off of her.
“She’s an amazing woman isn’t she Blues.” Enzan comments as he puts his gun away, “But we have gotten what we came for and then some.”
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Midnight This is a Hilbert Space
Age: 37 Joined: 18 Mar 2005 Posts: 3089 Location: The AfterMath. Otherwise, New York City.
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Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 9:19 pm Post subject: |
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Interesting...
I'd like to see more, if you have any. _________________ Today, these three players are after Big Bucks! But they'll have to avoid the Whammy, as they play the most exciting game of their lives! From Television City in Hollywood! It's time to 'Press Your Luck!'--Rod Roddy
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rockzero.exe Net Savior
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 109 Location: Endiness
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Posted: Sat May 07, 2005 8:30 am Post subject: |
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Well, this is... interesting. It's different from the one you had before this furum crashed and got reincarnated. Sad thing is compared to the Transference 3 you had in the old forums of this site, there's no Meijin-san around. I read your other Transference stories and I know how the end of Transference 2 ended. So this new first chapter is a little awkward to me. |
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Core Folf Samurai
Age: 42 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 700 Location: Frederick, Maryland
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 5:32 am Post subject: |
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rockzero.exe wrote: | Well, this is... interesting. It's different from the one you had before this furum crashed and got reincarnated. Sad thing is compared to the Transference 3 you had in the old forums of this site, there's no Meijin-san around. I read your other Transference stories and I know how the end of Transference 2 ended. So this new first chapter is a little awkward to me. |
Meant to be a bit confusing at the start, so as to grab some readers of the things I do and have them go "Wha? What happened!?" All will become clear in the second chapter, hopefully. |
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Midnight This is a Hilbert Space
Age: 37 Joined: 18 Mar 2005 Posts: 3089 Location: The AfterMath. Otherwise, New York City.
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 6:39 am Post subject: |
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About the previous installments of "Transference"...do you have a link so I can read what occurred before I joined? _________________ Today, these three players are after Big Bucks! But they'll have to avoid the Whammy, as they play the most exciting game of their lives! From Television City in Hollywood! It's time to 'Press Your Luck!'--Rod Roddy
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Core Folf Samurai
Age: 42 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 700 Location: Frederick, Maryland
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 9:06 am Post subject: |
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Midnight Critic wrote: | About the previous installments of "Transference"...do you have a link so I can read what occurred before I joined? |
I do, they're on my site which you can find a link to I think pretty easily by checking my profile.
Now for an update that I have been working on for a bit and finished an hour ago before working on my other fanfic which I'll be updating also with its ending. This one will most likely take a long time to write out.
Chapter Two: Coffee Date
Roll sits calmly at her favorite booth in the small café that was set up close to the high school that she and her friends now attended, the young blond watches the activity going on at one of the new net battle arena tables located on the first and second floor of the large café. A group of young middle school students were battling with the latest off the shelf navi’s that were almost as powerful as older custom models.
“Roll-chan, it’s now ten minutes past when Saito should have been here.” Meiru says from her PET sitting on the table next to her netop and friend.
Roll sighs softly, “I know. But Rockman has been known to give Saito messenges late, so I expected this.”
“Glad to hear that.” Saito’s voice chimes from behind the pair, the boy sliding easily into the seat across from Roll. “I got here as fast as I could after getting your email Roll. Oh, and Meiru, Rockman can go out on that date of yours now.”
The pink navi blushes, “Its not a date! We’re just going to go have some fun while you two are busy having fun.”
Saito blinks a bit as he connects the two PET’s and sends the electric duo into the net to have their own fun. “Now what was that about us having fun?”
“Well, we have to get you ready for your part in the play.” The young blond says as she looks at him, “We can help each other rehearse our lines.”
“That sounds like a plan, so when would you like to start?” He asks as he sits back in his seat.
“After dinner, if you haven’t eaten already that is.” She smiles as she hands a folded menu to him. “I already know what I’m getting so I’ll let you find something you would like.”
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A brown haired man with a pair of reddish orange glasses sitting on his head reclines back in his high backed leather business mans chair with his feet up on the large oak desk and resting comfortably in his long white coat.
“Nothing like peace and quiet to help sooth the mind and body right Kendoman?” Meijin says as he closes his eyes, “Only thing better would be to be outside on a beach somewhere.”
“It would be nice to practice more on sand to perfect techniques.” The battle dressed navi states from the built in computer on the desk. “Also, it seems that we will be having company as well.”
“Oh?” The man says as he sits up, putting his glasses into place and his feet on the floor, “No doubt Enzan coming to give me some information from his contact.”
“Meijin-san, shouldn’t we tell him that we know about his contact in the foreign government?” The navi asks of his operator.
Meijin shakes his head, “No, I think that it is funny that he thinks he can hide such things from me.” He pauses as he looks up at the door, “Come on in Enzan and shut the door this time would you.”
The large composite door opens slowly as the skunk haired boy enters the room, shutting the door as instructed. His hair was pulled back in a short ponytail that seemed to match the clothing he was wearing rather well.
“Meijin-san, Blues and I have uncovered some information about some growing disturbances.” The blue-eyed boy says clearly as he presents the disk to the elder operator.
“I had a feeling that is what you were going to say, and I already know about it.”
“How is that?” Enzan asks puzzled, “I haven’t shared this information with anyone.”
Meijin raises a finger with a smirk, “You did verify it on your computer here and that computer is tied up to a network.”
“So you are spying on me.”
“Not spying, I prefer to call it checking up on you.” The elder net op says coyly, “And from what I’ve seen I think that a bit of research into the matter is needed.”
Enzan nods in agreement, “I shall start on it right away.”
“Not so fast, I’m also going to put together a little team to handle this.” Meijin says smiling broadly.
“I can handle this alone, Blues and I don’t need any help.” The boy almost snarls as he glares at the man.
“If you can do it alone, then why say that Blues and you don’t need any help. That in itself says that you need at least some assistance.” He replies to the young net op, “And I know just who to get to help you.”
“Sir, I don’t want to work with them. The memory block programs crashed only a few days into having them believing that they had switched back. With Netto as a navi he is a bit more annoying and reckless.” Enzan protests.
Meijin lets out a sigh of irritation as he sits there, “You are all 15 now so that is to be expected. I expect for you to get over your hormones and work together to get this done, do I make myself clear?”
“Yes sir.” The boy replies disgruntled, “I’ll go pick them up.”
“That’ll be a good idea, and I’ll call in the other members of your team while you go do that.”
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Saito and Roll step out of the small café dinner with their PET’s in their holsters, the foursome having completed the nights planned events. Roll hooks her arm with Saito’s as they continue down the street together, looking at some of the storefronts that were lit to display items and clothing to be gotten during normal business hours.
“Saito, do you think that we can maybe go out again tomorrow night?” Roll asks as she blushes and hugs his arm.
The brown haired boy blinks a bit in surprise, his cheeks turning the same color of crimson as hers. “I’d like to Roll, but I have to finish a science report that is due at the end of the week.”
“Maybe we can work on our reports together in a collaboration?” The girl pursues, “We can get the work done in half the time.”
“That sounds like it would be fun.” Saito states, as a shadow suddenly appears over the pair.
A thickly built man with dark sunglasses stands in their path, with a skinnier man close by leaning against a car. Saito looks up at the man, catching the reflection of two other men behind him and Roll.
“You’re coming with us.” The large man says gruffly.
“Sorry, but we don’t go anywhere with strange men.” Roll states as she hugs Saito’s arm.
“We don’t want the both of you, just you.” One of the men behind them says he grabs hold of Roll’s arm, “Now you are coming with us.”
Saito whips around with a spinning kick to the man’s head, sending the glasses on his face flying as he staggers and looses his grip on Roll. As Saito starts to bring his foot down a large fist slams into the back of his skull as a knee is driven into his gut, dropping the small boy to the ground.
“Saito!” Roll shouts out before the large man claps his hand over her mouth and hoists her up into the air with little effort.
“The boss will be pleased about this.” The skinny man says as he opens the door for the larger man to toss Roll into the car. “Maybe we’ll get some time on the beach to relax as a bonus?”
“Whatever brother, lets just get his kid back to the boss.” The large man growls as he gets into the car, shoving Roll back into the car and trying to hold the girl down.
The other men slowly get back into the car, except for the one that Saito had kicked, he looms over the boy for a moment.
“Gredo we have to get going! Get in the car well ya’!” the skinny man yells from the drivers seat.
“This is for ruining my shades punk.” The man yells as he kicks Saito in the head, sending the boy flying back and landing on the sidewalk.
Saito lays there dazed and gasping for breath as he looks at the car drive off, his vision blurred as he stares at the license plate. The aching in his head causes him to put a hand to his forehead, feeling a deep cut that slowly covered the left side of his face with crimson as he collapses on the pavement. |
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Midnight This is a Hilbert Space
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 7:42 pm Post subject: |
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I get a 404 error when I try to read your previous arcs....it seems as though those pages do not exist anymore. _________________ Today, these three players are after Big Bucks! But they'll have to avoid the Whammy, as they play the most exciting game of their lives! From Television City in Hollywood! It's time to 'Press Your Luck!'--Rod Roddy
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Core Folf Samurai
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 7:46 pm Post subject: |
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Midnight Critic wrote: | I get a 404 error when I try to read your previous arcs....it seems as though those pages do not exist anymore. |
I'll see what is going on. ^x.x^() Should be working by later in the day, darn random errors. |
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Midnight This is a Hilbert Space
Age: 37 Joined: 18 Mar 2005 Posts: 3089 Location: The AfterMath. Otherwise, New York City.
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 8:22 pm Post subject: |
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I have only read through the initial chapters of the first arc, but I am definitely liking what I am reading.
What seems to place you away from the rest is that you primarily write in the progressive tense, and not in the past as many writers do otherwise. I admit, it is a bit of a stretch at first, and can confuse people at points, but it does nothing to detract from the story. Exemplary work. _________________ Today, these three players are after Big Bucks! But they'll have to avoid the Whammy, as they play the most exciting game of their lives! From Television City in Hollywood! It's time to 'Press Your Luck!'--Rod Roddy
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Core Folf Samurai
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2005 8:19 am Post subject: |
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Thanks Midnight, hopefully I will be able to have something to post when I get to my new place in Georgia. Writing as I have time to in transit to add another chapter to this story. |
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