Adver Man (23: The Search for the Chibi-Neko)

Elizabeth · Posted: Sun May 08, 2005 8:55 am Post subject:

OMFG!!! That was hilarious! The picture! The classmates! The news! The world-wide humiliation!

That was great! I can hardly wait for the next chapter ...

Wackoguy · Posted: Sun May 08, 2005 3:45 pm Post subject:

Oye, my gut, it hurts! Laughing

That was awesome! So hilarious...if that happened to me I'd go ballistic too, though. :grr:

But... Laughing

I look forward to the next chapter. Happy is BEYOND DEAD by now...he's gonna get a reaming I bet. Then, a butt-whoopin'. :D
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Roy Tanaka · Posted: Sun May 08, 2005 7:58 pm Post subject:

ROFL!!!

Seriously, that was brilliance. That was the least I expected, and hilarious.

And, yes, I was at that lab, if it involved chinchillas and food coloring.

Vanilla_Go_Rilla · Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 1:36 am Post subject:

And the madness continues.

You see, guys and girls? It was the most humiliating thing ever. And it's about to get worse. This time, though, Netto and his friends aren't the target. Happy's unleashing his twisted ambitions on...the Neo World Three! So, now that My World Has Ended...

Part 18: ...AND WORLD THREE HAS ENDED TOO

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2338812/18/
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Elizabeth · Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 7:09 am Post subject:

Awesome! I didn't think you could possibly top the last chapter, yet you DID! Laughing

Hehe ... Tesla liking Meijin ... poor Meijin ...

Roy Tanaka · Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 1:41 pm Post subject:

He wouldn't even come out for brownies? :O

XD Great Chapter. Slur is so evil to Netto. :3

Revenant · Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 8:55 pm Post subject:

Wackoguy · Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 9:09 pm Post subject:

Ooooooh, Tesla & Meijin. I didn't ever think of that-! Laughing

Meijin: T_T

Aye, Happy is evil. Pure EVIL-!!! He must be stopped! (But not yet though. Heh heh.)

I really think those two would make a good couple, I don't know why though....

And Takeo's explaining about his Soap Opera was sheer brilliance.Along with Slur & Duo cracking up while looking at Netto's picture. :D

Anyway, keep it up. Bring on the clowns-! I mean, the funnies!
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May · Posted: Tue May 10, 2005 5:48 pm Post subject:

No~ Missing so many things XD I'm reading the chapters now, and so far, I have very positive feedback in mind. Good work~

Vanilla_Go_Rilla · Posted: Wed May 11, 2005 7:50 pm Post subject:

Thanks to everyone for the feedback.

Ugh, final exams. As if having you remember a lot at a time wasn't bad enough...they expect you to remember the whole thing at the very end of the semester. Sorry for the lack of updates, but my teachers began the Armageddon rather early -___-. I don't even have enough free time to even think about how much free time I have, so I'll try and get Part 19 done by this Friday night at the very latest. For now, it's time to hit the books...before I burn all of them and do the Happy Dance, and tell my rabid teachers what I REALLY think of them when the semester's over.
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla · Posted: Fri May 13, 2005 4:08 pm Post subject:

It's okay to 2x post as long as there's an update, right? Okelies-dokelies.

Finally, some spare time. Er, good things come to those who wait. And bad things come to those who procrastinate. That said, here's Part 19. Adver Man's continuing his mad rampage with Happy...and this time, Happy's coming to the real world. Netto tries out for a...er...NONEXISTENT ad campaign. That, and you finally get to see where the Net Saviors REALLY hang out... >_<

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2338812/19/

Questions? Comments? Inaudible deprecatory mumblings? One or any combination of the above is fine.
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Roy Tanaka · Posted: Fri May 13, 2005 6:08 pm Post subject:

Indeed, it's fine.

Awesome, hilarious, somewhat random chapter. XD Netto is so idiotic.

Also, there was a little typo:

Wackoguy · Posted: Fri May 13, 2005 9:29 pm Post subject:

So Snuggles is where they meet.... :!

Great chapter! Happy's the best of the Adver-Mets, so funny!

And...Aquaman's got a potty-mouth! (Get it? Water? Potty? Laughing

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Aquaman: >_<

Keep it up!
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla · Posted: Sat May 14, 2005 6:19 pm Post subject:

Thanks for all the encouraging feedback. Aquaman being a potty mouth...well...if you squint your eyes, Wackoguy, his head KINDA resembles a toilet. But that's a little beyond the scope of my reasoning >_<

Understood, Roy. Gonna fix that typo now.

And to the fellow Fanfiction member known as Uzu-chan, is it OK if I answer your questions here? I don't really know if Netto's revenge will involve toilet paper...I'm making this fic up as I go along >__O Also, "San wa iranai!" is Meijin's usual saying, meaning, "NO NEED FOR -SAN!" He says this because in Japanese language, he has the suffix "San" attached to his name, so he would be politely addressed as "Meijin-san." The Japanese tend to be rather annoyed when you don't address them with the proper formal suffix. But not Meijin, who insists that others forget the "San" utterance and just address him informally, perhaps as simply Meijin. Prolly because he's designed to be a modest guy. Hope that helped :]
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla · Posted: Sun May 15, 2005 12:46 am Post subject:

Once again, another 2x post for another update. I'd like to give credit to N2-O Night for allowing me to use one of his Shark Soul Unison artworks, Slur's to be exact. So without further ado, the final conflict with Happy: Battle For My Pictures!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2338812/20/
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Roy Tanaka · Posted: Sun May 15, 2005 12:17 pm Post subject:

XD

Heh, of all the possible things that could've been coming, this was the least I expected. I know about Shark Souls and that was brilliant. Laughing

Excellent chapter, I wonder what's next...?

TheWebbuilder · Posted: Sun May 15, 2005 1:50 pm Post subject:

Oh... my... Mettaurs...

I can't believe I let this fic get away from me... I love those Mets!

Excellent, but why am I detected REO satire? :]

-continues reading to get caught up-
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Wackoguy · Posted: Sun May 15, 2005 7:09 pm Post subject:

Nice chapter! Heh, heh! Happy & Slappy have something in common... Laughing

Keep it up!

:] : Can I have the pictures now? Please...?
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Megaman Melee! HUTTAH and HUZZAH!

"I ate your siggy..."

Vanilla_Go_Rilla · Posted: Sun May 15, 2005 7:45 pm Post subject:

Thanks again for the feedback Roy. Yes, surprising endings are the better part of fanfiction...assuming they're used in the right context, of course, a battle which I won here in my mind :D

REO satire, TheWebbuilder? If this story being a comedy is what you are detecting, yes, I did intend for this to be a funny story. Although the first chapter doesn't make that quite TOO clear, starting off on a less comic, more plot-moving pace. Hope you'll enjoy reading it!

And Wackoguy: Slur, Happy, and N2-O Night are the only two capable of handing them over...I am but an intermediary >__O. Sorry 'bout that, but glad you like this fic!
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TheWebbuilder · Posted: Sun May 15, 2005 8:56 pm Post subject:

Yeah, bad choice of words... I meant that you were poking fun at REO, but its all good.

I did enjoy it, but Slappy left me with nightmares. :]
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