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EXE. Net Savior
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 104 Location: Um...I know this......
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Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 2:51 pm Post subject: OT: Resident School |
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Ok, i know this isnt a Rockman o anime fic, but I thought id post it here, I thought people might like it-if not, it will go
While bored in English, me and my friend thought up this idea, and i expanded it and made it into a story-enjoy =D
The heat belted down, almost nailing everyone down to the ground. Rows upon rows or people, desperate for freedom, not getting it. The dictator at the front, controlling the lives of every person in front of them. A tumbleweed rolled past......ok, an over exageration
BACK TO REALITY
Ok, so I'm not in a life threatening situation here, this is just school, ok. Sorry for trying to make my life sound more interesting.
The fact is, im stuck here with the rest of my school, on a Saturday night studying English. I could be out with friends, or playing games, or watching TV, but no, I have to study English, want to know why? You dont get a choice in the matter, Im telling you anyway!
So, Monday morning, we all came in, eagerly awaiting a fun filled day of education (note: LIE). When the bell rang, we were distraught that we had to leave school (note: LIE). However, when we went to leave the school we were delighted to find that we had the delight of staying in school longer-our dreams had come true, we had to stay in school (note: LIES, LIES AND SLANDER)
Basically, some nation wide disaster had happened, and had stopped us from leaving school. Rumours had spread about what had happened. "Aliens have come". We all know thats a lie, as aliens have only came to Earth twice-once in 1939 and started WW II and again in 2000 when they helped George Busch win the election. They arent sceduled to come for another 20 years to start WW III. "Our parents want is to stay in school for longer". Now come on, parents are evil, but not that evil. "Some unknown force is controling everyone outside, and they need us to stay in school to be protected" And school would protect us....how?
And as a result, we had to take "night school" so we were'nt wasting time. Load of crap is you ask me. And there is only 1 thing worse than being in school all the time-being in a school all the time with neds.
Now, if you know what a ned is, you can skip the next paragraph. If you are a lazy reader, you can also skip the next paragraph. If you dont know what a ned is, and you care, read on
To sum a ned up in 1 word....scum. They are the bane of the nation. These are people who will without thought destroy anything they see in the street. These are people who will without thought shout abuse at anyone who walks past them. These are people who will beat up anyone who looks at them wrong. These are people who will stab anyone, even their best "mate" And whats worst than ned out in the street, ned who hate school, stuck in school. They've become really violent latly, beating up anyone who walked past them-hence why I have been avioding them as much as I can.
Anyway, English, Saturday night, boring, hellish, yeah. As the teacher droned on about stuff I could care less about, I wispered to my friend:
"hey...psst...Nath, Nath" Nathaniel moved his head, he was drooling, a thing often done by several people in our class.
"Thanks Guy, you woke me up", again, grumpyness was another sympton of being in school to long
"You bored"
A pause
"What do you think, I was just slep-" he was cut off as something happened. The lights went out, the entire class was plunged into darkness. Several screames echoed throught the school, no one knew what was happeneing. I heard Nath beside me "Omigodomigodomigod" and so on. I tried to grab onto something, and hope that in the confusion I would make it out alive. Mabey this was why we were forced to stay in school, mabey it had caught up on us. A load roar came from the door, and all I heard was a group of ned "Oh WIT!" I closed my eyes and hoped for the best. But the best didnt come. To dark to see anything, something hit me on the head, and I fell unconcious and lay in the dark, not knowing if I would awake
<Malik> OT'D~ _________________
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Blue Bommer Net Savior
Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Posts: 175 Location: Your shoulder, the left one.
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Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 9:47 pm Post subject: Re: Resident School |
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[quote="EXE."] aliens have only came to Earth twice-once in 1939 and started WW II and again in 2000 when they helped George Busch win the election.[quote]
Funny, comparing WW2 to George W Bush win the election. You do have an interesting topic, everday life gone to the worst posible thing. Studing English in school on Saturday! |
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DJ ZipZap (Dyne) Net Battler
Joined: 23 Mar 2005 Posts: 83 Location: Turn around... BOO! Hah, I scared you!
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 7:21 am Post subject: |
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Pretty funny, actually, but if you could improve some of your spelling and grammar, it'd be waaay better! _________________ I have returned! Also known as Dyne Kiline, DyneX14, etc.
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EXE. Net Savior
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 104 Location: Um...I know this......
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 11:28 am Post subject: |
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DJ ZipZap (Dyne) wrote: | Pretty funny, actually, but if you could improve some of your spelling and grammar, it'd be waaay better! |
yeah, i did kina write it really quickly, so, I guess I should look over it once ive wrote it _________________
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Rex Net Battler
Age: 35 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 97
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 1:59 pm Post subject: |
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your fic is really funny. I like it. _________________
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EXE. Net Savior
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Posted: Sun May 15, 2005 11:15 am Post subject: |
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I thought I should let people know that due to exams coming up, i will not be posting any new chapters, exams take up too much time and i just cant do it
Sorry =( _________________
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