Poems!

Filthster · Net Battler Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 52

This topic is for you to post any poems you might have written and have people comment on then.

just remember:

1) No excessive swearing: This forum is populated by a fan base that contains some very young members.

2) No flaming other members, or degrading their personal opinions. If you do not like something about a certain thread, please stay out of it.

Do warn if a poem of yours has excessive swearing content, or other insulting content.

I'll post some of mine later, hope this thread isn't ignored.

Start being poetic!

Spork-Queen.EXE · Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 3:44 pm Post subject:

I have a few I'll share, I suppose.

To Meriu, Love Enzan
Comments: Yup. Very odd EXE pairing, I know. I wrote it a while ago....uhh....Enzan's POV. Just a warning, if mentioning of...er...suicide methods offends you, don't read it, because there's some in the last stanza. ^^;

"You don't know it but I'm watching you
And I think you're the most beatutiful person in the world
But I can never tell you
You're his, and I need to just sit back and watch
Our future is written, and someone lost the eraser.

I love the way you look at me in hard times
When you smile, and say "It'll be all right"
Take my hand and help me up
Brush off the blood and dirt
But quickly rush to his aid
And I feel as I'm tumbeling back into the rubbel
Should I even live?

You'll never know it, but you're the greatest
I don't even know why, but I swear it's true
And now I'll pour my heart out
To no one but myslef
Keep the feeling botteled up
Let them stab at my ego

I seem to be in control
Running a company with my father's aid
The pressure is on me
I'm the greatest, they say
A genuis, they say
But I feel like the dumbest

I'm holding the knife in one hand
The pills in the other
Standing on a ledge
Asking you to care
Asking you
To just be there."

The Good Friend
Comments: Was supposed to be a song...but I'm teh lazy and never got around to it. It's sort of short, it's not really fully compleated. oo; And yes, there's a story behind it, but I don't feel like telling. I'll spar you the teenage drama. XD

"The good friend
She’s always there
Holding your hand and wiping the tears
Attempting to chase away all the fears
Watching as you go
Worrying the whole time.

The good friend
She never tells it
She’s jealous of the other girls
But you just don’t know.
She tries to tell it to you
Drops all the right hints
But you might be too dense
Just don’t get it.

The good friend
Is sick of her title
She wants nothing more
Than to be the girl you love.

So take a closer look next time
Because the good friend
Might just be the person you least expect her to be.

She might just be me."

That's it for now. Feel free to laugh at my lack of poetic talent!
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Elementalman.EXE · Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 4:07 pm Post subject:

A) Shouldn't this be in the FanFic Section?

B) Wouldn't it be easier If the person made there own thread for OT ones and Rockman ones?
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Drake Nightshade · Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 4:12 pm Post subject:

Sonnet format.

Roll...and Iceman

Your chilling love never ceases to show you care.
Always warm and fuzzy like your coat.
You're like a tiny teady bear.
Never one quick to smote.

If I had never found you,
and you had never fell,
you would have lost your world around you,
and then gone straight to cyber-h3ll.

But now you're here with me,
loving me with all your soul,
rushing like the sea,
coming closer to your goal.

Of loving me true,
Just as you are blue.
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Filthster · Net Battler Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 52

Well if its in the fanfic section less people will notice it, plus this could be more widespread and general, not just rockman based.

Unnamed:

Its was the worst thing I could say
Rimming the pool of a sulphur's day
Forewarned and in flight
No more and no light

Before the crush on a summer's lay
We fell together to hell's black bay
Hold me, I won't bite
or kill me here tonight

Did I deserve this vengeful pay?
I cupped the moon (for you) and heard you say:
"Till noon is in night,
stop your prayers and your plights"

My heart was broken on that May
Prayed for euthanasia and away
See the ghost of my might
Drown in blood and goodnight

Elementalman.EXE · Posted: Sun May 22, 2005 5:12 am Post subject:

Yes but poems fall under Writing and in the fanfic forum we can Post, OT, Original work, Rockman
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moocowbob44 · Posted: Sun May 22, 2005 8:07 am Post subject:

That's a pretty good poem it's nice and deep like all poems should be. You might call it "misery".
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littlealien234 · Joined: 22 May 2005 Posts: 22 Location: on the deathstar

i dont like poams Sad

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Nazne · Shukei - Hakuteiken Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Posts: 1133

So why do you post? :P Kindly use common sense.

These are actually pretty damn good and emotional. :O I mean, I've no ear for poems, but they really do represent their subjects well.

-BMA

**Sketch** · Posted: Sun May 22, 2005 9:15 am Post subject:

littlealien234 · Joined: 22 May 2005 Posts: 22 Location: on the deathstar

just kidding :]
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Filthster · Net Battler Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 52

If a mod or admin wants to move the topic then fine, let them decide please.

I have some more, just not on me they are all in this book i left at school.

Hasegawa Rayven · Posted: Sun May 22, 2005 11:21 am Post subject:

Ok, Just so I can say it, I've seen the trend with these Kind of Threads being that you Post one of your own Poems in the Start up post, Instead of jus putting the thread up and saying come put your poems here. But this is just my own Opinion.

Here's one of my own.

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"Rain"

My heart is troubled.

My spirit broken.

My body is injured.

My thoughts unspoken.

But when I listen to the rain,

All my troubles wash away.

Everything becomes a wonder,

In the light of the coming day.

And my heart begins to mend,

As my spirit seeks a friend.

While my body heals so slowly,

And my thoughts come 'round again.

As I listen to the rain,

To the dripping and the spatter,

and I rest my weary frame,

All my troubles seem not to matter.

Shall I give you my heart?

Will you be my spirits lift?

Will you help me heal my body?

And take my thoughts as the dearest gift?

Or shall I just listen to the rain,

As we play this lonely game,

to the dripping and the spatter,

that makes my problems seem not to matter.

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moocowbob44 · Posted: Mon May 23, 2005 2:38 pm Post subject:

That's pretty good (better than my 4 th grade english teacher) but doesen't unspoken have more cylables than broken? I think that was you make a ryming word and then with say...5 cylables and you then think of a ryming word with another 5 cylables? It may be wrong or was that sentence cylables Confused

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Hasegawa Rayven · Posted: Mon May 23, 2005 5:30 pm Post subject:

No, It's called Free Form.

As long as it fits what YOU want it to It's fine.

Read it, I think It flows rather nicely.

"Rain" is my favorite of the ones I've done.
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Poochy.EXE · Posted: Mon May 23, 2005 6:01 pm Post subject:

Well, since I'm pretty much incapable of writing anything too serious, I have three light-hearted ones here that I wrote a while ago for English class.

First one's your typical rhymed verse. My (former, not the witch I have this year) English teacher loved this one.

Lousy Neighbors
I have a next-door neighbor who’s real annoying, you see.
He’s extremely stupid, and it really bugs me.
Often I just want to let it out and yell,
Or maybe pack my bags and go to a hotel.
Whenever I look next door, it’s always quite a mess.
What the heck goes on in there is anybody’s guess.
I don’t think I want to know what he does in there.
The sight of it would probably be too much for me to bear.
It’s really irritating, but I guess I shouldn’t grouse.
That’s what I get for living next to the White House.

Second one was also for an assignment in the same unit by the same teacher, which was to write a free verse with as much figurative language (similies, metaphor, hyperboles, personification, and onomatopoeia) as we could put in. This was what I wrote:

Yuck!
The school lunch tastes horrible,
And it smells, too.
Whenever someone opens the lid on the soup,
Every dog within a mile howls.

The bread is hard as stone.
People trying to chew it
Look like they’re constipated.

The pizza’s always on fire,
And plastic wraps are always
Full of steam.
Whenever one is opened,
POOF! It’s a magic show!

The hamburgers give you hiccups
The milk has a pH of 2,
But I brought my own lunch.
HA!

And finally, once again, same class and teacher. This one's a limerick, quite obviously inspired by Rockman.

He Won’t Byte
A computer scientist named Doc Light
Made a robot just like a kid one night.
He gave it human needs
Such as the need to feed.
Now it begs, “C’mon, just one little byte?”
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Filthster · Net Battler Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 52

Hello everyone, sorry for reviving the topic, i've been away plus i bring a poem.

I'm also having problems with my stupid admin in the school who has banned General chat because of the language, same with gamefaqs. stupid.

anyways

Human Eve:

I was scarred with the venture of Moses.
Of visions accompanied by our eve
Our noon held high feasts as we danced for the moon
So naive as came this biblical loop.

We drank the sea in a vampyric fashion
Tainted water fell hopes of our free
Ranidaphobia filled the god's discontent
As ir3onic luck charms fell into our arms

The 33third came in the form of live sand
No cure for itch of this pestilant fee
Our reincarnated livestock fell fourth to their swarm
This manure killer rose from the corpse of the food

The plague forced our stomachs desert dry
Unseen soul-sucker of pestilence, why?
Curse this skin, clothes covered in boils
Further itch, like picking our fleas

Now the clouds form a heathen curse-seal
Flames lipped with oil, touch incinerating
Giant swarms cover this sick troden land
Grass, missing land in its Egypt

Flares of hands blind mine eyes to black
Like my heart, turn your mind Pharoah
Cries plague through the streets unignored
Eldest, son of mine. Lord, you, die!

There it is, pretty straight forward.
byes

Mist · Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2005 9:22 pm Post subject:

Okay, here's a few of mine

Why Mommy?

Why mommy?
You seemed so very nice
But when it came to me,
you didn't think it twice.
I was a special gift to you
to help you ease the pain
You were badly wounded,
and left out in the rain.
Daddy didn't want me
you seemed so unaware
But I still love the both of you
do you even care?

I could’ve been an astronaut
high up in outer space
Or a great detective
who could find any missing trace
I could've been a doctor
who saved many, many lives
Or an Olympic swimmer,
up on the high dive
I might've been a scientist
known throughout the world
Or maybe a ballet dancer
who elegantly twirled.

I guess I'll never know for sure
For you threw my life away
I never got to hear you sing
or see the light of day
I love you mommy
I love you daddy
But now my life is torn
I really love the both of you
and I wish I had been born.

Pain

You tell me I'm a weirdo,
that I'm just another freak
But I'm not gonna take it
not turn the other cheek

The Bible says to do so
but who is to decide
After all, being passive,
will end in suicide

I used to be a weakling
just a regular door mat
but after being teased for years,
I decided to change all that

Go ahead and tease me
I'm not gonna cry
But just before you begin,
can I just ask you 'why?'

Is it a necessity
to cause someone such pain?
Every word you say to them
stings like acid rain

You laugh and say you're playing
but it's not a joke at all
You make fun of them for walking,
and laugh when they fall

Do you recall that kid you knew,
the one that you called names?
Well they tried to kill themselves,
and he'll never be the same

People's lives are hard enough
without you there to assist
It may be a game to you
watching their attempts to resist

You see, you are a murderer,
shattering many lives
It seems to me that others' pain,
is what makes you thrive

I guess you'll never see your crime,
you still think it's a game,
Well, all I can say to you is
it's rather kind of lame

There's one last thing though,
something I wonder is true,
would you still love this abuse
if it were happening to you?

Monolog of an Abandoned Friend

Here I lay
in this dark void
suffering a fate
I could not avoid

My only friend
threw me away
I remember the times
we used to play

I was her everything
her true best friend
but all good things
must come to an end

We used to laugh
We used to cry
but now it's over
and I know why

That little girl
is not longer here
she is older now
just as I feared

She no longer plays
now she writes
and stays up late
into the night

She's found someone else
to take my place
it is a fact
that I must face

I wish I could tell her
how much I miss
every hug
and every kiss

I love her dearly
with all my heart
but now she's gone
we're worlds apart

Puppet

The soulless puppet
sits upon the shelf
isolated
falling into herself

Controlled by all
but her own will
she cannot move
or she will be killed

She cannot run
she cannot hide
her only thought
is suicide

The monster smirks
as he pulls her strings
she's going to die
but then the bell rings

The puppet awakens
her expression dim
as she thinks about
the world she's in

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-Mist