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Tachyon360 Le Croissant
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2005 3:53 pm Post subject: Eh, why not? This is the complete set... |
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Well, as soon as I heard the latest REO Trimonthly Contest, I quickly went and brainstormed. The chip would be modern-artsy, with an abstract space-like look to match Stream. It'd be brushed aluminum. It would have a special edition logo etched in. It? No, it would be a limited edition series of chips with a press release to go with it!
So I went to work on those designs. Suddenly I came upon a startling revelation. "Wait a sec... It doesn't say how many chips per entry are allowed!" Then I remembered my mother's saying "Kto pyta, nie błądzi." (Uhm, yeah. It's a Polish saying, that literally means "Who asks, doesn't err.") So I followed that advice and asked Ryouko.
Well, to cut a long story short, Ryouko pointed out that it would take too long to judge all the entries if several designs were submitted. I'm glad I asked, because I submitted my entry before Ryouko clarified that little tidbit in one of her updates.
I figured I shouldn't let these go to waste. I won't post the design I submitted until after the contest is over, so here are the other three for now. *Edit: Yay, I can post it now... I guess.*
Vortex Nova
Warm Light <-- This one got submitted.
Plasma Rain
Aurora Illusion
Feel free to bash it, flame me, and utterly tear it apart. I welcome brutal honesty as much as praise and constructive criticism.
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SamBarry Net Savior
Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 194 Location: In the nothing, creating another heaven and earth.
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2005 4:00 pm Post subject: |
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:O methinks you made them a little too artsy. Most chip art I've seen (such as from the games) is simpler in appearance. what do the chips you made do? _________________ Please comment about my work. I don't care what you say. Like my art? Hate my art? Wanna express feelings of undying love to me? Wanna express your intent to murder me in my sleep? Comment. |
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Tachyon360 Le Croissant
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2005 4:21 pm Post subject: |
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I only worked out Vortex Nova and Warm Light. I pretty much gave up on the rest after I submitted my entry.
If you want it,
Quote: | Name: Vortex Nova
Damage: 300
MB: 112
Code: *
Attributes: Clears field, Deals damage to both sides
Classification: Giga Chip
Description: This chip takes 1.5 seconds to charge, during which time, the effect can be broken upon taking damage (the SuperArmor NC program counters this effect). Once the chip is charged, the battlefield will freeze. It will create a small swirling energy cloud in the center of the field that cracks all panels and sucks in all defensive chips (Aura, Barrier, Kawarimi, etc), all obstacles (Stone Cube, Poison Anubis, etc), and all unused chips equipped during that turn; all of this occurs simultaneously and takes about a second. Following that, the cloud explodes with a massive amount of force and the screen whites out for a second. Both sides take 300 damage. (Full Synchro and damage-modifying chips may affect the final damage).
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Plasma Rain would be much like the Starfall spell from Warcraft 3 and World of Warcraft in that it sends a large salvo of homing plasma balls rapidly falling down upon the opponent. It would also provide an unbreakable protective shield during the effect. The effect would have a moment to charge, like Vortex Nova, and during that time, the effect could be broken. Vortex Nova can eliminate Plasma Rain after it's charged, but you'd have a tough time charging it up successfully.
Aurora Illusion would make the battlefield glow with pretty, shifting, pulsing colors. It would reverse the opponents controls and make him jump around or freeze randomly, and randomly mess up your attack's appearance. (Like if you'd throw a bomb from 3 squares back, the opponent would see you using a hammer from 2 squares back, or if you'd shoot a cannon on the bottom row, your opponent would see you use a WideSword on the top row, to illustrate two possibilities.) It would also randomly make it appear like you're using an effect you're not (like the green flash associated with invincibility or a Soul Unison you're not using) and visa versa. Lastly, it would occasionally make several of you appear on the battlefield, none of which would necessarily reflect your true position.
Edit: Spelling.
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moocowbob44 Net Savior
Joined: 25 Mar 2005 Posts: 148 Location: some were in Texas
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2005 4:30 pm Post subject: |
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:O Those are really cool how did you do that that looks like... google worthie
how did you do the Aurora one? _________________
Credit for the sig goes to Hikari Angel
credit for the avatar goes to Meta |
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Tachyon360 Le Croissant
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2005 6:58 pm Post subject: |
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Google-worthy? What do you mean by that?
As for how I made them, I don't really remember. I just started with a starfield I made a long time ago, and started brushing and playing with filters as I saw fit, at each individual step. |
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HeatShadow Hydralisk Specialist
Age: 37 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 864 Location: Hidden within shadows....or under the table.
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Raijin Soul Unison
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 842 Location: Sask. Canada
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2005 7:53 pm Post subject: |
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I don't see why chip pictures can't be complex like that. I actually think the first two make pretty good chip pics, although the last one looks way too...messy. Yeah, it looks like it embodies the "aurora" concept well enough, but it's still just a bunch of colours. You should have had something else in the picture to add some kind of focus. Like in most actual battlechips for widespread effects like that you'd see a navi or virus in the background suffereing the effects of chip. Like the AntiElec chip would just be a bunch of electricity if it weren't for the normal navi in there getting zapped by it. |
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Tachyon360 Le Croissant
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Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 4:23 pm Post subject: |
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Well, messy is kinda the point of the chip's effects.
Anyway, there's a reason that one wasn't submitted. I know there isn't a focused subject of the picture, but what would you put in there without breaking the theme? I can't think of anything. |
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Raijin Soul Unison
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Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 4:29 pm Post subject: |
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Well since it seems to cause a kind of confusion to opponents, I'd just put a picture of a bewildered navi behind the aurora. Or since it affects the field, perhaps a picture of the battle platform like in the Repair chip. There has to be something distinct in a chip picture or there's no point in having a chip picture. It doesn't matter if the effect of the chip causes uncertainty, that doesn't mean the chip picture should. |
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Tachyon360 Le Croissant
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Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 4:50 pm Post subject: |
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I'm going with a semi-abstract theme here, though. I suppose an isometric view of a 6x3 glowing grid could work, but a confused Navi would definitely break the theme. |
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Tachyon360 Le Croissant
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 5:47 pm Post subject: |
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Yay, the judging is finally over!
I'm curious how my submitted chip compares to my other three in the opinion of anyone that decides to post.
http://i.1asphost.com/Tachyon/Warm%20Light.jpg |
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Ming Yi Nebula
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 6:01 pm Post subject: |
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I love the details you put into the chip itself. Not only with the image but with the metallic part as well. I envy you. :puku: _________________ I'll remember that day, and I won't let it go. |
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Raijin Soul Unison
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 6:22 pm Post subject: |
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Hmm, I woulda gone with Plasma Rain or Vortex Nova for the chip pics, but I guess Warm Light has the most original effects.
Though I think the strong point of your submission was the background "press release". That's the sort of creative edge I wish I thought of. Of course my chip was more of a joke than the kind with a story behind it, but you know what I'm talking about.
It seems all the entries either took the serious approach (making a mini-fanfic story to go along with the chip), the un-serious approach (just a silly joke), or the game mechanics approach (chip was designed specifically as one that would fit in an actual game, and sounded like one the actual game designers would think of themselves one day). I personally liked the former approaches myself. |
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla I Used to Be Sexy
Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 776 Location: Lumine av. (c) meh
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 6:35 pm Post subject: |
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It looks to be a very well-CG'd battle chip. Good use of aluminum effects on the chip's body, and it has that whole dramatic "Northern Lights" look to it. A little artsy for a Battle Chip, but still very nicely done...goodness knows I couldn't do this. A promising entry; good luck in the contest! |
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Raijin Soul Unison
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 6:43 pm Post subject: |
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Uh...good luck? The results are already posted. |
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Tachyon360 Le Croissant
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 7:03 pm Post subject: |
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Raijin wrote: | Hmm, I woulda gone with Plasma Rain or Vortex Nova for the chip pics, but I guess Warm Light has the most original effects. | Yeah, I figured Warm Light would be the best compromise. Sometimes, I hate compromise.
Raijin wrote: | Though I think the strong point of your submission was the background "press release". That's the sort of creative edge I wish I thought of. Of course my chip was more of a joke than the kind with a story behind it, but you know what I'm talking about. | Ironically, I thought the mock press release would be a weaker point of my submission, but threw it in anyway so that I'd have a bit more than just a basic chip description. I also threw in a subtle crack at the work of corporate and government leaders (the friendly talks in Jawaii and the generous "independent" tests), but it seems nobody picked up on it. Ah well.
Anyway, if you don't mind me asking, what was your entry? |
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Raijin Soul Unison
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 11:32 pm Post subject: |
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I'm "Ryan". I don't know why they took that name instead of Raijin. Must have been because it showed up as the title for my e-mail adress when i sent it in. So yeah, I went with the special technique of my version of Skullman.exe.
My original idea for a submission was more in the "game mechanics" approach, but like yours, it was actually four chips that I didn't think would go well separated. I probably should have used it anyway somehow. The chip idea I was originally going to use was a shot that would attach a certain elemental weakness to the target for a few seconds. OilSlick (fire), FungusSpores (wood), WaterSpray (elec), and IceCrystals (aqua). Had a virus design to go wit them too. Now I'm about inspired enough to draw them up anyway. |
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SamBarry Net Savior
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 10:30 am Post subject: |
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Mine was Worldshaper. I had a flavor description (what it does in anime/manga) in my mind when I first looked at the contest, but then went with a function description (what it does in game) when I saw Pyo's sample description. _________________ Please comment about my work. I don't care what you say. Like my art? Hate my art? Wanna express feelings of undying love to me? Wanna express your intent to murder me in my sleep? Comment. |
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Unknown Neo Cross Fusion!
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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 12:31 pm Post subject: |
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Wow now that's an interesting set of chips. Nice work. |
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