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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 12:14 am Post subject: Crazy Murderer of Akihara |
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Alright, I'm posting my second one. This one is shorter, a measly five-chapters. So I'll only post one chapter at a time.
EDIT:Okay, here's the genre. Hr.
Author:CrossFusionStarman
Title:Crazy Murderer of Akihara
I do not own Rockman.EXE in anyway. This fanfic contains a few of my original characters from my first fanfic. Plus, it's really gory and has mild cursing. This one is centered around Meiru, btw. And without further blabbering from me:
ROCKMAN EXE FANFIC
CRAZY MURDERER OF AKIHARA
AND YES, THIS WILL BE GORY.
Chapter 01:The first ones to die:Netto and Fuyuki!
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Meiru walked into the school, early as usual, and found her seat. A few kids were already there, one of them being Shuryou. "Shuryou? Why are you here?" She asked. "My foster family decided they wanted me to go back to school, so I'm here." He replied. Netto burst in the door. "Wow, even you're here early, Netto!" Meiru said, impressed. "Yeah, well Fuyuki said he was sick of me waking up late so he got me up early." He said. "At least now you won't be lectured." Rock said. Roll laughed silently to herself. After a few minutes, class was in session. Finally, when the long day was over, Netto and Meiru walked home together. "See ya tomorrow." Netto said, turning in the opposite direction. Meiru nodded and went home. Everything seemed fine. However, she soon got a phone call. "Hello?" She answered. "Meiru?!? Is that you?!?" Netto asked over the phone. He sounded hurt and desperate. "Netto, what wrong?!" She asked. "There's someone in the house! He's trying to...AGH!!!" Netto screamed. It was silent, and the only thing Meiru could hear was her beating heart. Than a voice spoke into the phone. It was dark, rough. "Sorry, he had to disconnect. Just be warned, stick your nose into what's doesn't involve you, and you'll be sorry." It said. *click.* Meiru gasped and looked out the window. The Hikari household was dark, with a window broken. A figure slipped out through the window. Meiru got a coat on, told her parents she was heading out for a walk, and went to the house. She slipped in through the broken window and looked around. The place looked torn apart, and all valuable stuff was missing. Meiru bumped into something. She looked down and saw Haruka, lying facedown, with a knife in her back. "Netto!'' Meiru said and ran down the hall. She checked Fuyuki's room. He was lying in the corner with bullets all over him and several knifes in his body. One arm was twisted at a 360 degree angle. "Oh...God..." She said. Fuyuki raised his head. "Meiru..." He said. She ran over to Fuyuki and held onto his hand. "Don't talk, it'll just make the pain worse." She said. Fuyuki shook his head no. He had a huge knife lodged in his forehead, barely above his brain. "No...I won't live...just listen to what I have to say." He said. Meiru nodded. "A man broke in...he killed Mom and did this to me. I don't know what happened to Netto, but he went for him next..." Fuyuki said, and coughed up blood. "I only have a few seconds...Meiru...check on Netto." He said. "I feel...cold..." Fuyuki coughed once more, and his head hung limp. Meiru checked his pulse. He was dead. Tears stung her eyes. "If this happened to Fuyuki..." She ran up the stairs and entered Netto's room. She gasped. Netto was lying sprawled on the bed, bullets riddled throughout his body. His face was in an expression of shock, his mouth open with blood flowing out like a waterfall. "Meiru...'' He said. Meiru ran up to Netto. "Why did he attack you?!?" She asked. "I don't know...I can't see you right now...all I see is a dark tunnel with light at the end..." Netto replied. "Run away from the light!" She begged. "It's no use. It...sucking me towards it...goodbye, Meiru..." Netto said, and his body fell limp, lifeless. Meiru hung her head for a sec. Tears flowed down her cheeks. ''Meiru..." Roll said, concerned. "No..." Meiru whispered. Then she screamed "NO!!! THIS ISN'T HAPPENING!!!" She shouted, and broke into uncontrollable sobs. She couldn't remember anything past hearing cop car sirens before she passed out from sadness.
Author Notes:As you can tell, this is gonna be gory. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla I Used to Be Sexy
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 12:26 am Post subject: |
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Ugh. I couldn't stop cringing. That aside, a suspenseful, spine-tingling, and almost tragic plot you have going here. I'm almost afraid to read more...but that just shows how well you wrote this chapter. _________________ Better to keep your mouth shut and make people wonder if you are stupid, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt. |
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 12:31 am Post subject: |
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Hooray! I can write good! I'll place out the second chapter in 10 minutes. After that, I'm done on this forum until morning. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 12:45 am Post subject: |
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Okay, here's chapter 02!:
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Chapter 2:Yaito and Dekao is next!
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Meiru woke up in her bed. She was still in her clothes and coat. She got up and went downstairs. "Mom? Dad?'' She asked. She saw her Mom sitting on the couch, watching T.V. She turned around. "Oh, Meiru..." she said. "What happened?'' Meiru asked. "After the police found you in Netto's house with the dead bodies, they suspected you of being the killer but decided that was impossible because you had absolutely nothing capable of hurting anyone. They are looking for the killer." Meiru's mom said. "They said they were holding funeral services for the whole family tomorrow. Even Dr.Hikari got killed as well." She said. Then she walked up to her daughter and hugged her gently. "I'm sorry about all of this, honey." She said. Her mom left the room. "Roll." Meiru said. "Yeah?" "We're gonna go look for Rock." Meiru said. She plugged Roll into her PC. Roll went as fast as she could to Netto's PC. When she arrived, a dark sight awaited her. Rock was there, impaled on a huge, sharp stone jutting out of the ground. "Rock!" She cried. A white shimmer appeared behind her. The shimmer turned out to be a white, transluscent form of Rock. "Is that you?" She asked. "Sort of. It's my spirit." He said. Rock's spirit grabbed Roll's hand. "Roll, listen to me. A crazy man came in and did this to all of us, and his navi did this to me. both of them had only one desire:To kill. Not anything but that. They just wanted to see blood fly everywhere." Rock's grip hardened. "He's going to go for someone else. Stop him." Rock said, and faded away. Roll kneeled down. "Rock..." She said. Roll sniffed and cried. "It's not fair..." She got up. "He's gone, Meiru." "Try Starman. Maybe he's alive." Meiru said. No luck there, Roll soon found out, as she found the navi lying decapitated on the floor. Meiru went out into the park. "This sucks." She said. "I never thought he would leave like that." Yaito said, entering the park. She sat down next to Meiru. "I didn't see what happened, but you saw what happened to them." Yaito said. "I guess I can't exactly say cheer up." "Thanks anyways." Meiru said. "I'm gonna go home." She said, and got up. Yaito sighed. "I guess I better head home as well." She said and got up. A gun cocked. Yaito looked up and gasped. It was the last thing she ever did before the man pulled the trigger. An explosion rang out through Akihara. Meiru heard it and ran back. She gasped as she saw a man with a rifle pointing it at Yaito's dead body. Yaito laid on the ground bleeding, dead. The man looked and saw Meiru next. He aimed his rifle. Meiru screamed and ran. "Why?!?" She asked herself. She wasn't looking where she was going and crashed into Dekao. "Hey, what's the rush?'' He asked. "Yaito's...!!!" Meiru stuttered. "Don't worry Meiru. I'll protect you." Dekao said. The man with the rifle stepped out of the stepped out of the shadows and shot Dekao down. The large boy fell bleeding to the ground. Meiru took one second to look in horror, and then ran screaming and crying back to her house.
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The two scientists in the room watched the screen. "The subject is soaking it all in. Her friends are, to her, dead." The first one noted. The second one nodded. "Miss Yoko will be pleased." He said. ''Now which of her friends shall be killed?" The first one asked. The second one pointed to a picture. "This one." They nodded, and pressed the button.
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Netto lounged on his bed. "Nothing to do today." He commented. Fuyuki entered his room. "Hey Netto. Meiru's been kidnapped." He said. "What?!?" He asked. "That's all I know." He said. "The Net Rangers want to temporarily recruit us to help find her, considering I have inhuman strength and you're her best friend." Netto nodded. "Let's leave right away.''
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I bet you have no clue what just happened, aside from the murders. All will be revealed, my friends. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 9:47 am Post subject: |
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Time to release another chapter of gory bloodshed. I name my chapters wierd, don't I?
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Chapter 3:Lauren and Shuryou:Hang 'em high!
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Meiru sat on her bed, in fetal position. What's going on? Why is the killer only targeting my friends? she thought. Her mind was spinning with so many questions. "Meiru...is everything okay?" Roll asked. "NO! Nothing's okay! My friends are dying right before my eyes, and I can't stop it! You should know!" Meiru said angrily. "Meiru, don't get mad. I'm just trying to..." Roll said, but before she could finish, Meiru interupted. "Well stop! I don't care what you're trying to do, just leave me alone!!!" She said, and shoved her face into her pillow and sobbed. Roll sighed. "She's just going through stress." She told herself. Meiru got up and left the room, without Roll. "Don't worry yourself over it, Roll." She told herself. "She just needs some time alone." Meiru went outside and walked down the park. She was afraid to look anywhere but ahead for the fear she might see another one die. "Meiru..." Someone called. She ran. "Whenever I hear my name, someone will die!" She said. She gasped and stopped. Shuryou and Lauren were hung from a tree by there necks, old-fashioned styled. If that wasn't enough, the were also staked to the tree. Shuryou's face was that of pain, and Lauren's looked like she was asleep. A never-ending sleep. Meiru screamed "NOOO!!!!" And ran home. On the way, she saw the man with the rifle aim for her, and he shimmered a little, like a distortion. "It's just my tears." She said, and ran. The man vanished, almost as if he disappeared from thin air.
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"What are you doing?!?" The second scientist exclaimed. "Oh, crap. I'm sorry." The first scientist said. "Sorry? You caused an error with the killer! The girl might've noticed!" Scientist #2 said. "No. She blamed it on her tears. We're safe, for now." Scientist #1 said. Scientist #2 sighed. "Do that again and Miss Yoko could fire both of us."
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"Welcome to the Net Rangers." Saloma said. "Yes. Just remember you're only with us temporarily." Miyuki said. Netto and Fuyuki nodded. "And while you're here, you must follow my commands!" Commander Beef said. "I am Commander Beef! You must refer to me as that name!" They all left to the server room. "Who is this wierdo?" Fuyuki whispered to Netto. "Don't ask." Netto replied. "Alright. If we log into here, we can probably disrupt the area your friend is in." Saloma said. Netto nodded, and everyone plugged in their navis. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 10:22 am Post subject: |
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Wow, didn't really expect to see Netto or Fuyuki live through the first chapter. I still don't know exactly what's going on in this fic in terms of who is "the next to die" or if the whole thing is even staged, but my best guess: [spoil:29246248f1]Meiru is unknowingly the subject of a psychological experiment of some sort.[/spoil:29246248f1] _________________ Better to keep your mouth shut and make people wonder if you are stupid, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt. |
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 10:32 am Post subject: |
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I'm not gonna say if you're right or wrong, because that just ruins the pleasure. I'll put out chapter 4 around...1:30. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 11:32 am Post subject: |
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Here's chapter 4. Oh, and the thing with Enzan in it? I cuoldn't resist. I was just feeling...wierd:
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Chapter 4:Tohru sliced up and Enzan blasted.
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Meiru burst into her house, crying. "WHY!!!" She shouted. Her mother turned, and suddenly she shimmered and vanished. "Now she's gone too!" Meiru said, crying.
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"IDIOT! ARE YOU TRYING TO GET US FIRED?!?" Scientist #1 said. "Hey, my hand slipped. The girl just thinks her mom died, that's all. Let's go on with it." Scientist #2 replied.
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Meiru grabbed Roll's PET and ran from her house. it was 12:00 midnight, and it was raining, but Meiru ran anyways. "Meiru-sama, where are we going?" Roll asked. "Anywhere! Somewhere not here!" She screamed, and ran through Akihara. She screamed when she saw Tohru's body, sliced up, several body parts lying on the ground. Meiru ran, the splish of rain-or was it blood?-against her shoes. She burst into a house. "Enzan!" She screamed. Enzan walked out of a room. "Oh, Meiru. Why are you here?" He asked. "Please, Enzan! Help me!" She begged. Enzan smiled. "I'm not a wimp to be killed easily. You actually came at the right time. I ordered a large pizza. We can share it." He said. The doorbell rang. "Huh, here already?'' He said, and went to the door. "No! Don't open it!" Meiru shouted. Enzan opened the door, and the man with the rifle was there. He pointed it to Enzan's head. "I guess this means you aren't the pizza guy?'' Enzan asked "No one likes a smart ass." The killer said, and pulled the trigger. Meiru watched in horror as Enzan's head was loaded with bullets, and he fell to the ground. She screamed, and, crying, ran out of the house past the rifleman.
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Rock and Starman were checking the western area. "I found something!" Rock called. Starman looked. "Starman to Skullman. We found something." Within minutes, all navis were there. "Oh yeah, it's the generator." Sharkman said. "Then let's blow it up!" Starman said, and smashed it with a meteor. "What's with him?" Woodman asked. "Well, he thinks that you shut something off by destroying it." Rock sighed. "Either way, the VR Room should stop." Skullman said.
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Meiru was running. Running and crying. Then she heard a whirring noise. She looked around. Everything was distorting, and then it all vanished. She was in a black room. "NO!! Why did it malfunction?" A voice said. "Yoko?" Meiru asked. A door opened. "Yes, Meiru. It's me." The girl said. The girl was about as tall as Yaito, and she wore designer clothes. "Yoko? Where are we?'' Yoko frowned. "This room was supposed to make you believe that your friends were killed and make you insane. I'll have to fire the scientists." She said. "...Why did you do this to me?!?" Meiru asked, distressed. Yoko slapped her. "You ruined me! I was the top student in school, but you came along and beat me in everything! And then, you found out that my family was hoarding diamonds. You couldn't keep your mouth shut, you had to tell everyone! I lost all of my friends, and my family is a wreck because of you, you stupid bitch!" Yoko shouted. "Load backup VR Room!" She said. The VR Room came back on, and this time it was an image field of a burning Akihara. "This was supposed to be the final scene for you to go insane." Yoko explained. "Now, it will be the place of your death!" Yoko said, and pulled out a rifle. "You'd kill someone?" Meiru asked. Yoko nodded. "My life is screwed up already. It won't change from killing you." She said. Then a blast knocked the rifle from her hand. "You really shouldn't be handling that." Said a familiar voice. Both turned to see..."Neyuko?!?" Meiru exclaimed. The boy walked in, his hand still smoking from the blast. "How are you here?" Meiru asked. "VR Rooms, surprisingly, allow Cross Fusions as well. So, shall we leave?" Neyuko asked, smiling. Yoko picked up the rifle and fired at Neyuko. He caught the bullet easily and threw it down. "A girl like you shouldn't hold things like that." Neyuko said, laughing, and plucked the rifle from Yoko's hands. He snapped it in half. Picking her up, Neyuko raised a hand. "Next time, don't take my friend. When you screw with her, you screw with me." He said, and delivered a backhand slap to Yoko. It knocked her out. The VR Room shut down.
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Alright, one more chapter, friends. Like I said, original characters. The last chapter will be pretty short. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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You now it may be eaiser to use the Genre system and put the Fanfic title in the Threads name. Just a suggestion _________________
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 12:44 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah I was thinking about that awhile ago. I'll do that with the rest of my fanfics. And in 15 minutes I'll put up the final chapter. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 1:16 pm Post subject: |
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The final, short chapter is here:
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Chapter 5:It was all fake.
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Neyuko walked Meiru out of the room. As they left the VR Room, Neyuko glowed and split back into Fuyuki and Rock. "We were very worried." Netto said. "What was it like in there?'' Fuyuki asked. Meiru shivered. "It was super scary. Everyone I knew kept dying and I couldn't do anything. I almost did go insane." She said. "Thank God you didn't." Roll said. Netto put his arm on her shoulder. Meiru blushed. "Um...Netto?" She asked. "Don't worry. It was all fake. It's gone now, Meiru.'' Netto said, smiling. "Ooh, hitting on her, are we?" Fuyuki asked. "SHUT UP! She's freaked out, and I'm trying to comfort her, idiot!" Netto shouted. Fuyuki laughed. "Relax, just teasing you." Meiru hugged Netto. "Thanks, Netto. For everything." She said. Fuyuki left the room. "You two are having a moment. I'll leave." He said, gave the peace sign and left. Meiru and Netto laughed. "I bet it's good to know that we're all alive, and not dead, huh?" Netto asked. Meiru nodded. "By the way, what happened to Yoko?" She asked. "Well we put her in a unfortunate situation." Netto grinned.
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Yoko woke up. "Wh...where am I?'' She said. Then she saw a wraith-like Meiru come out of the shadows. "Yoko...I'm coming to drag you to hell..." It said. Yoko screamed. Watching from the monitor, Fuyuki laughed. "Yoko, you are one prissy bitch. Time for your punishment." He said, and pressed a button that said super scary illusion. Fuyuki laughed again, and Yoko screamed.
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