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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 1:46 pm    Post subject: Net Savior Deathmatch Battle Royale *chapter 7 added* Reply with quote

This is my first fanfic that I don't have done already. It'll probably be 10 chapters.

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Title:Net Savior Deathmatch Battle Royale
Genre: Both AA and Hr.
Lots of gore, mild cursing, original characters, and one saddistic TV show director named Sunayama(Yes, the same one from Stream and BN3). This is a homage to a manga series called Battle Royale, which is hands down one of the goriest mangas ever.

Chapter 01:Deathmatch Battle Royale
***
Netto was flipping through the channels on the T.V. For once his homework was finished, and there was no evil orginization trying to take over the world or whatever. Netto stopped on the news channel. His eyes were wide. "Oh man..." He said. "Something wrong, Netto-kun?" Rockman asked. Netto pointed to the screen. Kero was currently doing a report on a famous so-called "game show" known as Deathmatch Battle Royale, where 100 people from random locations are put in an abandoned locale, and they must fight to the death. Rockman said "How on Earth is that show legal?" "Because it gets good ratings. Plus, DNN was stupid enough to whore out the ability to broadcast this show." A voice said. It was Fuyuki, Netto and Rockman's older brother, who they had no clue existed until recently. "Are they showing the winner?" He asked. Netto nodded. The three brothers watched as a guy was being carried out by medics. He lifted his face, and he cackling, despite the fact that most of his skin on his face was missing, and he was bleeding like crazy. One of his arms had a bone sticking out of it. Rockman and Netto gasped, while Fuyuki muttered something about sick bastards. Fuyuki said "That would really suck if people who knew eachother had to go on that show." Netto nodded. At that moment, a window shattered and a smoke bomb was thrown into the house. Both of the two human teens felt the narcotics setting in. Netto slowly fell into a deep sleep. Fuyuki lasted a little longer. He looked around, fighting the urge to pass out. He saw a shadow outside. "Bastard..." He said, and tried to get up, but is body was too heavy. He fell down. "Dammit." He said, before drifting off into sleep.
***
5 hours later...

Netto woke up. He looked around. Looking down, he realized his was propped against a wall, tied up. He saw Fuyuki, trying to struggle out of his ropes. He also saw Shuryou, Enzan, Meiru, Dekao, Yaito, Tohru, Lauren, Laika, and several other of his friends tied up as well, but they were asleep. About 90 other people who looked like they were from different countries were tied up as well. "What is this?" Netto asked to no one. "I've got a pretty good guess." Fuyuki said, bitterly. Netto noticed that there were at least 50 PETs on a desk in the front of the room. "Why guess whan we can just tell you?" A voice said. Netto and Fuyuki looked to Sunayama enter the room. "You and these other 98 people are starring on DeathMatch Battle Royale, as well as your navis! The only twist is that all of you are Net Saviors. Pretty Shocking, huh?" He said. Netto gasped. "Why are you targeting only Net Saviors?" He asked. "We got the ratings for season 1, and they were down, so we thought we'd try this." Sunayama explained. "So you decided to have 100 dedicated netbattlers fight to the death just for ratings? Power hungry freak." Fuyuki said. Sunayama smiled. "Anger! The camera's love it!" Then he said "Today is a day of television revolution. Blood will fly everywhere! Welcome to Deathmatch Battle Royale-Net Savior style!"
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 3:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Heh... nice to see there's another member here that's not only a Battle Royale fan, but also crazy enough to make a Rockman fic based on it (I'm doing the same thing, although it's just a chapter of a fic and hasn't been written Razz).

I'm very interested in where this'll go... Just one word of advice though, It'd be a good idea to try to give some focus to how characters develop and are affected by the battle, instead of just focusing on gore and how characters die.
From what I've heard, quite a few Battle Royale fanfics that try to recreate the battle have fallen in to that trap and became pretty bad as a result.
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 3:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I might as well release chapter two. Please, read.

Chapter 02:Typical that our heroes start out with crappy stuff.
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"Each of you has been selected to compete in Deathmatch Battle Royale." Sunayama explained to the now awake and untied 100 people in the room. "We're going to be putting you in abandoned ruins of a city. Basically, you can hide anywhere you want within the city. The shops are still running by automated computers. Now, we will transport provisions to them occasionally, as well as additional supplies. You can take them, but the stores will consider this stealing and activate security." Sunayama put his hands in a firing position. "In other words, automated guns." He put his hands down. "You'll each recieve one weapon at the start. Anybody you kill, you can take their weapons. Each weapon is random, from Senbon(Acupuncture needles -CrossFusionStarman) to Panzer Fausts, or even greater. Who gets what is random. Oh, and don't think about teaming up against this T.V. Show." Sunayama said, smirking. "Which brings me to another element. When you were all knocked out, we placed a bomb in your chests." Netto placed his hand on his chest. After awhile of searching, he felt a lump underneath his clothes. He looked down his shirt and saw a black sphere-like thingy sticking out. "Basically, There has to be at least one kill every 24 hours. If there isn't, we detonate all the bombs. Oh, and don't try to leave the city. We have it surrounded by landmines." Sunayama said. "Any questions?" Meiru raised her hand. "Um, what about my parents? Because I know they wouldn't let me do this." Sunayama chuckled, as if she were a slow child. "Well, missy, this program is 100% legal, and your parents really don't have a say in this. The only thing they can do is watch you on TV, hoping you don't die. Anything else?" Enzan raised his hand. "You're a sick bastard, you know that?" He said. Sunayama laughed and said "Sick as it may be, it gets ratings. And the higher the ratings, the better my salary." "Money hungry shithead." Netto heard Fuyuki mutter. "Now then, the show will begin. When I call your name, come up and get a bag containing a weapon. I'll also give you your PET back as well, considering the city will have a Dimensional Area over it. When you all leave, the killing begins. Contestant #1:Hikari Fuyuki!" Sunayama said. Fuyuki walked up and snatched the bag fiercely, along with his PET. You could tell he was pissed. People got called up one by one. Netto was last. When he got his bag, it was light. Not a good sign. He thought. HE grabbed Rockman's PET. After leaving the building, he asked "Rockman? Are you there?" "Yeah, Netto-kun. I just can't believe this is happening." Rockman said. Netto nodded. He looked in his weapon bag and pulled it out. "A pizza cutter? give me a friggin' break!!!" He said. A hand came out of nowhere and grabbed Netto into a bush. "What the-" Netto said. "Shh. That loud mouth of yuors is gonna get us killed." Fuyuki said. "Fuyuki? Why are you hiding in a bush?" Netto asked. "Waiting for you. You really think I'm gonna become a killer?" Fuyuki said. "Well, you have killed in the past before." Netto said. "Not my fault." Fuyuki muttered. "Either way, what did you get as a weapon? We need all the defense we can get." Netto pulled out a pizza cutter. "Greeeaaat. Well, at least I got something useful." Fuyuki said, pulling out a crossbow. "I'm sure others have way more powerful weapons. We need to be careful." Fuyuki said. Both of the brother's navis appeared beside them. Meaning one thing:the Dimensional Area was set up, and the games had begun.

***
Laika was in luck. He had a sniper rifle, so he and Searchman would work great. Laika targeted a young Affriku Net Savior and his navi. "I hate to do this, but it's kill or be killed." Laika said. "Searchman, on three, we shoot." Searchman nodded. Both aimed. "1..." The kid could sense someone was targeting him. He pulled out his pistol, and looked around. "2..." The boy looked around with his navi. "3!!!'' BLAM!!! Two bodies fell to the ground.
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 4:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm... interesting.
The formatting makes it slightly more difficult to read, but your writing is good and clear, which balances that fairly well (although, formatting it a bit better would still probably be a good idea).

So...
This is just a guess, but are you going to have some of the characters mirroring other characters in the manga?
I can spot a few similarities, like Fuyuki being comparable to Shogo.
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 4:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm just gonna say this is gonna turn the heroes lives around forever. And as for characters reflecting the manga characters? Hmm...that seems reasonable. Maybe I'll have Netto as Shuuya, or Fuyuki as Shogo like you suggested. Laika will be one of the more violent characters, for sure. After this one is finished, by the way, I'm gonna take a break. I gotta let the other people have chances to finish theres, right? Plus, I got a pm from Plantman regarding all my activity here ^^; So I better take a short break after this one.
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 8:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've decided to write chapter 3.

***
Chapter 03:Enzan:Possible Serial Killer?
***
The gunshot was heard throughout the city. "Someone's dead." Fuyuki stated. "Do you think it was someone we knew?" Netto asked. "Well, there are hundreds of people on this island, and we know about 10% out of the remaining 90%. So it is a possibility." Rockman said. Starman replied "I friggin' hate math." The four walked down the abandoned streets, on the lookout for any rogue attackers. When they turned one corner, however, a potshot was fired at them. Fuyuki shoved Netto and Rockman back. "You two lay low!" He said. rockman and Netto ducked down behind a building, while Fuyuki and Starman looked for an attacker. Starman pointed. "There!" He said. Fuyuki looked and saw a girl in the shadows with a pistol. She realized she was caught, and fired again. This one hit Fuyuki's arm. Fuyuki gasped for a second and clutched his bleeding shoulder. "Fuyuki!" Netto and Rockman shouted. Starman didn't speak, but his expression was worried. "Shut up, dammit! do you wanna get killed?" Fuyuki asked. Netto and Rockman nodded and covered their mouth with a hand. Fuyuki painfully raised his bleeding arm and tried to shoot the girl with his crossbow and missed. the girl picked up her gun to shoot again, but then her eyes widened as she saw something. Fuyuki looked just in time to see a panzer faust missle hit the girl. Her body exploded, and several flaming pieces of skin rained down. Fuyuki examined a piece of hair on a burning head part. "White. Do we know any girls with white hair?" Fuyuki asked. Netto shook his head no. "I'd say I'd just saved your lives." A voice said. The four turned around to see Shuryou and Forte. Shuryou was holding a Panzer Faust. "Great timing." Netto said. "I can't believe YOU got the Panzer Faust." Fuyuki said. "Yeah, well it's just luck. What did you guys get?" Shuryou asked. "A cross bow and a...pizza cutter." Starman said. Shuryou and Forte looked at eachother, and both burst out laughing. "Sorry, it's just too funny." Shuryou said. "Even by my standards." Forte said. Fuyuki said "It'll be funny when I jam an arrow in your freaking faces." Obviously he was pissed. "Woah, we're done laughing." Shuryou said. "I just want to know:Are you guys for this whole killing spree thing? 'Cause I don't like it one bit." Netto nodded. "We're against it too." Fuyuki said "What do you mean 'us?' I could want to kill you know." Netto, Rockman, Starman, and Shuryou looked at him disblief. Forte just shrugged. "You're joking, right?" Netto said. Fuyuki replied "Partly. I won't just walk up and kill someone, but if they attack us, they're screwed." Netto nodded. "too bad that one girl's gun got destroyed." Starman said. "Pah. We don't need a sissy pistol. We've got the Duo of all weapons." Shuryou said, and held up his Panzer Faust. Fuyuki yanked the bullet out of his shoulder. He then held his hand over the wound, and a green light shone over it. the wound slowly closed and Fuyuki's pain seemed to ease. "Are you healing?" Shuryou asked. "How the hell can you do that?" Fuyuki replied "It turns out when I was being healed from my half-navi condition, I was holding a Recov300 chip. It's powers merged with my body. Isn't that cliche'?" Shuryou nodded. "But helpful." Shuryou held out a hand. "So, are we a team?" He asked. Netto slapped him a high five. "Yeah!!!'' He said happily. Fuyuki delivered a backhand slap to his brother's head. "I swear, that loud mouth of yours is gonna get us sent to hell." He said. "Yeah, Netto-kun. No need to reveal our locations." Rockman said. Netto replied "You two are getting annoying real fast."
***
A young man ran quickly in the direction of another. "That boy, Enzan. I can't believe he's helping me." He said to himself. He ran into one of the buildings and gasped. He saw a bunch of bloody, slashed apart corpses with sword wounds on them. Several weapons lie on the ground. The man knew what had happened:Enzan had used Cross-Fusion. "Enzan-dono, why did youy kill so many?" the man asked. "Simple, Shuei. They wanted me to join them in trying to kill Hikari Netto and Hikari Fuyuki, so I decided to chance it." Enzan said. "I flipped a coin. Heads, I kill them and try to protect the Hikaris. Tails, I kill them and then try to become the last person standing in this game show. And guess what? I got tails." Enzan said. He downloaded a synchro-chip and turned into R.Blues. "And you know that means I have to kill you." R.Blues said. Shuei replied "But...why are you trying to win this show?" R.Blues said "It was merely a second choice. I doubted the coin would land on tails, but it did, and I always follow my decisions." Shuei aimed his Uzi at R.Blues. "So you're gonna kill everyone because of a friggin' coin?!? YOU BASTARD!!!!" He said. R.Blues dodged all his bullets and sliced Shuei in half. "Why don't you just die?" He said.
***
1 hour later...
Netto, Fuyuki, Starman, Rockman, Shuryou, and Forte all went into a building for shelter. They had already had 5 people try to kill them, and Fuyuki, Forte, Rockman, Starman, and Shuryou had taken care of them. Netto had yet to make a kill. When they entered the building, everyone gasped. They saw millions of corpses lying on the ground, cut open, one even cut in half. Rockman wanted to throw up. Netto did. "Get over it." Shuryou said. "Well, can you blame him? I doubt he's eveer seen this much carnage before." Fuyuki said. Starman bent down and examined the corpses. "Bad news." He announced. "They have sword wounds." Netto(who was done throwing up) said "Then that could very well mean..." Everyone shuddered at the thought.
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 9:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OK...to start it all off:

Please separate out the dialogue. Having it bunched with the rest of the text makes it a chore to read and comprehend.

Although I have never read Battle Royale, I am intrigued by what I see. Keep it going, and try not to focus on the death and all. To benefit those of us who have not read it yet, I think it would be good if you could characterize some of the more unknown characters in a future chapter.
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 9:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'll see what I can do. As much as I like to please everyone, I'm not a miracle worker. I'll keep your suggestions in mind as I write chapter 04. Oh, and I'm looking for someone to beta-read for me(Someone who'll let me PM them a chapter and let them find potential errors or add suggestions.) If anyone wants to do so, PM me.
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 11:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

-.- I might as well get on with chapter 4.

***
Chapter 04:A whole new view on life.
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R.Blues walked slowly through the abandoned town. He looked behind himself at the bloody mess he had left. If his math was correct, only 73 contestants remained.

"Enzan-sama, why are we relentlessly killing everyone? This isn't like you." Blues said.

"You know what, Blues? You're absolutely right. I like the new me. I never knew their was so much pleasure in killing. I never knew I could chop human bodies up so cleanly." Enzan said.

Blues was beginning to fear Enzan. His closest friend had turned demonic, and he could do nothing to stop it.
***
Shuryou peaked past a corner. "It's safe." He announced.

The team advanced. They slowly walked along the mess. They heard a noise behind them. Fuyuki turned and fired an arrow in the noises direction. Something made a loud *clunk* and a dead body fell down. Forte flipped it over. It's skin was completely peeled off, it's organs and stuff showing, and some of the skull showing on the face. "HOLY DAMMIT CHRISTMAS!!!" Netto shouted.

Fuyuki slapped him across the face. "Why the hell are you so damn loud?!?" He asked.

"Why do you always slap Netto-kun when he's loud?!?" Rockman asked.

"Why do you question my good judgement?!?" Fuyuki asked.

"Why are you two arguing?!?" Starman asked.

"SHUT THE FRIGGIN' HELL UP!" Forte shouted.

Everyone shut up. Starman went over to the dead body and, to everyone's disgust, sniffed it.

"It's a fresh kill. And, it smells like cheese." He announced.

"They have red eyes. We don't know them." Shuryou said.

The group continued around the block. Everywhere they went, the smell of death and evil loomed around them. Netto cringed and shivered. Rockman noticed this and placed an arm around his brother.

"Netto-kun, don't worry. We're not gonna let you die." Rockman said.

"It's not that, Rockman." Netto said.

"What is it, then?" Rockman asked uncertainly.

"Well, seeing everyone die, all this carnage...It makes me wonder, what right do we as humans have to choose who dies? What gives Sunayama the right to play God? What rights do we to have to try to go against it? What if it's our destiny to slaughter?" Netto asked.

Rockman was surprised. He had never seen this side of Netto before. "I don't think we have a preset destiny. I think we make our destinies as we slowly walk down the road of life. People like Sunayama obviously think it's their destiny to determine the other's fates. Just don't worry about it, Netto." He said.

Netto nodded. "Have you noticed that Fuyuki seems more...brash?" He asked.

Rockman replied "Yeah, I think I know why. He's just as afraid as any of us, but doesn't wanna show it."

Netto stared up at his oldest brother. He saw, deep in Fuyuki's eyes, a slight trace of fear. when they walked down an alley, they saw a horrifying sight. A netop, who was crossfused, lay bleeding, on the floor, dead. Tohru was on his knees, hunched over, crying. He held a submachine gun Iceman was trying to comfort his netop.

"Tohru, it's okay." Iceman said.

"No, it's not. I didn't want to...but my instincts said to shoot...Why was I chosen to be in this crap show?!?" Tohru said through sobs.
***
Meiru hid in an elevator in a building. "Please don't let them find me..." She said.

Meiru thought back to her home, her life, her parents. She thought of her friends. She thought of Netto.

"I want to see him again." She said aloud. The elevator doors opened. There was a girl there, being of Netopian decent.

"Please, don't kill me!" Meiru said.

"It's okay. I'm not a killer. I don't want to fight." The girl said.

"Really?" Roll asked.

The girl nodded. "I hate this. Can we hide together?"

Meiru nodded. "Sure."

The girl stepped forward. then she smiled evilly. "PSYCHE!" She screamed, and lodged a steakknife through Meiru's stomach. Meiru gasped and fell to the floor.

"Meiru-chan!!!" Roll screamed. The girl with the steakknife cackled and left.
***
Looks like we saw Enzan's true side, and (possibly Meiru's death.) Is this format easier to read?
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 11:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Haven't read the chapters yet (just noticed them now, and I gotta go) but I'd be interested in beta reading this fic.
I doubt I could help grammar much, but I could still give you suggestions on some of the plot and stuff.
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 11:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alright. If you want, you're hired. If you don't want, that's cool. I'm taking a break for the rest of the night. I'll start on chapter 05 tomorrow.
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PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 11:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Now that my writers block is over...

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Chapter 05:Enzan attacks our heroes.
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"Tohru!" Netto shouted and ran towards his friend.

"Netto...you're alive? Thank God." Tohru said. Netto looked down at the bloodied corpse. "
Look, you did what you had to do. Don't feel bad about it." Netto said to his friend.

Tohru replied "But...I killed him! I took someone's life!"

Netto said "Shuryou has killed befoer. And Fuyuki's killed over 10 people in his life. Don't worry about it. I can tell you don't want to be in this game show as much as any of us."

Tohru said "But...I already killed. why would you want me with you?"

Iceman answered "Tohru, they're your friends. Friends look out for eachother."

Netto nodded. "We might have to kill someone, either way. Several people have already attacked us."

Tohru said "I don't want to kill anymore! I just want to stay here, just left alone. But I want to be with you guys...I have no clue what to do!!"

Fuyuki said "That's it! Are you joining us or not?!? Because the longer we stay in one spot, the easier it is for us to be killed, so make your decision fast! Sit here on your ass or come with us?!?"

Everyone stared in shock as Fuyuki walked slowly out of the alley. Even Forte's eyes were widened in surprise.

"Don't worry about him. He's just afraid, and doesn't want to show it." Netto said, calming Tohru.

The group walked out of the alley, and saw Fuyuki staring up to a building in shock. They followed his gaze. they saw a red navi with a sword arm. It was a crossfusion.

"Enzan...as R.Blues..." Fuyuki said.

R.Blues jumped down and sliced at Fuyuki. Fuyuki dodged it, but it still clipped his face a little, leaving a nice, clean cut just barely underneath his eye.

"Enzan! What the hell are you doing?!?" He asked.

Enzan said "Simple. Winning."

and lunged again. Fuyuki initiated CrossFusion and became R.Starman.

"Netto! Rockman! Hide with Tohru! Shuryou and Forte, protect them!" He ordered, and lunged at R.Blues as well.

He stopped right in front of him, and to R.Blues he seemed to vanish. R.Blues skidded to a stop.

"Where did he go?" He asked himself.

R.Blues suddenly got pelted in the back with millions of stars. He looked back and saw R.Starman behind him. He held out his hands and sent a meteor flying down right next to him. R.Blues dodged several more meteors. He sent a shockwave flying out from his sword, and it hit R.Starman and sliced him in half. Then, R.Starman turned into a stump.

"What the hell?" R.Blues said.

R.Blues felt a something wrap around him. He looked, and it was R.Starman's star tentacle. R.Starman held him within the tentacle right next to him, and he pressed a cybersword against R.Blues's neck.

"How did you-" R.Blues started.

"Ancient ninja art of subsitution. All you need is an object that some dumbass will think is you, and a dumbass traitor." R.Starman said coldy.

"What the HELL are you doing, attacking us? What kind of shit has gotten into you brain, huh?" R.Starman asked.

R.Blues replied "Simple. I'm going to win this game show."

R.Starman pressed the cybersword against R.Blues's neck harder.

"Take it back, you bastard!" R.Starman said. "None of this bullcrap!"

R.Blues said "You think I'm lying?"

R.Starman's tentacle returned back to normal. R.Blues was released.

"Go. Get outta my site." R.Starman said.

"And why do you think I'll just follow your order when I can kill you now?" R.blues asked.

"GET THE HELL OUTTA HERE!" R.Starman said, thrusting his cybersword into R.Blues arm.

R.Blues showed no signs of pain, and yanked the sword out of his arm. He ran off. R.Starman dropped to the ground. He returned back to normal.

"Enzan...why?" Fuyuki asked sadly.
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PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 7:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Gonna write one more chapter before my holiday ends and school resumes.

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Chapter 06:Tension
***
Laika slowly walked throughout the city with Searchman, both of them moving silently throughout the shadows. Both of them had taken down several people already. Laika stopped suddenly, Searchman stopping silently behind him.

"Laika? Is everything okay?" He whispered.

Laika motioned silently towards a figure moving down the streets. It was R.Blues. His blade was bloody, as well as his armor.

"I'll kill those damn Hikaris." He said.

Laika gasped. "Enzan? Killing the Hikaris?" He whispered to himself.

Laika looked towards Searchman. "From this point on, I'd say Cross Fusion is our best bet." He said. Searchman nodded.
***
The 6 anti-killing crusaders slowly wandered down the streets. Netto was coughing repeatedly.

"Netto-kun, are you okay?" Fuyuki asked.

Netto nodded weakly. "I'm fine." He said.

Fuyuki put his hand on Netto's forehead. "Shit. He's got a fever." He announced.

Everyone decided to go into Cross Fusion. Shuryou held onto his Panzer Faust though, until it would run out of ammo. Being in Cross Fusion didn't help Netto's condition. He just kept getting worse. R.Starman held let his brother lean on him. They realized it was getting really dark out, so they decided to find a building. As they were walking towards a hard to see in the dark one, R.Forte felt something smack the back of his head. He turned around and grabbed the offender by the neck. It was R.Trill.

"Oops! I didn't know it was you!" She said. R.Forte dropped her.

"Lauren?!? Why are you here and what did you smack Shuryou with?" R.Starman asked.

"There were rumors about people not wanting to kill. I figured it was my friends, and as for what I smacked Shuryou with..." R.Trill said, holding up a rubber chicken.

Everyone gaped at her. "Sunayama, you bastard." R.Starman said.

"So, do you wanna come with us?" R.Iceman asked. R.Trill nodded.
***
It was late at night. Everyone was asleep, except for R.Rockman and R.Starman. R.Rockman was laying down by a small flashlight they had found in the building. R.Starman sat down next to him.

"You feeling any better?" R.Starman asked. R.Netto shook his head,

"I feel like hammered shit." R.Rockman said. "Plus, I'm worried about Laika, Yaito, Meiru, and Dekao. I hope they're okay."

R.Starman nodded. "I'm worried, as well. I'm worried about one of my best friends. I'm worried about Enzan, worried about his new killer desire. I'm also worried about you."

He hung his head low. "I already lost my friend. I don't wanna lose you or Rock." He said.

"Relax, it's just a fever." R.Rockman said.

R.Starman hugged R.Rockman tightly. "Just promise me you'll be okay. I don't care if you have a fever or the fricken bubonic plague, I'll worry like hell, anyways. That's my job as a big brother, right?" He said, his voice quivering.

R.Rockman said "Fuyuki...onii-chan..." And hugged his brother back. "I'll be fine."
***
Sunayama watched the 8 anti-killers through special cameras.

"Don't think I don't know what you're doing, fools. You can't stop this."


He then looked at Enzan through another screen. "Yes...It looks like our special 'modifications' to Enzan are working nicely."

He looked at Roll, who has been healing Meiru for 8 hours straight. "Hmm...Maybe I'll let the girl survive. Boost ratings, really."

Then he smiled. "I love this job." He said.
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 08, 2005 3:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 07, right up!

chapter 07:The Drugged Bomb
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Roll was trying her best to stay awake. She had been healing Meiru's wounds for three days straight now. "Meiru-chan needs me...I can't fall asleep..." She said to herself. Meiru's wound had almost closed completely. "Need some help?" A voice said. Roll turned to see R.Starman. He was walking in with R.Iceman, R.Forte, and R.Rockman. "Fuyuki? And Starman?" She asked. R.Starman nodded. "I'll finish healing Meiru, but I need a favor from you, first." He said. Roll nodded. "Heal Netto. He's got a fever and it's been getting worse." R.Starman said, and pointed. Roll looked over at R.Rockman. He really did look in bad condition. "Deal." She said, and walked over to Netto. R.Starman placed his hand over Meiru's wound, and the familiar green glow of the Recov300 chip appeared. Meiru's wound healed completely. Roll placed her hand on Netto's forehead. "FullRecovery." She said, and her whole body had the green glow. R.Rockman was becoming healthier. He looked up. "Arigato, Roll." He said. Roll nodded. She yawned greatly. "Why don't you get some sleep? You look bushed." R.Rockman said. Roll nodded. She slowly collapsed to the ground and fell asleep.
***
3 hours later...
Everyone was asleep. However, R.Starman's eyes opened up widely. "He's here." He said. "Fuyuki, what's going on?" R.Rockman asked sleepily. R.Starman jumped out of a hole in the building top. He looked and saw who he expected to see. "Enzan!" He shouted. R.Blues jumped onto the building. "Fuyuki. If I remember correctly, we have a score to settle?" He asked. "No, we don't!!! What the @#%& is wrong with you?!?" R.Starman shouted. "Nothing. I just like to win." He said. With that, he sent a shockwave out of his sword. R.Starman leapt it and tried to attack with Star Arrow, but R.Blues deftly dodged them. He was moving so fast, he left after images. Suddenly he had his sword pressed against R.Starman. "Surprise." He said. R.Starman smirked. "Enzan, it's just not your day, is it?" He said, and gripped the sword. He acted like he was trying to pull it off. Then, surprising R.Blues, he slid his hands against the blade, slicing open his own palms. This allowed his to slip under the blade and grab R.Blues's neck. He then wrapped the neck with his tentacle and smashed him against the ground as hard as he could. This knocked R.Blues out, as well as out of CrossFusion. Enzan layed on the ground, unconcious, and his PET landed right next to him. "Fuyuki-chan! Please, help Enzan!" Blues asked. "You mean he's not doing this by himself?" R.Starman asked in amazement, while healing his bleeding palms. Blues nodded. R.Starman said "Scanner! Slot in!" and the green scope appeared on his eye. He scanned Enzan's body and it found something interesting. When Enzan had the bomb implanted in his chest, they had drugged it as well. R.Starman switched off CrossFusion. "I'll do this alone, Starman." Fuyuki said. He lifted up Enzan's shirt. "I'm not gay, in case you're wondering." He said to a shocked Blues. "I'm just worried what you're going to do to him." Blues said. Fuyuki gripped the sphere-like object and yanked it out of Enzan's chest. It came out with a sickening sucking noise. There was a large gaping hole in Enzan's chest. Organ's could be seen. Fuyuki gasped. "Enzan...I'm sorry." He said. "I'm sure he'll forgive you." A voice said. Fuyuki turned to see R.Rockman. "Um...did you see everything?" Fuyuki asked. R.Rockman nodded. "Want me to get Roll? This looks like you alone can't heal it." He said. Fuyuki nodded and went back to Enzan. He placed his hand over the wound and the green glow appeared. "Heal." He said.
***
Pretty Short, no?
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 5:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm not gonna finish this fanfic. I don't really know of any way to conclude it, and I'm at a writers block with it. I hope this is the last time I discontinue a fanfic. Thanks to everyone who read it.
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