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Cool Fire Bird
Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 37
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla I Used to Be Sexy
Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 776 Location: Lumine av. (c) meh
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 11:25 pm Post subject: |
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A very interesting manga you have going here. The inking is very clean and the body proportions are very well done. _________________ Better to keep your mouth shut and make people wonder if you are stupid, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt. |
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Valtz Soul Unison
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 765 Location: The world of Nekos!!! =^-^=
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 7:22 am Post subject: |
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I agree the art style is good. The way it's Layed out in the 2nd one is a bit confusing though... And here's a question. What's with the cuts on Cinnamon's chest in the 3rd comic??? It looks like you used MS paint or something cheap like that. Though in the first one there's nothing worng with the way she looks (Well... aside from the fact that she's wonded ^^; ) |
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Cool Fire Bird
Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 37
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 8:30 am Post subject: |
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Thanks~ Those pages take around 3 to 4 hours to make... At least I think they do, I don't pay much attention to time when I draw.
Though, yeah, the 2nd one is a bit confusing. I'm still very much an amateur. ^^;; I might fix that up later, since this is practice work. _________________ Artwork - http://www.livejournal.com/users/coolfirebird/ |
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