Akial, Nazne, and Otten :P

Nazne · Shukei - Hakuteiken Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Posts: 1133

And, because I simply cannot seem to draw females correctly, (ATRIST's NOTE DISCLAIMOMGWTF) they are all female. <_< I think I screwed up Akial's position though.

EDIT: Legs are too close together. I'll hafta fix that. >>

http://www.deviantart.com/view/19017205/

:P

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Vanilla_Go_Rilla · Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 11:54 pm Post subject:

Nice artwork, Nazne. If memory serves me correctly, "Akial" is the name of a certain EXE character spelled backwards (gee, I wonder who). The body proportioning and clothing designs are great and I like how Akial is showing us all how angry he is at the world...or at me, for that matter >__<

So far, aside from what you said about the legs, I can't see anything about this pic that needs constructive criticism, so this will probably hafta be another one of those "OMFG THAT PWNS!" posts. That said, keep it up!
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RollEXE · Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 12:47 am Post subject:

Akial is being rude at me...... Laughing

Great sketches! I like that Netto and Enzan down the bottom.

Mikazuki · Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 7:44 am Post subject:

Umm....Nice drawing... Laughing

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Neko · Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 11:08 am Post subject:

HOW CUTE.

I love Otten's expression :3
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Sasuke.EXE V2 · Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 1:29 pm Post subject:

I love how, even though you gave Laika, Netto, and Enzan a sex change, they look like their male counterparts. It took me a bit to connect Nazne with Enzan due to the outfit being a different style than what Enzan wears. Oh and I love the little doodles of Laika, Enzan, and Netto.
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SamBarry · Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 1:32 pm Post subject:

Nice picture. Otten's expression is funny. Why is she being used as a seat, though?

Are you planning on coloring it?
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Nazne · Shukei - Hakuteiken Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Posts: 1133

SamBarry: I drew Nazne and then realized that unless she was sitting or floating, I wouldn't have anywhere to put Otten. Akial took all the space. << Though I think it still kinda looks like Nazne's floatng on Otten's hair.

I'm probably not going to color this unless I can get them into a better picture/position/style, or at least a piece of paper which doesn't suck.

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Unknown Neo · Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 6:37 pm Post subject:

*looks at female enzan's name* *looks at artist's name* Oh ok. You know laika does almost look like a girl doesn't he?

Takato · Net Savior Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 152

wait nazne is your "fan char"? I thought that it was just some random name. you used to be enzan.exe right?

awesome but it needs to be colored and net op's aren't net ops with out there navis
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Nazne · Shukei - Hakuteiken Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Posts: 1133

Arison-chan started calling me Nazne and the name stuck. XD As for their Navis, I really don't want to just make them female versions of the original ones. Hafta think about those.

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Vanilla_Go_Rilla · Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 11:43 pm Post subject:

What kind of theme will you go with for their Navis? Will they bear some kind of resemblance or have attacks similar to Searchman's?
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Nazne · Shukei - Hakuteiken Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Posts: 1133

I haven't figured that part out yet, though. This was just a bit of testing, to see how the designs would turn out-I'll draw them each with Navis later, but I need to figure out the Navis. ^^;;

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Revenant · Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 8:44 pm Post subject:

Eep! Where's those annoying unrevealing black lines when you need em!?

Ahah. Evil little blighters thay are. Nice work, though the person sharing your name kinda is a bit off of a that could support her...>>

Dare we phear Namkcor, Seulb, and Namhcraes? At least it would increase the number of female navis. There is a lack of them at the moment...<<

Perhaps they could be like those frogs that can do certain things with their genetic code when faced with overpopulation of one sex? *covers head*
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N2-0 Night · Gnihtemos od thgim I... Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 992

Otten looks fine. Nazne is fine as well. As for Akial, well... She still looks like Laika...

That's still a fine work, however. By the way, is that Laika I see <points near the faint drawing at the bottom> :] ?
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Midnight · Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 7:11 am Post subject:

Hmmm...I wonder what I did that would merit me getting the royal finger of doom...>_<

Anyway...much of what I want to say has already been said. The drawings are nice, and they are quite adequately detailed.

It seems to me that the orientation of the picture looks alright--although it looks like Nazne is sitting atop Otten's head, Otten's expression seems quite natural for the situation--with sweatdrop and all. Wouldn't you act the same if another person was perched on your head? Of course, with that perspective Akial seems unnaturally tall...

I noted the little drawings of the base characters in the fringes, and their expression is also good.

That strange faint afterimage is there too, towards the bottom. N20, I have no idea how you see that as Laika.
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Nazne · Shukei - Hakuteiken Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Posts: 1133

Probably because that afterimage is the Laika I drew on the other side of the paper. XD His hat is visible, I admit.

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