REDONE ENZAN

rock_lee · Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 12:37 pm Post subject: REDONE ENZAN

these are my latest enzan drawings :
the first one is colored with pencil :
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v301/gai-sensei/ijuin-enzan-pencil.jpg
and the second one is PC colored :
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v301/gai-sensei/enzan2.jpg
so tell me what you think about them :]
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Enzan_Blues_FanGirl · Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 12:39 pm Post subject:

Those are really good! But his eyes is well... Not where their supossed to be. But other than that it's really good!
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Nazne · Shukei - Hakuteiken Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Posts: 1133

...Cyclops. :P

Very odd positioning you have there. I can't decide whether to look at it as a Profile shot or as a 3-4 shot, because it doesn't seeem to be either. If you were aiming for 3-4, you need to show the other eye or make the bridge of the nose really prominent, which isn't a choice for Enzan.

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SamBarry · Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 6:53 pm Post subject:

The neck! Dear god, the neck! :O
I'd have to suggest you make the neck thinner. As it is, Enzan looks like he's eating alot more than usual.
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla · Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 7:18 pm Post subject:

The proportioning is a bit wide and you could try makeing Enzan look thinner overall. It may be just an optical illusion, but the eye that SEEMED a tad out of place on the B/W version wasn't as noticeable in the colored pic. As far as lining goes, the inking on the colored one seems only slightly scratchy. Overall, you did a good job coloring the second pic and the shading on the B/W version shows you have an awesome knack for shading with pencil.
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rock_lee · Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 2:50 am Post subject:

first thanx for the replies and second, what all of you said was right so i worked on the colored one and moved the right eye a little bit to the left and i made the neck thinner and..... just give it a look and tell me if it needs more corrections :]

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YurikoOtaku · Net Agent Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 272

Erm, Enzan's neck still looks too thick. Otherwise,superb job.

Vanilla_Go_Rilla · Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 2:18 pm Post subject:

Good improvement on this one. He looks a little calmer in this new edit for some reason. I notice he doesn't look as fat, which is a good thing both in art and in real life too. This one seems more like a 3/4 view with his head tilted more towards the side, which is appropriate considering the way you positioned his eye.
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