Megaman.EXE Team Signas Redoing

Onmi Khaos · Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 7:37 pm Post subject: Megaman.EXE Team Signas Redoing

hey ya'll just so you all know the same signes as in commander of MHQ during the X series this is kinda a Cross charachters from Megaman X,Zero,EXE series. i hope you enjoy reading as much as i enjoyed writing it
Warning this fic is PG-13-M15+ contains course language graphic violence, and at some points nudity(briefly) befor you ask the parings for this story are

navis and operators
Onmi: Zero Lieutenant
Keiko: Leviathan Lieutenant
Jess: Ciel In charge of Hacking (serchman, Number man)
Jake: X Lieutenant(sp)
Barrel(from the games yes): Signas(you will find out why!) Team leader
Ka'el: Bombman In charge of Offence
Female Net Op(anyone want to submit a charachter): Airman in charge of Defence
Daiskue: Quickman in charge of speed
Female net op(again can submit): Ring in charge of healing
did i forget any team jobs if not let the fic begin

Me: wow its time to start now say it!
Zero: i like to remind people im not ehere on my free will
Me: SAY IT!
Zero:stupid leagle binding bull crap anyway onmi dosent own anything in this story only the concept of team signas and the main charachters other wise nothing if he did we wouldnt have shity games... wait scratch that yes we would
Me: ZERO!
Zero: GET ME OUTTA HERE!

Chapter 1 Disspaearence

Net crime... a plauge that had swarmed all over the Net world, But every plauge had its bane, this in the form of Megaman.EXE a powerful navi who had been Lead buy two forces, Team colonel who focused on all out offence, and Team protoman who focused on strategic attacks.

21 year old Lan Hikari Stood in the middle of a dimensional field as nebula navis closed in around him, he tore out his PET Slotting in the Syncro chip, "CROSS FUSION!" he shouted as a glowing white light enveloped his body, his feet began having blue armour materalize over it, yellow armour appeared on his shoulders, blue gloves formed on his hand as a his trademark symbol emerged on his chest, a glowing light enveloped his whole body as Blue armour enveloped it, a helmet emerged on his head and a blue mask covered his mouth.

"cross fusion compleate" his navi Megaman announced, Lan raised his buster to the core of the closest Nebula Navi and fired, the shot rang out riping through its core, the Nebula navis opened fire with there busters, Lan dodged through there fire slotting in his Long blade Chip, as the yellow blade formed he stabed into his enemys chest spining around kicking it across the head as it deleated in front of him, the buster shots rained down on him as he reflected them with his new blade, he took a few hits from the rapid fire, unable to take it he charged forawrd taking the shots swignsing his blade around he cuts a nebula navis head of he switched from the tank cannon chip and fired a blast killing the 3rd last one.

the other two realising victory was imposible turned to run, a flash of swords stoped them as the black navi colonel and the red navi protoman stood in there way, both navis nodded to each other cutting through the remaining Nebula navis, the dimensional field faded as the 3 humans reverted to there regulars forms "nebulas becoming weak" Enzan Chaud stated, he couldnt help but crack a grin these two guys brought out the best in him, Lan hikari his rival and friend, and Barrel leader of Team colonel.

"awwww cmon Enzan i didnt call you guys both out here to complain"
Lan whined Sluging his friend in the shoulder, Barrel chuckled at his two friends "so Lan why did you call us out here?", Lan fumbled through his pockets for a Case, after finding it he fliped it open to reveal a beautiful ring, Barrel whisteled as Enzan stared in shock "she better be worth it Hikari..." he said as Lan shut it, Lan looked seriosuly at his friends "shes worth way more than this" he said, Enzan turned to leave only to see the Dimensional field Reforming "what the!" he shouted as it fully enveloped them a Shadowy figure approched them from the shadows laughing manhicley (sp?).

As Barrel came to all he could see was the field gone, as where his friends and Colonel

Weeks later... in another Area

Zero entered a chapel approching a pedistal he looked around, the sceanery was dull and bland this place held a sad place in Zeros heart, this was where Ciel had been murdered by a Green Navi, Zero had felt so helpless then, scicne that day he had gone on countless missions to avenge her, he lent over the railing staring at a statue, he shut his eyes as a green orb slowly decended fromthe statue, he opened his eyes as the orb exploded, he fliped back bracing him self as the orb took form of a Warrior Looking navi, he slowly took a step forward "are you... Harupia?" he asked the navi, it allowed no emotion to come onto its face after it took the twin blades from its sheaths, Zero relised what those blades had done tearing out his Recoil rods "you... you did this... I'LL KILL YOU!" he shouted rushing forawrd slaming his Recoil Rods forward, Harupia blocked the attack and kicked Zero back.

"battle not corrisponding..." he responded in a monotone voice zero still charged attacking furiously "DONT GIVE ME THIS CRAP I KNOW YOU CAN TALK, AND FEEL, AND KILL!" almost like magic two sabers fell from the sky into the ground crossing in the ground with each other, Zero pushed Harupia away and ran after to the blades and stoped at them, while Zero was picking which blade to take the vivid green or the dark black, Harupia dove past him grabbing the black one, Zero whos choice was obvious to him grabed the green saber charging after Harupia "I SWEAR I WILL KILL YOU!!!!" all of a suden his saber deactivated as Harupia, realising his chance, jammed his saber forward piercing through Zeros chest, raising the dieing red hunter up, he blew him to shreds with his Buster.

Onmi Snapped awake looking into his pet, Zero was still asleep soundly in it, Onmi looked at his bed, it was wet from sweat, he collapsed back down breathing heavily "why do i allways have that dream?" he asked placing his hand on his PET for comfort, it had started a month ago, after nebulas return, His net battle instructer, Meriu had broken down when her Love intrest Lan hiakri world famouse net battler was reported missing, Onmi and his companions Jake,Jess and Keiko had tried to make her feel better, but the presence of them some times made it worse, Jakes Navi Megaman X looked like Lan's Navi Megaman, Jess clinging to onmi reminded her of her self when she was younger.

still they tried there best, in a few hours him and his friends would be going to flush out a Nebula group, he collapsed into the sweet bliss of sleep as he thought about it.

i re-did this whole chapter even though its probably not as good

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at 8:00 am Onmi pulled him self up from his bed, his PET was letting of an annoying ringing, "all right all ready im up" he shouted to his PET, the noise stoped atributly and a holographic projecter kicked in zero was standing as a flickering light ouside his PET, "well morning sunshine you seem happy this morning" he teased as he holographicly poked Onmi in the head, "dont make me sell you for scrap... again!" Onmi screamed as Zero realed back.

"so any emails?" onmi asked

"None" zero said smirking

"missed calls"

"Zilch"

"death threats?"

"about 60" Zero responded cockily

Onmi was just about to chuck his PET at the door until Jake walked in, at 18 Jake was well built, he had Desert Styled Army pants, as well as red shirt with His navis Symbol over it a large Blue X, he has a black jacket over that, "so whats been hanging couz?" he asked his couzin, Onmi gave Jake a 'why the hell do you do this every day' look, Onmi didnt respond and walked over to hsi Wardrobe Pulling out his Blue tank top with Red Z and Black Jeans, his silver eyes piercingly looked around the room as he picked up his Chip folder, he signaled for Jake and sat down "i had that dream... of Zero again" he muttered this Jake did not want to here, it was bad enough Jess belived in that Crap he didnt need it from his own cousin.

Onmi grined as Jake left the room quickly, going to his computer he turned it on, the Hikari OS system booted up his computer as he placed his head set on, "one two three, Onmi in the house with a shout out to all other's, stand tall and feel brave, oh and to my pals get on now!" he shouted as he pluged Zero into the Computer "Jack-in Zero.EXE Transmission!" he shouted and Zero sped out of the pet into the Luxurious net world.

Jake groaned at his consol as he heared his cousins announcement, his room was pretty cool, on his wardrobe he had an actual model of the Gun Del Sol and Gun Del Hel, he had a Glove that actualy looked like the
Sol De VICE, and above his bed he had a poster of Sabata from the Boktai games, "master Jake should we go now?" X quized his Operator, Jake mearly nodded as he pluged in X, "plug-in Megaman X.EXE transmission" he said as his navi sped towards his home page.

in her room a beautiful blond girl in a saturn dress stared at her pink PET, reading the lists of e-mails, boys aksing her out from her friend collegues, weekly subscription for net battlers monthly, her navi reappeared on screen, Ciel her navi was a brilliant strategist and an even better hacker, unfortunatly her combat abilitys to say the least were horrendus(sp), the girl in question Jess, finaly plugged in Ciel, "Ciel.EXE tRansfer" she shouted as the pink pet glowed furiously.

in another room a blue haired female sat around the posters of her net navi Leviathan, ready to kill anything that poped onto the net she ahd suffered the unfortunate affects of being the first to meet nebula, obbsesing over battles she had to be sustained by constantly fighting with the others, leviathan how ever didnt worry about her masters state saying its jsut her new 'style' she pluged into the computer "leviathan tidal wave transmission!' she shouted sending her navi through to the net.

(Phew finaly introduced every true main charachter next is like last time battle against the battle image of guts man DS only this time its Zero alone! R&R flamers will be stabed with a stabbity z saber)

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Ciel: Zero you have to help X!
Zero: YOU SEE THAT THING HES FIGHTING that i want to clasify as HIS problem

**Izumi** · Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 12:47 am Post subject:

There now, I fixed it. Feel free to edit as necessary.

Try not to quadruple-post next time.
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Onmi Khaos · Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 12:54 am Post subject:

you dont know how embaressed that made me feeel.. im sorry wont ever do it again also time for chapter 4 after i get some one to be airmans operator
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Ciel: Zero you have to help X!
Zero: YOU SEE THAT THING HES FIGHTING that i want to clasify as HIS problem

Midnight · Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 9:01 am Post subject:

Well...I have to be quite blunt. After reading the first few chapters, only three words could describe what I was thinking:What just happened???

I know you have something good going here, but it is EXTREMELY difficult to find.

1. The story is rife with spelling and grammatical errors. Most of the time it is just annoying, but sometimes it obscures the plot so much that it is hard to understand.

2. All of the dialogue, narration, and scenery have been crammed into an amorphous block of words. It is VERY difficult to get through one of these blocks and pick up useful things from them. Please space out the dialogue a bit so that it is easier to understand.

3. The story is VERY disjointed at times. The primary example is the opening chapter. It went by very quickly, and by the time I was beginning to understand what happened the scene changed abruptly.

4. On the subject of the opening...the entire story is much TOO RUSHED. It is as if you were trying to duck under a word limit. There is no such thing, and allowing time for the scenes to develop allows for them to have a greater impact on the rest of the story and the reader.

5. The battle scenes are a yawn at best. Not enough description of what is going on. As a result, it is very hard to follow.

6. Must you swear in it? I don't mind at all, but it really detracts from the scenes in which you do.

That is all for now. I hope this is helpful.
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Onmi Khaos · Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 4:46 pm Post subject:

thanks for the feedback i seriously am worlking through that, i feel rushed the way i get normaly rushed IRL so i cant stop to think (speaking of which when DO i think?) im still trying to find a good way to in terprite battle sceanes, as well im trying to make this hat many people want not how i realy right any ideas of things oi should cut/change are appriciated
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Ciel: Zero you have to help X!
Zero: YOU SEE THAT THING HES FIGHTING that i want to clasify as HIS problem

Onmi Khaos

Zero felt the red warm light of the transfer wear off, he looked up at his companions, a Medium sized blue navi with an X creast on his chest, a female Light blue net navi holding a spear with a sea serpent mark on her shoulder blade, and the final one was a young blond with a com link nesting on her head, in a pink shirt and black pants she was the youngest of the group.

"Everything ready to go?" Zero asked as the blond navi Ciel sat at a cyber generated desk, Leviathan and X followed suit, "Estamated Battle time in 5 minutes" Ciel said taping a few keys in "cant wait that long" Zero announced eagerness in his voice, "well damn Zero you better" X said, the blue reploid haden't gotten the best sleep and the 'Red Menace' could tick even the calmest Navi off, Leviathan looked over at the two male Navis, both of them had been on an edge scicne the last mission, but this was personal, Zero would go in and recapture Roll.EXE the groups instructor who had been captured by a Rouge dark navi.

"Running system check Zero!" Leviathan Stated the optics screen poped up on Onmi's navi

HEAD ARMOUR: 100% ONLINE
ARM ARMOUR: 100 % ONLINE
Z-BUSTER: 0% CHARGE STATUS, CURRENTLY OFFLINE
Z-SABER: 0% CURRENTLY OFFLINE
LEG ARMOUR: 100% ONLINE
MAIN ARMOUR: 100% ONLINE

NAVI SCAN COMPLEATED
ZERO PREPARE FOR TRANSFER

"its go time people!" Zero anounced a Red Light surrounding him as an alarm went off "what the! whats going on!", the comm screen flared up on its own and Nebulas Symbol appeared on screen "well well well, this area is now undercontrol Of the dark chip syndicate, Force Transfer in Progress!" a crackeling voice rang out as Zeros body began to flash purple as he dissapeared, "ZERO!" Ciel screamed as the purple light went off, X looked grimly at the monitor, "begin monitering all battles going on... just hold on pal..." X said standing on the Transfer Pad.

in a dark arena the purple transport light hit the ground revealing a shocked Zero, "where am i..." he asked to nobody as he walked forward, a spot light focused on him as the Area lit up he was in a stadium "all contestants know the rules of the Battle Royal, if you win you Escape alive, if you lose... ITS DELEATION TIME" the announcer screamed into his mike as many other navis appeared, before Zero could react he was shot in the back from behind, he turned to face his oppoennt but was hti with a punch as soon as he took his eyes of his competitor, "onmi where are they!" Zero screamed as another buster shot hit his chest area, to close any more accurate his data would have been bye bye,

"No idea bud but you aint getting out of this by being polite so take this, Mini-Bomb Battle Chip Slot in!" he shouted as Zero generated the blue Grenade like weapon, LEaping up he threw it into the ground cracking an unlucky black and red navi in the back of the neck, his body parts flew across the field as his body didnt dissapear this is serious stuff zero thought gulping as a Sniper blast ripped a hole in his left arm "AHHH!" he shouted landing down taking out his Z-Saber

"Z-SABER 78% status Green Charge Online... Z-SABER 99% Purple Status Online, Z-SABER 100% red charge online, all enemyes prepare to die, have a nice day" the femanine robotic voice of his internal system announced as the saber went from bright green to dark red,

Zero Strode forward digging his blade into the first resonable target, slicing upward the navi jerked around before dieing, Zero twisted around his blade piercing the throte of another navi, he kicked around calmly his foot catching a third across the head.

Zero was finaly taking control of this battle, although his left arm was rendered off line remind me to avoid Ciel for the next few days shes going to kill me, still at least my equipments still functioning as soon as he finished that scenance a powerful blow snaped his saber in half "crud...".

"dont worry Zero more chip data coming your way, Cannon A Battle chip slot in!, Cannon B Battle Chip Slot in!, Cannon C Battle Chip Slot in!" Onmi shouted as the three cannons merged on his navis hands,
"Program Advanced Giga Cannon 1!" Zero shouted firing shots wildly deleating navis around him, a large fist smashed Zer across the face as the red navi let up on his shots, the last remaining Navi, a black gorrila of sorts.

im sorry all i dont wanna screw the first Boss fight so i need a while to adjust mr brain R & R tell me if i need to re do the chapter
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Ciel: Zero you have to help X!
Zero: YOU SEE THAT THING HES FIGHTING that i want to clasify as HIS problem

Onmi Khaos · Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 3:47 am Post subject:

The hulking Darkloid that had entered looked at the surviving navi a red hunter, he gulped knowing his lord didnt take kindly to faliures, he was on his last chance, tightening his fists gutsman walked towards the crumpled heap that was zero

Zero quickly took his options into mind, be deleated, run, or fight back, mabey deleation wasent so bad, as he looked up he saw guts man make his fist incredibly large, "awwwwwwwww hell no!" zero shouted raising his buster "Eat hot plasma bitch!" firing shots, there was no plans no co-ordination just absolute madness, Zero fliped up scooping his saber off the ground activating it, guts man rubed his chest a black fluid leaking, he turned to the red hunter "guts! your going to die for that! "Guts Machine Gun!" the darkloid yelled firing of a spread of buster shots, zero swung his saber around blocking against the shots, "my turn! sonic wave!" zero slashed down a green wave flying out crashing into gutsmans chest, he charged forward swinging his saber forward, the darkloid rolled to the side and punched down on zeros back, the red hunter crashed into the pavement in over wellming pain.

In the real world onmi looked at the chips he had left, 1 mega chip and a few standard chip, he would need the mega one later, time to turn the heat up "battle chip slot in! fire sword!" zeros saber exploded into a fury of fire as in his pain he drove it into gutsmans shoulder, the darkloid felt his armour crack as he tried to swing his fist, he gasped as the blade hindered his movement, growling in anger and fustration he snaped the z saber in half ripping the part of the blade inside him out.

"awwww nuts...." zero whined disbelieving "not again... X is going to kill me, so is master Forte(WILL BE EXPLAINED IN LATER CHAPTERS)",

"Battle chip slot in! invis!" as gutsmans good arm swung in his direction he fadded out begginging to flicker "guts?" he yelped looking for the red hunter.

zero dove forward punching the Darkloid with a bronze fist chip, he was no londer Zero the virus hunter, he was now partialy a virus, unlike them he still was fully aware of what he was doing, but like them he couldnt stop fighting, "take that , and this! die!!!" he shouted like a maniac his eyes turning red as he punched up his opponent, guts man defended against the punches retaliating with his own, failur was not an option, he punched down crushing through his crazed opponents attack force sending him flying.

zero snapped out of his madness as gutsman charged at him "shit!"
"battle chip tripple slot in Recovery 30!" onmi cried in despretation as gutsmans fist connected with zero, the red hunter struggled to gte up as gutman advanced towards him, he grabed his broken saber "i will never give into you pig!" he shouted charging forard jabbing the broken handle into the darkloid, fliping over he kicked gutsman in the back running to hide behind a rock.

"i cant do this anymore another hit.... and im deleated" he whined sliently as his opponent sniffed for him " onmi i need a chip!" onmi stared at his last chip holding it out, "no way around it..." he muttered "mega chip slot in Murasame slot in!" he shouted sliding in the chip, zero took hold of the newly formed sword and charged at guts man, there was one shot he had, "take this hiya!" he shouted diving his blade down, the darkloid stumbled back coughing up blood, his eyes went white as he began disspearing "i cant die guts! it hurts so much guts!"

"GUTSMAN DS DELEATED"

zero collapsed injured the pain from battle to much for him.

next time on MMBN5 team signas

forte watched his student talk to the mysterious black navi, slowly throwing his cloak back he winced at his slightly deformed left arm, "zero... what ever you do dont fail me... or i swear that befor this virus kills me... i will deleat you
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Ciel: Zero you have to help X!
Zero: YOU SEE THAT THING HES FIGHTING that i want to clasify as HIS problem