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Vanilla_Go_Rilla I Used to Be Sexy
Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 776 Location: Lumine av. (c) meh
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 6:00 pm Post subject: Cyber Man-Rise to Power (Part 4 is up!) |
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Welcome to the new sequel to Adver Man: The Ultimate Evil. In the months following the defeat of the little telemarketing menace, the world is now a breeding ground of corruption. The most heinous and twisted of criminals freely roam the streets in an attempt to gain ultimate control over the criminal circles of the Internet. Good once again struggles to overcome evil, and there are heroes on both sides.
Out of the chaos, an unlikely group of motley heroes emerges to fight the apocalyptic disorder plaguing the modern world. A shining spot of light in a world overwhelmed by darkness, known as...THE ROYAL THREE.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2468391/1/
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Roy Tanaka The Queen of France
Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 248 Location: [insert something witty here]
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 8:35 pm Post subject: |
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Yay! I'm not patient enough to keep up with a manga! XD
I really like the sequel based on the first chapter. It seems a bit more serious, but certainly retains humor. That's a good thing.
Overall, I'm looking forward to AMII: CMRtP
Also, why'd you have to go and mention waffles? *stomach growls* ;_; |
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Elizabeth Net Agent
Age: 38 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 221 Location: Wherever I happen to be right now
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 11:11 pm Post subject: |
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This is starting out great! Yay for waffle references!
Also, did you intend to parody Kids Next Door with those ridiculous acronyms, or was that a coincidence? |
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Wackoguy Net Savior
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 141 Location: On your head! WHEE!!
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 8:40 pm Post subject: |
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DDR,something I will probably NEVER understand... -_-;
Nice chapter! The Royal Three sounds like a bunch of (funny) badguys. (Rivals to WWW-?)
Nice KND reference,by the way. And the waffles too... :! _________________ "When it rains,it pours. When it pours,get out of the rain." -quoth me!
Megaman Melee! HUTTAH and HUZZAH!
"I ate your siggy..." |
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla I Used to Be Sexy
Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 776 Location: Lumine av. (c) meh
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 9:51 pm Post subject: |
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Rivals to WWW, Wackoguy? Not really...more like rivals to the Neo WWW; the old World Three was much too competent to rival the Royal Three. >_O
Roy Tanaka wrote: | I really like the sequel based on the first chapter. It seems a bit more serious, but certainly retains humor. That's a good thing. |
Erm...yeah, I'll admit this sequel doesn't leave much of a good first impression. Writer's block sUx0rZ. I'll try to make it more humorous next time, hehe. ^_^
Elizabeth wrote: | This is starting out great! Yay for waffle references!
Also, did you intend to parody Kids Next Door with those ridiculous acronyms, or was that a coincidence? |
Well, I wouldn't call them "ridiculous"...more like imaginatively weird. I did get most of the inspiration for the acronyms from the Kids Next Door, yes. Although the influence of that show ends there, I still think it's one of the coolest ways I've seen to name the episodes, so...yep! |
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla I Used to Be Sexy
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2005 12:59 am Post subject: |
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AUTHOR'S NOTE: Yay for double postage!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2468391/2/
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Wackoguy Net Savior
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2005 1:49 pm Post subject: |
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Cyber Man's gonna...learn DDR? :O The rest of B.A.C.K.T.R.A.C.K.E.R should be good! Maybe CyberMan can actually dance...
I see what you mean about The Royal Three being on the same level as Neo WWW,and since Madoi is part of WWW...yeah. I definitely see your point. _________________ "When it rains,it pours. When it pours,get out of the rain." -quoth me!
Megaman Melee! HUTTAH and HUZZAH!
"I ate your siggy..." |
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla I Used to Be Sexy
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2005 4:07 pm Post subject: |
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Whoopsy, I made a plot hole X3 Maybe certain members of the old WWW are a little less competent than others. I dunno...I just don't like Madoi -_-; |
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Roy Tanaka The Queen of France
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2005 6:58 pm Post subject: |
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Yay! New chapter. ^_^
DDR... Ah, I suck at that game. Oh well.
This chapter was great! I don't know much about Madoi though. :/
Also, you're good at coming up with abbreviations. : P |
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla I Used to Be Sexy
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 11:58 am Post subject: |
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Finally, in between art requests I have snuck in a new chapter. ;3
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2468391/3/
Coupla things happened today. Venus Williams claimed her third women's title after winning at Wimbledon. That, and I also discovered that the Fanfiction links work.
And now, dead tired so it's time for a little nap. :/ ZZZzzzZZZzzz.
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla I Used to Be Sexy
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 11:59 am Post subject: |
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Double posting. Whee. Okay as long as there's an update, right?
In this new operation, a cattle ranch heir named Billy Bronson is a little worried about Tamako Shiraizumi borrowing his cows. Meanwhile, a new and sinister threat emerges back home. A group called the Flush Three has come into light. Their leader is Dr. Flush, who commands the Navi Sigma.exe. Their medical team is Anetta and her Net Navi Silk.exe. And finally, there is the hot-headed Atsuki, who commands none other than the Rabid Cupcake himself, Burnerman.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2468391/4/ |
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