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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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I'm having writers block at the moment. If anyone has a suggestion, roll it this way! If I'm not allowed to do this, sorry and disregard this post. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Cyclone EXE Net Official
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 1:19 pm Post subject: |
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Woah, sorry I wasn't here to read those last few posts till now...the story's gettin gooood! Uhm...writer's block, eh? Hmm... ...still think someone needs to die. n.n Uhm...you could go so many different ways...gee...
That powerful dude...Merethyn? He rules. Should come really close to beating everyone and ruling the wold or summtin...then some person randomly comes and saves the earth...some new chara or summtin. Dunno. Don't really have any great ideas myself...-_-;
Or...one of the main charas sacrifices himself to save the world...Cyclone'll do it!
Cyclone: I will?
n.n Well...I dunno. Whatever floats your boat CFS! I'm gonna go and update my ficcy now...so if you need more ideas I'll ponder and tell ya. Talk to ya later and good luck with ur fic! _________________ =] |
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Sweet bro! You're a fruggin awesome author so keep it up you gunbound addicted person! _________________
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Geez, I waited forever for inspiration to walk up and slap me in the face. Well, here's chapter 11, the really long one. Still haven't decided who shall die -.- and I have to have someone die because death is good in fanfics.
Chapter 11: Merethyn VS Everyone
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"So, did you have problems with the Band of Darkness yet?" Enzan asked.
Netto shook his head no. Enzan, Netto, Katya, Fuyuki, Lauren, Tohru, Shun, Dekao, Meiru, and Yaito were all having a meeting about the Band of Darkness.
They had taken down four members of the group, and there was no telling how many more.
"We shouldn't worry about it. I mean, if we could destroy those 4 easily, how hard can the others be?'' Lauren asked.
"You shouldn't put the strength of those you've fought in comparison with those you haven't fought yet. For all we know, the final member could be a freaking huge monster navi that shoots flames out of its’ ass." Fuyuki said.
Everyone stared at him.
"What? It could happen."
"Netto-kun, we've got mail." Rockman said. "It's from Serenade."
Netto picked up the PET. He read the message aloud:
"Netto, Rockman, we've found something interesting. A message for you is on the SciLab boards. Go take a look."
***
Rockman used a link to SciLab Square to check out the message.
He read it and said "Our Band of Darkness question is answered."
Netto replied "What does it say?"
"To Rockman: This is the leader and final member of the Band of Darkness speaking. Let's finish the battle between you Net Saviors and the Band of Darkness. I'll be waiting in the Undernet, Area 5, for your challenge. Bring all the help you can get, You'll need it. -M"
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Sometime after everyone had left, Fuyuki went on his computer and typed in "Netnavis for hire." on Google 4.5. He scrolled down the list and found an interesting ad that said 'Mercenary Navi-will work for anyone as long as there is good pay.'
"Starman, go find out who wrote this ad and talk to him. See if he'll work for us." Fuyuki said, and plugged in Starman.
He nodded and went to the hosts' server. It was 5 minutes before Starman came back.
"He's really strong, as he demonstrated over there. He'll work for us, as long as we can pay him." He reported.
"Good. How much?" Fuyuki asked.
"9000000 Zenny."
Fuyuki whistled. "That's a lot of grand."
He pulled a small sack out of the computer desk and counted his money.
"We're 1000000 short." He said.
"How did you get all that money?'' Starman asked.
''Remember the glass statues?" Fuyuki replied.
Starman nodded. One time at the beach, Fuyuki brought a flamethrower. He and Enzan made lots of glass sculptures for people, and they got a lot of money that way.
"Figures. So how do we get the last 1000000?"
Fuyuki walked out of the room. In a moment he came back with some money.
"I don't think Netto will mind if we borrow it." He said.
Starman snickered. Fuyuki was very evil in some ways. Fuyuki transported the money into cashdata via a small machine on all of the latest PCs(everyone had this attachment) and sent Starman off with the money.
***
The next day, all of the net saviors had gathered at a small base they had in Akihara. Soon, all of the Net Saviors' navis were in the Undernet, as well as Slur with Starman.
"Where's the mercenary you hired?" Rockman asked.
"He's supposed to be at Undernet 5 already." Fuyuki replied.
The navis made their way to Undernet 5, but all they saw was a generic HeelNavi.
"Is that the mercenary?" Slur asked.
"No way. He looked way stronger than that." Starman said.
"I feel an incredible amount of dark energy flowing out of him." Forte said. "It's scary."
"When you say that, we know that this is going to be tough." Blues replied.
The HeelNavi said "Druj...Akem...Dush-Kshathra...and Taromaiti. My teammates were all deleted by you navis."
Then he started to glow.
“It proves to me that this will indeed be an interesting fight.”
“Wait, you’re M?” Rockman asked.
“I am Merethyn, leader of the band of darkness and a new-generation navi.”
Suddenly, the navis’ skin fell off. Merethyns’ true form was stunning. He had a black jumpsuit-like clothing that most navis had with shining white lines running through it. His helmet was a black cyber-dragon head. His boots had cleats on the bottom, and his gloves were white with green data particles on them. His clawed hands were folded into fists, his arms crossed against his chest.
The feature that stood out most were 4 large, black feathery wings. Merethyn kicked the HeelNavi disguise away.
“I will take you each on 1-on-1. It wouldn’t be honorable if you all came at me at the same time.”
He created a huge, glowing, pulsing, purple see-through cube around his area.
“This is our arena.” He said.
“He’s much shorter than I expected.” Starman said.
“Starman? I know it’s really easy for you to piss people off, but please try not to do it with this guy.” Rockman said.
“I’ll go first.” Blues said, and stepped into the arena.
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A navi leapt nimbly through the Undernet, desperately trying to reach Undernet 5.
“Shit! I’m late!” The navi said.
This navi was very advanced, looking completely human. If there was a dimensional area, he could pose as a human and nobody would suspect a thing.
The navi had black hair, the end of it done in a long ponytail and spiked near his forehead, very anime-styled. His forehead had a purple cross tatoo on it. His eyes were blueish-black, and his face looked very handsome, as many girls who had seen this navi claimed. He wore white clothing along with grey wristbands and sandals.
Over the chest part of the clothing was armor. A strip of the armor was grey, but the rest was light blue with dark blue claw-like designs on it. He also had a small sash that was the same color as the blue armor hanging down from the armor, just underneath a red belt that also hung down. His right arm had a shoulder piece.
The most noticable thing about him was he carried a gigantic halberd with one arm, while normally it would take three navis just to hold it up.
This navis' name was Bankotsu.
He kept dashing and leaping through the dark network. When he landed, however, a group of navis surrounded him.
“Hey pretty boy, what’s the rush?” One said.
“Please don’t get in my way. I don’t have time to screw around with weaklings like you.” Bankotsu said.
“Oh, you’re going down shithead!” Another said and they all leapt at the mercenary navi.
Bankotsu sighed.
“I hate this place.” He said.
Then he swung his huge halberd around in a huge slash, one handed, and wiped out all navis instantly. They were all deleted except for one. Bankotsu walked up and stomped really hard on the navis stomach. Then he leaned down on his knee.
“Next time I say don’t get in my way, stay the hell outta my way, got it, shit-for-brains?”
Then he jumped off the navi and ran towards his destination.
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Blues entered the glowing cube, and his arm morphed into a cybersword. He leapt at Merethyn, his sword ready to slice into the navi.
He swung it down. Without even flinching, Merethyn blocked the blade with two fingers.
“How the hell?” Blues asked.
Merethyns’ arm morphed into a spiked buster cannon that resembled a dragons’ head. He aimed it and Blues and launched a large spreadshot into the swordsman.
It knocked Blues back into the wall of the cube.
“Gah...he’s tough.” Blues said.
He slashed the air and sent a shockwave flying towards Merethyn. The dark navi didn’t even flinch and let the shockwave hit him. It didn’t even hurt him, not even make him flinch.
“Please tell me you’re a little stronger?” Merethyn asked.
“Z-Saber! Slot-in!” Enzan said. Blues executed the powerful three sword slash, and actually managed to cut Merethyn a little bit.
Merethyn slammed his hand into the ground and several huge dark bolts flew up from the ground and homed in on Blues.
Blues jumped and dodged them, and then he heard words that surprised him:
”Gravity Crush!”
The dark cubes fell everywhere, and one even smashed Blues. It disappeared after, and Blues got back up.
“That was Lumines’ attack...how did you do that?”
Merethyn replied “I know all of his attacks, as well as many others.”
Blues tried to attack again, but he ended up getting hurt badly.
“Shit...I don’t have a good chip for this situation.’’ Enzan said.
Netto looked in his chip folder and found just what he was looking for.
He took it out and said “Enzan, use this one!”
He tossed the chip to Enzan. Enzan looked at it and smirked.
“What chip did you give him?” Fuyuki asked.
“You’ll see.” Netto said, smiling.
“Zodiac! Slot-in!” Enzan said, loading the GigaChip into the PET.
Blues was covered in light. When the light vanished, he had white and black armor on, with spikes and blades popping out in several directions, nearly everywhere.
His visor got a scanner in it. He had a glider on the armor's back, and AirShoes. Two BetaSwords rested in each hand.
“Yes, this will work nicely.” Blues said.
“I think I can work with that. Blues? How do you feel?” Enzan asked.
“Unusually kick-ass.” Blues said.
“Powerful, but it’s a shame it won’t work on me.” Merethyn said.
Blues ran towards Merethyn and swung a BetaSword down on him. Merethyn blocked it with one arm, and blocked the other one as Blues aimed for his chest with a thrust. He tossed Blues off.
Blues ran back, both swords extended towards Merethyn. Merethyn opened a hole and when Blues thrust, the blades went into the hole.
Another hole opened behind Blues and the blades popped out and stabbed his back very hard. Blues shouted in pain and fell down, his zodiac armor vanishing.
Merethyn kicked Blues. The red navi flew out of the cubed arena.
“Urgh...he’s insanely strong. Don’t hold anything back on this guy.” Blues said.
“You hurt my Bluesy-chan!” Trill shouted. She leapt into the cubed arena.
“Crazy navi.” Enzan said.
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Bankotsu ran through Undernet 4 towards Undernet 5, then stopped when he sensed the dark energy flowing from the area.
“Woah. That’s a lot of dark miasma.” He said.
He looked down at his halberd.
“This may be tough job, Banryuu.” He said.
Then he ran towards Undernet 5 again.
***
Trill leapt at Merethyn and shouted “Wolf Cannon!”
Her buster formed into a white wolf head. She aimed it at Merethyn and pelted him with green energy bursts. Merethyn could only defend against them.
What surprised him is that they were doing quite a lot of damage.
“What power! Fueled by rage for her navi-friend...is this what ‘love’ is?” Merethyn asked himself.
Finally, Trill stopped firing to charge up her Wolf Cannon. Merethyns' arm morphed into a ravens’ head and the beak opened. A cybersword popped out of its’ beak.
“Raven Sword!” He shouted, and flew up using quickly.
He divebombed down and slashed Trill very hard, not only hurting her badly, but sending her flying out of the arena. He landed and his arm turned back to normal. Iceman stepped in.
“We don’t stand a chance against this guy unless we use our secret weapon.” Iceman said.
Tohru nodded and pulled out a special battlechip.
“Aries! Slot-in!” He said.
Iceman charged his energy and unleashed a torrent of ice spears at Merethyn. Merethyn created another hole. The icicles flew into it. Another hole opened behind Iceman.
“Iceman, jump!” Tohru shouted.
Iceman jumped and dodged the ice spears.
“Shadow Serpent!” Merethyn shouted.
He launched the gigantic dark creature at Iceman. It grabbed Iceman and slammed into the wall, exploding and hurting Iceman, knocking him out of the ring.
“C’mon. Tell me you people can do better.” Merethyn said, laughing.
Glyde ran into the arena.
“HeroSword! DreamAura! Slot-in!” Yaito said, and Glydes’ arm morphed into a blade. Also, an aura formed around him.
He dashed at Merethyn. Merethyn swiped his wing at Glyde to block the sword, and shouted “Magna Blade!”
His arms tured into huge cyberswords. He held them up and slashed Glyde very hard, sending him flying.
“This guy is tough. Look at how fast he’s taking us down.” Forte said.
Gutsman stepped in and used MegaGutsFist. Merethyn blocked it with one of his wings and created a sonic boom. It missed, and Dekao inserted three chips into his PET.
“Program Advance! Z-Punch!” He shouted, and Gutsman shot several fists towards his opponent.
“Turning Gale!” Merethyn shouted, and created a wind force by flapping his wings.
The wind force spun the fists around and shot them back towards Gutsman.
“A wind attack? Now he’s just copying off of me!!” Cyclone said angrily.
The fists smacked into Gutsman and sent the large navi flying. Everyone moved out of the way to avoid being crushed by him. Roll stepped in and tried unleashing a huge torrent of Roll Arrows. Merethyn avoided them all.
“Twister Beam!” He shouted, and shot a spinning energy beam that looked like a drill towards Roll.
She dodged it barely, and then heard Merethyn shout “Plague!”
A huge wave of darkness went up and surrounded Roll. It hurt her with the force of all the DarkChips and slammed her onto the ground. Merethyn picked her up and threw her. She fell out of the arena with everyone else.
Now it was Cyclones’ turn. She created blades from wind and shot them at Merethyn, and when he dodged them all, she appeared behind him. She grabbed his wings and held them together, and started to kick his back repeatedly. She threw him up and created a ball of wind and tossed it down. It created a huge cyclone that tossed Merethyn around and slamming him into walls. When he landed, he got up, hurt badly.
“This navi...she’s strong.” He said to himself.
Cyclone dashed at himself and held out her hand. She sucked up all of the oxygen in the arena, and created an oxygen mask on her face. Merethyn started to suffocate. He used the last of his energy to use a dark energy blast to hit Cyclone.
It knocked her out of the arena and all of the oxygen returned. However, she succeded in doing a lot of damage to Merethyn.
The only ones left were Starman, Forte, Rockman, and Slur.
“I’ll go.” Slur said.
“Good luck.” Starman said, and kissed her.
Slur kissed him back. Rockman sighed.
Forte said “Geez, you two. Get a flipping room.”
Slur ran into the arena. She created a huge ball of dark energy and launched it at Merethyn. He dodged it and Slur dashed up at him.
“Grand Cross!” She shouted, and glowed gold.
She summoned all of her energy and shot several gold energy blasts at Merethyn, slashed him up, and kicked him. When her foot connected with him, and explosion happened.
Merethyn shouted “Twister Beam!” And shot the beam at Slur, but she dodged it.
“Shadow Runner!” she shouted, and launched a volley of dark boomerangs at Merethyn. He dodged them barely.
“Mighty Duo Fists!” She shouted, and her fists turned into Duos’ fists.
She punched Merethyn hard with them. He flew across the arena, hurt. He coughed.
“Damn...I never expected some of them to be this strong.” He said.
“Sin Bullet!” He shouted and created a dark energy blast from his buster gun.
He blasted Slur with it. It hurt her bad, considering she deleted several navis. This was important because the attack she was hit with gets stronger depending on how many navis deleted by the victim.
Tedious explanantions aside, Slur got launched from the arena.
Starman shouted “You bastard!”
He looked down to his girlfriend.
“Slur...Does it hurt bad?” She opened her eyes.
“Not much. Just finish off that guy, okay?” She said.
Starman nodded, and ran into the arena. He launched a Star Arrow right into Merethyns’ shoulder. The dark navi shouted out in pain. He yanked the arrow out and snapped it in two.
“Meteor!”
Merethyn held the meteor just above his head with one finger before it smashed his head. He threw it aside. Starman created a crescent blade and launched it at Merethyn. Merethyn dodged it and got hit by an UltraNova. He fell down right towards Starman.
“Give up?” Starman asked.
Merethyn laughed.
“You wish.” He said, and vanished. He reappeared right behind Starman. He used another Sin Bullet on Starman. Starman limped up.
“Good, but can you heal?” Starman said. “Cause I sure can.”
He held up his hands.
“MoonLight!” He shouted.
A white beam of light shone down on him, and he was fully healed somehow.
“Lunairtic!” Starman shouted.
Everything became dark, and millions of shooting stars pelted Merethyn.
When it all returned to normal, Merethyn shouted “Eternal Darkness!” And used Avetats’ most powerful attack on Starman.
It knocked the cosmic navi out of the arena. He held up his hand.
“Tag-team, anybody?” He asked.
Forte slapped his hand and went into the arena.
“Hells Rolling!” He shouted, and launched the buzzsaws at Merethyn.
Merethyn dodged them.
“Darkness Overload!” Forte shouted, and created the explosion.
It didn’t hit Merethyn, but the force sent him flying.
“EarthBreaker!” Forte shouted.
He unleashed the dark attack.
“Chaos Recovery!” Merethyn shouted, dodging the EarthBreaker.
He was healed, but not all the way. He was still damaged severely. Forte pulled out both of his busters and launched energy blasts at Merethyn.
“Nosada!” Merethyn shouted, and created two huge blades.
He brought them down on Forte, slashing the cloaked navi. Forte grunted in pain and charged up.
“Unholy Grail, Gospel Cannon!” Forte shouted, and created Gospels head.
He unleashed a gigantic energy blast. He missed Merethyn, but succeded in destroying two of his wings.
“My wings...you’ll pay!” Merethyn said.
“Why are ou so mad? You still have two more.” Forte said.
“Dark Nosada!”
The twin blades flew down with such a force that Forte was smashed into the ground. Merethyn shoved him out of the arena.
“Rockman...you’re the only one left...” Forte said.
“Netto, take this guy down.” Fuyuki said.
Netto nodded. Rockman walked into the arena.
“Zodiac! Slot-in!” Netto shouted, after taking the chip back from Enzan.
Rockman was enveloped in white light. when the light vanished, he had white armor on, he was shining, both arms were bladed Rockbusters, he had a dragon crest on his chest,
His boots had small wings on them, and he had shining, rainbow angel wings.
“Angel of Darkness...meet the Warrior of Light!!” Rockman said, smiling.
***
Okay, let me explain some crap before I get questioned to death. The zodiac chip is my own custom chip, and it gives navis armor, attacks, weapons, and abilities based on every move they've ever made in their life-span. Aries is another custom chip, and it draws power from all attacks the navi has ever used to create one big signature move. Fear me. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla I Used to Be Sexy
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The fanfic's getting interesting. You at least made up for the lack of said death with a unique Battle Chip. The Zodiac sounds incredibly powerful, so much so that I believe SOMEONE (preferably other than Netto, Fuyuki, or Enzan) might ultimately see the light by the time the next chapter rolls along. _________________ Better to keep your mouth shut and make people wonder if you are stupid, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt. |
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Woah. Awesome chapter. One grammar error...bugging...me...
“Please tell me you’re a little more stronger?” Merethyn asked.
Please take out the more.
“Please tell me you’re a little stronger?” Merethyn asked.
Maybe...cause more stronger just sounds odd...to me...idk. Lol. I may be an idiot. XP Call me an idiot.
Uhh...AWESOME CHAPTER! YAY! Cyclone...kicked...ASS! Go Cyclone! Go Cyclone! *dance* Uhm...anything else? No...nothing...but...great action. Great descriptions. Yeah all great. Wee! _________________ =] |
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Oh...you're right, it does sound better without more. I'll fix it after this post. I promise, someone will die at the end of this fic. I already got it all planned out. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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YAY! Wait...is that supposed to be happy? Oh well. It's happy. Who...hmm. *ponders* There are so many charas! AHH! _________________ =] |
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Well, here's some good old teamwork between an Inuyasha character and the hero of Rockman.EXE
Chapter 12:Bankotsu & Rockman:A new friendship
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Rockman aimed his twin busters at Merethyn and blasted a series of charge shots at him. Merethyn couldn’t dodge them and was knocked down.
Merethyn pressed his hands onto the ground and a dark gate opened up, sucking everything in the area. Rockman spread his wings and launched an aura into the gate, sealing it.
Merethyn charged up his buster gun.
“Fatal Laser!” He shouted, and launched a humongous energy burst towards Rockman.
Rockman held his busters towards the laser.
“Shining Ray!” He shouted, and launched several light energy bursts into the laser, tearing it up.
Merethyn charged up again.
“Tempest!” He shouted, and a huge storm of lightning flew down at Rockman.
This hit him and sent him flying. He landed on his feet and got back up. He summoned all of his energy and glowed. He spread his arms out as well as his feet.
“Astro Crush!” He shouted and at that moment, several large meteors flew down and crushed into Merethyn.
He fell down to the ground beat up.
“No more screwing around.” He said, and held up his hand.
A gigantic blade appeared in his hands. It was purple and a strong aura flowed from it.
“Do you like it? I call it the Eternal Sword.” Merethyn said.
He brought it down onto the ground and slashed Rockman with it. It destroyed Rockmans’ zodiac armor, and hurt him really bad.
“Crap...is this really the end?” Netto asked.
Suddenly, a huge blade swung down and smacked into Merethyn.
“Sorry I’m late!” A voice said.
Everyone looked to see a navi.
“Bankotsu...so you did show up.” Starman said, smiling, despite him being weak.
“Is that the mercenary?” Shun asked.
Fuyuki nodded.
Bankotsu tossed a subchip to Rockman. It was a FullHeal. Rockman got up, fully healed.
“So, this is the guy I need to take down?” Bankotsu asked.
“Yeah.” Rockman said.
“Well than, let’s go!”
Rockman and Bankotsu leapt towards Merethyn.
“Banyruusen!” Bankotsu shouted, and launched an energy wave into Merethyn.
It sent the dark navi flying. Rockman picked up right after, launching a Saito Blast into Merethyn.
“Ryuuraisen!” Bankotsu shouted, and launched a ball of lightning into the air.
The ball turned into several lightning bolts that flew down and all struck Merethyn. Rockman started blasting him, but then Merethyn teleported behind him.
Bankotsu swung his Banryuu towards Merethyn, who parried it with the Eternal Sword. Then he unleashed Bloody Stab into Bankotsu, which pierced the navi.
Bankotsu fell down, and shouted in pain from the huge wound in his stomach.
“Bankotsu!” Rockman shouted, and ran to the navi.
“You okay?” He asked.
Bankotsu nodded. “Yeah...slight pain...I’ve suffered worse.” He said.
Both of the navis shined brightly. When the light vanished, Bankotsu stood up, fully healed, next to Rockman. Rockman, however, had changed.
He was no longer wearing a helmet, and his hair was done exactly like Bankotsus’ was done. He had a tatoo identical to the one on the mercenarys’ forehead as well, and his outfit now looked very identical to Bankotsus’ outfit and armor. He was wielding a Banryuu that was slightly smaller than Bankotsus.
“Wow, my first official fanboy.” Bankotsu said.
Rockman examined his Banryuu.
"Wow, this is a big cooking knife." He said.
“BankotsuSoul, huh?” Netto asked.
“Wow, that sounds like a tongue twister.” Fuyuki said.
“Let’s end this quickly.” Rockman said.
Bankotsu nodded and spun his huge halberd between his fingers, and Rockman mimiced the motion. Both of them jumped at Merethyn.
“Double Banyruusen!” They shouted, and unleashed twin energy waves at Merethyn, hurting the navi immensely.
Merethyn shouted “ShatturWolf!” and shot a shining energy burst towards the two.
Rockman spun his Banryuu to create a wind that blew the ShatturWulf onto Bankotus’ halberd, charging it up.
“Super Ryuuraisen!” Bankotsu shouted, and unleashed 5 supercharged lightning balls into the air, shooting down a torrent of lightning on Merethyn, destroying both of his wings.
He fell down. “You bastards!” He shouted.
“Gonna cry cause we clipped your wings?” Bankotsu taunted.
He charged up Banryuu and struck it against Rockmans’ Banryuu, charging it up.
“Giga Banyuusan!” Rockman shouted, and shot several huge energy waves into Merethyn.
It knocked him down.
“He’s done for.” Bankotsu said.
Merethyn got up, limping.
“With the last of my energy...I banish you to the ultimate darkness! TOTAL ANNIHILATION!!” He shouted, and six dark angel wings sprouted out of his back.
“Geez, he loves flying.” Rockman said.
Merethyn floated up and created a huge black sphere all around him, Rockman, and Bankotsu. Merethyn started to unleash all of his attacks at one time.
Bankotsu and Rockman could hardly move without getting the shit beating out of themselves.
“We have to stop this somehow.” Bankotsu said, wincing.
“Maybe...our Banryuus could help us here?” Rockman asked.
“I see where this is going. Let’s do it.” Bankotsu said.
Both of them struck their halberds against eachothers, and pressed hard. The blades fused into one, and created an even bigger, stronger, Banryuu. Both of the navis held it up.
“Shining Utopian Giri!” They both shouted, and brought the shimmering blade down onto Merethyn.
Merethyn screamed in pain as the blade struck him, slicing him open.
“So I do die in the end...” Merethyn said, and was deleted.
The dark orb vanished, and the gigantic Banryuu split back into two. Rockmans’ soul unison wore off. He looked at Bankotsu, smiling.
“That wasn’t so bad, huh?”
Bankotsu looked back at him, smiling. His face showed that he had acknowledged Rockman as a friend.
“I say we did pretty good.”
Rockman held out his hand.
“So...you think we can be friends?” He asked.
Bankotsu placed his hand onto Rockmans’ hand.
“Friends we are.” He said, and they both shook.
***
Everyone looked at relief as their navis returned to their PETs, fully healed.
“Well, we’ve stopped Lumine, destroyed Angra Mainyu, defeated the Band of Darkness, and made a new friend. Not bad for a weeks worth.” Netto said.
Fuyuki nodded.
“Well, now what do we do?” Enzan asked.
“It’s going to be boring without all the excitement from evil people.” Tohru said.
“Well, you guys have at least 1 month of summer vacation left, right?” Fuyuki said.
Everyone nodded.
“Than I say we SHINDIG!!!” Fuyuki said.
Everyone cheered. The greatest month ever was about to begin.
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Well, Merethyn is dead, and there are no evil threats. This is not the end, though! I said there would be death at the end, right? when someone dies, it's the end. *bricked* _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Geez, I haven't posted here. Just letting you guys know that I'm almost done with the next chapter and it will be posted sometime today. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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As promised, Chapter 13. It seems Enzan has girl problems, and Netto lost his brain for a moment.
Chapter 13:Stop one: The Mall
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"New rule:When we are going to party for 1 full month, no letting the girls decide the first place we go to." Fuyuki groaned.
Netto nodded, and Enzan sighed. Deciding to be kind, the boys decided to let all of the girls decide on the first stop.
They had made a big mistake.
The girls wanted to go on a really long shopping spree while the mall had a clearout sale.
"Okay, each girl will go to a seperate store." Enzan said.
"How do you know that?" Tohru asked.
"When woman go to a mall together, they always split up and go to different area then meet up at a restraunt. I learned this from reading a womans' magazine." Enzan explained.
Everyone stared at him.
"What? I like to read them. I feel like I'm spying on the enemy."
"You're wierd.'' Tohru said.
"My sentiments exactly." Starman said.
Everyone paired up. Enzan went with Lauren, Dekao and Tohru went with Meiru, Fuyuki and Netto went with Katya, and Yaito was forced to go alone.
***
Enzan felt his own face reddening as he walked with Lauren to a womans' clothing shop. Naturally, it was Laurens' favorite place.
"Lauren...please, don't make me do this." Enzan said.
"Oh fine, you can wait outside if you want." She said.
Enzan sighed in relief.
"Thank you, God." He said.
Lauren walked in, and Enzan leaned against the wall near the door. He looked around the mall, not seeing any of his friends in site.
"Wonder what they're being forced to do..." He thought aloud.
He looked over at a store that said "PET Shack."
Enzan said "Jeez, I wish I could be there. Improving Blues is what I should be doing, not wait while my girlfriend shops."
Lauren walked out of the store with a dress on.
"Does this make me look fat?" She asked.
Enzan said "Somewhat, you could lose a few pounds."
Lauren smacked Enzan over the head.
"What, you want me to lie to you?" Enzan asked.
"Idiot!" Lauren said
***
Netto and Fuyuki were waiting outside of a variety shop, while Katya oogled at everything in it and was deciding what to buy. Both were very bored.
However, one of them had a bad idea in mind.
"You're not gonna do it." Fuyuki said.
"What makes you say that?" Netto asked.
"Because nobody in their right mind would do it." Fuyuki said.
"If you give me the battlechip, I will so fricken do it." Netto said.
"Netto, think about what you're doing..." Rockman said.
"Already did." Netto said.
"Well Fuyuki, your call here. When Netto makes his mind up about something, he does not change it." Rockman said.
"Yeah, you're right. Here." Fuyuki said and handed Netto the OldWood chip.
"I still cannot believe you're actually gonna do it." Starman said.
"Yeah, well watch in shock." Netto said.
***
Netto ran through the mall naked, screaming "Help me! I've just escaped from Michael Jacksons' basement!"
Everyone stared at him in shock, someone screamed, and Fuyuki hid in a corner saying "You were right, Rockman. I guess this proves Netto will do anything for a rare chip."
Rockman nodded in dismay.
Katya heard the commotion and looked out the stores window. Then she gasped. She ran out of the store and went up to Fuyuki.
"WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?!?" She shouted.
"Netto said he would do it for an OldWood battlechip, and I didn't believe him, and he proved me wrong." Fuyuki said.
"I think I've been scarred for life..." Cyclone said.
"Katya, hide somewhere, and wait for me to mention you." Fuyuki said.
Katya turned and hid behind a statue. Netto walked back to where Fuyuki, Rockman, and Starman were hiding.
"See? Told you I'd do it." Netto said, getting his clothes back on.
"Yeah, well that was still really stupid." Fuyuki said.
"Why? I don't know anybody who saw me. They really can't do shit." Netto said, now dressed.
"Yeah, well I think somebody you know did." Fuyuki said.
At that moment, Katya popped out from her hiding place, growling and foaming at the mouth.
"Gah! Katya! You saw me?!?" Netto asked scared.
"NETTO YOU JACKASS!!!" She shouted. "YOU KNOW HOW EMBARASSING THAT WAS FOR ME?!?"
"Um..." Netto said, realizing the stupidity of what he did and how much deep shit he got himself in with Katya.
"Now I have to pretend I don't know you for the rest of the time we're here!!!" Katya said.
She turned her back to Netto.
"We're going to meet up everyone else." She said, and walked off.
Netto sighed.
"Suddenly, I think that was very stupid of me." He said.
Fuyuki pat his back.
"Cheer up, you can get her to forgive you. Just don't do anything stupid for the rest of the day, buy her a gift, and apoligize." Fuyuki said.
"Okay. You think it'll work?" Netto asked.
"Believe me, it'll work." Fuyuki said.
***
Fortunately, Meiru and Yaito hadn't suffered anything traumitizing. When they all met up, they all showed eachother what they bought, while being mad at Enzan and Netto for being stupid. Soon, they left the mall.
A few hours later, Netto followed his brothers' advice and he was forgiven.
When he was home, Netto asked "How'd you know that'd work?"
"I've had girlfriends before." Netto said
"Okay, I got another problem. I can't decide who I like better, Meiru or Katya."
Fuyuki laughed.
"Just keep a Love Triangle going between you three. One time, I had a Love Pentagon before."
Netto said "You've dated 5 girls before?"
"And then dumped them."
There was a knock on the door, and Netto got up to answer it. When he opened it, Enzan fell into the house, beat up.
"Help me." He said.
"What happened?!?" Netto asked.
"Lauren...made me...try on her new clothes or she wouldn't forgive me." Enzan said.
"Owch..." Netto said.
"And I just heard from outside the house...you've got a love triangle going?" Enzan asked.
"Yeah...it's gonna be a lot better than Fuyukis' love pentagon was." Netto said.
"THEY MEAN NOTHING TO ME!!!" Fuyuki shouted. Starman laughed.
***
"He ran through the store naked?" Bankotsu asked, laughing.
"Yeah, all for a battlechip." Rockman replied.
"You have a crazy brother." Bankotsu laughed.
"Yeah, but I still think he and Fuyuki are awesome." Rockman said.
"What'd your friends do when they found out what he did?" Bankotsu asked.
"They just sorta stared, and held their breath." Bankotsu burst out laughing.
''Geez...you guys are funny." He said, and slapped Bankotsu high-five.
***
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Oh. My. Gawd. LMAO! Actually...Katya prolly enjoyed that...a bit too much...hehe. XP Yay for the luv triangles! And...pentagons...lol. Keep up the awesome...and odd...writing. Luff it all! Yay! _________________ =] |
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More odd writing, coming up! Inuyasha and Jackass fans, take notice!
Chapter 14:Cyber Theather
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Rockman and all of the other navis were on the Net. They were all messing around, overall having a good time. Eventually, they came across a large group of girls crowded around someone.
They were all giggling and talking happily with someone in the center. They saw another navi who looked strangely human, like Bankotsu, reading womans palms and talking to them.
"Who's that?" Rockman asked.
''Never seen him before." Forte said.
Bankotsu looked through the crowd.
"Hey, I know that guy. His name's Miroku, and he's a monk. He's a big ladies man." He said.
"He can't be that bad, than." Starman said.
"It looks like he's giving female navis free palm readings." Blues said.
"Why don't you go try, Trill?" Rockman asked.
"No! The only person who can fondle my hand is my Bluesy-chan!" Then she looked at Blues.
"WHY AREN"T YOU ROMANTIC?!?" She shouted.
Blues kissed his hand and wiped it on her cheek.
"Happy?" He asked.
"You're a dick!" Trill shouted.
"What about you, Roll?" Forte asked.
"Nah. I don't really trust that guy." She said.
"I might as well give it a shot." Cyclone said.
She walked up to Miroku.
"Well, you certainly are a beautiful young lady." Miroku said.
"Um...thank you?" Cyclone said.
Miroku felt around her palm.
"Ah yes, you will be with a handsome person you are close to for a long time, and you two will live a long life together." Miroku said.
Could he be talking about me and Rockman? Cyclone thought.
"Thank you." She said, and turned to leave.
"Wait." Miroku said.
Cyclone turned around. Miroku got up and gripped her hand with both of his.
"Will you bear my child?" He asked.
Cyclones' eyes widened. She slapped Miroku across the face.
"Perv!" She said, and walked away.
"He's a complete lech. Let's go somewhere else." Cyclone said angrily.
"Is she always like that?" Forte asked.
"Nah, just when really pissed." Rockman said.
Bankotsu shrugged.
"I'll never understand woman. They're really scary sometimes."
Roll, Slur, Trill, and Cyclone all tackled Bankotsu and started to beat him up. They then stopped after awhile.
"Let's go watch some movies in that new theater they put in for net navis." Roll said.
The girls walked towards the theater.
"Bankotsu just recieved the wrath of the Amazonians." Starman said.
"Shut...the...hell...up." Bankotsu said.
Eventually the guys caught up with the girls at the theater.
"What movie are we watching?" Slur asked.
"I think it was called 'Jackass:The Movie." Bankotsu said.
They got into their seats and waited for the show to start. They all watched as a guy went to a car rental shop and get a car. He was going to trash it. They all watched in amazement as the rented car was pummeled by other ones.
"Wow. Why's he letting them do that to his car?'' Rockman asked.
Then they watched as the guy went to go return the car. It was pretty comical. Then they all burst out laughing as a fat guy tried to sit down on a bench.
The bench collapsed and the fat dude fell down, ripping his pants in the process.
"Hey Gutsman, don't sit on any benches or you'll end up like that guy." Iceman said.
"Hey, shut up, guts!" Gutsman said.
They all laughed even harder as two guys got in a golfcart and started crashing into everything on a golf cart. Then there was a shocked silence when the golf cart fell on some guy.
"Is he gonna be okay?" Starman asked.
"I hope so. He was funny." Bankotsu replied.
The whole theater cheered when they lifted the golf cart off the man.
"Wonder what they're doing next?" Forte said.
"Shut up! They're in Japan right now!" Slur said.
Everyone all winced and laughed as they watched a baby alligator latch onto a guys' nipple.
"What is this rated?" Rockman asked, laughing.
"Who cares-it's funny!" Forte said.
Bankotsu shrugged and grabbed his CyberPepsi and took a sip. However, he spit it out from laughing so hard when he saw some guy give himself a bungie wedgie, one of the most painful things ever.
Somebody threw something at Starman for laughing too long, and everyone else stopped as well, even though it was really funny. All of the guys watched with amazement afterwards when a woman beat the shit out of somebody.
"See? Females can kick your ass anyday!" Roll said.
"Yeah, right." Bankotsu replied.
"You wanna get hurt again after the movie?" Roll asked.
Bankotsu slumped down into his seat.
"Hey, look at that." Trill said.
Some guy on the movie was putting fireworks on roller blades.
"That guy's a dumbass." Blues said.
"Which is why it's funny." Cyclone added.
Eventually, the movie ended. The navis all walked out of the theater.
"That was hilarious!" Cyclone said.
''We've got to get that on DVD when it comes out." Forte said.
Bankotsu opened his mouth to reply, but stopped when he saw someone he knew.
''Hey, Jakotsu!" He called.
The navi called Jakotsu turned and smiled.
"Bankotsu!" He said, and ran up to his friend.
"That a brother of yours?" Blues asked.
"Nope. Just a good friend of mine." Bankotsu said.
Everyone looked at Jakotsu. Not only did he sound like a woman, but he was dressed like one. He did, however, carry a menacing looking sword. Not as scary as Bankotsus' Banryuu, but scary.
Jakotsu said, "Is that the Rockman you mentioned?"
He look at the blue navi.
Then his eyes sparkled and he said "He's even cuter than I imagined!!!" and hugged Rockman.
Everyone stared, very afraid, Rockman was very shocked and appalled, and Bankotsu sighed.
"You're adorable! I love those green eyes! They sparkle like emeralds!" Jakotsu said.
Bankotsu leaned over to his friend.
''Um, Jakotsu? I know that you're gay and all, and I don't care what you do, just please don't hug other males in public, okay?" He said.
Jakotsu nodded.
He kissed Rockmans' cheek and unlatched from him. Everyone stared, slack-jawed, except for Jakotsu and Bankotsu. Cyclone went up and hugged Rockman.
"Don't ever get that close to my Rockman again!" She shouted to Jakotsu.
Roll screamed "He's not gay!"
Jakotsu sighed.
"I know, but he's so adorable..."
"Jakotsu? Why don't you go back to wherever your staying? We can catch up on old times later." Bankotsu said.
Jakotsu nodded and left.
"Tell me...is his full name Michael Jakotsu?" Rockman asked.
Bankotsu sighed.
"No...He's really nice and all, but him being gay has gotten me wierd looks a lot. Please, just put up with it, and if he tries to kiss or hug you, just say you're not in the mood." Bankotsu said.
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ROTFL! Wow that was both HALARIOUS and scary...a gay navi? *Cyclone smacks him across the room for touching Rockman* Hehe. Yay for that chapter! *dance* _________________ =] |
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Yeah...Jakotsu really is gay in Inuyasha. You'd think he's a woman just by hearing his voice or seeing him alone. Really scary, but provides perfect fodder for wierd fanfic chapters ^^. And this next chapter has something I wasn't planning on...A FLUFF SCENE!!! I was reading several other fics with fluff, and I figured 'what the hell?' Now I'll quit talking and post the chapter. And the fluff isn't Meiru and Netto because...I just can't see her with Netto anymore. I don't know why.
Chapter 15:When two hearts speak out towards eachother
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Fuyuki looked at the liscense plate on his airship. He smiled.
"I think it looks perfect." He said.
On the airships liscense plate, it said How's my driving? Call 1-800-KISS-MY-ASS on it.
Although he couldn't legally drive a car, Fuyuki was 15, allowing him to legally drive and keep his own car and airship. The golf cart was almost a car itself, having a hood just like a car.
Fuyuki was going to take the golf cart out for a test drive today, as he just installed new technology in it. Netto and Enzan would come along as well.
"I have a feeling today's gonna be very awkward." He said.
***
Later...
Fuyuki was taking the golf cart for the test drive. Everything went smoothly, except for the fact that Netto and Enzan were arguing like no tomorrow about music.
"Are you on drugs? MC Hammer could totally kick Green Days' ass!" Netto said.
"Green Day is a helluva lot better than MC Hammer will ever be, Netto!" Enzan argued back.
"If you two don't shut up, I'll drive this golf cart into a telephone pole!" Fuyuki shouted.
"Do it!" Enzan and Netto both dared Fuyuki.
"I will!" Fuyuki said, and drove the cart into a telephone pole.
The cart crunched right into it. Netto, Fuyuki, and Enzan got out of the wreckage with only a few scrapes and bruises. They dusted themselves off, and started walking down the road.
"Well, now we gotta call my insurance agent." Fuyuki said.
"Can't Touch This is a much better song than Boulevard of Broken Dreams!" Netto shouted to Enzan.
"What are you, high? Old people listen to can't Touch This! Boulevard is so much better!" Enzan said.
"JUST SHUT THE HELL UP!" Fuyuki shouted.
"And, for the record, Dennis Leary is much better than both of them!"
"Dennis Leary sucks!" Netto said.
"Sucks? He's awesome! How can you not like a song called 'I'm an asshole?' I think it fits you perfect, Netto!" Fuyuki argued.
Enzan laughed.
"You know, he really IS an asshole!" He said.
Netto was nearly steaming.
***
A few long hours of musical arguements later...
When the three boys finally reached the Hikari household, and Fuyuki had called his insurance agent, They all decided to settle down and watch T.V.
Luckily for the three, 'Stella' was on.
"I love this show." Starman said.
"I've never seen it before. What's it like?" Rockman asked.
"It's really funny. Watch every moment of it." Starman said.
Blues pulled up a T.V. Guide program and read aloud:
"Stella:Dumb comedy, dressed up in a suit. Meet Michael, Michael, and David. They've got a show for you. It can be compared to green apples. It's a little sweet, a little tart, and it's green, so it makes you horny when you eat them."
"See?" Starman said.
"Shut up! It's on!" Fuyuki said.
They all watched the comedy show. About 15 minutes into it, the doorbell rang. Netto got up to get it. Katya was there.
"Hey, Netto." She said.
"Hi. Watcha need?" Netto asked.
"I had some spare time on my hands, and I was wondering...you wanna go for a walk or something?" Katya replied.
Netto looked back at Enzan, Fuyuki, Rockman, and Starman watching 'Stella.'
Do I really need to watch that show? He thought.
"Sure."
He told everyone he was going with Katya, and left with her. Both of them walked down to the Metroline. They got on it and went to Okuden, and decided to walk through the valley.
Both of them gazed up at the lovely night sky. Being far away from the city, Okuden's sky had much more stars. Both of the two looked up in amazement at the stars, planets, and various nebulae scattered about.
"It's beautiful." Katya said.
Netto nodded.
"No matter how advanced technology is...nothing could replace some of the natural beauty in the universe." He said.
"Did you make that up yourself?" Katya asked.
"No...I read it from a letter an amish sent to a gossip magazine." Netto replied, smiling.
Katya laughed a little.
Both of them walked by the river, still gazing up at the sky. Eventually, they just sat down
"Sure is quiet out here." Netto said.
Katya nodded.
"All I can hear are crickets and the river." She said. Netto looked down.
"I don't get it. Nebula...World 3...Kotetsu...Lockdown...The Mavericks...and the Band of Darkness. Why do they want to destroy all of this?" He said.
"I think anyone who tries to do so...shouldn't be called a human."
"Well, technically, the Band of Darkness was just following Angra Mainyus' orders." Katya said.
Netto laughed. He looked at his friend, smiling.
"You're funny, Katya. I'm glad we're friends."
Katya smiled.
"Me too. Just one thing I've been wondering." She said.
"What is it?" Netto asked.
"It's your brother. Not Rockman, Fuyuki. Before I met him, I heard that he slaughtered at least 30 people before in one hour." Katya said.
"He did it...to protect me, Rockman, and Starman." Netto said.
"I was afraid. I couldn't believe that same...monster...was my brother at the moment."
"I know. When I met him in person for the first time, he seemed so nice. I can't ever picture him doing all of that killing." Katya said.
Netto nodded. Both of them heard several explosions. They both looked up to see fireworks.
"Their must be a party over at Akihara." Netto said.
"You think we should go?" Katya asked.
"Nah. Let's stay here." Netto said.
Both of them looked up, watching the beautiful explosions dot the nighttime sky. Katya instinctively moved closer to Ntto. Netto put his hand around her, instinctively. Eventually, the fireworks ended. Before the both of them knew it, they were asleep.
***
Netto woke up, expecting to see his bedroom, but what he saw instead was an open area. Several birds chirped, and the sun was just rising. He looked and saw Katya waking up, as well.
"Geez, we slept at Okuden all night." Netto said.
Katya replied "Our parents are gonna kill us."
Netto said "How about we just tell them the Metroline broke down?"
Katya nodded. Both of them got up and walked to the Metroline.
"Katya?"
"Yeah, Netto?"
"I had fun last night."
"Me too."
***
A few hours later...
Fuyuki had his golf cart repaired, and was trying to test drive it again. He even had a small LCD screen T.V. in the back. It was running fine.
One problem, though.
Netto and Enzan were argueing about the best episode of 'Stella.'
"Dude, the first episode was the best!" Netto said.
"You're full of crap! Episode three's the best!" Enzan said.
"If you two don't shut up, I'll drive this golf cart off of a cliff!" Fuyuki hollered back.
"Do it!" Netto and Enzan dared Fuyuki.
"I will!" Fuyuki said.
"DO IT!" Netto and Enzan dared Fuyuki again, adding more pressure.
"I WILL!" Fuyuki said, and drove the cart off a cliff that was convieniently close-by.
The cart hurtled down onto the canyon wall, being bounced around. Eventually, it hit the canyon road at the bottom. Netto, Fuyuki, and Enzan got out of the totally wasted cart with only a few scrapes and bruises.
"Guess I have to call my insurance agent again." Fuyuki said.
They all started walking. This time, however, they didn't argue.
"Hey Netto, when the Metroline broke down, did anything else interesting happen down there?" Fuyuki asked.
"Nope. Katya and I just found a spot to sleep in, and then we slept. Next day, we came back here." Netto lied.
"That's all? You guys didn't talk or anything?" Enzan asked.
Netto said "Nah. Everything was just normal."
The three walked down the road.
"But seriously, the first episode of 'Stella' is the best." Netto said.
"Episode three was much better." Enzan said.
"Don't even start!" Fuyuki told the two boys.
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YAAAY FOR KATYA AND NETTO! *eyes huge and sparkling* That was a cyute chapter...hehe. Oo but three more and then...death...muwahaha! *cough choke gag dies* x_X _________________ =] |
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Yay! Fluffers chapter! Stella is the fricken best show evah!(well, that, and
rockman, and inuyasha!) I know this is a little late but that whole mall
thing was fricken hilarious bro! The best part was when Trill called Blues a
dick! Oh, AND when Lauren brought Enzan into a clothes store! You bring
out the personalities of my fancharacters SO well! The part with the mall
reminds me of the episode of Viva La Bam where all the main chars are
stuck in the Mall Of America for 24 hours! I am probably the
proudest girl on teh planet right now because I have such a badass
author for a brother! Keep your fic going because your biggest fan loves
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