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XD not in a fifteen by fifteen area. they just don't look right.
Sera looks scary? Well she's supposed to look mean. Anyway thanks. ^^; Got anything to say about the other four - well... two - sprites I posted?
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Blast.EXE
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You mean your new avatar? It's groovy as I would call it but one of Triggers legs looks odd.
P.S tell FlowerChild she isn't the only hippie around she has Trippy I have Groovy.
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Roy Tanaka
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| Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2005 2:05 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome!
For the first one, I can't see anything wrong. Everything looks great, but I think It'd take 2 more games for that to actually happen. : P
The Yuna and Sera sprite looks great, but Yuna's eyes look a bit weird. Were you trying to avoid Yuna's mouth touching the right (If you were looking at her from the front) eye?
As for the emoticons, they're perfect.
Great job. 
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| Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2005 2:15 pm Post subject: |
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| Blast.EXE wrote: | You mean your new avatar? It's groovy as I would call it but one of Triggers legs looks odd.
P.S tell FlowerChild she isn't the only hippie around she has Trippy I have Groovy. |
My avatar is one of the two, the other I posted as a link, along with it. I try to avoid posting images in my posts as images because then people DON'T READ the post and ask questions I've answered already.  Don't ask. Anyway
theres the other one I posted.
Alright now.... anyway, as for Trigger's right foot - which I assume is the one you're talking about, I may or may not fix that. It was a bit of a pain to do, basing his feet off the official art I had with me on vacation, so maybe now I can find a better source. I really think I did good on the left foot though. ^^
| Roy wrote: | | For the first one, I can't see anything wrong. Everything looks great, but I think It'd take 2 more games for that to actually happen. : P |
Thanks :D
XD, but there are a few things wrong with it, but if you're not seeing them, I'm not pointing them out. And just so ya know, I seriously doubt Trigger and Tron will end up together... even though Trigger and Roll are friggen brother and sister.
| Roy wrote: | | The Yuna and Sera sprite looks great, but Yuna's eyes look a bit weird. Were you trying to avoid Yuna's mouth touching the right (If you were looking at her from the front) eye? |
The problem isn't so much Yuna's eye... her head is supposed to be kinda tipped, like Sera's is. It was a pain spriting her hair for some reason. :/ Mayhaps I can fix that sometime too.
| Roy wrote: | | As for the emoticons, they're perfect. |
Tron, yes. Sera, maybe. I dunno about Roll though... I'm not really all that happy about how she turned out. Thanks all the same though :]
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Blast.EXE
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| Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2005 2:34 pm Post subject: |
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AAAWWWW. So cute Yuna and Sera based of off RS Twins it suits them well.
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| Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2005 5:04 pm Post subject: |
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| Nice work pitch The yuna and sera gifs are good as well as the tron/tigger sprite. |
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Well, I'm back. A good online friend, asked me once again to make him a sprite, and I figured I'd get an opinion on it here, before I decide to send it to him. you may recall the character as I've sprited her before. Her name is Angel, and she's evidently some sort of Zero-esque character(personally seems like a cross between Zero and Roll Casket to me). Anyway, she's fully custom work, started as a curvy line in paint, and well yeah. She's a tad large for a sprite, but I wasn't really conforming to any particular style, and it's only ten some odd pixels. Here
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v127/Pitch_EXE/fetalangelv1.gif
btw, she's supposed to be in a fetal position, smiling peacefully
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Blast.EXE
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| Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 12:43 am Post subject: |
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Pitch get your proportions right the legs are way too long and the feet are way too pointy also the curvy bit at the back is curved too far < that way.
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For a scratch sprite, that is incredably good. There's only a few things that I notice that need tweaked.
The thorax cavity is just a little small, while the hips look a little thick. The feet are also kind of pointed at an awkward angle. [small text ]
The shading is very well done. Great work, Pitch.
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| Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 6:09 am Post subject: |
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The feet are at a strange angle, I know, but that's the way they were pointing in the picture I looked at to get this pose right(it's like a fetal position but kinda like floating and junk). I think it must've had long legs too, because they are a tad long(actually they stop sooner than you'd think but still the upper body area may be a tad small still). I guess I can try to shorten the legs, then change the angle of the arms and head.
And I know the way she's bent looks awkward too, but I was going precisely by the image. I dunno, here's what I was going for. <NOT MY WORK! Guess I still need to fix the arms. And maybe turn the head down a little.
Thanks though. Glad ya like it! :D
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| Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 6:47 pm Post subject: |
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Alright, let's see... I tried to shave a little off the legs, and re-angle the head/arms. Unfortunately... by the time I was done and compared, the legs were the EXACT same size(maybe a little wider). But I think it looks a bit better.
After > Before
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| Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 8:04 pm Post subject: |
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| Cool I remeber that you drew her didn't you. |
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| Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 8:08 pm Post subject: |
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Actually I've sprited her before. Man, I haven't posted stuff here in a long time, it's just one page back(page 7). Glad ya like it though. Any suggestions for improvements?
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| Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 10:05 pm Post subject: |
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Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!
Weeeeell, I'm done playing with this sprite now.
^ The last 2 versions(3 on the left, 2.5 on the right).
Doesn't it RAWK?
And for your enjoyment, my two favorite little green-haired goddesses, the lovely Yuna and Sera!
 
Enjoy! I'm out!
(so much for the 'if I talk like a crazy guy, maybe someone will comment' idea. . .) :/
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| Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 6:44 pm Post subject: |
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| Heh heh you love your green hair girls don't you. Nice work anyway and your friends sprite is better this time too. |
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Oh wow, someone did say something... huh... wonder why I didn't get that notification mail...
Yessir, I do love green hair. lol, mainly because pretty much no one in real life has it(naturally or through any hair dye or whatever).
Yeah, so... I decided to give pixel art a try.. actually I was just trying to make a sprite that wasn't in the frontal profile view type pose and it turned out too big so I'm saying it's pixel art, but yeah.
Comment?
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Your Yuna Art Sprite looks good. Don't see anything wrong with it. Nice job!
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Well, the legs are too short. Legs are about the height of the body+head, I believe, and here they're only as long as her body. The arms are out of porportion too, if she were to put her arms down, they'd touch the ground. ._.
Did you 'borrowed' the stance from her official art, or do I fail at guessing?
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| Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 2:56 pm Post subject: |
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The yuna pixel art thingy is nice, but you might wanna fix her mouth. It looks odd.
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| RikkusRukkus wrote: | Well, the legs are too short. Legs are about the height of the body+head, I believe, and here they're only as long as her body. The arms are out of porportion too, if she were to put her arms down, they'd touch the ground. ._.
Did you 'borrowed' the stance from her official art, or do I fail at guessing? |
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Yeah, I made her legs too short, or really just everything else too large. The stance and everything was borrowed from her concept design. this one. I shpose I should lengthen the legs maybe 5 or 6 pixels. That should even everything out.. Let's see
Alright, here's v2
in adition to trying to get her body all proportionate, I went and added some more shading to some areas that were kinda two-toned. I think it looks better. I also tried to fix her mouth up, by not shading it at all.. and making it not as huge. I dunno I hope it's better.
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