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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2005 10:59 am Post subject: Phoenix XZ: Firebird Chapter IV - Training Day |
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ok guys here it is again.. thank God i backed it up i forgot to put the opening in so here it is
Reviews are welcome
Disclaimer: Phoenix XZ is in no way related to Lord Phoenix / Zero X Phoenix.. all instances are purely coincidental
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Prologue
2014XX.. a day of reckoning, a day of the fallen, a day of Mavericks, hunters and also a day of rebirth, and the future of what’s going to happen next if the Mavericks aren’t stopped
Skylar was with Dakota and Draco in the Lab and they were working on what the future would have in store for one reploid..
This one reploid could make the difference, make a decision all his own and determine his destiny..
This is the story of.......
Phoenix XZ: Firebird _________________
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Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2005 9:57 am Post subject: |
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you guys should know this part all too well...
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Chapter 1 - The Beginning
In the year 2014XX Skylar, Draco and Dakota had a plan to design a Reploid and named him Phoenix XZ (or Phoenix for short)
Phoenix stood 5’7” and weighed 128lbs, he had Mach IV speed boots and a Mark XVII Buster on his left (he could use either hand if he wanted to)
“he looks remarkable!” said Dakota, “yeah he does” said Draco. Dakota turned to Skylar and asked her the same question.. she agreed with Draco on it though.
Dakota had brown eyes, brown hair and he did Phoenix’s schematics. Draco was over at the other side of the room constructing Phoenix’s capsule and timer.. “how is the capsule coming along Draco?” queried Dakota “it’s almost done Dakota just have to put the wires in” replied Draco.
Draco had blue eyes, brown/blonde hair and he was in charge of making the capsule and timer
Phoenix’s capsule had sea blue glass, and wires to hook him up when he was in stasis or recharging..
A few minutes later….
Draco finished up Phoenix’s cap and told Dakota it was ready for Phoenix. Dakota went over to the table where they designed Phoenix, picked him up and carried him over and placed him in. Draco set the timer for 45 years
“Skylar?” asked Draco
“yes Draco?” replied Skylar
“do you think that 45 years is enough for Phoenix?” queried Draco
“it should be enough for his diagnostics to kick in” said Skylar
Draco finished setting the timer, turned off the lights and went into the other room. _________________
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 8:33 am Post subject: |
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here's the next chapter criticism and reviews are welcome
note: my best friend allowed me to use her character Kody is hers
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A/N: the first chapter was pretty short ‘cause there wasn’t really much to put for it..
Chapter 2 - The Dig
“Hey I found something! Yelled Kody, as he was digging during an excavation dig several years after Phoenix was buried..
Long after the lab where Phoenix was created the lab was now known as the Lab Ruins
Kody had brown hair; brown eyes and he had an earring on his right ear of a fang from a wolf he hunted a few years back.
When Kody stopped digging he found something he’s never seen before in the ground and it had a Phoenix crested on it. “This must be the legendary Phoenix, Gabriel you’ve got to see this!” said Kody
Gabriel walked over to Kody and was amazed, “Kody do you know what this is?” he said
Kody wasn’t sure what it was or who put it there but it was pretty interesting..
Gabriel had blonde hair, blue eyes and he looked like a stud. He also had an earring on his right.. But it was a regular stud not like Kody’s
Cain came up to Kody and Gabriel and described what it was
“It’s a capsule, the creator must’ve put his masterpiece in it” said Cain
Kody and Gabriel were amazed about what they showed Cain..
We’ll have to see what’s in it tomorrow.. It’s getting late.. You 2 should go to sleep..
Kody and Gabriel headed for their rooms, I hope Cain finds out what’s in there..
In the other room Cain pressed a button and lying in it was Phoenix XZ. _________________
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Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2005 9:13 pm Post subject: |
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Chapter 3 - The Firebird Awakens
In the other room where Phoenix was encapsulated, his mind raced and everything flashed right before his eyes.
Phoenix was in a form called Stasis which meant not moving or not yet activated.. His internal timer read 44yrs, 12 months and 2 days left till he would awaken
In another room…
Cain, Kody and Gabriel were in the other room at MHHQ working on training and perfecting their skills for the upcoming Maverick Wars
In another room…
*Clank*
Gabriel heard a clank but thought it was something else. He thought someone was going to break in and enter but it would be impossible to enter because there were guards stationed all over the HQ on night watch.
*Clank*
There was that sound again.. Gabriel woke up and looked around the room.
The next day..
Cain, Gabriel and Kody went into the capsule chamber in MHHQ; they looked at the sea-blue capsule.
“I think Phoenix is almost ready but I don’t know if I should open it or not” said Kody
Gabriel showed Kody Phoenix’s timer, which was on the outside of the cap on the control panel
Internal diagnostics at full power…
Life energy at 100%
All systems are functional
Timer complete…
Phoenix’s eyes fluttered open and readjusted as he pressed the button on his capsule and popped it open… Kody, Gabriel and Cain were surprised when they looked at Phoenix
“Who are you?” asked Kody quizzically
“My name is Phoenix XZ, I was created by Dakota 45 yrs before I was buried to save mankind from the Mavericks” replied Phoenix
“How did you find me?” asked Phoenix
“We found you during an excavating dig a few months ago, I found you still snoozing in your capsule” said Kody
After Cain, Gabriel, Kody and Phoenix broke the ice with each other, Cain showed Phoenix to the room they designed for him.
Each Hunter had something encrested on their room so they knew it was their room. Phoenix had his trademark (duh!), Kody had a dragon on his door and Gabriel had a cross on his door since his name was biblical
Phoenix was still a little curious about his past and was looking for answers to why his creators designed him and buried him in the sea-blue capsule he saw to his right.. He paced in his room for a bit then went down to go see Cain..
“Cain?” asked Phoenix
“yes Phoenix?” answered Cain
“When Dakota designed and sealed me in my capsule, how did you, Kody and Gabriel find me?” asked Phoenix
“About a week ago while you were still asleep, you were going through something that we call “diagnostic testing” this technique was used by the late Dr. Thomas Xavier Light™ when using it on X” said Cain
“X? You mean Megaman™?” asked Phoenix
“Yes Phoenix, Light used this technique to seal X away for 30 yrs but he didn’t live to see X awaken though” said Cain
“ What did Light die of?” asked Phoenix
“Natural causes from the effect of pipe-smoking” said Cain
“Well.. Thanks for the story Cain” said Phoenix as he walked out the door. “No problem Phoenix, just come see me if you’re havin’ trouble with your past or whatever things life has you stuck at”
Phoenix went back to his room and knew that he had a good history lesson taught to him… he went back to his room, opened the door to his capsule and went to sleep..
A/N: Megaman X and Dr Thomas Xavier Light are both registered trademarks to Capcom all rights reserved
Phoenix, Kody, Gabriel, Cain, Dakota, Draco and Skylar are all trademarks to the author _________________
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Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 8:43 pm Post subject: |
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ok i know it's been over like 3-4 months and still no peep but Chapter IV and V are coming trust me
i've been busy with school (i'm done June 17th) and rest assured the next 2 are in the penning process Chapter IV is already penned out and i'm penning out Chapter V now _________________
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 9:56 am Post subject: |
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Chapter IV is up R & R if you can....
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Phoenix XZ: Firebird
Chapter 4
Training day
Everybody knows that training is the essential things that a Hunter needs if he would go out and beat up some Maverick trash.
That’s basically what Phoenix, Kody and Gabriel were doing over at MHHQ. Saber training and Buster training were the 2 things they were working on. The training facility (or training room) was fully equipped with Mk-17 busters, guns, beam staffs, and beam sabers as well as any beam saber color you could think of.
For this session Kody had a lime-green saber, Phoenix had his buster and Gabriel had a blue saber,
There was also a shooting range as well… Phoenix was over there and he was practicing.
Kody and Gabriel did some sparring matches with their sabers and then each of them would switch on what they wanted to do. “Almost got ya Kode!” said Gabriel “not by a longshot Gabe” said Kody
Phoenix also had a sabre and his was a fire color he joined in with Kody and Gabriel… “You’re not getting away that easily Gabe!” said Phoenix “oh yea Phoenix?” said Gabriel “bring it on” both Hunters said in thought
At one part of the room there was a crack in the wall that Phoenix, Kody or Gabriel noticed..
A few hours later…
After they finished their training Kody, Gabriel and Phoenix went out and went hunting.. “Damn, this is perfect” said Kody he then saw a large maverick with claws and it headed right for Phoenix and struck him in the back. “Phoenix!!!” yelled Gabriel “you ok?” Phoenix nodded his head, as soon as he got up and tried to move but he collapsed… “Gabriel, grab Phoenix and let’s get the hell outta here” said Kody
Gabriel went over and grabbed Phoenix and went with Kody to the Medical Bay _________________
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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 8:02 pm Post subject: |
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just a heads up guys, this Fanfic is on indefinate Hiatus... it's been over a year and chapter 5 is not even done..
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