Into the Darkness: AU *Stream 40 spoilers* PG-13 A/AA

[Kitty-Chan]

'Scuse me while I go fangirl. SQUEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! Fluff, fluff, fluffity fluff! Kitty likes! ^_^ I think you tied it up nicely, though I thought Netto would be a little more upset at what Dark tried to make him do.
Now, when do we get more of your excellent writing? :V
EDIT: Yay! First to reply! :D
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[Nazne]

Finished. :D

That was a pretty good wrapping-up of the entire series of events. The only thing I might have a gripe with is that you sorta went into talk-respond-talk-respond dialogue in the middle, when everyone was greeting Netto, but it's understandable. ^^;; I probably wouldn't waste too much space on description with that many people, either.

All in all, good and short, and very nicely done. XD

-BMA

[Midnight]

Ahh...and as the maxim goes, "All good things must come to an end."

Ping-pong dialogue, but it really doesn't matter all too much. It's an epilogue, and all it does is tie up loose ends. It does not serve too add much to the story, as all of the action has already blown over.

And another vignette completed, and well done. Good job.
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