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Kai Newbie Mod!
Age: 34 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 355 Location: The Closet
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2005 10:35 pm Post subject: RockmanEXE Music Video - Crawling in the Dark (Unfinished!) |
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XHunter17 DS Rockman.Exe
Age: 36 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 1650 Location: The Internet @.@
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Kai Newbie Mod!
Age: 34 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 355 Location: The Closet
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Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 10:51 am Post subject: |
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XHunter17 wrote: | looks good so far keep it up |
Um... Thanks, I think ^_^; That's not really the comment I was looking for.. Is there anything you see that looks out of place? If not, what would you be looking forward to seeing in the rest of the AMV? |
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railracer express Soul Unison
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 771
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Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:12 am Post subject: |
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You got to continue working on it. It's very good! |
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Kai Newbie Mod!
Age: 34 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 355 Location: The Closet
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Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:16 am Post subject: |
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^__^;;; No one's listening to meeee... Please please PLEASE, someone give me something constructive so I can make it look better! |
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Ryouko Kitties Love Bunnies
Age: 42 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 2085 Location: Sharo
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Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 12:06 pm Post subject: |
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It's shaping up really well. :) The clips kind of drag to the tempo in a few spots (primarily where Rock and Blues hurl their PA's), but the scenes match the lyrics well, and there's a good sense of emotion. Keep it up. :) _________________ "Cats are interesting. They're kind of like girls. When they come talk to you, it's great. When you go talk to them, it doesn't go so well." - Miyamoto
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Kai Newbie Mod!
Age: 34 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 355 Location: The Closet
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Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 12:22 pm Post subject: |
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Ryouko wrote: | It's shaping up really well. :) The clips kind of drag to the tempo in a few spots (primarily where Rock and Blues hurl their PA's), but the scenes match the lyrics well, and there's a good sense of emotion. Keep it up. :) |
Thank you! THIS is what I was asking for. XD Thanks a ton Ryouko, you're a lifesaver - I'll be sure to fix that up right away ^^
One question to whoever happens to know - is it just me, or does that shot of Rockman calling the Bug Style back to his icon look a little out of place? 0_o It looked cool at first, but now I'm having doubts. |
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Ryouko Kitties Love Bunnies
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Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 1:46 pm Post subject: |
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I don't think it looks out of place at all. o.o _________________ "Cats are interesting. They're kind of like girls. When they come talk to you, it's great. When you go talk to them, it doesn't go so well." - Miyamoto
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Kai Newbie Mod!
Age: 34 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 355 Location: The Closet
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Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 2:20 pm Post subject: |
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Ryouko wrote: | I don't think it looks out of place at all. o.o |
You're sure about that? I suppose it's just me. I tweaked it a little bit, so maybe it won't look as weird as I thought it did. 0_o;
I'll be updating with another installment of the music video sometime today, since I'm getting more done on it. |
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Kai Newbie Mod!
Age: 34 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 355 Location: The Closet
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Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 5:32 pm Post subject: |
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..I'm allowed to double post, so long as I'm updating, right? ^^;; Because I'm afraid if I edit my last post, no one will see it ^_^;; If I messed up, I'm sorry ^^;
Here's the next part: http://www.twistersinc.com/crawling%20in%20the%20dark%20unfinished%20v2.wmv
I didn't exactly go that far; I only hit a little past the 1:20 mark. ^_^;
Constructive crits still appreciated before I continue!
Ryouko, I tried to fix that part with the P.A.'s by speeding it up and changing the placement a little, but I have a feeling that I didn't do it right. XD;
To whoever knows: On this one, I used some Axess finale stuff - does the scene involving R-Rockman's full synchro and charged shot seem to drag a bit too much? Should I cut it up, speed it up, insert other clips to break it up, et cetera? |
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LightspeedEXE Net Savior
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 112 Location: UK
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Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2005 12:12 pm Post subject: |
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I suggest you dont use that 'Rockman Falling' clip twice. Just use it once. ther than that, it looks ok! _________________
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Kai Newbie Mod!
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Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2005 2:16 pm Post subject: |
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LightspeedEXE wrote: | I suggest you dont use that 'Rockman Falling' clip twice. Just use it once. ther than that, it looks ok! |
XD A good friend of mine already pointed that out, and it has been fixed - I'll be posting another installment as soon as I can with the fixes and more added. Thanks though ^_^
You call it the 'Rockman Falling' clip, but my friend decided it was more worthy of 'CGI Rockman falling whee'. XD Descriptive, neh? |
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Ageman20XX Net Savior
Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 104 Location: Niagara Falls, Ontario, Canada
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Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2005 9:22 pm Post subject: |
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Amazingly good...really. As much as I'd like to give you some crit, I cannot, for as of right now I find no flaws thar haven't already been mentioned and/or cleared up.
-Age _________________
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XHunter17 DS Rockman.Exe
Age: 36 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 1650 Location: The Internet @.@
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Featherdust [survivalism]
Joined: 19 Mar 2005 Posts: 635
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 12:26 am Post subject: |
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Oooooh.... that's really cool! I wish I could make my own. I tried really, really hard, but I couldn't think of any constructive criticism. All I can say is, keep it up. Me like. _________________
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Sky-chan
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 35 Location: Somewhere... dreaming...
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 5:02 am Post subject: |
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Great work on your AMV! ^^ It's really going well!
The music and "pictures" really go very well together!
Keep it up! ^^ _________________ Someday... Forte will rule us all!! >333
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