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Arumakan Net Savior
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 10:39 am Post subject: Arumakan's Art! [Update Orgy 10/15/08] (LOTS ADDED) |
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I drew a picture of Team Colonel..... and I know I've made a couple of mistakes, but um... yes.
Picture:
http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/6825/teamcoloneloutline2sz.jpg
Mistakes I know I've made:
(Rockman's symbol isn't right; I know, that's just how I draw it. It'll be fixed in the color version.)
1) Toadman's things on the top of his head are supposed to be round.
2) Toadman's head is round.
(Don't mind the garbage around Tomahawkman's feathers.... that there for no reason.)
Any more mistakes? There could be a possibility to fix them digitally, so please post any that I have made.
One more thing that I think all of you should know..... don't steal.
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Nazne Shukei - Hakuteiken
Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Posts: 1133
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 10:44 am Post subject: |
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Whee. /o/ The character all look quite nice. It seems a bit crowded, but I think that's just the fact that it's black-and-white. Coloring should take care of that.
It's very nice-and-cleanly drawn. Don't worry about a coupla stray pixels XD
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kidradd342 banned onoes :<
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 10:55 am Post subject: |
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yeah I think its great also
and I also agree with the need coloring |
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Elementalman.EXE Time to play the Game
Age: 33 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 1430 Location: Researching the JFK and RFK Assasinations
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 11:00 am Post subject: |
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Amazing. Although Nazne is right with the coloring, Rockman's symbol stops at th right angles on the both sides, it's not a continued straight line _________________
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Arumakan Net Savior
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 11:03 am Post subject: |
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I have said in the first post that that is how I draw Rockman's symbol, and it will be fixed in the colored version.
I will color when I have the time. |
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hobbit_hunter Net Agent
Joined: 06 Jul 2005 Posts: 284 Location: Good Ol' USA
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 11:32 am Post subject: |
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That is down right amazing! I can't wait for the colored version. Omg colonel *pet* :D
Draw Team of Blues too!! ^^ _________________
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Arumakan Net Savior
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 11:36 am Post subject: |
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I could.... but I drew Team Colonel because the Japanese instruction book for EXE5 Team Colonel motivated me to. I could draw team of Blues if somebody scanned the pages for me..... not asking or anything. I'm saying "if". |
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Gigaman.EXE Net Savior
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 12:13 pm Post subject: |
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That is a really well-drawn pic of ToC with the exceptions of the mistakes that were made in the drawing. Very good. Can't wait to see a colored version.
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Arumakan Net Savior
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 4:16 pm Post subject: |
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Colored version's going to ba a while..... I have to hand erase all the white space before I can color it. (Using the magic wand takes away most of the lines; I don't want that.)
Since I photocopied a couple of sheets, I'll probably do pencilcrayon first, then the digital coloring. |
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla I Used to Be Sexy
Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 776 Location: Lumine av. (c) meh
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 5:20 pm Post subject: |
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Wow, that is one detailed ink job. (Steals the Toadman) Other than what everyone else has said, I can hardly find anything else to nitpick on. There are a few stray pixels/smudges, especially in Tomahawk Man's mane and Colonel's head. Knightman also seems to be rather chubby, but then again I may be looking at it the wrong way. Minor stuff aside, this is a very well-done sketch. Can't wait to see it colored. _________________ Better to keep your mouth shut and make people wonder if you are stupid, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt. |
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Arumakan Net Savior
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 9:54 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for all your kind comments.
I have started coloring digitally; should be up in a couple of days. :] |
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Megagirl.exe Net Police
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 10:01 pm Post subject: |
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Woah! Thats good! But the coloured version gonna be even better! :] .
Right, next time u should draw Blues team :D . _________________
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kuro-kitsune Net Agent
Joined: 26 Jul 2005 Posts: 268 Location: raincover, on the wet coast
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 11:09 pm Post subject: |
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since you started colouring already, i don't think my comments will be worth anything. but i'll just post it up anyway.
1) shadowman and colonel's hand... the ring finger should be slightly higher (use your own hand as a model, it's what i do) and perhaps colonel's shoulder should move forward a bit so it looks like he's telling everyonw to move, and his pinky is a little too long.
2) shadowman seems a bit fat....
3) you do rockman's symbol the same way i do!!!! XD (okay, not an error, but it's fun to see someone else do that symbol like me!)
about the hand thing, it's the one part that i ALWAYS focus on, even in published books. you should see the amount of mistakes everyone does on them. (including me) otherwise, it's way cleaner than i can EVER make mine. i'm jealous. ^_^
off topic>> omg, that skunk just sprayed the house AGAIN! >.<
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Arumakan Net Savior
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 9:24 am Post subject: |
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Haha, thanks there!
1) Shadowman is kinda supposed to look fat; he doesn't wear the sexy spandex that some navis do.
2) Hands.... I hate drawing them, first of all. I do try my best, and thanks for the compliment.
3) It's quite nice to meet somebody who draws the Rockman Symbol the same way! XD |
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SPDBlue Net Savior
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 141 Location: Waiting for Yu-Gi-Oh GX to come out in October!
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 11:32 am Post subject: |
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Wow. I can't wait to see the colored version. You should do one of Team Blues _________________ A wise man said "Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes.That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away and you have their shoes."
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Arumakan Net Savior
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hobbit_hunter Net Agent
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Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 10:09 pm Post subject: |
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Wow I havent seen crayons in forever!
I like it :D. I'd suggest next time you use slower movements to make it look less sketchy, but that is my opinon. :D _________________
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla I Used to Be Sexy
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 12:05 am Post subject: |
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You humble yourself too much, Arumakan. XD That looks quite amazing, even in crayon. Clean coloring job on all characters too. I agree with hobbit_hunter about it looking a bit sketchy, but then again crayons can be an absolute pain to use sometimes. <__< Can't wait for the CG'd version. _________________ Better to keep your mouth shut and make people wonder if you are stupid, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt. |
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kuro-kitsune Net Agent
Joined: 26 Jul 2005 Posts: 268 Location: raincover, on the wet coast
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 12:10 am Post subject: |
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i use pencil all the time. but then that's because i don't have photoshop/painter/any good programs that allow you to color on the computer.
nui~ now we get to see how rough the paper really is! XD jaa~ it's like that sketchbook of mine i hate so much.
anyway:
1) colonel's glove is too dark, while it eliminated the finger problem it has (to me anyway) becomethe focus point. it's REALLY dark in that one area.
2) i love tomahawk's axe's shading. so, shiny-ish.
and that's my two cents.
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Arumakan Net Savior
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 2:05 pm Post subject: |
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Lol, thanks ya'll. :]
I knew something was wrong with Colonel's glove.... the instruction book doesn't show his hand. (And I was too lazy to check on the computer, so yeah.)
And Vanilla_Go_Rilla, I hate pencilcrayons, especially when you only have about 18 colors out of 24. But they're still nice, so lol. (I like to use the Laurentein Pencilcrayons. ) |
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