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Kakashi
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 40 Location: at the comp =/
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2005 9:34 pm Post subject: Kakashi's Forte Skateboard ani. |
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I was looking at sprites in my comp and I saw this Forte sprite that looked like he was trying to balance. So I put him in a situation for that, lol. Here it is. _________________ Join the Website and Forum. Will be hosting full manga series of Megaman soon. And probobly some eps. later on, when I can see that the site has kicked up and that people like it. UPDATE!!! The site now has it's own fanart gallery. Feel free to post your artwork there. |
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ForteZero.EXE Net Savior
Joined: 13 Jul 2005 Posts: 108 Location: Electopia
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2005 12:03 am Post subject: |
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Forte doing a sk8r trick, that's awesome Kakashi. :V
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Nazne Shukei - Hakuteiken
Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Posts: 1133
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2005 12:07 am Post subject: |
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I like what you did with the lighting effects on the fence, but the animation looks a bit skippy due to that white line on the bottom of the skateboard, which separates it from the rail and wheels. You might wanna remove that.
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Kakashi
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 40 Location: at the comp =/
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2005 1:21 pm Post subject: |
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That white line is the outside of the skateboard. I guessed I shouldn't have made it white since the BG is also white. I'll fix that later and post the new version. _________________ Join the Website and Forum. Will be hosting full manga series of Megaman soon. And probobly some eps. later on, when I can see that the site has kicked up and that people like it. UPDATE!!! The site now has it's own fanart gallery. Feel free to post your artwork there. |
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Kakashi
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 40 Location: at the comp =/
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2005 8:46 pm Post subject: |
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Update, I changed the white border to black. Here you go. >>> _________________ Join the Website and Forum. Will be hosting full manga series of Megaman soon. And probobly some eps. later on, when I can see that the site has kicked up and that people like it. UPDATE!!! The site now has it's own fanart gallery. Feel free to post your artwork there. |
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DraGiNn
Joined: 07 Jul 2005 Posts: 22
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2005 10:46 pm Post subject: |
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I say you add like... some of those sparks, like in Tony Hawk, when you grind. It just... makes it look more realistic. Like, just, subtle sparks of... the metal-to-metal friction. |
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Pitchums REO's #1 Yuna Fanboy
Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 808 Location: On Terra Serving Miss Yuna
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2005 11:20 pm Post subject: |
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It's pretty neat, but ... Maybe there should be some animation going on on Forte himself? Cuz it looks like it's just the railing that's moving... which it is, but it looks somewhat unrealistic that way. _________________ I think it's time to say goodbye. |
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Kris7878 Net Battler
Joined: 28 Jun 2005 Posts: 51 Location: Sci Lab
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 2:47 pm Post subject: |
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It looks very cool. :] _________________
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Sketch The Boy who is Very Sart
Age: 37 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 2349
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 2:55 pm Post subject: |
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Could you please say more than that? That really offers him nothing critique wise, it's a weak comment, and it's a form of spam. _________________
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Chaos_Master
Age: 33 Joined: 24 Apr 2005 Posts: 44
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 6:39 pm Post subject: |
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That sprite looks more so to be used when surfing the skating. Now thats the ultimate balance! _________________ "An unholy light is here again. Our lost souls gather to it, as if mourning to our past. We do not deserve the pain in which we place ourselves. Humanity is without that need..." |
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Mist Net Agent
Age: 33 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 241 Location: Nowheresville
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 4:06 pm Post subject: |
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I love it. The sprite is very well done. The pose is great, and so is the board and railing. I also love the angle, very well done indeed.
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Shuuko Kido
Joined: 14 Jun 2005 Posts: 21 Location: Somewhere, deep in Japan (?)...
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Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 2:44 pm Post subject: |
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Very nice, but I do have a suggestion. Maybe, you could try to make Forte's arms flailing or something like that. _________________ Netto & Meiru, so perfect |
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
Joined: 28 May 2005 Posts: 1723 Location: Glomping Seras
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 5:34 pm Post subject: |
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It's awesome! Although like the others said, you should animate Forte a little and add some sparks. And if possible, add a background. Just white looks a little bland. But other than that, it's very nice. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Darkning Net Battler
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 73 Location: Charlotte, NC
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Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 5:39 pm Post subject: |
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It looks great. Forte on a skateboard... Who'd ever think we'd see that? |
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Phantomman.EXE Net Savior
Joined: 22 Apr 2005 Posts: 106
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Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 6:13 pm Post subject: |
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XD dude, that's awesome |
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Protoman X
Joined: 08 Aug 2005 Posts: 7 Location: My forum
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 11:16 am Post subject: |
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cool i like it it is weired |
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Shadow.EXE Net Agent
Joined: 07 Aug 2005 Posts: 233 Location: In the heart of East Texas
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 7:39 pm Post subject: |
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I like it, but i think you should add something to it to make it more realistic like, say, have Forte's arms moving around to balance himself and sparks on the rail. |
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Viggetto
Joined: 13 Aug 2005 Posts: 16 Location: Undernet
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feepitsrule Darkloid
Joined: 05 Aug 2005 Posts: 544 Location: Everywhere You Want To Be
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 9:52 am Post subject: |
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Its great but it looks like the skateboard is a part of the railing. Maybe you should edit it a little? _________________
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