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Core Folf Samurai
Age: 42 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 700 Location: Frederick, Maryland
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 6:22 pm Post subject: |
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The overworld sprite does look blocky, and there are parts misaligned on the sprite that I have noticed. The shoulder pads look more like blades then what they should actually be, and it appears from the sprite that Blues has some how spawned the sabers shown on the back of the Gundams.
I don't feel like playing the "Guess the Base" game with your Gospel soul sprite, since I do that to often with other sprites, and it would be unfair since I'm usually right about it. The sprite needs a bit more work to it to give it the darkness that is Gospel, and some more customization to the body to set it appart from its base some more. _________________
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cruddpuppet [reo sux] Guest
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Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 5:52 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for everyones C+C. So here's a new sprite I made! Its StarSoul Obviously... Like usual, C+C |
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Nettorockman Net Battler
Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Posts: 55
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Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 12:41 am Post subject: |
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Looks like a copy and paste with the lines blended in. Overall it looks like a pretty good copy and paste though. |
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xfyrethespooky Nebula
Age: 33 Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 615 Location: Check under the bed
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Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:11 am Post subject: |
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hey cruddpuppet. i sent you the sheet of laserman. did you get it?
ummm... the sprite does look a bit copy and paste-ish, but i don't see anything bad other than that. _________________ just call me xfyre. not xfyrethespooky. |
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cruddpuppet [reo sux] Guest
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Posted: Tue Sep 06, 2005 2:36 pm Post subject: |
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Thaks for your comments! I made another soul. Thi s time, its MistSoul. I hoe you like it: |
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
Joined: 28 May 2005 Posts: 1723 Location: Glomping Seras
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2005 7:49 pm Post subject: |
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It's mostly just Heatguts colored purple with some stuff added on. Maybe you could've made his legs that little wispy thing? _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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cruddpuppet [reo sux] Guest
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Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2005 2:02 pm Post subject: |
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I tried that, but it looked eally weird. And just in case, the base i used wasnt heatguts. |
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xfyrethespooky Nebula
Age: 33 Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 615 Location: Check under the bed
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Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2005 2:19 pm Post subject: |
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it looks like A guts, though.
any way, what did you want the Laserman for, crudd? answer me. _________________ just call me xfyre. not xfyrethespooky. |
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cruddpuppet [reo sux] Guest
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Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2005 2:52 pm Post subject: |
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I needed the exact shade of blue for a lasersoul. I made it but it turned out HORRIBLE. very. So i decided not to even upload it. |
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Core Folf Samurai
Age: 42 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 700 Location: Frederick, Maryland
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Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2005 3:46 pm Post subject: |
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As much as I had hoped that you would have corrected yourself, from watching the thread I can see that that would not be happening now. First of all a number of your sprites are recolors with parts of the souls originator pasted onto a base sprite. Such as HeatGuts with Mists parts pasted on and a standard fighting pose for Rockman with Starman's parts pasted on and recolored. I think that you need to work more on your design plans for the souls, crafting more parts from scratch then borrowing pre-existing parts from other sprites and pasting them into place to form a new one.
Normally I would lock such a thread after making a post like this, but I am going to leave this open and see if you make any improvements to your work now. _________________
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feepitsrule Darkloid
Joined: 05 Aug 2005 Posts: 544 Location: Everywhere You Want To Be
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Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 3:14 pm Post subject: |
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Ohh. PWNED! Well, the mistsoul looks a little too fat. I dont know why, but it does. If you couldnt put the wispy things, you should make megamans legs fade..thatd be cool. _________________
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cruddpuppet [reo sux] Guest
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 6:58 pm Post subject: |
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Shut up sarah. I made a new sprite thingy. Its obviously scrtach and isnt very good. I stink at drawing on the computer. |
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Pitchums REO's #1 Yuna Fanboy
Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 808 Location: On Terra Serving Miss Yuna
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 7:51 pm Post subject: |
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The shading is wonderful. I'd suggest though, that you use the geometric shapes. Circles(well... elipses) and the Bendable Line are pretty useful. Straight lines too. But everything else looks good. Excellent coloring, just gotta touch up the drawing part. _________________ I think it's time to say goodbye. |
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Core Folf Samurai
Age: 42 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 700 Location: Frederick, Maryland
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 8:39 pm Post subject: |
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I'm not sure if that qualifies as a sprite, since it looks more like oekaki then sprite work. Also, I'm not sure if you are kidding or not with your comment towards another member, but remember to be civil with your comments and replies towards what others say. If you can not do this, then I will shut down this thread and might be forced to take other actions that you might dislike. _________________
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cruddpuppet [reo sux] Guest
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Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 2:40 pm Post subject: |
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I was joking with her. I always do. And what do you mean touch up the drawinf part? |
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Pitchums REO's #1 Yuna Fanboy
Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 808 Location: On Terra Serving Miss Yuna
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Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 2:42 pm Post subject: |
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Your coloring skills are pretty good, but the image itself isn't drawn very well. Lines could be straighter, circles could be more roung, etc. _________________ I think it's time to say goodbye. |
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cruddpuppet [reo sux] Guest
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Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 3:12 pm Post subject: |
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Im assuming by roung, you mean round. My computer doesnt like it when I draw with the mouse. Im gonna try someone from iether toc or tob. And i alos like it better when the only tool i use is the brush and nothing else. |
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Pitchums REO's #1 Yuna Fanboy
Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 808 Location: On Terra Serving Miss Yuna
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Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 3:41 pm Post subject: |
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Well there's nothing wrong with using the geometric shapes, and if you want opinions on what you can do to get better, it would look tons better if it were cleaner drawn, and it'll save you tons of time if you just use them instead of the mouse. You could sit there for like maybe three minutes evening out a circle you drew with the pencil tool, or you could spend three seconds clicking and dragging a circle with the Elipse tool. Same results, no real moral reason to use one over the other. _________________ I think it's time to say goodbye. |
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cruddpuppet [reo sux] Guest
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 4:21 pm Post subject: |
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killer
groundman
slashman
tenguman
FCR
BN5 for the gbc! Comes with the low quality too! Sorry for the low quality killer rip. Remember, I did not make these, I just ripped them. I also watermarked them, for a reason....Oh yeah, SPOILERS!! ODD, THE TITLE CHANGED... |
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Sketch The Boy who is Very Sart
Age: 37 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 2349
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 4:35 pm Post subject: |
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It's not such a great idea to put the spoiler material in the title. .-. So I edited it. _________________
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