Neko's Request Thread: Midnight's Request

Kitty-Chan · Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 9:07 pm Post subject:

Yikes; two ficcies while I was afk. The Tohru/Shuuko fic was very nicely done, & by god, we need more domestic Darkloids! :D You should make a series! ^_^
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Midnight · Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:27 am Post subject:

Ummm...wow. You weren't kidding.

Well...I still don't get how you make these ridiculous pairings seem to work out and make sense. It was short, but after all, all of the dialogue and the reactions make up for it. An utterly ridiculous situation, but still a joy to read. Good job.
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Wackoman.EXE · Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2005 2:26 pm Post subject:

I agree with Midnight. It's miracoulous that you can make these crazy couples work out. A rather interesting ficlet. I can imagine Burnerman roasting the frying pan with hyis flamethrower. Overall a very sweet and comical fic
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Neko · Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 7:27 am Post subject:

Madoi wiped her hands on her bodice and looked around nervously. “I can’t believe I agreed to this,” he hissed.

“Madoi-san wanted too,” Coloredman said matter of factly.

“You shut up,” she snapped back. She looked up at the nice restaurant that Hinoken had told her he’d meet her at. ‘Silly,’ she chided herself. ‘He never told me it would be a date, I just assumed…’ She looked down at the pale pink dress she was wearing and sighed.

”Madoi-san?” Coloredman asked.

Madoi shook her head, “Nothing,” she sighed.

In the background she heard feet running towards her. She turned around to see a bedraggled Hinoken running up to her. “You’re late,” she sniffed, while crossing her arms.

“Sorry,” Hinoken panted. “I got stuck in traffic.”

“You got lost didn’t you?” she said with a grin.

“No,” Hinoken said quickly at the same time Fireman said, “Yes.”

Madoi burst out laughing, “Aw, that’s cute.”

An angry blush tinged Hinoken’s cheeks. “No it’s not.”

Madoi took his arm and led him into the restaurant, “Yes it is, now come on before they cancel out registration.”

They went inside and were seated at the table. “So, what do you want?” she asked.

“Not curry,” Hinoken said with a laugh.

“That sounds good,” Madoi said dryly. “How about we share a pasta dish?” she asked.

“That sounds good,” Hinoken said with a grin.

When the waiter came by, Madoi also ordered the wine that the concierge recommended with the dish. “Are you sure…” Hinoken asked.

Madoi shoed him off, “I’m sure, don’t worry about it.”

Before Hinoken said anything else a large dish was brought forward and they began to eat.

The evening flowed with easy chatter and ended with Madoi somehow getting a little drunk. “You okay?” Hinoken asked her.

Madoi felt the warm blush spread over her face, “Yeah, I’m fine,” she said.

Coloredman rolled his eyes.

After dinner was over Hinoken helped a tired Madoi back to her apartment. “Thanks,” she said. “You’re more of a gentleman then I thought.”

Hinoken gave her a small smile, “Well, I couldn’t let you go alone, you’d never get home.”

Madoi looked up at him and grinned, “You know me entirely too well.”

Hinoken shook his head, “You’re not exactly a hard one to figure out,” he told her.

Madoi continued to look up at him and she edged her face closer to his. “Madoi…” Hinoken said warningly.

Madoi shook her head, “It’s not cause I’m drunk,” she said softly.

Their navi’s looked on as Hinoken obliged Madoi and leaned in for the kiss. “You owe me 400 zenny,” Coloredman said with a smirk.

“Damn,” Fireman sighed.

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Wow, this was really hard to write for some reason. Sorry if it isn't that great.
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Kitty-Chan · Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 8:14 am Post subject:

*cackles* One really must wonder who started the whole "Navis know more" trend. The bet was a cute touch, & Hinoken getting lost was priceless; great job of keeping them IC.
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Midnight · Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 3:07 pm Post subject:

Heh.

Another short and sweet piece of work. I do not know much about the characters of Madoi and Hinoken, so I really cannot comment on whether they remained IC or not, but you did a good job of keeping their actions believable. The last line was priceless. Smile

Another good job.
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Unknown Neo · Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 4:46 pm Post subject:

Cute! Really well done plus the end is hilarious.

Wackoman.EXE · Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 7:35 pm Post subject:

Being the rabid Madoi/Wackoman fanboy I am, I enjoyed this very much. Short, but most definetly sweet. Excellent job Neko. the ending was reallly funny.
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Haly K · Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2005 6:38 am Post subject:

Aww, this story was short yet cute. :3 Thank you very much, Neko. :]
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Exar_Kun · Joined: 10 Apr 2005 Posts: 22 Location: The Void

Greetings, Neko. Knowing how much of an epic writer you are, I would like to request something that i've never seen before.

Now, Forte.exe is constantly fighting Rock, but why? Could he be jealous of Rock's relationship with Roll?

Request: FortexRoll

**Sol** · Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 7:16 pm Post subject:

Alright...I'm going to request one more time.

This one is going to be odd, to say the least.

Pairing: ProgressivelyEvil!NettoxDark Rockman
Theme: Netto is captured by Dark Rockman. While he tries to fight it, Netto is steadily corrupted by the Dark Aura given out by Dark Rock. What happens when the Saviors come?
Timeline: Anytime before Stream 47-48.

Yes, I'm jumping on the bandwagon. >_o
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Neko · Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 7:28 am Post subject:

Dark Rockman was a navi of great ingenuity, wonderful strategy and above all a very sadistic sense of humor. Often while he was planning out his next attack or battle strategy he would hop onto a chat client and look up one of his few human friends for ideas.

<DarkPurpleNavi> Hey.
<HeavenlyHyden> Hello, you haven’t been on in awhile.
<DarkPurpleNavi> I’ve been having problems with my enemies, Rockman and his operator keep on messing my plans halfway through.
<HeavenlyHyden> I’m sorry to hear that. Has your day been going well otherwise?
<DarkPurpleNavi> Yeah, I finally managed to finish out the main program to getting the ultimate power. But it has hit a few roadblocks.
<HeavenlyHyden> Oh?
<DarkPurpleNavi> Well, it’s just proving to be a very tricky thing to become the strongest navi in existence.
<HeavenlyHyden> XD I’d expect. My day is going by pretty well.
<DarkPurpleNavi> Oh really? You’re never in this good a mood, what happened?
<HeavenlyHyden> I sent another God Candidate to hell.
<DarkPurpleNavi> :D *thumbs up* All right.
<HeavenlyHyden> *bows* Thank you. Ueki and his friends were crushed, plus I caught the person who I knew was a traitor.
<DarkPurpleNavi> Well, then it wasn’t much of a shock was it.
<HeavenlyHyden> No, but it was damn fun.
<DarkPurpleNavi> Heh, well then my friend I’ll leave you to finish off my master plan.
<HeavenlyHyden> Good luck, try not to destroy the world too much, leave something for me to remake.
<DarkPurpleNavi> Don’t worry, I’ll keep that in mind. Night.
<HeavenlyHyden> Night.
*DarkPurpleNavi has signed off*
*HeavenlyHyden has signed off*

Robert stood up from his computer and grinned maliciously. How interesting were things going to get from then on? Only time would tell.

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Makes NO SENSE, total crack and something I think Starry will like. Your regularly written fics will be back time permitting XD

(Yes, I had entirely too much fun writing this X3)
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Kitty-Chan · Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 10:20 am Post subject:

I don't know who the other guy is, but I find it amusing, nonetheless.
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kuro-kitsune · Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 5:41 pm Post subject:

*breathes*

oh. my. god.

ROBERT!!!!! *glomps les neko* I LOVE YOU~~~ *o*

.... would it be a surprise if i said that robert's voice actor does enzan? no? okay then.

~kuro-kitsune~

Neko · Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 2:14 pm Post subject:

Miyabi looked up to his master with a slightly hopeful gaze. Today was the day that he could finally prove himself to his teacher, mentor and above all father. His dad pulled out a thick knife that looked like a dagger but on closer inspection it revealed its self to be a kunai. “Do you think you’re ready?” he asked in a low voice.

Miyabi nodded in all seriousness. Even though he was only 16 years old he was perfectly aware of the consequences he may face if he failed to meet the expectations of his father and himself. “I am,” he replied.

“Then ready yourself,” his father instructed.

Miyabi pulled out his own kunai and sunk into a low battle position. “I am ready for your challenge,” he said.

His father noted that he was not showing any visible signs of fear even though he was being asked to spar against someone much older and experienced then he. He nodded with approval and sunk into his own position. “Begin,” he said.

Miyabi flew at him with a speed that easily outmatched those much older then him, but not his father. He side stepped easily and brought up his own kunai in a defensive maneuver to block the one his son aimed at him. “You are very strong,” he complimented as they jumped apart.

Miyabi came in for another attack, “Your words are very kind, father,” he said as he twisted his kunai in his father’s and brought his fist around to try and land some kind of blow.

“They are not kindness,” his father barked as he pushed away Miyabi with a swipe of his hand. “They are truth. There is a difference my son.”

Miyabi bowed, “Yes, father.”

“Begin again!” he said stiffly.

Miyabi tried all manner of tricks to try to get within striking distance of his father. Each time he was deflected at best. Sometimes his father would land a smarting blow on an area that Miyabi may have left exposed in a reminder that his defense wasn’t enough. But each time Miyabi came in with renewed vigor his father’s expression slowly changed from an expressionless mask to a gaze of respect and pride.

After about an hour his father nodded shortly and said, “Enough my son. You have certainly proven yourself to me.”

Miyabi was disappointed that he had still not landed a blow onto his father. “Father?” he asked.

“Yes?”

“One more time?” Miyabi said with a heartfelt gaze.

His father studied him for a minute before nodding, “All right. Once more,” he said, the smallest grin playing on his lips.

Miyabi took a deep breath and looked at his dad. Everything that he had previously tried didn’t work because his dad had taught him everything he knew. There was no way to possibly defeat his dad with his own tricks. He nodded and sunk into a battle position with one tiny trick that may or may not have worked.

With a small cry he ran at his father with his kunai raised in a high arc, leaving himself open for any manner of attack. His father took the invitation and slapped the kunai out of Miyabi’s hand with his own. At first he was slightly disappointed with the obvious mistake, but he knew his son was tired. Miyabi eyed his dad in the split second that he took to disarm him. Whenever his dad swung out with his kunai for a fraction of a second his torso was left unguarded.

Miyabi pivoted in the loose dirt and brought his body under his father’s arm and punched at his chest, landing the desired blow. Whatever good it may have done him in a real combat was not thought of at that moment, but instead he reveled in the knowledge that he had thought of a strategy all of his own, even if it was a foolish one.

His father had an expression of shock on his face for a split second before he smiled and nodded. “You truly are my son,” he said with pride in his voice.

Miyabi backed away, trying hard to not let the joy he felt from the high praise show on his face. “Thank you, father,” he said in a soft voice.

His dad nodded happily and handed his son’s kunai back to him. “Wonderful job my son. I commend you on your clear thought in battle.”

Miyabi nodded.

“However the decision of allowing yourself to be disarmed was foolish at best,” hi father said.

“I know,” Miyabi replied.

“I think I know of a way for you to execute that move without being disarmed,” his dad said. “Would you like to practice?”

Miyabi nodded, “Yes, father.”

“Very well, battle stances,” his father instructed.

The two men sunk into battle stances while his dad demonstrated the pro’s and con’s of the strategy until it became to dark to see.

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Yay
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Darth Osiris · Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 2:38 pm Post subject:

Wow, these Miyabi fics are becoming common, aren't they? Anyway, here's my request. Yuriko recalling painful memories and Needleman comforting her, sometime during Stream, if you please, preferrably mid-series.

ComicX6 · Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 4:13 pm Post subject:

Ugh, my computer's acting at snail speed today...

Anyway, I enjoyed the Dark fic. It took a while, but it was worth it. Good job!
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Midnight · Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 4:26 pm Post subject:

Dunno.

I enjoyed this one. I'm afraid I do not know much about Miyabi, but as it stands, I feel as if I have learned about his character through this work, even if it is non-canonical.

Good job.
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Unknown Neo · Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 6:53 pm Post subject:

Cute neko real cute. That could have been how he learned. It showed some real emotion.

Kitty-Chan · Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 9:56 pm Post subject:

I may not know Miyabi, but I think I do now.
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