Kinda spritish Pixel Artish Yuna v2

Unknown Neo · Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 4:04 pm Post subject:

It's a real good work, so you going to do sera too?
And don't feel embarrassed about the green hair thing, I have the same thing about red and certain types of blue hair too. heh heh

Pitchums · Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 4:07 pm Post subject:

I probably will end up doing Sera sometime soon, too, just so's I can get used to this sorta shtuff. Problem with that is that Sera has a very boring pose in most of her artwork... I'll try to think of something on my own though, then... 'n of course I'm gunna try to condense these things into more sprite-like things than pixel art.
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Pitchums · Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2005 9:21 am Post subject:

A bunch of little subtle changes later, here's v3

3 ------------------> 2(for comparison)

Left(your right) pigtail is more rounded off, and her legs are extended another 2 pixels, just to help the arms fall a litlte more into proportion. I also did a bunch of subtle little shading that I doubt anyone will really notice, except in the really evident areas.
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CrossFusionStarman · Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2005 10:13 am Post subject:

Wow. Nice job, especially the fact that you made those from scratch. Great job. I see no huge gaping errors.
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Unknown Neo · Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2005 1:40 pm Post subject:

Nicer work. And just remember those little differences may be too small for only you to notice but as long as you can inprove on it, it'll be fine.

feepitsrule · Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2005 2:14 pm Post subject:

Good, you edited it. Ohhh, I have another nitpick. Her fingers are too wide and blocky, and she has only three(not including the thumb.)
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Pitchums · Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2005 4:34 pm Post subject:

Jenova Spawn · Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 2:46 pm Post subject:

Hate to bother you, but if you want the proportions EXACTLY right with the arms, you are going to have to make the legs longer and the torso react with how long they are. Or, you could just shorten the arms. If she were to put her arms down, they would come down to her ankles.
The coloring is excellent, and you really did do a fantastic job. Since I'm and artist myself, I tend to be picky about proportions. Your Zero lady person is great, and it needs no revising.
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Pitchums · Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 2:50 pm Post subject:

And here I thought this topic was done for. While I've checked for myself, and the arms come down just a little above her knees, I shpose they may be a little excessive still, but it's really only a few pixels, and I tried making her legs longer which just looked awkward(and I don't have the patience to fix up the arms... those took for-fricking-ever!).

I actually do have a v4 of this I forgot to post, but it doesn't deal at all with any of the proportion things, and really just added a bunch more shading.

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