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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2005 6:32 pm Post subject: |
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Can't wait till chapter 8 ^^. PLEASE tell me it's gonna be posted tonight. If not, I can wait another day. Now I hope for a huge dramatic battle scene. KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITING! _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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DjangoSP The True Solar Boy
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2005 6:41 pm Post subject: |
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It can't be posted today. I've been on the computer for so long, it's getting hot. So I've got to get off before it's fried. But it will DEFINITELY be posted tomorrow. I can promise you that! _________________ I am Solar Boy Django! TAIYOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2005 6:42 pm Post subject: |
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(Okay, I lied. Just use your account next time, Chibi -CFS)
This is ChibiForte using CFS's account;
Thankies Django-chan! You totally displayed the personalities perfectly! (They act just like me!! ) Anyhell, good job, and I luff the attacks. Can't wait to see CFS's human and Mamodo! W00t! _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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LgacyDX banned onoes :<
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DjangoSP The True Solar Boy
Joined: 25 Jul 2005 Posts: 575 Location: Traveling the world, recruiting people to help me rule my manga, anime, and video game empire.
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 9:12 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks LDX, and I'm back anyway! CFS, brace yoursel, your Mamodo's next! I now bring you...
Chapter 8: The Three Legendary Mamodos! Wind, Warrior, & Ninja Collide! Part 2 of 3
DjangoSP
"Okay. Now that we've found Kisoka, our next objective's to find Dusk." "But wher is he?" Kaze asked. I pointed to a dark spot on the map I used to find Kisoka. "This is the Void of Ink." I said. "It's pitch black, so Taiyou's solar power will help us out." I looked around. "Where is he?" I asked. CRAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSHHHHHH!!!!!!! "Uh, Django?" Taiyou called from the other room, "Y'know that statue of Otenko...ya might wanna call someone to fix that." Kisoka covered her mouth, trying to stifle giggles. I bellowed, "GOD DAMMIT, TAIYOU! IF I'VE TOLD YOU ONCE, I'VE TOLD YOU A THOUSAND TIMES, DON'T TOUCH OTENKO'S STATUE!! I sighed. Kaze questioned, "But how do we get there, the area surrounding it is pitch black!" I smiled. "That's where you and Taiyou come in."
Kaze
I thought Django's plan was crazy! What we had to do was dangerous, possibly fatal! But I admit: I loved it. :D "Okay," Taiyou said. "Can we go over this again?" "Okay," Django started. "Kaze summons her Wind Dragon to fly us up through the Void of Ink. Then Taiyou uses his Solar Shield to protect us from being swallowed by the darkness. Once inside, we find Orochi and Dusk. Any questions?" he ended. Taiyou raised his hand. "Um, yeah. Has anyone else thought that this plan is COMPLETELY INSANE!?" "Taiyou!" I exclaimed. "I can't believe it! The Solar Mamodo, scared of darkness? The very thing you conquer?" Taiyou got a worried look on his face. "Uh, o-of c-c-course not! I'm just saying, we've n-never been in the Void of Ink before! W-We don't know what to e-expect!" Oh, boy "Well then", I said, "Let's move!"
Meanwhile...
*CAUTION*
FOR THE ENZAN FANGIRLS, I HIGHLY SUGGEST AGAINST READING THE BELOW. I'VE JUST PUT THIS IN FOR THE LAUGHS. YOU HAVE BEEN FORWARNED.
Kiyo
"Okay, Zatch, wait for it..." Enzan stepped into view. NOW! "Zaker" Enzan was zapped by the Electric Spell. His clothes were charred black and he was struck dumbfounded. "Did you order Original Recipe or Extra Crispy?" he said before falling to the ground. Zatch and I burst out laughing, tears streaming from our eyes. "Who do we prank next?" Zatch asked. I thought for a moment. How 'bout Meiru?"
Back with Django and Company...
DjangoSP
"Okay Kisoka, do your thing!" I yelled happily. She nodded and yelled, "Uindo Doragon!" Kaze held out her hand and a giant gust of wind blew out from it. Then, it twisted and turned, forming a large dragon. It reared its head back to look at me and Taiyou. Taiyou lept behind me and clutched my leg. "Okay, everyone!" Kisoka said. "All aboard!" Taiyou said nervously, "Uh, I think I left the map back in our house. I'll just go--" Kaze interrupted him by saying, "Get on, or I'll glomp you again." And with that, he scurried right on to the dragon. What amazed me, the dragon looked solid for something made out of wind. So we hopped on, and headed for...the Void of Ink.
~~2 hours later...~~
Kisoka
I've never been to the Void of Ink, but believe me: it lived up to its name! There was a dark, inky aura around it, and inside, we saw things moving around. Like lost souls. "Alright" Django interrupted my thoughts. "We're going in." He grabbed his spellbook and yelled, " Hizashi!" Taiyou unleashed about a million rays of light and tore a hole in the aura. They dived in. Django yelled, "I'll be back! ...With weapons!" I chuckled to myself. Classic Django.
DjangoSP
It was a dark and stormy void. Cliched, I know, but it really set the atmosphere. All of a sudden, I heard a spell. "Kikoku!
Dusk
I fired my energy blasts at the intruders. This was my home, and they aren't gonna screw it up! Orochi the yelled, "Kiraku!" A dome of dark energy covered them. I smirked as I walked over to the captive. "Well, well, well." I said. "Looks like the jig is up!"
I have to end now because I was working on a school project. Tommorow, I can work at a more leisurley pace. See ya! _________________ I am Solar Boy Django! TAIYOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!
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zero.exeDS
Joined: 01 Sep 2005 Posts: 31 Location: USA!!! baby!
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 11:26 pm Post subject: |
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nice chapter a little short though but that enzan joke cracked me up *bricked by enzan fangirls* a _________________
thanks for the avatar and sig final |
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Darth Osiris Net Official
Joined: 04 Aug 2005 Posts: 351 Location: Where do you think?
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Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 4:41 am Post subject: |
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I agree. I like the Space Jam reference. |
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LgacyDX banned onoes :<
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Darth Osiris Net Official
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Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 1:21 pm Post subject: |
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I'm looking forward to it, too. Mainly because MY Mamodo is in it! |
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
Joined: 28 May 2005 Posts: 1723 Location: Glomping Seras
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Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 3:11 pm Post subject: |
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AWESOME CHAPTER!!! Thank you soo much for puttihng Dusk and Orochi in it! Can't wait for future chapters ^^. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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DjangoSP The True Solar Boy
Joined: 25 Jul 2005 Posts: 575 Location: Traveling the world, recruiting people to help me rule my manga, anime, and video game empire.
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Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 6:53 pm Post subject: |
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I'm back, and with a new chapter! Darth, your turn has come at last! Behold: Chapter 8: The 3 Legendary Mamodos! Wind, Warrior and Ninja Collide! Part 3 of 3
DjangoSP
"Alright, you! I'm warning you right now, if you don't let us out, I'll beat you into submission!" I threatened. Dusk didn't blink. "Hm." he said. He snapped his fingers. I was pounded by an array of dark energy. It hurt worse than having Kaze glomp you. "I'm g-g-gonna whomp y-y-y-you, you l-little s-shrimp!" I wheezed. He snapped his fingers again. I was again pounded by dark energy. "You son-of-a-bi--" He snapped his fingers...again. "Come on, Taiyou!" I gasped. "We got him on the ropes!" "That's enough, Dusk." A voice said. I looked up and saw...Chris!
Chris
Who were these strange characters? They seemed...familiar. Especially the one who Dusk was torturing. It was funny, but...it was like...I knew him somehow. "All right. Who are you, and what are you doing in our forest? Answer quickly, or I'll let Dusk blast you again." Dusk put his fingers in a position to snap again. "STOOOOOOOOOOOP!!!!" We jerked our heads up, and saw Kisoka and Kaze jumping down through the Void. She leaped between me and Chris. Kaze said, "If you wanna waste Taiyou, you'll have to go through ME!" Taiyou blushed, and hid his face in embarrassment. Chris called off Dusk. He looked at Kisoka and said, "And who are you? She pointed her finger at his chest and replied, "No. I want to know who are you, bullying my friends! And I can tell this is not your Mamodo!" Chris rubbed his head in pain. "This is confusing. Let's start with who they are he said, gesturing at me and Taiyou. Taiyou got up and said, "My name is Taiyou, and this is my...currently incapacitated partner, DjangoSP." Chris jerked up in surprise. "Django? ...My...brother?" "Dusk!"
Orochi
I always tell him not to wander off. But does he listen? NO! And when he's lost, he'll bitch about anxiety! "Dusk, who are these people, and why did you wander off right after I cast my spell!? That's like hanging a sign around your neck saying, 'I'm A Mamodo! 50 pts. if you get my chest!'" Dusk wasn't even paying attention. He was looking up behind me at something. I turned around, and heard a spell. "Faiakasui!"
Chris
My stalling plan plan had worked perfectly. Gin's Ninja powers had come in handy. DjangoSP and Taiyou were inside an inescapable dome of dark energy, Orochi was on fire. Now, all that was left was that bitch who threatened me. "BITCH!?" she screamed. Oh, crap! Was I thinking out loud!? I felt a hard smack across my face, and lost consciousness. But not before yelling out the Fire Spell again. "Faiakasui!" She was set on fire, too. But I was knocked out.
DjangoSP
Damn. Today has been one HECK of a day.
Taiyou
I wonder what Kiyo and the others were doing?
~~With Kiyo and his friends...~~
Enzan
I was walking as loudly as I could. I was...shocked when Kiyo and Zatch got me, but today, I was prepared! Right on cue, I heard, "Zaker!" I took it, and didn't feel a thing. "Huh?" I heard Kiyo say. I said to him, "Uh, uh, uh, Kiyo! Since I'm wearing a rubber suit, you...can't zap me."
*Can't Touch Me starts playing*
Can't Touch Me.
Can't Touch Me.
Can't Touch Me.
Ja, ja, ja, ja
Just like the bad guy, in MMBN 2,
I've got specially designed Magna-Wear,
So Capcom, you can't sue.
I can fly a kite, with a metal key attached.
I can stick a fork inside a plug, and even punch out Zatch.
Can't Touch Me.
"Bao Zakerga!" I looked up to see a HUGE electric snake looming down on me. "Oh, shit." I said. My rubber suit can only stand up to 40 watts.
It's a crazy story, I know, but at least I finally got to you, Darth Osiris! Happy now? :/ _________________ I am Solar Boy Django! TAIYOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!
Credit goes to X-Zero EXE for the uber-cool sig!!! :D |
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 7:05 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome job! Darth, your person and Mamodo seem pretty cool so far. And Kisoka's anger about being a bitch...classic! Great chapter! The Enzan thing was funny, especially his Can't Touch Me ripoff. And yet he still gets zapped. Man, you are HILARIOUS!!! _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Darth Osiris Net Official
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Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 7:54 pm Post subject: |
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Two words: FREAKIN' SWEET!
But I'm confused, am I a good guy or a bad guy? |
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DjangoSP The True Solar Boy
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Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 5:00 am Post subject: |
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You are a good guy, DO, but after you lost touch with Django, Kisoka, Taiyou, and Kaze, you lost your memory. _________________ I am Solar Boy Django! TAIYOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!
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Darth Osiris Net Official
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Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 5:11 am Post subject: |
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Either way, I want a "Can't Touch Me" ripoff too. |
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DjangoSP The True Solar Boy
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Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 5:15 am Post subject: |
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I'll see what I can do, Darth. _________________ I am Solar Boy Django! TAIYOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 6:09 pm Post subject: |
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I'm guessing Orochi and Dusk lost their memories as well? Oh well, I don't mind ^^. Seems kinda cool that way, actually. Can I have a ripoof of a song too? Preferrably the Moskau song (See my sig). Well, as I said before, great chapter. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Darth Osiris Net Official
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Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 6:10 pm Post subject: |
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I don't hear a song when I open that window. |
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 6:22 pm Post subject: |
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Really? Is your volume on mute, or do you have headphones or a microphone plugged in. Cause it won't play anything period if something is plugged in. Sorry about this being in your topic, Django! _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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ChibiForte ニンジャ
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Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 6:45 pm Post subject: |
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Yay! Cool, Django-san!! That was an awesome chapter!! *kicks CFS's chars and laughs* _________________
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