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Penguin Alchemist
Joined: 19 Sep 2005 Posts: 24 Location: between penguins...
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 10:22 am Post subject: The poor ~ Chapter 1: Joe |
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Author: Me ^^
Genre: urk, funky!
Rating: For...lovers of fanfics!
Symbols: OOC
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It's the year 20XX and having a navi is a standard.
It's ment for protection, but some people use it for destruction.
The city's local cross fusion championship just ended and yet again, Joe (also called the Burning cannonball) won it.
"Can you believe it? This is the sixth time in a row he won it!" Some people in the cround came closer to joe and were mumbling about his victories.
"I heard he cheats..." "Who? him? no way, he just rocks!"
But some people in the croud were looking at the other finalist that lost
"Aw man, i so hoped the other finalist would win" "WHAT? YOUR A JOE TRAITOR, I'M GETTING YOU OUT OF THE FANCLUB!"
Joe looks like your everyday 16 year old boy.
He has black hair almost till his shoulders and a lose black shirt.
He has a couple of sunglasses and a pair of jeans.
"Well well...you did try" Joe said, trying to cheer up the other finalist, but just no use.
The other finalist was a 13 year old kid (altho he looks smaller) with a blue shirt and long black hair till the shoulders with a pair of black shorts.
He wears a white scarve altho it's mid-summer and he was crying...crying infront of a huge public.
"I...lost..." He sobbed, he was pretty depressed.
"Fireman, let's go..." Joe said, grabbing his blood red pet and putting it in his jeans.
Slowly, the croud started dissapearing and within a few hours, all that was left was a small boy who was still sobbing. It started raining and the boy got rain over his face that was soaked in tears.
"I...couldn't have...lost...father...i failed..." He said to himself, curling up like a small ball.
A shadow bended over the boy and the boy looked up.
"Who...are you?" He asked, he couldn't see who it was in the rain.
The man had a big red umbrella and was reaching out a hand to the boy
"I'll help you up..." A calm and soofing voice said "What's your name?" he asked.
"It's Mart..." He said, standing up, trying to get near the man to get under the umbrella.
Mart realises that this was Joe, the winner of the tournament.
"why are you so sad kiddo?" He asked, putting his arm around Mart.
"I needed the prize money for my dad..." he said, trying to stop crying.
To be continued...dun dun duuun |
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Joe
Joined: 19 Sep 2005 Posts: 10 Location: Kuwait
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 10:55 am Post subject: |
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heeeeeeeeeey! PENGUIN RULEZ! heh your fan-fic rocks! i like it alot, keep up the good work martmon!..ho ho ho -.- |
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Penguin Alchemist
Joined: 19 Sep 2005 Posts: 24 Location: between penguins...
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 12:19 pm Post subject: |
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Who changed my fanfic? it now has stuff like "lad" "doubloons" "ye".
I REALLY don't like this at all.... :grr: |
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Izumi darenimo wakaranai
Age: 41 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 1002331 Location: Osaka
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 12:20 pm Post subject: |
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Penguin Alchemist wrote: | Who changed me fanfic? it now has stuff like "lad" "doubloons" "ye".
I REALLY don't like this at all.... :grr: |
T'be sure, it be a tragedy...but if ye be lookin' anywheres else on yon site ye'd see all o' ye landlubbers be gettin' th' same treatment. _________________ One of the three EXE sisters! *Armstrong-style pose*
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Penguin Alchemist
Joined: 19 Sep 2005 Posts: 24 Location: between penguins...
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 12:26 pm Post subject: |
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eerhm, please talk normal english, i have enough problems with that already ^^;
I'm Dutch and 13 years old 0o, is this cuz i played with the
Author: I ^^
Genre: urk, funky!
Rating: For...lovers of fanfics!
Symbols: OOC
Or is it because of my grammar problems? |
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Izumi darenimo wakaranai
Age: 41 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 1002331 Location: Osaka
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 12:27 pm Post subject: |
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Penguin Alchemist wrote: | eerhm, please talk normal english, i have enough problems with that there already ^^;
I be Dutch and 13 years old 0o, be this cuz i played with the
Author: I ^^
Genre: urk, funky!
Rating: For...lovers of fanfics!
Symbols: OOC
Or be it because of me grammar problems? |
Sorry, it be just for today, ye know? _________________ One of the three EXE sisters! *Armstrong-style pose*
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Digigamer Net Savior
Joined: 03 Apr 2005 Posts: 195 Location: Looking for a place where i belong...
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 12:29 pm Post subject: |
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ROFL! Izumi is in a naughty mood! Aw cmon Izu, change it all back :] |
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Izumi darenimo wakaranai
Age: 41 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 1002331 Location: Osaka
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 12:31 pm Post subject: |
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Digigamer wrote: | ROFL! Sea Princess Izumi be in a naughty mood! :yar har har: Aw cmon Sea Princess Izumi, change it all back :] |
Nay! Majority be sayin', we be havin' fun today! _________________ One of the three EXE sisters! *Armstrong-style pose*
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Digigamer Net Savior
Joined: 03 Apr 2005 Posts: 195 Location: Looking for a place where i belong...
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 12:32 pm Post subject: |
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This be very annoying - -; |
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Penguin Alchemist
Joined: 19 Sep 2005 Posts: 24 Location: between penguins...
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 12:34 pm Post subject: |
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now i get it, this is a installed filter...i can live with this, this is starting to get fun...
haha, izume strikes again!...*grabs his fake plastic knife* but you will pay for scaring me and my friend like this... *pokes solfty with the plastic knife* feel my wrath! |
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Izumi darenimo wakaranai
Age: 41 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 1002331 Location: Osaka
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 12:40 pm Post subject: |
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Penguin Alchemist wrote: | now i get it, this be a installed filter...i can live with this, this be starting to get fun...
haha, Sea Princess Izumi strikes again!...*grabs his fake plastic knife* but ye be pay for scaring I and me matey like this... *pokes solfty with the plastic knife* feel me wrath! |
Eek! I be feelin' it, matey, sure as anything!
Glad your pirate blood be goin', now! _________________ One of the three EXE sisters! *Armstrong-style pose*
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Digigamer Net Savior
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 12:43 pm Post subject: |
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Arh, Shiver I timbers! Ye be walking the plank for this! >.o |
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Penguin Alchemist
Joined: 19 Sep 2005 Posts: 24 Location: between penguins...
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 12:46 pm Post subject: |
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welcome all, to spam-ville.
It's a topic for every pirate who's blood is rushing and can't help but go funky this night...let's continue the pirate talk in the general topic.
There you can..eerh, not burry my topic under pirate post...
weeh ^^ :V |
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Izumi darenimo wakaranai
Age: 41 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 1002331 Location: Osaka
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 12:47 pm Post subject: |
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Aye! Good luck t'you with your fiction! _________________ One of the three EXE sisters! *Armstrong-style pose*
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Penguin Alchemist
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 1:02 pm Post subject: |
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Chapter 2: The man in cloaks
"I needed the money for my dad so i...-"
"Hold it" A voice from above said. A man in a cloak came from the air and landed right infront of Joe.
"Are you Joe...the champion?" He asked. It was a man around the age of 16 and he wore a large brown cloak and had mid-long darkblond hair.
"Yes, what do you want?" Joe asked, already slowly grabbing his pet
"A Battle...with the champion...winner takes the money" The man said confident, grabbing his black pet
"Why should he do this? we can just walk past you" Mart said angry
"Because if he doesn't do it, i'll let everybody know his little secret" The man said grinning, grabbing a chip.
Joe flinched and mart looked confused.
"Little...secret?" Mart asked also grabbing his pet.
"It's nothing...really..." Joe said blushing "i'll fight you..."
The three of them all slotted in a synchro chip and within the blink of an eye, the battle started.
"Joe, I'll help you!" Mart said, dashing behind joe
"Firetorch!" Joe said as he fired of a large blast of fire, behind him Mart jumped up and threw 3 shurican's, but the man evaded them and was holding joe's throat within a second, but Mart grabbed another shurican and threw it towards the man, but the man jumped up and the shurican hits Joe's chest!
"JOE!!" Mart yells, running towards joe.
"I'm alright..." Joe says, holding his chest. "Take the money Mart...take it and run"
Mart nodded and ran away.
"Your scared you would lose the money?" The man asked, holding up a buster against joe's head. Joe was shocked and didn't move
"heh, we'll meet again, joe..." And the man ran after Mart.
Joe just stood there, shocked and he didn't move.
"I hope joe will be alright..." Mart thought, looking behind, but before he even noticed it, a blast just nearly missed him.
"What the? WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT DO YOU WANT!?"
The man in the cloak grabs Mart by the throat and holds him up.
"the name's Nickay AKA The dark Scar, and i'm here for the money..."
Mart was shocked, is THIS man the Dark scar...the famous thief who never was caught? |
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