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ToraYashaChan
Joined: 19 Sep 2005 Posts: 6 Location: The middle of nowhere
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 2:33 pm Post subject: A/R, Dark Blues/Netto pairing...WIP //no title yet// |
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WARNING: Shonen ai...so people that don't like Shonen ai fluff can just leave...and flamers...please take it somewhere else...no one likes being flamed...so...just don't do it please...
Auther's Note: Ok...I had an idea for a Rockman fic...it's a Dark Blues/Netto pairing...what I have here is going to happen later in the story...I just want to know what you guys think of it...*nods*...well...the idea is that Netto was forced to go with Dark Blues...(I still need to think of how)...and it's been like 2 monthes...and you'll see what I mean...*nods*...oh...and if people have ideas for a title of this story...feel free to post them...*nods*...anyways...ONWARD!!!
Netto stood in front of the bathroom mirror, holding a sharp kitchen knife in his hand, a blank expression on his face. Dark Blues had kept him captive for nearly two months now, and he couldn't take it any more. He missed his friends and family; he missed Enzan and Rockman the most. But Netto knew that he probably wouldn't see any of them for a long time, that is if he ever would see them again.
It wasn't just the pain of missing his friends that was making him so depressed, Dark Blues was basicly using Netto as his personal slave of some sort that he could do anything he wanted with. Netto was frequently beaten for being even the slightest disobedient to the dark Navi's orders. He felt like he was loosing a part of himself every day, Netto hated that feeling, and he wanted to die just to get rid of this numb feeling that was consuming his very being. Netto faintly heard someone calling his name, but he didn't care, he wanted to just get rid of the numbness that was threatening to posses his whole body.
He raised the knife that he was holding, preparing to drive the metal blade into his heart to take his life. Then without Netto realizing it, a dimentional area formed around the small house out in the country that Dark Blues had made him go live in so he wouldn't be found by his family and friends, or anybody else that knew who he was for that matter. Suddenly, Netto felt someone pull the knife out of his hands and then wrap there strong arms around him. He slowly became aware of his surroundings, and realized that his captor, Dark Blues, had his arms around him. Netto let out a cry of surprise and fear as he tried to push the dark Navi away, but Blues was un-phased by Netto’s resistance, and silenced his cry of shock with a kiss, his arms still wraped around the younger boy. After a moment or two, he broke away and glanced down at Netto, who was looking very shocked and confused at the moment.
Auther's Note: This is as far as I got...I know it's short...but I need inspiration...which I am lacking at the moment...*sweatdrops*...anyways...I hope you enjoyed what I have so far in my fic...*nods*
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ToraYashaChan
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 2:36 pm Post subject: |
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so...what do you think of it so far? :/ |
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ToraYashaChan
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 2:42 pm Post subject: |
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*starts thinking of ides for story* |
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ToraYashaChan
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 2:48 pm Post subject: |
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...ok...the Pirate talk is annoying...here's a link to where I have it on Livejournal.com...
http://www.livejournal.com/users/torayashachan/346.html
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ToraYashaChan
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 2:51 pm Post subject: |
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Izumi darenimo wakaranai
Age: 41 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 1002331 Location: Osaka
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 3:09 pm Post subject: |
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Please don't double, triple, quadruple, quintuple post, etc. If someone wants to comment on your story, they'll be doing so. _________________ One of the three EXE sisters! *Armstrong-style pose*
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ToraYashaChan
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 3:21 pm Post subject: |
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Sea Princess Izumi wrote: | Please don't double, triple, quadruple, quintuple post, etc. If someone wants to comment on yer story, they'll be doing so. | *sighs*...sorry... :/ |
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Bassman4566 Net Battler
Joined: 27 Aug 2005 Posts: 86 Location: In deeps of the undernet with idiots
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 6:02 pm Post subject: |
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This i acually good. This is the first Netto/Dark Blues I've read |
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YaminoMiko Rabid Roxas Fan
Age: 33 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 701 Location: California
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 6:29 pm Post subject: |
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Good story, this is the second D. Blues/Netto pairing. And please, no more pirate talk... I find that really annoying. _________________
I wanna sleep, but I don't wanna sleep at the same time. @_@.
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Izumi darenimo wakaranai
Age: 41 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 1002331 Location: Osaka
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 7:02 pm Post subject: |
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YaminoMiko wrote: | Good story, this be the second D. Blues/Netto pairing. And please, no more pirate talk... I find that there really annoying. |
you say it like it's optional XD _________________ One of the three EXE sisters! *Armstrong-style pose*
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Kitty-Chan Net Police
Joined: 08 Jul 2005 Posts: 438 Location: Massillon, Ohio, USA
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Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2005 10:58 am Post subject: |
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Yay! *is the most avid Blues/Netto shipper on the net* Finally, it's starting to catch on! :D _________________ Need more Zero/X, Netto/Rock, Rock/Netto, Forte/Netto, & Blues/Netto. PLEASE!
Ano sa...could someone please make me a Zero/X, Blues/Netto, or Forte/Netto avatar/banner? I would greatly appreciate it...
Thanks for the avatar, Mandi!
People! We need more Blues/Netto & Forte/Netto on the net. Come on; help me out here! *gives everyone her Super-Adorable Irrisistable Sad Kitty Eyes(TM)* |
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