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PostPosted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 6:21 pm    Post subject: Duo's Judgement! Reply with quote

Note: This is a part of my big Fanfic, More than Just a friend, that was canceled here. You can find all of the story so far, here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2532978/1/, there are some crucial points that need ot be known from the actuall story.

LanXMaylu
JasminXOC
MegamanXRoll
Oh, and before the fangirls, kill me, let me just... * Puts up a Fan girl/Boy Shield* Chaud's Gay.... * Is Killed* And... so is Laika.... * Zombie get's killed*
Roll can now use double soul! She has Mega soul and Basssoul!
Thenesis is a crime group thought to be after Maylu for her afection.

So here's chapter 1!

Prolog!

Lan and Maylu were walking home together,talkiong of recent events, when Lan stopped, and grabbed his hand.
" Agh!" He cried in pain.
Maylu was about to check on him, when her own hand began to hurt.
She clutched it, and looked to see Jasmine coming towards them with Jacob right behind.
" Lan, Maylu, do you--"
" Yeah....." Lan said. " It's Duo....."
" Ho---How?" Maylu asked.
" I don't know, all I do know is......" Lan paused. " Duo's comet is making a return!


Duo's Judgement Part 1


Lan, Maylu, and Jasmine stood in ACDC park, waiting for the others to show up.
Soon Chaud and Laika showed up.
' Ironic, they're showing up.... together...' Lan thought, think of Chaud's.... condition. ' But Laika's not like that....'
" We came as soon as we heard!" Laika said. Chaud simply remained silent.
"I called the other crest holders, they'll be here soon." Lan said.
Wanting to start some trouble, Lan turned to Chaud. " So, ya over your sickness yet?" he said with a sneer.
"L--Lan!" Maylu said, shocked.
" Leave him alone!" Laika defended.
Chaud simply continued to stare at the ground.
" I'm just messin with him...." Lan said.
" Leave. Him. Alone!" Laika defended again.
" Aw, It's so cute Maylu, look at Laika defend his lover!" Lan said in a sneer like voice.
" Lan! Stop it!" Maylu said, pulling Lan back.
" Shove it, you sexist bastard!" Laika said, grabbing Chaud, and walking away from Lan.
" Freaks...." Lan said under his breath.
" What the hell Lan?" Maylu asked, in a hiss.
Lan simply shruged. " I dunno, I just asked a question....."
Soon Princess Pride came on a battleship, with Charlie tailing her.
After a while, Nenji and Dingo showed up, soon after Tesla showed up, and after a while so did Yuriko.
" Well, now that all of us are her--"
Lan was interupted by a stern voice speaking.
"Now hold on, you didn't forget about me didja?"
Lan turned to see Baryl coming down the street.
" NOW" Lan said, " Let's go check out Duo!" He inexplicably held his hand up, and a purple beam shot out of it.
The others shrugged, and did so as well.
Once all 13 were all up there, a giant crest of Duo appeared, and the Crest holders were standing in front of Duo himself.
" Duo......" Lan said.
" Yes, your planet will be judged once again..... since I have left, madness has insued...."
" Bu--"
" Please remain silent....." Duo interupted. " You have five days....."
" Huh?" Maylu asked, having no clue what was going on.
" I'm.... changing the 'rules'...." Duo said. " You have five days to defeat this, Thenesis, and rid the world of chaos..... if you fail..... your punishment will follow...."
They all nodded. ' Earth Erasure.....' Lan thought.
"Good....." Duo finished, sending them back to ACDC park.
" Five days...." Lan said.
" Who's Thenesis?" Tesla arubtly asked.
" The..... Thenesis...." Lan began, but didn't finish.
" Thenesis is a crime Syndicate formed by someone after Maylu, and they're willing to destroy the whole world just to get her...." Chaud said quietly.
Most of the people looked at Lan and Maylu, and they blushed.
" Er......"
" Well, well, well...." Charlie said. " Lan's found him a girl!"
They both blushed again.
" Th----the point is, we have to stop Thenesis..."
" I have some info on them...." Laika said. " They have cells set up all over Earth...."
Lan nooded, then said, " Alright, Maylu, Jasmine and I will handle Electopia.... Laika, Chaud, and Baryl, covor Sharo, Tesla, Nenji, Dingo, and Yuriko, cover Amerope... and Charlie, and Pride, you guys cover Yumland...."
" THat still leaves a few countries......" Chaud muttered.
" We'll get other net agents ya freak....." Lan said, rolling his eyes.
Chaud simply continued to stare at the ground.
" Come on Chaud...." Laika said, walking off.
The other crest holsers quickly followed, and Lan and Maylu headed home.....


-----Thenesis Headquarters-----

Aaron sighed. He brought up a link to the navi, and asked, " Was the third piece of data recieved?"
"As planned sir...." Thank you, you may continue scanning the net.
The link closed, and Aaron turned to a teen on the floor.
" You failed....." Aaron said, flatly.
" I---I sir, I his parents.... they, his navi---please, sir.... give me another chance...." The teen pleaded.
Aaron simply pressed a button on the control panel.
" No sir not that...." The tenn pleaded, on the floor, as a dimmensional area appeared around him.
A navi appeared inside the dimmensional area.
" Sorry Jason!" Aaron said with a smirk. There was a scream of agony heard, and then..... silence.....

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Duo's Judgement Begins! Can the Crest Holders Stop Thenesis on time? Find out next time!
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 7:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I read it on FF.Net, and it's pretty good. But one thing still irks me. WHY IS EVERYONE TALKING LIKE A PIRATE?!
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 7:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's pirate day! And I have chap 2!

Duo's Judgment Part 2! Taking their seperate ways.....



" Alright, so we'll search ACDC in two groups!" Lan said.
" Me and Maylu, and Jasmine, and Jacob!"
" Sounds alright to me..." Jasmine muttered. " Let's go Jacie! ( Pronounced Jake-- ee, Her pet name for him XD)
" I told you not to call me that!" Jacob murmered, walking out the door with Jasmine.


-----Thenesis HQ-----

Aaron chuckled, amused.
" They think they can stop us?" He said.
He chuckled again. " It's all Lan's fault.... it's society's fault......"
He started to look sad. " It's all the HUMANS" He spat the last word as if digusted.
" We navis don't have such weaknesses as ' feelings'... he thinks I'm after Sakurai? Hah! He's pathetic... he knows nothing...... no body knows, understands.... I do this because I get bored, no other reason......."



-----Sharo Airport-----


Chaud, Laika and Baryl landed down a few hours later.
" Now listen...." Laika said. " I know this area the most, so I'll lead, any objections?"
" Yeah, I got a few..." Baryl said. " What makes you think you can do the best job leading us?"
" What makes you think I can't?"
" Touché!" Baryl chickled. " Lead the way!"


----- ACDC Town-----


"I can't believe it...." Lan muttered. " Two hours, and not a single lead!"
" Don't worry, maybe we should go to NetCity ,take a break?" Maylu suggested.
Lan nodded. " Alright, Jack In, Megaman power up!"
" Jack In Roll, Power Up!"

-----NetCity-----

When Megaman and Roll beamed down, they saw a strange looking navi walking around.
" Gah, were is it?" He said, walking around.
" W--Wait, is that...." Megaman muttered.
The navi turned and gasped. " Megaman!" He said.
" So, Celric, I can asume you're up to no good?" Megaman said.
" That I am..."
Megaman formed his buster, and fired it, only to be grabbed by the neck by Celric.
" Heh... see you got faster...."Megaman said.
" That I have!"
Suddenly, the call of, " DARK ARROW!" Was heard from Roll.
" Huh?" Celric said, turning to see an arrow flying right for him.
Roll stood there, Dark Bow in hand. " Time to see just how much of Bass' abbilities I have... DARKNESS...."
" N--No! ROLL! DON'T!" Megaman yelled.
" OVERLOAD!"
" NO!"
Roll brought down the attack all in one swipe.
After words she scream in pain, and fell on the ground.
Celric fell back. " Heh. not bad, imagine if Megaman had that power, he could control it!" He logged out chuckling.
Bits of data streamed away from Roll.
" No....." Megaman muttered, in tears. " Roll no....."
He kept crying and the data kept streaming.
" ROLL! NO!"
The data wouldn't stop.
He grabbed her, and embraced her.
" I won't let you die Roll...." He said. He started transfering his data into hers.
" Me--Megaman!" Lan said.
" SHUT UP LAN!" Megaman shouted, continung the transfer.
Lan was silent, watching Megaman sacrifice his data, fragmenting it so that sje could read it, and transmitting it.
Eventually her eyes fluttered open. " Me---Mega?" She said weakly.
" Heh.. how ya doin Roll?" He said, some vital data of his missing.
" I'm sorry Mega...." She said.
" Don't be, the important thing is that we know where Thenesis is now..."
" Huh?"
"I'm guessing Celric would sink as low as to work for Thenesis.... I put a tracker on him, we know where Thenesis is now!"
" Mega... that only tells us through the net....."
" That's all I'lll need....."



-----Thenesis HQ-----


" Yes, my little pawns, make your moves...." Aaron said chuckling.
" It'll all end the same....."
He pressed a few buttons.
" The weather in Sharo's about to take a turn for the worse!"


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How ya like? You finally get to see Aaron's personality! Pretty much like Forte/Bass, except Aaron does something about it!
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 7:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Darth Osiris wrote:
I read it on FF.Net, and it be pretty good. But one thing still irks I. WHY be EVERYONE TALKING LIKE A PIRATE?!



Why be no one readin' the announcements in the General forum?
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 7:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've learned to hate these filters....

at least it is on Fanfiction....

I like your stories Sonto!
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 20, 2005 4:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Izumi wrote:
Darth Osiris wrote:
I read it on FF.Net, and it be pretty good. But one thing still irks I. WHY be EVERYONE TALKING LIKE A PIRATE?!



Why be no one readin' the announcements in the General forum?


Okay, then. I hope there's a talk like Yoda day in the near future.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 4:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

DOn't think too much, but my friend loves this, and thinks I should get a grant from CapCom to publish it... I XD'd, untill I found out he was serious o.0 What do you guys think?
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 4:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Whoo! Two New Chapters! And the finale! ALRIGHT!



Duo's Judgment Part 3! Tension Building!


" Damn it...." Laika sighed, plopping down on the snow covered grouond.
" So that lead was a false one, eh?" Baryl said. " Sucks when that happens...." He simply got out a flask and sipped from it.
" We'll get some sorta lead, I hope...." Chaud said.
" Master Chaud, please stop wallowing, we know... er... about, IT, and we don't care, you're the presiden--"
Chaud held up his hand to Protoman. " I know...."
" It's gonna start storming soon.... living in Sharo for so long you know these things..."
Baryl and Chaud nodded, and they headed back to their Hotel.

----- An hour Later-----

" Agh..." Laika muttered, trying to find his way through a snow storm. " I know it was supposed to storm, but THIS isn't natual!"
" Heh, Probobly Thenesis..." Baryl chuckled.
" HOW THE HELL CAN YOU BE HAPPY WHEN IT'S NEGATIVE FIVE FREAKING HUNDRED!"
" Heh... I just..... too cold..... seeya later...." Baryl muttered, collapsing.
" Damn it!" Laika said grabbing him. " Chaud, we gotta find shelter!"
Chaud simply nodded.

-----A few Minutes Later-----

"There!" Laika managed to say. " In the snow, do you see that shed?"
Chaud yelled over the whistle of the wind. " Yeah! Let's go!"
After they made it in, only to find it was an empty abandoned, rundown shack, but it had heat, and that's what they needed.....


-----ACDC Town-----



"I guess that works Megaman...." Lan said to his navi.
" Good, because it took perfect timing too get that on him...."


-----Thenesis HQ-----

"Heh, those weak humans, so weak, nothing between them and me except a simple pulse transmission, and they're too STUPID to do that....." Aaron chuckled.


-----Sharo Cabin-----


"Whew...." Chaud said, rubbing his hands together.
" I'll contact Lan..." Laika said as if not wanting to.
He brought up a communication, and saw Lan.
" Laika! We know where Thenesis is!" He immediatly said.
" Okay, where are they?"
" We only know on the net, and it's in the UnderNet!"
" Really freaking helpful.... Look, Chaud Baryl, and I are stuck in a storm, so don't expect any reports, get some sleep Lan!"
Lan nodded, " Sure thing, just keep an eye on Chaud when you're sleeping!" Lan chuckled.
Laika, mumbling, cut off the communication.



----- After 3 days of Judgement....-----


-----ACDC Town-----


Lan sighed. " No leads in three days...." He said.
" We'll find them!" Maylu said hopefully.
" Yeah, we just need to find their base in the real world, and I don't know how to go about that...."
" Don't worry... just get some sleep..."
" Only two days left tommorrow...."



-----The Next Day-----


-----Thenesis HQ-----



" Soon they'll be here, and I'll be ready....."


-----Lan's House-----

Lan woke up bright and early, ready to search for Thenesis.
" Thanks Hub....." He muttered, ready to continue the search.....



Previous(Some Key Points in this Chapter):
Lan looked around. He was in a big dark space with nothing around. He looked around and saw a person standing there. He quickly ran towards them, but there was a sudden flash.

Lan woke up panting and sweating. 'Huh?' Lan thought, looking around. That person had looked familiar.... but he'd think about it later.
His dad came up, hearing his son groaning in his sleep.
"Lan? Are you okay?" He asked, looking around the room.
"Uhhuh!" Lan said nodding. " Just had a bad dream!"
His dad nodded and left.
Lan sat there, and decided he should go back to sleep, and think about it all later.

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Lan was once again standing in the space.
He quickly turned, and ran towards the person.
" HEY!" He yelled. The person turned to him, comfirming Lan's supisions of the person looking like him.
"Hi!" The bay said, cheerfully. " I'm Hub Hikari!"
There was aflash, as Lan started to wake up.
"WAIT NO HUUUB!" Lan yelled.

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Lan woke up bright and early, ready to search for Thenesis.
" Thanks Hub....." He muttered, ready to continue the search.....

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Duo's Judgement Part 5! The Result, the True Suffering Begins!



Lan sighed. ' I can't believe it, I'm gonna die in about...' He glanced at the clock. ' 30 hours.....'
He sighed again. ' I guesse I should get my eight hours of sleep...'
He muttered something. " A whole day, no leads, the tracking device was cut off...... everything that could go wrong, HAS gone wrong...."
' I wonder what Hub's doing tonight....'


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Lan looked around him, expecting to see the black space, but instead he saw ACDC Park.
There were two kids running around and playing. They looked about the age of three. What looked like their mother and father were sitting on the bench.
' This seems too familiar...' Lan said to himself, shuddering a bit.
Suddenlly, one of the boys noticed Lan, and came over.
" Hi! I'm Hub! Who're you?" The kid asked in a typical kid like voice.
" O--Oh! I'm Lan!" Lan said, suprised at the boy's advanced words.
The boy was silent for a second, but then said, " Oh! That's my brother's name!"
Lan immediatly froze up. ' Now I know why this is so fammiliar!'
Before anyone could react, a bright flash filled the area.
' I'll see you guys soon..... I hope...' Lan thought hopefully.
" LAN! WAKE UP! WE HAVE ONE DAY!"
Lan immediatly bolted up.
" One day untill we all die....." Lan muttered.
" Don't talk like that! We'll find Thenesis!" Megaman encouraged.
Lan simply nodded, but he was still worried.
" Now hurry up, I picked up a woerd signal coming from the ACDC Bank this morning!"
Lan perked up. " Think it might be--"
Megaman nodded. " It seemed like Celric, and that means Thenesis....."
Lan grabbed the PET, and ran to the bank.....


-----ACDC Bank-----

Lan busted into the bank, and Megaman spoke up.
" Lan! In the basement!"
Lan ran down the stairs, and opened the door.
Suddenly, a voice spoke up. " So, this is the fabled Lan Hikari....."
" Where are you!?" Lan asked fiercly, having no time to screw around. " SHOW YOURSELF!"
The voice chuckled. It was a dry laugh that left Lan shivering.
" Why would I do that? I'm having too much FUN!" The voice began to cackle evilly.
" If you really want to find me, Jack in to the net...."
Lan wasted no time in grabbing his PET, and jacking in Megaman.
Megaman pixillated into the comp, only to be greeted by Celric slashing at him.
"Ahh!" He cried out, as he jumped out of the way.
" Well, well, well Megaman!" Celric said with a smirk.
" Celric, think about this...."
"Think about what? You betrayed me Megaman! There's nothing to think about!"
Megaman was shocked. " Wh--What? I never betrayed you!"
" What do you mean? I was passed out, and was awoke by a travvelling Navi in a ripped cloak. He said he saw what happened, that I had been almost deleted by a navi in a blue jumpuit! I knew it was you! I never really did trust you!"
Megaman remained silent. " I don't remember doing anything! I just remember you going crazy and attacking me!"
"R--Really?"
Suddenly a navi with a dark red, close to black, suit of armor, a dark blue helmet, and a sword hilted at his side, walked up behind Celric.
"Tsk Tsk Tsk.... and to think Celric, you were such a good servent to me.... too bad!"
" N--no! Lord Aaron!" Celric said " D--don't delete me...."
" Oh I won't delete you..." The navi smirked. " I like to make my pawns suffer....."
Celric tensed up. " No! Please sir!"
Aaron smirked, and inserted a file into Celrics data.
" AHHHHHHHH!" Celric screamed in pain.
" Wh--what did you do?" Megaman asked, gulping.
" I simply infected him with the Maverick Virus... something I picked up on my travels!"
" You.... you sick little BASTARD!" Megaman screamed, running at him, an aura appearing over him.
" Heh, losing control, eh?"
" SHUT THE FUCK UP!" Megaman screamed, punching the navi, the aura growing darker.
" Well.... I didn't expect you to use such language..."
With a roar, Megaman leaped off him. Followed by a cry of pain, and his binary became scrambled.
" Wha---What's happening to MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!" Megaman began to scream out in pain.
" MEGAMAN!" Lan screamed into the PET.
Suddenlly, tons of bugs appeared in the PET.
"no....." Lan muttered.
Megaman continued to scream in pain, until the aura disappeared, but then overcame him.
When it dissapeared, he was standing there, dark red eyes, his suit pitch black, a look of hate and disgust on his face.
" I'll murder you....." He said, sounding more Mayure, and dead serious.
" Heh, you couldn't...." Aaron smirked.
" You wish..." Megaman brought his hand up, and he was immediatly behind Aaron.
" DARK STAB!" Megaman's hand formed into a long blade, and he stabbed through Aaron's back.
" Ahhh.... such... power......."
Megaman chuckled, but immediatly the darkness left his suit, and he fell unconsious.
Aaron got up and sighed in relief.
" Whew, a few more seconds, and I could have been deleted! Ahh well!"
He walked over to Megaman, and picked him up.
" Heh, it was fun...." Aaron said.
" NO!" Lan screamed from the real world. " MEGAMAN!"
" Aaron put his blaster right against Megaman's Icon, and charged.
" See ya!"
He fired, and the Icon shattered into a million pieces.
" MEGAMAN!"
Suddenly there was a flash of Blue, and finally.... darkness......








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