spiecas's Art (Alan and a scene)

spiecas · Net Battler Joined: 16 Sep 2005 Posts: 77 Location: Earth

For anyone who has read my fanfic, Len, not Lan, this character might seem familiar to you. For anyone who has not read Len, not Lan, please read it!!! Anyway, these ar pictures I drew by hand and then colored with the computer of my two main OC's

Len Clark: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23329179/

Len's NetNavi, Pixel: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23334285/
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feepitsrule · Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2005 7:56 pm Post subject:

Good design overall, but your drawings are lacking a few things. First of all, put shading into you drawings. Also, add body shape. I cant tell if Len is a guy or a girl. Razz

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Shadow.EXE · Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2005 8:03 pm Post subject:

Len is a girl, I think. Len's arms are pretty wonky (yeah, I know you don't hear that word often), the legs are too square, and the head needs some work. And I can't even tell if Pixel is a boy or a girl. The arms and legs look too stiff, and it lacks overall detail.

spiecas · Net Battler Joined: 16 Sep 2005 Posts: 77 Location: Earth

Thanks for reviewing it. As you probably guessed, this is my first attempt at this kind of stuff. And yes, Len is a girl. She just dosen't look like your average idea of an anime girl because she's not suposed to.

Update:
Here's Alan Clark, Len's little brother. I'm actually think this isn't too bad compared to my last two. http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23480704/

I'm going to start illustraiting scenes from my fanfic, starting with the scene of Len punching Chaud. I hate the way this turned out espically Len, Lan, and Chaud's face.http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23631490/
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feepitsrule · Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2005 5:56 pm Post subject:

Alan looks fine, especially the legs, but the face is a bit too round. For that other thing(that scene), everything is great except that Chaud's face is round and Len is WAY too tall.
Edit:EVERYONE is way too tall
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